[HN Gopher] What is the ideal chapter length? (2023)
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       What is the ideal chapter length? (2023)
        
       Author : samclemens
       Score  : 60 points
       Date   : 2024-08-08 13:39 UTC (3 days ago)
        
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       | jayski wrote:
       | 20
        
         | novosel wrote:
         | I bid you 21 good Sir.
        
         | gandalfgreybeer wrote:
         | Assuming all chapters are the same length, I think 10-20 is the
         | sweet spot where I can randomly pick up the book
        
       | beAbU wrote:
       | Long enough that when I'm reading at night and I'm getting
       | sleepy, that the chapter end is always a reasonable amount of
       | pages away.
        
       | dehrmann wrote:
       | > There is no magic button when it comes to chapter length: the
       | 'right' one is a blend for each novel being written. There's no
       | point in worrying about the length of your piece of string if the
       | string itself isn't useful or compelling.
        
       | Conscat wrote:
       | Slightly tangential, the longest single chapter of anything I've
       | read so far is Fallout: Equestria chapter 37, at 51.5k words.
       | Fallout: Equestria - Project Horizons is the longest single
       | novel, at 1.8m words, but in terms of chapter count (which seems
       | to be what the article means by "length"), I doubt either of
       | those come close, since they merely have 50-odd chapters.
       | Counting the number of chapters seems like a strange measurement
       | to me, in light of that.
        
         | 082349872349872 wrote:
         | Why does clover keep on growing       Why are there flies in my
         | hay       Don't they know it's the end of the world       It
         | ended when you clopped away              -- "Horsefly" Davis
         | (as heard on DCR)
        
         | captn3m0 wrote:
         | A Memory of Light (last book in Wheel of Time) has a single
         | chapter at 79000 words. Quote from the author about the
         | chapter:
         | 
         | > The chapter is just shy of 79,000 words. It contains (by my
         | quick count) 72 scenes-but only 31 distinct viewpoints, as
         | numerous ones repeat.
        
           | trescenzi wrote:
           | I need to actually finish these. Robert Jordan passing and,
           | at the time, me having no clue who Brandon Sanderson was,
           | meant I stalled out. But now that I know how incredible
           | Sanderson is, and the TV show seems like it's actually solid
           | I've recently been toying with the idea of reading them all
           | through.
           | 
           | I love the insanity of that quote. Sanderson has an awesome
           | ability to write things like a chapter with a dozen
           | viewpoints that still flow so incredibly well.
        
             | ryanar wrote:
             | I read through the wheel of time last year and enjoyed it.
             | It is a commitment, I think the series slows down a ton and
             | then Sanderson comes in and it picks up, and it was amazing
             | to see all the building of plots see their conclusions. So
             | it is well worth the journey.
        
           | BeFlatXIII wrote:
           | You could fit an entire novel in that chapter.
        
       | amateurCoder5 wrote:
       | Chapter 11 in the book Gremlins was just (spoiler) "Pete forgot."
        
       | jb1991 wrote:
       | The larger question for me is the long-term effect of rapidly
       | vanishing attention spans in our population. The short-form
       | format across tweets, tiktok, much on youtube, instagram, SMS vs.
       | voicemail -- even email is often considered "too long" for newer
       | generations -- what is the likely consequence of this? It seems
       | dangerous in the long-term, but maybe not. Is it just a temporary
       | cultural shift, or is it resulting in a permanent shift to
       | humanity's ability to concentrate?
        
         | rvba wrote:
         | There are much more things to consume. There were of course
         | books and newspapers in the past (in fact even more press and
         | higher quality than now), but I think for average person there
         | was much less of everything - you had one book, one newspaper,
         | few tv channels to choose from.
         | 
         | So people want the essence. Also the quality of modern writing
         | is often poor - you dont learn much from articles, since the
         | people who write them must pump few per day
        
           | jb1991 wrote:
           | That's an interesting observation -- perhaps the
           | proliferation of quantity is encouraging audiences to care
           | less about engagement time so they can maximize exploration
           | of all that is available.
           | 
           | The ability to speed up the playback speed of Netflix content
           | would be an example of this.
        
         | lumb63 wrote:
         | I worry about the same thing. I will say, however, that I worry
         | more about this in the context of news articles, conversation,
         | and other shorter-duration activities. Books are a big
         | commitment, and it is highly disappointing to find out someone
         | stretched a 50 page book into 250 pages to get it published.
         | Sometimes it helps to instill the idea, or provides useful
         | elaboration, but sometimes it is filler with no discernible
         | benefit to the reader. Our time is important and as such, I
         | think there ought to be a referendum against wasting it. That
         | is not to say all content should be short, but that it should
         | be no longer than it needs to be, and that information density
         | should be as high as is tolerable.
        
