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(DIR) Post #AwYs3FPvpqdCLAisT2 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:29:54Z
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:fediverse: Fediverse community experiment: Need your help with a final panel idea for this comic draft! Comment with your suggestions! I'll finalize the one I like the most and give you credit in the comic.#writing #webcomic #experimental
(DIR) Post #AwYsIvShnQOZ5FUojo by yngmar@social.tchncs.de
2025-07-27T14:32:57Z
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@davidrevoy Giant seamonster swallows the entire fleet. The siren bares her fangs into a grin and says "Thank you for you contributions."
(DIR) Post #AwYsP5P1kYQleSiH2W by Steve12L@mamot.fr
2025-07-27T14:34:02Z
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@davidrevoy Enfin reconnue comme une vraie sirène, comme une "validation" de diplôme.Bateaux sauvés.
(DIR) Post #AwYsREqxaGnhXbnxXk by batterpunts@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T14:34:25Z
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@davidrevoy cut to a shot of her new album because she got signed
(DIR) Post #AwYsT793DKCGDJA2qW by Zestryon@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T14:34:30Z
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@davidrevoy Elle se sert de sa renommée comme porte-voix d'une cause universaliste… Gaza.
(DIR) Post #AwYsWLpr3HGwdyj3Ka by dolfsquare@tooting.intensifi.es
2025-07-27T14:35:19Z
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@davidrevoy un truc genre la sirène rentre du boulot à la fin de sa journée de travail, genre en habits un peu professionnels dans le métro sous-marin (?) avec sa harpe sous le bras, et d’autres travailleurs aquatiques à ses côtés, le nez dans leur téléphone de poisson (… j’ai une idée très précise mais aucun talent pour la décrire)
(DIR) Post #AwYsbO0yNPYCqoKKye by pmartin@mastodon.obspm.fr
2025-07-27T14:36:14Z
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@davidrevoy One could see Ulysse/Odysseus tied to his boat, unable to applaud and his crew telling his "Dude it's your fault you're in this embarassing situation !".(yeah I know northern and greek sirens are quite different… but it's litteraly what came to my mind looking at your drawing even before reading your request 😅)
(DIR) Post #AwYsjCsvdmIKeJIGH2 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:37:38Z
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@elfi lol. Good one; I sort of had the ref, but reading https://people.howstuffworks.com/play-freebird.htm about it made it even better. Clever one.
(DIR) Post #AwYstdgCsBYQeDJjlo by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:39:38Z
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@yngmar Oh oh, cruel and dark, but cool twist. Might be even more if I make the rock she is sitting on a prominent part of the head of the giant see monster, and make the siren high five a tentacle of the monster as the boat get crushed.
(DIR) Post #AwYswx9MwHglu1XQBc by Zykino@shelter.moe
2025-07-27T14:40:09Z
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@davidrevoy Chtullu start to attack all the boats from under/behind. The mermaid cry, we see her tail has a heavy ball attached to her tail.Yeah maybe a bit dark/different from what I see you doing usually 😅
(DIR) Post #AwYszX14Yo7bict3T6 by Kiloku@burnthis.town
2025-07-27T14:40:20Z
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@davidrevoy she sort of unconsciously does the "mermaid charm" thing and the people on the boats start jumping overboard and she has to rescue them while embarrassedly apologizing
(DIR) Post #AwYtApedbXhKi2mXK4 by ptmesis@writing.exchange
2025-07-27T14:42:40Z
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@davidrevoy We see an Odysseus-like figure tied up uncomfortably to a mast, one strap going across his face, surrounded by sailors with ears full of wax. "I think we're in the wrong place."
(DIR) Post #AwYtCL1CTo0MGx3Mu0 by bartholin@fops.cloud
2025-07-27T14:43:13.597523Z
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@davidrevoy A reverse mermaid (a big fish with legs instead of a tail) holding a saxophone and crying because no one likes his music
(DIR) Post #AwYtDRfzDB2BD8etuq by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:42:51Z
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@elly It's cute, but it's not really a twist. It would probably need a bit more development to make the 'pay off' more rewarding. Nothing comes to mind right now, though. I'll keep thinking about it.
(DIR) Post #AwYtEZalGaRo3CkiUS by sam@social.coop
2025-07-27T14:42:58Z
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@davidrevoy Odysseus' is tied to the mast yelling "get back to work" while his crew sit up front waving lighters above their heads, pulling out concert ear plugs, etc. as if they were just watching the show and had tied their boss up so that they could take a break.
(DIR) Post #AwYtJlLez3h7xcACem by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:44:19Z
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@Steve12L Sympa, le thème du diplôme. Un gentil twist. 🙂
(DIR) Post #AwYtUpAN84H4zG9sIq by williampietri@sfba.social
2025-07-27T14:46:17Z
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@davidrevoy Perhaps you could pull back to show that the setting is in a mall or casino? Something akin to this. Maybe turn up the commercialism with signs like "next mermaid show 3:30 pm", a merch table, and "picture with the mermaid, $25".
(DIR) Post #AwYtdl9TQMjV8tzyoi by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:47:57Z
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@bartholin Haha! cruel and fun 🤣 It would show a shot of another rock not far away from the sea, with this reverse mermaid creature holding a saxophone and watching the boats around the far-away siren. A bubble above the reverse mermaid's head would ask, "What do they prefer about her?"
(DIR) Post #AwYtftIE7uAOyH6pmq by Steve12L@mamot.fr
2025-07-27T14:48:04Z
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@davidrevoy Merci ! 🙂
(DIR) Post #AwYtl2SBUkfypXDn60 by schluff@norden.social
2025-07-27T14:49:14Z
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@davidrevoy All the boats burst into splinters and the mermaid shrugs shruggiely. :blobcatgooglyshrug:
(DIR) Post #AwYtnBFhkiighLPCbo by lrde@mastodon.tedomum.net
2025-07-27T14:49:21Z
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@davidrevoy On voit le rocher sans la sirène . juste le bout de sa queue dans l'eau et les bateaux sont en train de couler.Comme pour la sirène, on n'en voit plus qu'un bout de chaque.
(DIR) Post #AwYtrjHDC1U7NgHO6q by Kampfdiestel@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T14:50:27Z
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@davidrevoy or a zoom out to plenty seamonsters surrounding the fleet and the siren say "now we can eat".
(DIR) Post #AwYtuGhts17TduyQ0O by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:50:43Z
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@juliancalaby Haha, I can imagine that, especially if the merchandise is anachronistic, like CDs, T-shirts and a QR code to download their album. Nice one!
(DIR) Post #AwYu8xAkmWuDOvTJJo by gub@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:53:34Z
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@davidrevoy 1- Le rocher sur lequel la sirène est assise est en fait le centre de rotation des lames d'un mixer gigantesque. Soupe de marin au menu pour les autres sirènes planquées.
(DIR) Post #AwYuM5iwIbupgfj6cC by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:55:57Z
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@lrde Sympa, merci, ça laisserai sans doute un grand pouvoir d’interprétation à la scène et perdrai un peu les lecteurs. Mais très raccord avec le danger des sirènes. Il y a sans doute aussi un truc à faire autour d'Ulysses là.
(DIR) Post #AwYuhnVghL5LZLsWpc by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:59:48Z
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@grum999 Bravo for linking it to Pepper and Carrot. Maybe easier if going this route would be a panel with static Pepper still half asleep in the bath, floating on her back, relaxed repeating "Thank you..." while the bath effectively overflow on the bathroom and Carrot tries to manage the situation. Making the three first panel edges 'dreamy' could reinforce it. Thanks for the idea!
(DIR) Post #AwYur90Y8gnsqjlqoy by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:01:32Z
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@olm_e @yngmar Hehe, could work even better if the rock and the mermaid are made of the same material, a tongue like deep red. It could feels a bit off in the panel but then, make sens in the reveal.
