2000 Subj : Re: Nobody's ... script editor To : alt.tv.er From : KenStahl Date : Fri Sep 30 2005 09:37:02 From Newsgroup: alt.tv.er npardue@indiana.edu wrote: > Lordy ... that sucked! > > I'd inititally missed the first 15 minutes or so. I got home from work > at 9:30 and DH asked me to run him over to the nearby fastfood place > where his car was stalled out. If it wouldn't start, we'd have to dash > over to Target for jumper cables and then jump it. I popped my tape in > first and then we headed out. By the time we got the jumped cables, > resusitated his car and I got home again it was 10:15. I walked in just > about the time Inez was suspecting she had just 'delivered a foot.' > > I think the show laid an egg. (BTW, after it was over I went back and > viewed the beginning on tape.) > > Ok, what I liked. Let's the good stuff out of the way firs. I liked > Abby's line about the second opinion. (In fact, that whole little > subclot was rather cute.) I really liked the scene where Luka tells > Abby that Sam's moving out. {Luka really does look especially good so > far this season!) I liked Dr. Coburn; Amy Aquino really did a good job > here. (Though I didn't care much for her new hair style. 50's > throwback?) > > What I hated would fill a novel, so I'll try to be concise. > > The whole main plot with Claire and her baby was just about the most > incomprensible thing they've ever shown. And the problem was, the > rudimentary idea could have been interesting. A surrogate gestation > where neither the gestational mother nor the geneitc mother ends up > wanting the baby. But instead, we got this completely nonsensicle plot > full of stupid people acting (in the case of Claire) like idiots, or, > in the case of the regular cast, like out-of-character idiots. > > How the hell does a woman get to be a surrogate WITHOUT realizing (and > agreeing to the fact) that a c-section MAY be necessary? While I'm the > first to agreee that there are way too many c-sections done in this > country, I also recognize that there ARE cases where they are vital ... > and a footling breech is one of those cases. Dr. Coburn should have > known that. Ray obviously knew that. Sam should have known that. So > why didn't Coburn push harder for Claire's consent? Explain in more > detail what is going on? Instead she gets about 3 lines explaining > that the cord could be compressed and there's a '25% change of > problems' and then, when Claire still says no, she just walks out and > says to Ray "SHe doesn't consent, we can't force her!" > And Sam. Yes, it is important to explain the risks of surgery to the > patient. Yes, Ray should have done it. But simply stating all the > horrible things that could, potentially happen, without any indication > of relative risk ... especially to a patient who already has said > repeatedly that she doesn't want surgery at all .. (and a woman who is > clearly a few bricks shy of a full load anyway!) is really stupid. > What exactly was Sam's movitation for trying to disuade Claire? Just > because Sam herself doesn't want more kids doesn't mean that other > women shouldn't be allowed to want them or have them. > And Ray. Screaming at patients REALLY doesn't help them make good > choices. All last season we were shown that Ray is a guy who really > doesn't care much about his patients; is more interested in moving > patients out, making a good superficial impression, and picking up his > paycheck at the end of the week. And now, suddenly, he's Super Doc, > totally wrapped up in the wellbeing of this little baby. (To the point > where, at the end, he spends the night in the NICU with him. "He > shouldn't be alone...." Umm... aren't there doctors and nurses in the > NICU.) Why was he up in OB with her anyway? (Incidentally, while I'm > glad they FINALLY moved her up to OB for the delivery ... but why was > she in the ER for most of her laobr? She was uninjured. The moment > they recogized the breech she should have been moved upstairs. > (Remember in "Great Expectations" Carol had to be prepped for surgery > as soon as her second twin turned breech. Claire should have at least > been up in the L&D ward, where skilled OB nurses and docs are > available.) And not only was he up in OB, he was standing there > telling Dr. Coburn (an OB doc with over 2 decades experience) what she > needed to be doing. Coburn should have kicked him out LONG before she > did. Hell, she shouldn't have allowed him to come upstairs in the > firstplace? > THEN, he goes and tells Tina and Rod that the baby will 'probably' have > neurogical damage. That's not his job! He's neither the OB nor the > pediatrician. THEY are the ones who should be telling the parents > what's going on, NOT the ER doc who examined Claire after the accident > but had (or should have had) nothing whatsoever to do with the birth. > > Ok. The rest of the eppy. THe plot with the little boy with the > metabolic disorder was interesting. (And didn't that red headed > 'friend' look like "Danny" from The Partridge Family?) Medically > anyway. Unfortunately, it was used only to give us another helping of > "Dr. Lockhart, God's gift to medicine." A couple of seasons ago, > wasn't Abby bitching that she just 'wasn't getting it.' That neither > the clinical stuff nor the classwork was going well for her? So why is > she suddenly all-knowing and infallable? Yeah, confidence helps a lot, > but come on .... (Though she skipped over the "A" in her mnemonic.) > And the friends told Abby that they were skipping school. But isn't > this July? (New residents just starting, just a couple of days after > the previous eppy.) Why would they be in school? > > The female GSW and her daughter served only to be an anvil for Pratt's > story ... and Pratt's story is (sorry Uncle Copter) about the most > uningaging 'pesronal' story to have passed through in a long time. > > Morris during his first two seasons was an amusing minor character who, > while completely unbelievable, was at least administered to us in small > doses as a nice bit of comic relief. As cheief resident he's beyond > insufferable and it's just ludicrous that there was not a single other > senior resident on staff who would have done a better job. (They didn't > even look at outside candicates. Remember that Kerry came on board as > chief resident from a different hospital way back in S2.) > > Today we get a second crop of really-stupid-interns. (I guess the first > batch from last week all quit in disgust?) > > While they're working on the GSW lady, someone (don't recall who) told > Pratt to call it, that they should 'save the blood for someone who has > a chance.' How often on the show do we see them pouring 6 ...10 ... 15 > units of blood into patients who have massive injuries and been down > for hours? "Saving blood" has never been a concern for them before. > (Though todays POV is probably more realistic. Blood, espeically O-neg > blood, is not an unlimited commodity.) > > Luka might be able to actually SEE if Sam and Alex are home, rather > than just yelling for them, if he'd turn on the light! > > And earlier, when Luka and Alex are talking about Sam's new place, Alex > says that it isn't close to Luka's, since it's just a few blocks from > the hospital. But in S9 didn't we see Luka cross-country skiing to > work. HE doesn't live far from the hospital either. (Though I suppose > if Alex 'wasn't far' in the other direction, it might add up to be a > bit of a hike. Still, surely Alex knows how to take the el. If he > really wants to visit Luka, he could do so. > > Bah. If I had the ability to do so, I'd probably just edit my tape > down to those few nice "Luka" scenes, and erase the rest. But I can't. > Ah well. > > Naomi > I didn't watch it last night. I now have Tivo and seldom watch shows live any more because I can't fast forward through the commercials. I guess I'll find out tonight how the show went. -- Blogging at http://HexagonalPeg 14 .blogspot.com . 0