           | iambateman wrote:
           | This is largely an issue of trust and priority, not attention
           | span, right?
           | 
           | The same people who fly through TikTok videos also regularly
           | sit through a two hour movie or read the entire Harry Potter
           | series.
           | 
           | I think that people can pay attention if they want to, and
           | the cultural shift is _what_ we expect to give attention to.
        
             | adonovan wrote:
             | I too used to believe that, but I've since met too many
             | children who have told me they don't like going to the
             | movies because you have to pay attention for two continuous
             | hours during which you aren't allowed to use your phone.
        
               | reidjs wrote:
               | Perhaps it's the movies fault for not being interactive
               | or engaging enough
        
               | forgotacc240419 wrote:
               | Or for being unnecessarily long; 90 minute films seem
               | scarce nowadays even for kids
        
         | wongarsu wrote:
         | If we take fanfiction as indication of how younger people
         | produce and consume content then the effect is that chapters
         | get shorter while books get longer.
         | 
         | Of course take that with a grain of salt because *waves wagely
         | at the statement full of issues*. But it tracks with other
         | trends in social media. Many people will be able to tell you
         | more about their favorite tik-toker than their favorite long-
         | form-content producer. The length of the snippets doesn't
         | dictate the depth of the story
         | 
         | You could even draw a comparison to the rising popularity of
         | series over movies. People now prefer 6 45 minute segments over
         | one 3 hour installment.
        
           | camel-cdr wrote:
           | > If we take fanfiction as indication of how younger people
           | produce and consume content then the effect is that chapters
           | get shorter while books get longer.
           | 
           | Except, that assumption might not be true.
           | 
           | To set a baseline I looked at LOR statistics:
           | 62 chapters         1255 pages         381103 words
           | 7759 words/chapter         20 page/chapter
           | 
           | Then I looked at the 100 most bookmarked fanfics on AO3 in
           | one of the most popular fandoms (Harry Potter):
           | 218401 average word count         33 average chapters
           | 9435 average words/chapter
           | 
           | Now 15 of the 100 fanfics are one-shots with only one
           | chapter, if we exclude those we get the following numbers:
           | 253386 average word count excluding one-shots         39
           | average chapters excluding one-shots         7544 average
           | words/chapter excluding one-shots
           | 
           | For reproduction, I used the following for scraping and
           | processed the data further in vim:                   lynx
           | -dump 'link to ao3 filter page' | grep -A2 'Words\|Chapters'
           | | tr -d '\n,-' | sed 's/\[[0-9]*\]//g;s/  */
           | /g;s/Words/\nWords/g'
        
       | jll29 wrote:
       | I was hoping for some statistics about avg. (mean, mode) chapter
       | length, and changes over time, given that this post comes from
       | Penguin, who have plenty of data at their fingertips.
       | 
       | Still, an interesting blog post.
        
         | passion__desire wrote:
         | Humanities department generally / traditionally haven't
         | believed in insights that come from mathematics.
        
           | keiferski wrote:
           | Depends on what you mean by traditionally. This division is
           | largely a consequence of the battle between scientific-
           | technical education and classics/Latin-Greek education in the
           | 19th century. Prior to that, there was definitely a ton of
           | overlap between humanities and mathematics - consider Leibniz
           | as a prime example.
           | 
           | https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Two_Cultures
        
             | passion__desire wrote:
             | Conside the "Thesis, Antithesis, Synthesis" theory. It is
             | nothing but Synthesis = l x Antithesis + (1 - l) x Thesis
        
           | beezlebroxxxxxx wrote:
           | I wouldn't say "believe" is the most accurate way to describe
           | it.
           | 
           | They're just very skeptical of the insights from statistical
           | analysis of works in the mediums because there usually aren't
           | very good large data sources. Cinemetrics.lv was amazing
           | before the domain was stolen and had a large community of
           | film academics using it. In literature, a big problem has
           | been the way that publishers do not allow access to any of
           | their data, some public access programs are starting to try
           | to overcome that though.
           | 
           | In general, though, most humanities academics aren't
           | interested in statistical analysis or its insights, not
           | because they don't believe in them, but because the insights
           | generally aren't that useful or likely so general as to be
           | not that useful for very specific research programs.
        
           | bccdee wrote:
           | Mathematics can only give you insight into things that can be
           | quantified. When people try do things like (say) perform a
           | statistical analysis of the tone of a narrative, they have to
           | either go through and numerically quantify the tone of each
           | passage (time-consuming & of dubious value) or feed the whole
           | thing through sentiment analysis software (practically
           | useless). You'll learn much more from a close subjective
           | reading of a few interesting passages.
        
         | persnickety wrote:
         | Ironic that they prefer to _tell_ us stories rather than _show_
         | the facts.
        
       | asplake wrote:
       | (In fiction)
        
       | camel-cdr wrote:
       | For me 10k-15k words is roughly the optimum, where it isn't to
       | short, but you still have ampel oportunity to stop at a chapter
       | break.
       | 
       | Although for serial works it's generally the longer the better.
        