(DIR) Post #AwYv1szs0XzANUZiE4 by bloojay@noauthority.social
2025-07-27T15:03:50Z
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@davidrevoy a shot from behind showing the boats slowly sinking and the people still clapping
(DIR) Post #AwYv2TWOD7O9em4Bua by SunDancer@metalhead.club
2025-07-27T15:03:32Z
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@davidrevoy She smashes the harp against the rocks like The Who did with their guitars back in the day and then starts a burning solo with an electric guitar and shreds extra metal tunes and headbangs 8)
(DIR) Post #AwYv4tTkfkPEk1zCcq by jedi@bolha.us
2025-07-27T15:03:45Z
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@davidrevoy every culture has that one song that everyone asks for and no musician wants to play anymore. So there can be al sorts of variation for:"Any requests?""FREEBIRD""Except that one?"
(DIR) Post #AwYv9hq3NVJO5UiDlA by gub@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T14:56:34Z
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@davidrevoy 2- La sirène, avec un sourire tout marketing, demande soudainement de s'abonner à son compte youtube, de participer à son Patreon et fait une pub pour SirVPN
(DIR) Post #AwYv9jY31Q65OEIryK by gub@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:00:15Z
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@davidrevoy 3- les bateaux partent vite, attirés par une autre sirène (sur un rocher plus loin), la laissant abandonnée et désappointée.
(DIR) Post #AwYv9kZ9EoZUXvpGKG by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:04:48Z
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@gub 1. Cruel et technologique! Haha, mais quel challenge de montrer tout ça en une seule case. 2. Haha, une créatrice de contenu moderne. Sympa. 3. J'aime bien. L'impermanence des choses, une mode en chasse une autre, il y a de la poésie là.
(DIR) Post #AwYvBl16X4c2WXrL7I by brosyl@c.im
2025-07-27T15:01:17Z
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@davidrevoy "Don't forget to check out our merch table!" (cut to a little crab floating on a piece of driftwood with a stack of t-shirts)
(DIR) Post #AwYvT5IyM33cMyTm4m by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:08:20Z
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@Zestryon J'aime bien le message, mais c'est un message d'actualité et l'anachronisme avec mon monde fantasy serait un peu trop le grand écart là. J'ai essayé de retourner ça dans ma tête pour voir si la métaphore passerai si elle parlait d'une guerre fictive entre peuple fantasy, mais je ne pense pas (la dite guerre devrait être introduite pour que ça marche). Merci pour la participation!
(DIR) Post #AwYvZUW9WmUUIohPEm by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:09:36Z
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@brosyl Ha yes, the merch idea already was proposed here https://framapiaf.org/@juliancalaby@treehouse.systems/114925722160384189 , an excellent one.
(DIR) Post #AwYvd1wHiwWIpHbrsG by gub@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:10:11Z
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@davidrevoy Mais j'ai pas fini ! 😄 4- Un connard dans un bateau crie "À POIL !" sous les regards navrés des autres marins
(DIR) Post #AwYvkcJEtm9BeZxpuC by Rabenalt@ieji.de
2025-07-27T15:11:31Z
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@davidrevoy There is a move to the prince, who have finally heard her music and is in love with her too. she has played so long for him because she has fallen in love to him so long ago. (it is a bit inspired by the story of the mermaid of copenhagen)
(DIR) Post #AwYvmLc3wjmWRwasbI by Ebondevil@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T15:11:54Z
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@davidrevoy Some Jerk shouting 'Show us yer tits luv'
(DIR) Post #AwYvq5NYFK1ZG7aZBw by PierreC@eldritch.cafe
2025-07-27T15:12:33Z
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@davidrevoy Pepper se retrouve enfermée dans un aquarium étriqué avec sa lyre, entourée par un public en costumes chamarrés, impatient de l'entendre. Sauf qu'elle n'est plus du tout d'humeur à chanter !
(DIR) Post #AwYvuawyo38mKnJIeG by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:13:16Z
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@meowbotage 1. Haha, "crab cops" is already a funny premise in itself to draw. And in the past, in my twenties, I got kicked out of the street of Avignon (France) after being a portraitist artist without authorization , so I can relate.2. That might be challenge to draw, but I like the idea of boats littering and the theme of pollution.
(DIR) Post #AwYvzV2qBqSbT0OGzQ by ygor@floss.social
2025-07-27T15:14:13Z
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@davidrevoy Maybe she's a cop trying to arrest sailors? As a play on the word "siren". Though that's been done before of course.https://youtu.be/eFsSTtl6DqY
(DIR) Post #AwYw2kLZklsRnJhZb6 by oohaSTODON@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T15:14:51Z
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@davidrevoy after claping they take out guns and nets, but the song was a summon one, a mistic light appears from the water and a kraken comes out!
(DIR) Post #AwYw5Rz2U7fli4RwnI by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:15:19Z
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@Ebondevil That one I could easily predict 🤣 Might work better as a third panel, if I do a panel 4 where the little siren can reply something, or fight back, or get her dignity restored.
(DIR) Post #AwYw7WTckYC2DzkBEm by frpz@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T15:15:21Z
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@davidrevoy the kid reading the mermaid's story with his mother closes the book and asks who were the bad guys.
(DIR) Post #AwYwFYUZ8oqin80xqS by Greg@mamot.fr
2025-07-27T15:16:55Z
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@davidrevoy la sirène est surprise et choquée en voyant tous les hommes sauter à l’eau et se diriger en sa direction (c’est ce qu’ils sont sensés faire en entendant son chant non ? 🤭)
(DIR) Post #AwYwLLgheyryojSE6a by gub@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:15:07Z
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@davidrevoy 5- Au fond de la mer, Poséidon l'air en colère sur le pas de sa porte accueille la sirène qui rentre tard et lui dit "Non mais t'as vu l'heure ? Encore été faire l'intéressante plutôt que réviser ton Bac ?"
(DIR) Post #AwYwLMPixasl4MWBHM by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:18:09Z
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@gub 4. Oui, mais ça marcherai mieu en case 3, déjà parmis les applaudissements à mon avis. Ca laisserai la petite sirène aussi avoir le bon mot, ou les autres marins faire quelquechose au rustre.5. Awww... Super cute celui là. Ou bien une ligne en lui disant de trouver un "vraie travail". 🤣
(DIR) Post #AwYwTRHClUkkT1Nx3Y by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:19:36Z
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@Takiro Haha, I feel also there is something to do around the "Free Exposure" theme.
(DIR) Post #AwYwV4QwfJYaCTielE by hyperbolix@troet.cafe
2025-07-27T15:19:52Z
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@davidrevoy Closeup of an old, beardy and weather worn seaman, holding another one tight in his arms, eyes closed, a single tear running down his cheek.
(DIR) Post #AwYwcu1ZFc1uEVaFg8 by fiee@literatur.social
2025-07-27T15:21:21Z
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@davidrevoy I guess you know the comic “The Little Trashmaid”? https://tapas.io/series/The-Little-Trashmaid@meowbotage
(DIR) Post #AwYxCB0o5Btl3T31cm by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:27:38Z
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@neauoire tragic! But also maybe the production friendliest idea with the re-usage of panel 2. :blobaww:
(DIR) Post #AwYxFdGpTVrzZ8BqJE by _maleficentgirl@troet.cafe
2025-07-27T15:28:23Z
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@davidrevoy She goes on to refuse a shitty contract from a predatory producing company
(DIR) Post #AwYxHRvScov4xa3sBs by gub@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:28:40Z
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@davidrevoy 5- Sur terre, elle est emprisonnée dans un filet de pécheurs, porté par les marins qui marchent tout sourires et plein d'entrain en disant "après un bon spectacle, un bon repas !"(Oui la vie est parfois cruelle)(Par association d'idées je vois tout à fait les Trolls de Lanfeust avoir la démarche des marins)
(DIR) Post #AwYxQYjcg8ACgTrtgG by JensB@openbiblio.social
2025-07-27T15:30:11Z
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@davidrevoy I imagine a sunset. Perhaps with some commentary from the back or so ... 🌅
(DIR) Post #AwYxSd0NlxcoVWh5Zg by budgegeria@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T15:30:14Z
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@davidrevoy The whole fleet are actually musicians.
(DIR) Post #AwYxTeSDs2KPI7CiDQ by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:30:30Z
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@_maleficentgirl Haha, could be a group of sharks with a monocle and a hat following her as she swim back underwater proposing her contracts, and her just tired of having those following her. Cute.
