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 (HTM) Author: Josuah Demangeon <me@josuah.net>
       Date:   Thu, 27 Jan 2022 21:09:11 +0100
       
       opus3: improve wording, thanks IanJ
       
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       @@ -4,18 +4,18 @@ Heaven and computers
        .PP
        Before the era of smartphones, laptops, before Windows and Apple,
        there were pioneers who took the fun of computers from the hands
       -of the the few who could afford computers, and shared them massively
       +of the few who could afford computers, and shared them massively
        so that mere individuals could afford it.
        .
        .PP
       -An ocean of creativity sprout. Art of all kind were made on these
       -new toys, that were permitting to many to try on its own, or enjoy
       -a tune of 8-bit music, a demo scene, a play of video game, an ASCII
       +An ocean of creativity spread. Art of all kinds were made on these
       +new toys, that were permitting many to try on their own, or enjoy
       +a tune of 8-bit music, a demo scene, play a video game, ASCII
        art...
        .
        .PP
        Offering these pioneers a one-way ticket to enter the legend,
       -8bitlegends.com builds a corner of peace, making some room into our
       +8bitlegends.com builds a corner of peace, making some room in our
        heart for the 8bit heroes.
        .
        .DS