Post AxCyandMCilg48bGj2 by tindelljk@baraag.net
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(DIR) Post #AxBOZlnrjXT4ahlVU8 by BepisLOCA@baraag.net
2025-08-15T04:33:54Z
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@AFKlitterbox I get that. I'm trying to jerk off, not read a Shakespearean soliloquy about how much pleasure they're feelin'.
(DIR) Post #AxBOhbBN6bRty3UcxU by Ice_Vmp@baraag.net
2025-08-15T04:35:20Z
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@AFKlitterbox No no, you're completely right!I've always found it odd how descriptive and fluent their speech is while having hard raw sex while IRL I'd be fully concentrated on actually having sex.If you can talk while humping, damn you either have an amazing attention span or you're not doing it hard enough!That's my opinion tho...
(DIR) Post #AxBQ5FgUmnSECGtSgS by ManaTheAbsol@baraag.net
2025-08-15T04:50:47Z
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@AFKlitterbox The text is usually the dumbest shit too- My favorite meme translation is 'Shoot your goo my dude'
(DIR) Post #AxBRvz2lUEght91BQW by ManaTheAbsol@baraag.net
2025-08-15T05:11:33Z
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@AFKlitterbox I agree! If you're gonna do dialogue, make it.. I dunno believable? Can't count all the doujins where it feels like they have full paragraph conversations mid-sex, or just generally more dialogue in each panel than before the sex? It's weird, man
(DIR) Post #AxBSNViw5g613xrx0i by Ice_Vmp@baraag.net
2025-08-15T05:16:32Z
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@AFKlitterbox I could recommend leaving it empty or making thought boxes where the character shares the sensations and such, not so much dialogue, but while having sex we do think, feel and most importantly FOCUS on specifics.
(DIR) Post #AxBdTfYBZEt4lyyomO by Juggerbug@baraag.net
2025-08-15T07:20:52Z
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@AFKlitterbox Agreed, it feels like the people who write that kind of dialogue think people speak as though they're in some ghetto club or a CoD lobby, or that somehow, everyone mentally regresses into some "vulgar cunty porn star" or gooner/coomer personality when having sex.It doesn't help either that ESL English, especially Indian-styled English, has become more pervasive in the internet. Soon enough, "Open bobs" will be considered worthy of a literary reward.
(DIR) Post #AxC3qHjKtTpIMfdkVk by tindelljk@baraag.net
2025-08-15T12:16:17Z
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@AFKlitterbox Fuck my underage gradeschool pussy you pedophile! That's normal for someone to say, right?
(DIR) Post #AxCLzuncnrexJhO6q0 by AgeOfDissent@baraag.net
2025-08-15T15:39:43Z
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@AFKlitterbox I've seen a Japanese artist comment on this, and they were saying that even though no one talks like that during sex it's primarily a way to let you know how the character is feeling. But also, I think it works a lot better in the original Japanese. As someone who's translated a few doujins it's really hard to figure out how to make it sound good in English.
(DIR) Post #AxCyandMCilg48bGj2 by tindelljk@baraag.net
2025-08-15T22:52:11Z
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@AFKlitterbox I think doujin often just goes too far. Why does every story have to end with full on sex? I've so often been into it until some dude whips his dick out and has to take it too far. I've seen ones that seem to be entirely about a girl doing her own thing in her room and in walks a guy to fill the last 10+ pages with overkill.