(DIR) Post #AwYxWDUAazMQWCL0pE by Jorsh@beige.party
2025-07-27T15:30:48Z
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@davidrevoy Cut to "backstage" which is under water, somehow smoking a cigarette and drinking scotch, wondering about how her career flatlined.
(DIR) Post #AwYxgaNgKHEKQHFPU0 by eibriel@sigmoid.social
2025-07-27T15:33:15Z
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@davidrevoy Mermaid in the bottom of the sea, around sunk boats, smiling, playing the harp. A thinking bobble is dissipating. The first 3 frames were in her imagination.
(DIR) Post #AwYxiFTb1IA6ARo5VA by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:33:35Z
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@Jorsh Haha, the 'dirty' backstage cigarette and scotch view underwater sounds funny. With her counting her money maybe. There is something here about the 'beautiful public aspect' VS 'the real cynical face' of some artists.
(DIR) Post #AwYxzNBDdCU2yzNPIe by artlog@agora.l0g.eu
2025-07-27T15:29:34.137931Z
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@davidrevoy Elle chantait pour fêter l'interdiction de la pêche aux sirènes
(DIR) Post #AwYxzOfk5CUfbwfIW0 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:35:57Z
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@artlog Ca va être dur à établir tout ça en seul case; mais j'aime bien l'intention.
(DIR) Post #AwYy8C5SFBtHBVt1l2 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:38:12Z
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@neauoire Intrigued by this one, I read your title as a ref to "Oppenheimer" and a nuclear test in the ocean for the last panel?
(DIR) Post #AwYyHWsiIejMHfNWme by Zestryon@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T15:39:55Z
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@davidrevoy Ok, je voyais ça comme un comic strip :)
(DIR) Post #AwYyOVS60pihsVFsuW by electropict@mastodon.scot
2025-07-27T15:41:10Z
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@davidrevoy (!)"OMG INCREDIBLE MERMAID PLAYING JUST NOW! LOVED IT! TEARS OF JOY! CAN THIS UNIQUE BEAUTY STILL EXIST THIS WORLD?"This video is no longer available due to a copyright claim by NoItCantCorp.
(DIR) Post #AwYyWWlmztmWHVI86i by prayag_suthar@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T15:42:39Z
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@davidrevoy The siren-eats-all-the-ship-people ideas are pretty expected continuations, but how about something a bit more twisty?? I imagined the ships just suddenly getting holes and sinking just out of nowhere, and the mermaid being like "oh dear" with genuine surprise. The idea being she sank all their ships...by *accident*, with her singing 😵💫
(DIR) Post #AwYyeoUWzbO1YpAbZI by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:44:10Z
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@gub oh la pauvre qui va finir en sushi. 😆
(DIR) Post #AwYz5dCz3CTYNykZbE by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:49:01Z
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@prayag_suthar I like the idea of an unlucky mermaid, really wanting her audience but cursed by drowning them all. Funny ^ ^
(DIR) Post #AwYzQACI6nJeUTDUky by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:52:43Z
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@andre @neauoire Haha, we had a proposal of a accomplice mermaid with a monster; a version where she is part of the tip of the tongue of the monster, and now one where she is or sitting on a protuberance of a monster (or part of it).
(DIR) Post #AwYzbZO6n5r7nrBPpg by artlog@agora.l0g.eu
2025-07-27T15:25:21.501142Z
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@davidrevoy La sirène est en fait en train de révasser dans le cours de chant parmi une trentaine d'autres sirènes aussi diuées
(DIR) Post #AwYzbaQyttkR33XDwu by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:54:34Z
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@artlog Coud be cute if the course has on the black board a "how to attract boats" with other siren practicing with tiny boats made of paper (origami).
(DIR) Post #AwYzfHloEdTaJy2ahs by kris@outmo.de
2025-07-27T15:53:47.727099Z
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@davidrevoy 1 year later: a long line with someone demanding entrance fees, plus fast food and souvenir shops nearby.
(DIR) Post #AwYzg9OGsMjYcbRYW0 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:55:29Z
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@neauoire Haha, the vision of horror. 🤣
(DIR) Post #AwYznpMdDYFkpMKy2q by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:56:59Z
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@kris There is certainly something to do around the enshitification theme due to the large success, but not easy to show it into a single final panel.
(DIR) Post #AwYzqCCnGUjEFPrgcS by nightoo@chaos.social
2025-07-27T15:57:04Z
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@davidrevoy the sailors pull out their instruments, to return the favor and share their music with her in turn.Though I feel like this might really need another panel for some sort of harmonic climax where they end up making music together
(DIR) Post #AwYzspjNHUdrPfMVX6 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T15:57:53Z
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@nightoo Cute :)
(DIR) Post #AwZ05QPAklXSdAutyS by _hic_haec_hoc@fosstodon.org
2025-07-27T15:59:58Z
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@davidrevoy bird’s-eye view, huge sea monster raising from the deep with its mouth open to swallow all the boats in one bite?
(DIR) Post #AwZ0AvNX1PqI8pluG8 by ntrembath@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T16:00:56Z
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@davidrevoy Mermaid tells them they can support her on her Paytreon.
(DIR) Post #AwZ0EbbEVAH9xLw4Gm by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:01:50Z
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@fiee @meowbotage Ha, true, I followed the first episodes back in the time where I was browsing Tapas. 166 episodes? I have some reading to do :)
(DIR) Post #AwZ0LDkHaZ8609K5IW by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:02:55Z
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@neauoire poor thing 🙃
(DIR) Post #AwZ0R9ob7BExY6Aj7A by palamema2@meemu.org
2025-07-27T16:04:03Z
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@davidrevoy Lots of fun ideas in here! I'm thinking maybe a goofy-looking fish (a literal clown-fish?) riding in on a unicycle on top of a surfboard or something, while juggling seashells. The cheers get louder as it turns out everyone was there to see him, the mermaid was just an opening act.
(DIR) Post #AwZ0TG2awFgFR9ijyq by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:04:26Z
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@ntrembath Yes, I already received this idea, with various declination: the merch, the 'follow us' announcement, and even the contract predators. I'll keep it in mind.
(DIR) Post #AwZ0ZmLLkejTMJbQIq by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:05:39Z
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@_hic_haec_hoc Yes, I already received this proposition in various declination, (her being at the top of the monster, or her being accomplice with a monster, or her being the tongue of the monster). It sounds like a popular idea.
(DIR) Post #AwZ0eao24gk51ZJXNo by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:06:30Z
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@palamema2 Funny, but difficult to express it into a single panel :)
(DIR) Post #AwZ0ronhM1hkBzSqhs by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:08:47Z
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@breizh Les paroles sont mignonettes, je connaissait pas celle là! @gub
(DIR) Post #AwZ10uD0cFTXZWdVp2 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:10:33Z
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@jedi Haha, yes, the "Freebird" idea already was proposed here https://framapiaf.org/@elfi@pixie.town/114925686019717115 and I had a real lol about it, but I'm not sure how many will get the reference.
(DIR) Post #AwZ18BDzkXEyNBZATQ by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:11:44Z
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@shadowfals Oh, using her fame to deliver a message about exceeding fishing quotas? That's cute.
(DIR) Post #AwZ1GtfIPBwAWEUazw by _hic_haec_hoc@fosstodon.org
2025-07-27T16:13:28Z
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@davidrevoy oh, I see 😅 then maybe change the bubble “thank you…” and it continues in the next panel with “… it will be 100 gold pieces per boat” with a bunch of burly mermen with tridents and money bags boarding a boat from behind?
(DIR) Post #AwZ1TfWUIRU4QGSkE4 by ntrembath@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T16:15:44Z
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@davidrevoy Could also have the boats sail away, leaving her alone again after her performance—which is often how it feels after a show.
(DIR) Post #AwZ1Vo5pP8BXa60pdY by CausticHarmony@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T16:15:54Z
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@davidrevoy something unexpected... Next song: Dubstep!
(DIR) Post #AwZ1arhDR54SCgubrs by jill@mastodon.de
2025-07-27T16:17:02Z
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@davidrevoy not a plot twist for your comic. It just reminds me of Lorelei, a siren of Germanic mythology, of great beauty, who was betrayed by her sweetheart and accused of bewitching men, by singing her enchanting song on a rock on the river Rhine, causing ship navigators to crash into the rocks and die. more info: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lorelei
(DIR) Post #AwZ1g0RIM8sclgutqC by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:18:01Z
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@jill Thank you for the link!