       | fuzzfactor wrote:
       | I like it best when a chapter takes between 10 minutes and a half
       | hour to read through.
       | 
       | Textbooks you're surely going to focus on one chapter at at time
       | and you don't want it to take very long to re-read, which most
       | students will likely be doing, especially when you may have hours
       | of problems to solve for a single chapter. You want to be able to
       | re-read without a lengthy commitment compared to the problem-
       | solving.
       | 
       | Regular non-fiction may not be as universally re-read but it
       | would be more often than with fiction.
       | 
       | With fiction or storytelling a half hour is a good max so there
       | will always be a stopping point within reach, with two chapters
       | not being out of the question lots of times. People may not re-
       | read a fiction chapter as they go along very much, but why not
       | make it easier anyway.
       | 
       | Then again people probably like a chapter that takes whole hour
       | or more but is such a page-turner that it seems like a half-hour
       | or less :)
        
       | sambeau wrote:
       | I am writing children's books. One mantra I try to keep to is to
       | make my chapters ~15 minutes long when read aloud by a parent at
       | bed time. This gives them the ability to be consistent in their
       | bedtime routine.
       | 
       | This way children don't get short-changed and adults don't find
       | they have committed to something they can't get out of. It also
       | allows them to easily give in and do another chapter -- after
       | all, it's only 15 minutes.
       | 
       | 30 mins reading out loud is about 4,500 words, so 15 minute half-
       | chapters are 2,250 words.
       | 
       | A 2,250 word chapter is also very manageable by a child.
        
         | ComputerGuru wrote:
         | As a parent that's grappled with this: thank you!
        
       | thih9 wrote:
       | > there is no magic button when it comes to chapter length: the
       | 'right' one is a blend for each novel being written
        
       | sebastiennight wrote:
       | When I was re-writing one of my books in 2016, I spent the whole
       | summer asking successful entrepreneurs (my reader audience) what
       | was their favorite business book, and why.
       | 
       | It turned out that the "favorite book" answer was fairly varied
       | (aside from a couple of big-name bestsellers), but the "why"
       | answer almost always revolved around:
       | 
       | - "bite-size chapters"
       | 
       | - "really quick read"
       | 
       | - "short and to the point"
       | 
       | - "one idea, one example for proof, and that's it, go to next
       | chapter"
       | 
       | My book went from ~120 pages to ~150 during that rewrite, but
       | also went from ~10 chapters to ~80.
       | 
       | Not only did the new version outsell the original by a 10x
       | factor, but I'd estimate the completion rate also shot up
       | considerably (based on reader comments about the final chapters).
        
         | qingcharles wrote:
         | James Patterson's books are generally the worst I've ever read,
         | but his short 2-3 page chapters are surely one of the reasons
         | for his success. They're like popping M&M's -- you're thinking,
         | "I can just do one more."
        
         | GeoAtreides wrote:
         | happy for you you got that bag, but oh my god do I weep for
         | mankind
         | 
         | tiktok and its ilk surely did a number on our collective
         | attention spans (and along with it the capability for nuanced
         | and complex reasoning)
        
           | SllX wrote:
           | Nah, most business books or "ideas" books really are too
           | long. Something I used to do when I was interested in a book
           | is I would go to the local book store, skim the introduction
           | and chapter listings to get a feel for the book, find the
           | chapter that had the same name of the book and just read
           | that. Never walked away feeling like I didn't get the
           | author's main idea, and usually most of the rest of the book
           | is trying to pre-sell it and examples of where to apply their
           | idea. Maybe some anecdotes about how it helped them in their
           | life or how other people do it too.
        
       | dark__paladin wrote:
       | For me personally 5k-10k / chapter and 20-30 chapters per book is
       | optimal.
        
         | ProllyInfamous wrote:
         | I'm 2/3rd of the way through _Love in Time of Cholera_ and it
         | 's only chapter four (@200+pages, so far)... otherwise, an
         | absolutely beautiful story of unrequited/parasocial love.
         | 
         | By far _the worst_ chapter structure (and  "book") is _The
         | Sound and The Fury_. It seems like an exercise in-the-second-
         | person, gone wrong. Sensorial overload... and _isn 't the point
         | of a good story <TO MAKE SENSE>?_
        
       | Yawrehto wrote:
       | 1. I wonder how much of the reason people seem to like shorter
       | chapters is because shorter-chapter books tend to have quicker
       | pacing. Would there be some way of controlling for pacing? 2. The
       | title is a bit misleading. I went in assuming it would be some
       | sort of analysis - average chapter length vs number of copies
       | sold, for instance. It's certainly a lovely read and decent
       | history, but it doesn't answer the central question. 3. The
       | username of the poster (samclemens) is a fitting username for a
       | post about books with a particular focus on older 'classics'.
        
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