intro rewording - tgtimes - The Gopher Times
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 (HTM) Author: Anders Damsgaard <anders@adamsgaard.dk>
       Date:   Fri, 22 Oct 2021 19:18:18 +0000
       
       intro rewording
       
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         M news/part/a-newspaper-for-gopher.mw |      15 ++++++++-------
       
       1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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 (DIR) diff --git a/news/part/a-newspaper-for-gopher.mw b/news/part/a-newspaper-for-gopher.mw
       @@ -12,16 +12,17 @@ Rather than a continuous feed of upmost shocking headlines,
        \fIThe Gopher Times\fR publishes news you can read without a cookiewall
        or paywall.
        .PP
       -Paper newspapers go through a long chain: reporters, photographs,
       +Paper newspapers go through a long chain: reporters, photographers,
        redactors, editors, columnists, layout artists, typesetters, printers,
       -carriers and other supportive technicians...  and sold for a quarter.
       +carriers and other supportive technicians...  and are sold for a quarter.
        .PP
        The web considerably shackled the landscape: the high speed of computers
       -made real-time text news a reality, with time from Trump's tweet announcement
       -to publication below a few hours.
       +made real-time text news a reality, where time from Trump's tweet
       +announcements to publication is below a few hours.
        .PP
       -This journal divert by 90° by using \fCtroff(1)\fR as its foundation:
       -a \fItypesetter\fR producing static documents ready to be printed.
       +This journal diverts the present norm by 90° by using \fCtroff(1)\fR
       +as its foundation: a \fItypesetter\fR producing static documents ready
       +to be printed.
        .PP
        A new markdown to troff converter
        .FS
       @@ -31,5 +32,5 @@ as well as an entire custom macro set \fCmw\fR
        .FS
        git://git.z0.is/the-gopher-times
        .FE
       -have been built to fit screens of all shapes, and build-up the sensibility
       +are built to fit screens of all shapes, and build-up the sensibility
        of an actual journal.