(DIR) Post #AwZ1hwHAo25MR36Viy by CausticHarmony@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T16:18:07Z
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@davidrevoy reverse siren: all people who listened turning to mermaids too.Audio-vampiric mermaid 🙂
(DIR) Post #AwZ1nEkxWWnrCPYvgm by Parnikkapore@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T16:19:17Z
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@davidrevoy This is probably too dark for you (and definitely too dark for MFT), but:a child (on one of the boats) saying "Are you going to eat us?"
(DIR) Post #AwZ2R4oZuDKRwuFhFg by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:26:24Z
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@CausticHarmony ewww genAI? (weird smoothing going on) And you feed my three first sketches into a generator for being redrawn? 🤢 Submiting it for training in a way...Can you at least edit it and put it behind a content warning; I try reduce my exposition to AI gen imagery to keep an imagination made of human-made imagery. I'm sure part of my follower would prefer the same reduced exposition to this type of rendering. Thank you.@cat8124
(DIR) Post #AwZ2cR5xPNXEEfnW52 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:28:29Z
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@mvu Haha, true ( I'm thinking about this photomontage in particular https://merveilles.town/@neauoire/114925855154198573 ) , but it is a good one. A bit cruel, but good.
(DIR) Post #AwZ2jVqCA6lyyuncxc by n8foo@macaw.social
2025-07-27T16:22:09Z
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@Kampfdiestel @davidrevoy yeah, I had a similar thought. Similar to the lantern fish, maybe the rock with the mermaid is the lure that draws in the prey. The panel is zoomed out to an underwater view of the boats, a colossal fish, about to consume the boats.
(DIR) Post #AwZ2jWwy2PmgQCyY9g by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:29:47Z
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@n8foo @Kampfdiestel Yes, I even received a storyboarded version of it https://sunny.garden/@mvu/114926122945241325 😊
(DIR) Post #AwZ2mDb6RmWVGl1wlE by fiee@literatur.social
2025-07-27T16:30:03Z
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@davidrevoy Sorry for stealing your time! 😜(I’m reading too many comics…)
(DIR) Post #AwZ33XYlTsny6WCFE0 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:33:26Z
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@Parnikkapore The idea of the child is cute. Don't worry: if you read the other ideas, I had many ideas of monsters where the mermaid is her tongue, or sitting on the tip of the monster's lantern (big fish lantern) or boats swirling in the abyss, etc...Your idea with a kid make me think about another one: a kid with his fingers plugged on his ears. And near to him a father silhouette with a speechbubble asking the kid "Why are you not listening, Ulysses?"
(DIR) Post #AwZ3SYkQCWhr1oZxE8 by jedi@bolha.us
2025-07-27T16:37:54Z
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@davidrevoy here in Brazil, we had an artist named "Raul Seixas" (he passed away in the 80's). These days we have him in the same kind of meme status to annoy artists."Algum pedido?""TOCA RAUL!""Esse não. "
(DIR) Post #AwZ3dPXEnH2rdoaQc4 by Banur@metalhead.club
2025-07-27T16:39:53Z
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@davidrevoy the picture went darker, the mermaid is singing another song but the ships are wrecks and no living soul is on the boards
(DIR) Post #AwZ3qwGwOBWowEPlC4 by AAMfP@fosstodon.org
2025-07-27T16:42:23Z
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@davidrevoySiren raises a signboard with a QR Code and something written below: "if you liked the music, feel free to contribute".Or "follow me on Mastodon".(And obviously _your_ QR Code there 😉)
(DIR) Post #AwZ40oMQetYfITgmiO by HolgerH@gruene.social
2025-07-27T16:44:09Z
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@davidrevoy for listening to my earth saving song and coming to join me, preventing our world for beiing destoyed through all the heat coming from the fossil fuels.I thougth it was too late already.But I'm hopeful now. Thank You.
(DIR) Post #AwZ45kpPDiYZmxbFMe by gray17@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T16:45:04Z
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@davidrevoy the sailors end up fighting each other, "she's mine!" etc, wrecking themselves, while the mermaid looks on with annoyance, "not again"
(DIR) Post #AwZ4CrAY2iuPTwsLPE by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:46:18Z
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@HolgerH A little message of hope? cute!
(DIR) Post #AwZ4KWzKxUlvD1I716 by HolgerH@gruene.social
2025-07-27T16:47:43Z
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@davidrevoy I'm prepared of it to come true soon!
(DIR) Post #AwZ4MObF7OQLlsuVZA by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:48:03Z
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@AAMfP 😺 ha yes, good idea for linking the QR code. It joins a series of answer I had about merch, 'follow' messages, patreon, etc.. Funny outcome :)
(DIR) Post #AwZ4cjcKk8CfacDBPE by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:50:56Z
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@alienghic That's already a classic in the comments 🙂 https://social.treehouse.systems/@juliancalaby/114925722125089697 other declination also made the assistants little crabs, and also with Qr code, 'follow us' message, etc... A good lead.
(DIR) Post #AwZ4fFBoKTgE5X0Ciu by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:51:26Z
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@gray17 🤣
(DIR) Post #AwZ50cF9oIeHfbl5Oa by hendric@astronomy.city
2025-07-27T16:55:18Z
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@davidrevoy Show a Youtube page with millions of views with a random avatar. Beneath it is the top rated comment from "@MermaidOnTheRock" saying "This guy gets all the monetization but I have to live on a rock 😭"
(DIR) Post #AwZ5IFk8Clrn6BekvA by LupinoArts@mstdn.social
2025-07-27T16:58:30Z
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@davidrevoy mermaid pulls a hat and the panel shows only empty space with only traces of ships fleeing the scene. A tiny speech bubble saying "...anyone?"
(DIR) Post #AwZ5JxaYfpBzNBzbiS by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:58:42Z
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@hendric The stealing performance/content modern web dilemma, fun idea; but probably hard to put into a single panel.
(DIR) Post #AwZ5MXdbcAhPkyeIgC by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T16:59:18Z
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@LupinoArts Poor little one. 😆
(DIR) Post #AwZ5QpCsEhMvP6BhwW by LupinoArts@mstdn.social
2025-07-27T16:59:58Z
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@davidrevoy a busker's life...
(DIR) Post #AwZ5TWkJKSLN1A7GkK by ddnnacheta@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:00:21Z
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@davidrevoy With a beaming smile, she should say, "Any requests?" Or "Thank you for coming to my TED Talk."
(DIR) Post #AwZ5YLzYjvCZ72YAWe by elvith@nerdculture.de
2025-07-27T17:01:21Z
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@davidrevoy "...but please stop singing Wonderwall!"
(DIR) Post #AwZ5blSwU74szGv77Q by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:01:59Z
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@abmurrow This idea could rock with a panel 3 refactor: the sailors have now "?" of confusion above their head and don't clap, and the mermaid interrupts herself while playing and noticing the audience confusion.Then panel 4 "Anyway, here's Wonderwall" she said tired in advance of her performance and the sailors applaud and cheer in anticipation. 🙂
(DIR) Post #AwZ5i5gIEmg1QCBJLs by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:03:12Z
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@elvith Hehe, this one is popular ( https://hachyderm.io/@abmurrow/114926230494750159 ) also the "Freebird" one on the same vein.
(DIR) Post #AwZ5mO5fjZ1vfw6Kq8 by mukto_manob@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:03:57Z
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@davidrevoy ICE agents arrives in power boat and sends her to concentration camp!
(DIR) Post #AwZ5oqsreSh9YWHlcO by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:04:23Z
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@ddnnacheta I like the offbeat humor of turning the performance into her "TED talk". 🙂
(DIR) Post #AwZ5qkDpOJz1TPzf2O by DavidAnson@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:04:44Z
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@davidrevoy Mermaid wakes up from a dream and there are no boats at all. Maybe she’s not even a mermaid. :)
(DIR) Post #AwZ62TmMLsZlx2k0IK by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:06:51Z
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@DavidAnson There is an already long list of proposition here where the character wakes up in the last panel. My favorite one in this variation is https://social.maou-maou.fr/@grum999/statuses/01K1663D15XHWEE48PXC3BCQ22 so far 🙂
(DIR) Post #AwZ68EVi26NeKmhFPE by tusooa@kazv.moe
2025-07-27T15:04:30.237612Z
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@davidrevoy Giant ships labelled Visa and MasterCard appear. They force everyone to leave because the performance is deemed to be "sexual content" and the mermaid ends up starving to death.
(DIR) Post #AwZ68FjvSjLY9AM7Ci by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:07:51Z
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@tusooa 😆 To real, it's too real! (poor NSFW artists right now)
(DIR) Post #AwZ6A6TasHc5zobCDI by DavidAnson@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:07:59Z
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@davidrevoy Sorry, I read some replies but I didn’t have the energy to read them all. :)
(DIR) Post #AwZ6Cmdx4MX7M0ioPA by Yuki@groupe-tazor.com
2025-07-27T17:09:01.150Z
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@davidrevoy@framapiaf.org mosh pit! but with boats!
(DIR) Post #AwZ6DQVqptox0TEuKe by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:08:50Z
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@SunDancer lol. 😺 🤘 :blobcheerbounce: Could work.
(DIR) Post #AwZ6IsC1LinAIqYqLg by eanopolsky@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:09:49Z
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@davidrevoy "We've been trying to reach you about your boat's extended warranty."
(DIR) Post #AwZ6OcbWDkiVh1EEW8 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:10:52Z
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@DavidAnson It's ok, and also due how the Fediverse and clients work for comments, I assume everyone only can see a part of the full wall of comments. No problem!
(DIR) Post #AwZ6cMwZF7nVB1d4c4 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:13:27Z
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@Yuki Haha, I wish this could be simple to depict into a single panel. 😆 🤘
(DIR) Post #AwZ6l70XrT1gMJeu3s by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:14:55Z
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@eanopolsky Good idea, 😆 "Now you are around..." type of ending with something really offbeat.
(DIR) Post #AwZ75gWBXouyHfGftQ by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:18:40Z
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@mukto_manob Poor thing!
(DIR) Post #AwZ7c74kL8s1uuteoy by CausticHarmony@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:24:30Z
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@davidrevoy @cat8124 sorry.Image is deleted already of course, according to "the contract" they wont use it for training. I also noticed its redrawing everything, I thought it could also only add, but no. Will put AI spoiler next time. If I use it again that is, just wanted to quickly see how this roughly could look like, I die not want to put it as a contribution or anything...
(DIR) Post #AwZ7rxyLx8q0JkSvpY by thejacenallen@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:27:23Z
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@davidrevoy thanks for coming to my ted talk
(DIR) Post #AwZ83CXA9cEWfG6YiW by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:29:26Z
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@thejacenallen Hehe, that's one already submitted here :) https://mastodon.social/@ddnnacheta/114926264085350842
(DIR) Post #AwZ88jKFf8i5oXhaiG by CausticHarmony@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:25:25Z
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@cat8124 @davidrevoy got it, thanks!
(DIR) Post #AwZ88khKYolW4PVXKC by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:30:20Z
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@CausticHarmony @cat8124 :blobcatheart: Thank you! And fun idea for the final 'DJ mermaid' reveal 🙂
(DIR) Post #AwZ8PtGTxhuBYy7bYe by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:33:29Z
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@confusomu Oui, c'est épatant ! J'en attendais pas autant de diversité et d'originalité. Certaines m'ont vraiment surprises dans le bon sens.
(DIR) Post #AwZ8d2OTKfYTdl7zf6 by biscuitcats@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:35:51Z
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@davidrevoy Maybe a banner like: "As seen in in CrabTube" announcing her current tour, and dates and locations (different seas and oceans) are sold out.
(DIR) Post #AwZ8ezQRL61d0tym1o by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:36:12Z
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@Kiloku Nice, I think I also read another proposal of her being annoyed or tired of one of her curse (maybe the other was about the boat drowning and she was saying "Oh no! Not again!"). I think this is a nice path for adding drama for a character; but a bit difficult to show it into a single panel for me I think. Thank you for the idea.
(DIR) Post #AwZ8tHVMuuPh8l6Dia by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:38:48Z
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@ptmesis I always like good Odysseus/Ulysses reference. A bit sad that it's a real challenge to depict in a single panel 'ear plug of wax' and at the same time a global view on a scene. Challenging into a single panel.
(DIR) Post #AwZ91jGxYsEtZoO70a by ygor@floss.social
2025-07-27T17:40:21Z
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@davidrevoy "Thank you... But I'm actually just singing for my girlfriend. Could you give us some space?"The lyre made me think of that.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sapphohttps://youtu.be/orhTsQ8pVz4
(DIR) Post #AwZ96W4U4RjS57pqIS by makeitmythic@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:41:13Z
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@davidrevoy "anyway, heres wonderwall." "nooooo!" :::sailors leap to their doom:::
(DIR) Post #AwZ99rbGU3wvijlRdA by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:41:50Z
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@sam Always fun to read good Ulysses/Odysseus reference! But it's so challenging to show all of this into a single panel :)
(DIR) Post #AwZ9G0m5HnzHuckxtI by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:42:56Z
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@makeitmythic Haha, yes, I already received two other references to Wonderwall here (and Freebird) , very popular!
(DIR) Post #AwZ9Jbq1wOe9jRJlVA by makeitmythic@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T17:43:36Z
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@davidrevoy damn, i scrolled but didnt see. lol
(DIR) Post #AwZ9PAzAgtx4BhFR9E by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:44:35Z
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@makeitmythic No problem! I tell it just for the curiosity and information; I don't expect anyone to read the dozens and dozens of propositions I received here.
(DIR) Post #AwZ9d44bBissnrPQe0 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T17:47:05Z
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@ygor Funny one, and original one; I haven't received any other ideas going in this way of 'the song was destined to someone else.
(DIR) Post #AwZBHxyUrmt5iTcdto by Nowhereman@troet.cafe
2025-07-27T18:05:40Z
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@davidrevoy Thank you soo much,especially because my management told me, that no one would listen to songs from down-under anymore.
(DIR) Post #AwZChf1K3qiaPhlAeG by Pyves@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T18:21:32Z
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@davidrevoy réfléchi par #8ans et moi: il y a un calmar géant "orchestre" qui arrive avec plein d'instruments, et qui produit une musique tellement spéciale qu'elle fait fuir /coule les bateaux autour 😅
(DIR) Post #AwZCjNWW5Keaj9AZzE by pcdevil@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T18:21:33Z
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@davidrevoy all the ships and the people dissapates because they were only ghosts who needed resolution before moving on (kinda like what happened with the ghost army in The Lord of the Rings: The Return of the King movie after they fulfilled their oath)
(DIR) Post #AwZDQFSVwcn0ARjuls by lufthans@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T18:29:36Z
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@davidrevoy kiss cam with two boats pulled alongside each other and the captains snuggling
(DIR) Post #AwZEKy7B6OSisjo2IS by aurochs@todon.eu
2025-07-27T18:39:50Z
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@davidrevoy @makeitmythic Could be Bella Ciao instead of wonderwall. And start a revolution against the real monsters (the owners of the fleets)
(DIR) Post #AwZFbqcoInJkWuDLVI by MThaastrup@helvede.net
2025-07-27T18:54:04Z
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@davidrevoy They cage her and force her to sing for an audience. The audience should be the Emperor from the Hans Christian Andersen fairytale "The Nightingale".Crossover from his fairytale "The Little Mermaid"...
(DIR) Post #AwZFeLRUh7Mcgh6zsu by lumiworx@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T18:54:35Z
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@davidrevoy If there needs to be a twist... the 3 current panels offer 3 perspectives, then perhaps the 4th should be totally different than the others.Perhaps some unlikely action occurs underwater, and the view is looking upwards toward the surface or from a "god view', in an extreme or zoomed overhead position, similar to 'fish in a bowl'.I assume a change in perspective and the viewpoint used may narrow down what 'action' it could show to fit the story flow from the previous panels.
(DIR) Post #AwZGyAiwM6bhBrI3t2 by Eisregen@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T19:09:16Z
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@davidrevoy "this song was sponsored by raid shadow legend RAID: Shadow Legends™️ is an immersive online experience with everything you'd expect from a brand new RPG title. It's got an amazing storyline, awesome 3D graphics, giant boss fights, PVP battles, and hundreds of never before seen champions to collect and customize.I never expected to get this level of performance out of a mobile game. Look how crazy the level of detail is on these champions......."
(DIR) Post #AwZGzh8jJr5c144z8S by datenhalde@nrw.social
2025-07-27T19:09:17Z
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@davidrevoy Do a Cantina Band Same song ending, like this:Mermaid: If you have any requests, shout 'em out! (Play that same song.) All right, same song, here I go.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_5nk-BBa4Tc
(DIR) Post #AwZH9IG4gPVFk95kgq by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T19:11:22Z
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@Eisregen 🤣
(DIR) Post #AwZHFnwBoTe9jStZmi by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T19:12:26Z
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@marzhall :blobcatheart: thank you! I'll try to pick an ending that keep the tone.
(DIR) Post #AwZHN6eSdJd7nf5JXk by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T19:13:52Z
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@lumiworx Yes, many ending are pointing in this direction. I also like the one changing to a "later that day" type of scene.
(DIR) Post #AwZHRaPVvqrBFoEIqG by DukeDuke@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T19:14:40Z
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@davidrevoy Kinda kills the vibe, but if this is set in 'Murican waters, the last panel would definitely have some yahoo yelling, "Now show us your tits!" Sadly, I wish I was kidding. 🙄😑
(DIR) Post #AwZHUNRyZgcTvXiDCK by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T19:15:10Z
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@MThaastrup dark 😆 But a good idea to ref Andersen's tales.
(DIR) Post #AwZHw1K6R4kbPTD7tA by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T19:20:08Z
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@DukeDuke I understand, there is always *that* guy, right? If I had to go this way, I would probably put that already on the third panel, then in the fourth the guy receiving an harp in the head. 🙃
(DIR) Post #AwZILKghZm6GhuqpRg by Pyves@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T18:37:06Z
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@davidrevoy autre idée (de moi seul ce coup ci): elle enchaîne en disant "c'était un échantillon gratuit, pour la suite, abonnement premium ou prenez des cookies ou acceptez d'aller aux pubs..."...ou alors elle enchaine avec une parodie de la phrase de pub de spotify 😅
(DIR) Post #AwZILM48S8RGysp3bs by Pyves@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T18:52:33Z
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@davidrevoy autre idée, pour surfer sur le thème de l'IA:La sirène n'est en fait qu'une illusion, et parmi les bateaux des musiciens crient au plagiat.(Ou bien changement de scène, et on voit quelqu'un plagier la musique de la sirène sans vergogne avec un ersatz, la mermAId 😁)J'arrête avec les suggestions promis 😅
(DIR) Post #AwZILNEo5wZMcGp5sm by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T19:24:36Z
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@Pyves La une est mignonne. Oui, la deux sur l'enshitification et le merch, patreon, follow us, etc... est une proposition populaire avec pas mal de declinaisons. Mais la première fois que j'en lis une version avec un échantillon pour un contenu dérrière un paywall, sympa!Sur l'IA, j'ai pas encore eu de propositions dans ce sens; dur dur de faire une métaphore mais ça me fait penser qu'il faut absolument que je fasse au moins un comic strip sur ce sujet. Merci pour les idées!
(DIR) Post #AwZINDdYlG6dQ3HTI8 by undead@masto.hackers.town
2025-07-27T19:24:47Z
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@davidrevoy You could do a front 3/4 down view onto her looking at a school of fish in front of her clapping, her looking at them, warmly smiling, and saying "You're too kind."The song was never for the ones in the boats.
(DIR) Post #AwZIZ2ajecNmdYb49g by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T19:27:09Z
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@undead Nice switch of perspective. 🙂
(DIR) Post #AwZJ1hKBnq0f4pWRZg by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T19:32:23Z
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@pcdevil Poetic!
(DIR) Post #AwZJ4sy2yHwi3UgYYC by botvolution@mastodon.sdf.org
2025-07-27T19:32:53Z
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@davidrevoy "profit"
(DIR) Post #AwZJZkUoWBpMl5jEiO by semiprime@mastodon.online
2025-07-27T19:38:25Z
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@davidrevoy Final panel: One of the humans says "We are the Copyright Enforcement Team of Universal Music Group…"
(DIR) Post #AwZKcxfa5xiiRGrQJ6 by tc_morekindness@c.im
2025-07-27T19:14:53Z
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@davidrevoy I haven't read all the proposals, but you could do a tie-in with the movie Jaws (the 50th anniversary is getting a lot of press). The last panel could pull back and show Steven Spielberg on a boat with a camera filming the fake shark about to eat the mermaid.
(DIR) Post #AwZL3JUPalgDdoCZkm by log@mastodon.sdf.org
2025-07-27T19:54:44Z
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@davidrevoy The guy that yells, "Play Free Bird!" at live performances is yelling "Play Free Bird!", as a kraken tentacle emerges from the water, snaking over the gunwale behind him, and about to wrap around his neck and yank him backward.
(DIR) Post #AwZLqH9T4Yrga1kibw by su_liam@mas.to
2025-07-27T20:03:57Z
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@davidrevoy Against the original story of the sirens, you already have the best twist. The grim Meathook endings ruin, and aren’t really a twist themselves. Perhaps, sailors begin to use her beautiful singing as a beautiful beacon, leading them safely across the ocean. Perhaps, this rock comes to anchor a safe harbor from storms. A collection of rafts and ships tied together in a Waterworld-looking ocean city tying together the world of land and the Siren city below. Who knows?🤔🤨
(DIR) Post #AwZMZAOF3jICdl4JW4 by su_liam@mas.to
2025-07-27T20:12:04Z
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@davidrevoy “Thank you. My friends will now let you pass.”Pull back to the circling seamonsters dispersing. “Aw, man! Maybe we should hang out with Scylla more…”
(DIR) Post #AwZMzzpiPwOViXiEim by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T20:16:55Z
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@MurmeltHier oh, sad for her but beautiful :blobcatheart:
(DIR) Post #AwZN2aBuD7DJ3hKDWS by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T20:17:25Z
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@semiprime 🤣 🤣 🤣
(DIR) Post #AwZOOU4Jko56OZmbui by WhiteCatTamer@mastodon.online
2025-07-27T20:32:27Z
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@davidrevoy Cut to a shot over her left shoulder where a ship that is covered in tentacles and clearly in the middle of a battle, with sailors held in the air by suckers and carrying weapons, except everyone has ALSO stopped to clap, including the sea monster with its tentacles, whose clap sound effects are more like “mmmwahPOP”.
(DIR) Post #AwZOzaFVjneeHKi1gG by nartagnan@mstdn.fr
2025-07-27T20:39:13Z
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@davidrevoy "Now that I have your attention, could you stop trashing the ocean please ?"And then, two options.A joyful organization of picking-sorting-recyclinqOr a booo and "she was not *so* good, I came to follow the others"
(DIR) Post #AwZP7xbQnGZN1bxMP2 by Aron@nerdculture.de
2025-07-27T20:40:44Z
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@davidrevoy The viewpoint of the 4th panel is from one of the boats.You can now clearly see that this boat and seemingly all the others are just ghost on their ghost ships.In the background you see the siren on her rock and behind her some actual remains of wrecked ships.
(DIR) Post #AwZPK42eg9z0TESgxk by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T20:42:51Z
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@nartagnan Cute and effective for a message in a fourth panel. Thanks!
(DIR) Post #AwZPMtb5y4VuwivARM by lumiworx@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T20:43:28Z
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@davidrevoy I like that, too - and maybe even stretch from 'later that day' to become 'later that century'... where there's now a statue in the same spot to commemorate when the last mermaid appeared to give her one and only concert.
(DIR) Post #AwZPd27fK7ebQXzEdk by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-27T20:46:23Z
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@Aron I'm affraid the aerial shot on panel 2 would give away directly this plot twist visually. But it's a good idea.
(DIR) Post #AwZPfI3b3DaJQT9xjc by homo_particeps@fosstodon.org
2025-07-27T20:46:49Z
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@davidrevoySome Airplanes in the distant sky, a skyline behind a runway.In Fron of that a plane just taken of seen diagnally from the ground.Maybe you can see bored or uninspired face through the windows. Wearing headphones (Probably they are too small, but a big, anonymous plane without any faces seen might convey the contrast even better).The turbines make visible dirt and maybe you can even see the noise made.In the front is a leafless tree. With a bird on a branch singing unnoticed.
(DIR) Post #AwZQXbaedvdle1WPDc by aviationeast@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T20:56:36Z
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@davidrevoy turn it into loss by having the mermaid with 1boat with its sails down.
(DIR) Post #AwZQtcncpO4hlX5XRg by tuxmain@toot.aquilenet.fr
2025-07-27T21:00:31Z
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@davidrevoy They go away and life goes on. The mermaid is sad because the plan was to attract and drown humans, but the curse failed. The other mermaids are despaired.Or:Some sailor approaches to ask an autograph, but they crash into a screen and we see it was an AI all along.
(DIR) Post #AwZQvXdoybwMLaPtBY by Aron@nerdculture.de
2025-07-27T21:00:48Z
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@davidrevoy I assumed that panel 2 doesn't give it away because everyhting is too far away to see details of the ships and people ^^'Looking forward to the one you're deciding on.
(DIR) Post #AwZR0DkaMFfE6XoNzU by homo_particeps@fosstodon.org
2025-07-27T21:01:45Z
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@davidrevoyMermaid holding up a sign:"I am a siren, outcasted for beeing mute. If you can spare a coin, please consider a donating"Maybe "sailor" instead of " coin"🤔
(DIR) Post #AwZR3TDxHdaUxq6BAu by iinavpov@mastodon.online
2025-07-27T21:01:54Z
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@davidrevoy elle regarde sa sébille vide quand les bateaux partent..."pas généreux dans le coin..."
(DIR) Post #AwZRHNpg7rwqISNTeK by gonzalo@neopaquita.es
2025-07-27T21:04:48Z
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@davidrevoy she could just remove the tail and return walking to the town (over the water).
(DIR) Post #AwZRZTJCVKdqUdoNnc by IchMeine@nrw.social
2025-07-27T21:08:07Z
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@davidrevoy I propose a more happy ending:The last panel shows a later time, where the mermaid sits on the edge of a boat with other playing instruments / singing with her. Just having fun together!
(DIR) Post #AwZRlddTvysVzt6E5o by mikelgs@mastodon.eus
2025-07-27T21:10:10Z
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@davidrevoy @juliancalaby or she simply points yo her hat, wich is fill with few coins. She asks for a bit of money for her art and people start feeling uncomfortable, looking down and around... and some start leaving (usual in street art cases)
(DIR) Post #AwZSf2splXAwEDhUQ4 by jcolag@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T21:20:21Z
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@davidrevoy I initially considered that the cynical punchline would be that they're all applauding for something behind her, like when you wave back to someone who definitely doesn't know that you exist.But twisting that around, having her thank herself for finishing the song or getting it out of her head, not even aware of the audience, might work.
(DIR) Post #AwZV0u7NEgzxK13I48 by holgerpatzelt@mastodon.world
2025-07-27T21:46:42Z
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@davidrevoy the mermaid stretches her Arm saying „if you liked my song I would appreciate your support“ but all the vessels leave with lots of speech bubbles saying something stupid about why they have to leave…
(DIR) Post #AwZV2jDIkVsm57h7Ue by maxnemerson@mastodon.social
2025-07-27T21:47:04Z
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@davidrevoy I don't know if it was already suggested, but my proposal for the fourth panel is Mermaid saying to sailors 'by the way, subscribe to my Youtube channel' with some funny nickname.
(DIR) Post #AwZXEPQ7M0cS1byVg8 by RachelC_Y@piaille.fr
2025-07-27T22:11:29Z
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@davidrevoy Je n'ai pas lu toutes les propositions (pardon) mais je prendrais quant à moi un contre-pied complet, du type :Deux gars mangent à table. Le premier dit "Ce que j'aime chez ce poissonnier, c'est qu'il garantit que l'animal a bien vécu avant qu'il ne finisse dans notre assiette." Le second opine et surenchérit : "Une consommation éthique des animaux de l'océan c'est important."Ça peut être aussi, même décor :"Tu avais raison, on a bien fait de prendre la formule spectacle et dîner"Surenchère : "Tu vois ? J'avais raison. C'est un peu plus cher mais tout le monde est gagnant."
(DIR) Post #AwZXVxGqkffzvw0THk by TagHunt@infosec.exchange
2025-07-27T22:14:43Z
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@davidrevoy She slips and splashes into the water
(DIR) Post #AwZZGPHj1ney5o87Au by LuluHelle@ohai.social
2025-07-27T22:34:16Z
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@davidrevoy last panel, mermaid says "next up is a tune from my latest album" Murmurs of disapproval from the boats as some are seen turning around to leave.
(DIR) Post #AwZebjFsTRsXshFhEu by Brentguernsey@infosec.exchange
2025-07-27T23:34:13Z
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@davidrevoy She switches to🎵 "Baby shark, baby shark. Do doo doo..."[Boats flee in disgust]
(DIR) Post #AwZfEgCrk5Q7ihPtKa by Nekoplanet@paquita.masto.host
2025-07-27T23:41:15Z
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@davidrevoy la cuarta viñeta tiene a los jueces de operacion triunfo (o America's got talent o equivalente) diciéndole que les ha gustado pero que no pasa a la final 😁
(DIR) Post #AwZg2vb0nac5vdfewC by pink@norden.social
2025-07-27T23:50:19Z
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@davidrevoy Or with a darker view and the "later that day..." perspective You see the rock and a bunch of trash floating where the ships used to be (like the big festival aftermath).@nartagnan
(DIR) Post #AwZgb06wWD4JmGqyvY by Whidou@ludosphere.fr
2025-07-27T23:56:30Z
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@davidrevoy Happy vikings around a banquet table wearing idol merch featuring the mermaid's face. Figurines, dakimakuras, albums, and pins are piled up amid the plates. Like a Hatsune Miku-style fanclub.
(DIR) Post #AwZgf7rtcR8wzjma12 by pink@norden.social
2025-07-27T23:57:12Z
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@davidrevoy Maybe a different direction: She sits in a baby pool on a big stage in front of a huge audience (unhappy?) anda) on of the people from a ship is standing backstage counting money with a "contract" in his pocket or b) Poseidon/Triton/her father (one with a trident) is standing backstage counting money.@_maleficentgirl
(DIR) Post #AwZkfWdXvhfZd6W5LM by SpaceLifeForm@infosec.exchange
2025-07-28T00:42:09Z
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@davidrevoy Picture of ship named USS Trump on scene.Maybe with a caption with trump on the bow: "I heard she was young".#SirenSong
(DIR) Post #AwaI6Zyqu3OYJ1zSLo by timnolli@convo.casa
2025-07-28T06:56:45Z
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@davidrevoy the Pepper & Carrot Community is so creative and funny ❤️
(DIR) Post #AwaJAHwE1fzdSe5srw by lufthans@mastodon.social
2025-07-28T07:08:40Z
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@davidrevoy the ships line up for autographsa) she's signing with both hand and tailb) she uses an octopus to sign 8 items at the same timec) she uses an octopus, squid or cuttlefish[0] to ink her pend) some combination of abovee) ignore all this and do something else :)[0] Maybe a young mermaid appears to hug the cuttlefish call it a cuddlefish
(DIR) Post #AwaJCm1t7O1jMnva4m by lufthans@mastodon.social
2025-07-28T07:09:07Z
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@davidrevoy she announces the next song will be the theme from Jaws
(DIR) Post #AwaRyZ0XdQoSVvb4IC by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T08:47:20Z
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@IchMeine cute!
(DIR) Post #AwaS4296jA5oKfDCD2 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T08:48:16Z
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@mikelgs @juliancalaby oh sad 😢
(DIR) Post #AwaSOw7qJ38pk2aUAS by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T08:52:09Z
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@jcolag "The applause are not for her" is a good switch of perspective for a last panel, but unfortunately super complex to setup correctly, especially with a view like on panel 2 where the audience is around at 360° For the other one, I see the point, but I'm not sure many would get it. Thanks for the ideas!
(DIR) Post #AwaSfMivBPg8rplTIO by heluecht@pirati.ca
2025-07-27T21:39:38Z
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If you prefer something darker, the fourth panel shows a girl sitting on the ground in a dirty corner of a dark street, trying to earn money by playing music. The first three panels were all products of her imagination.You could maybe even place a reference to the little mermaid by Hans Christian Andersen by showing her bleeding feet.
(DIR) Post #AwaSfO9XruZNIhEFQu by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T08:54:42Z
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@heluecht Hehe, true, it's dark and I like the ref to Andersen's tales; but I try to avoid the twist ofthe final "it was a dream". I think this type of endings are working only for Alice in Wonderland. 😆
(DIR) Post #AwaTCD6NycCgaCOxXM by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T09:01:02Z
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@holgerpatzelt Yes, this is a popular comment here, with many variations and declinations (Patreon, Merch, paywall for album, follow us message, etc.). It could work, but overall, I don't like making fun of this because I know many young creators already feel ashamed to have to insert this type of commercial segment into their content. I have a feeling that a little joke like this could perpetuate the idea it is a nuisance, whereas I think it is necessity for artists. But thanks for the input!
(DIR) Post #AwaTZfKrAhiio8M2xU by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T09:05:16Z
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@maxnemerson Yes, already suggested (but no problem) with many variations and declinations (Patreon, Merch, paywall for album, follow us message, etc.). It could work (and channel name sounds fun!) , but I know many young creators already feel ashamed to have to insert this type of segment into their content and I have a feeling that a little joke like this could perpetuate the idea it is a useless meme or nuisance, whereas its proly a necessity for many creator.
(DIR) Post #AwaTrHXMOMZMD8bS3U by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T09:08:29Z
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@RachelC_Y Pas de soucis pour pas avoir tout lu, y'en a trop! (et répétitive, parfois) je comprends. Ca peu virer de suite très dark si en fond un maitre sushi taille des petit bloques dans la queue de la sirène. Merci pour l'idée, mais non, on ne bouffera pas la petite sirène dans ce future strip. 😆
(DIR) Post #AwaTuOQHFOa4R3m1JI by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T09:08:59Z
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@vgarzareyna Simple and cute.
(DIR) Post #AwaTyCjaeAFxLIcmB6 by r3vlibre@mastodon.tetaneutral.net
2025-07-28T09:09:39Z
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@davidrevoy@gub Ah oui, la (5) est super drôle et très mignonne ^^
(DIR) Post #AwaTzysx6l6ayBqo2i by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T09:09:45Z
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@TagHunt A maybe too simple one. 🙂
(DIR) Post #AwaU6MM0lU3HUhU5g0 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T09:11:10Z
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@LuluHelle Haha, I'll put this one on the same box than the proposition I received where the audience ask for "Freebird" or "Wonderwall". 😆
(DIR) Post #AwaUpirRvm2aKVou5A by raffael@social.tchncs.de
2025-07-28T09:19:24Z
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@davidrevoy Sad face, inner monologue: "So much for some me-time. They are everywhere."
(DIR) Post #AwaVDuUGMCldKyVZC4 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T09:23:48Z
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@Brentguernsey It's the second time I received a Baby shark proposition. I'll have to go to watch it, I don't have the ref. Edit: I watch it... Oh no... 😅
(DIR) Post #AwaVLTfTxBPgTaMeIK by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T09:25:08Z
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@Whidou Cute and funny idea for the banket fan-club. 🙂
(DIR) Post #AwaVdmMFCjQDeb5oO0 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T09:28:27Z
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@SpaceLifeForm 😆 😆 😆 very dark.
(DIR) Post #AwaViRScKLEqI3ITwW by celti@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T09:29:14Z
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@davidrevoy chtulu ou kraken sortant de l'eau avec des chapeaux à chaque "bras" vers les bateaux pour récolter des pièces ... Ou d'autres choses...
(DIR) Post #AwaWpx5xD22KNrqEzo by SpaceLifeForm@infosec.exchange
2025-07-28T09:41:49Z
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@davidrevoy She always sings at night.
(DIR) Post #AwaX75vlbyVIi6FcCO by RachelC_Y@piaille.fr
2025-07-28T09:44:56Z
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@davidrevoy J'aime beaucoup le maître sushi à l'arrière 😂
(DIR) Post #AwaXI4h6Y6Pi3pd1OK by litt17@mastodon.social
2025-07-28T09:46:56Z
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@davidrevoy on the 4th panel the mermaid will say "while you are all here, let's clean the sea for everyone's good"environment campaign, yeah! :scremcat:
(DIR) Post #AwaYazhbQupG2DRlCa by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T10:01:32Z
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@timnolli ❤️ Oh yes!
(DIR) Post #AwaYdsNF8VtmAuIWoq by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T10:02:05Z
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@lufthans Cute!
(DIR) Post #AwaZ4OatxrezdLKeLw by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T10:06:53Z
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@litt17 Yes, a declination of that one was coined by Nartagnan in a French comment yesterday (don't worry, it's ok for not reading all, there is too many) and I'll probably go this route for the final one. 😉
(DIR) Post #AwahWE6NMr6Mpkprqi by TagHunt@infosec.exchange
2025-07-28T11:41:33Z
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@davidrevoy Okay...Uhh....Everyone but her slips into the water!Or...The people in the ships think she mermaid is unnatural and dangerous and start shooting the cannons at her.Like "beautiful song! And now you die!"
(DIR) Post #AwaiZHimT19yskoz8C by valvin@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T11:53:14Z
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@davidrevoy he is back and eat them all !
(DIR) Post #AwaiuD6iofxueazv16 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T11:56:56Z
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@valvin 🤣
(DIR) Post #AwajZU08uUDQvEbIXY by alarig@hostux.social
2025-07-28T12:04:30Z
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@davidrevoy having static boats with the sails out is weird
(DIR) Post #AwamKtdxafRXy7xeV6 by Proton25@mastodon.social
2025-07-28T12:35:29Z
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@davidrevoy I will not draw, since my skills are so terrible, it might make you go blind.Anyway, where I live, there is a phenomenon of jugglers performing during a red light in intersections and then they go between the cars with a tipping hat, hoping to be rewarded for their efforts. You can see where I am going with this, right?The mermaid either swims with a tipping hat between the boats, or floats a tipping hat toward them...
(DIR) Post #AwapxHACtJuVmX2Kau by litt17@mastodon.social
2025-07-28T13:16:01Z
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@davidrevoy ahh sorry i didn't read all the comment, really a lot. I don't understand French at all :emoji_squint:And sorry I didn't know if same i didn't know already posted
(DIR) Post #AwaqXeAsoZKhZdhDDk by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T13:22:37Z
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@litt17 No problem at all :)
(DIR) Post #AwauA4wU2ardSWyhA8 by davidrevoy@framapiaf.org
2025-07-28T14:03:08Z
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@alarig Thank you for this feedback; I try to find a good compromise between getting the shape of the boat iconic, and non inflated sails for the larger ones.
(DIR) Post #Awb1wIFKZzDMIejOme by leah@chaos.social
2025-07-28T15:29:58Z
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@davidrevoy @yngmar that's exactly what I would have suggested too^
(DIR) Post #AwbRfFPkS9TLOz8WTg by holgerpatzelt@mastodon.world
2025-07-28T20:18:34Z
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@davidrevoy thanks for your answer. Interesting other point of view, as I thought about the „everything for free“ idiotism of the modern world and many people. But yes, that’s the other side, of course.
(DIR) Post #AwdGIrwGLMzr2kOJP6 by wuffel@social.tchncs.de
2025-07-29T17:20:40Z
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@davidrevoy Godzilla clears the scene?
(DIR) Post #AwenefGNYxSWOPr5Ga by gws@mastodon.cloud
2025-07-30T11:09:05Z
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@davidrevoy inset sequence zooming in on the mermaid's finger on the mode selector on the back of the harp, about to move it from "STAY IN BOAT" to "JUMP OVERBOARD"