[HN Gopher] "Dune" and the delicate art of making fictional lang...
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       "Dune" and the delicate art of making fictional languages
        
       Author : drdee
       Score  : 95 points
       Date   : 2024-02-28 18:34 UTC (1 days ago)
        
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       | metabagel wrote:
       | Odd that there is no mention of Belter Creole (lang belta). That
       | seems to be the gold standard of a fictional language in movies
       | and television.
       | 
       | https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Belter_Creole
       | 
       | Translator here:
       | 
       | https://lingojam.com/BelterTranslator
        
         | asabla wrote:
         | They really implemented it so well into the show. Every
         | character actually spoke it and not rehearsed the language like
         | a lot of other shows and movies does.
        
           | 0x457 wrote:
           | Yeah, it was much better than when a screenwriter inserts 5
           | Spanish words they remember from school into a script.
        
         | pavel_lishin wrote:
         | Neither that, nor Klingon and the work Marc Okrand did on it.
         | 
         | The article is basically about Dune & Peterson, and the work
         | he's done, especially for Dune. It's not _too_ surprising they
         | left off other popular conlangs.
        
         | arp242 wrote:
         | Mi pensa it was rather under-used; there's tons of scenes with
         | Beltalowda talking amongst each other in English rather than
         | Belter. There's actually very few scenes where people talk
         | Belter rather than English with a few Belter words mixed in.
         | 
         | There's obvious practical reasons for all of this, but I
         | wouldn't call it a "gold standard".
        
           | exe34 wrote:
           | Sa sa Ke!
        
           | 082349872349872 wrote:
           | Ya, at least there's enough there there (despite the paucity
           | of canon) to communicate and be creative; eg
           | https://sites.google.com/view/tinglangbelta/xom
           | -- Oh Stewardess, I speak Belter.         He's in great pain
           | and wants to know if you can help.       -- Tili natet
           | 'ratna. Im gonya leta-kom *mediting         detim im bek fo
           | du to gut.
           | 
           | I believe Tolkien's languages remain the "gold standard", but
           | I'm not sure if they're as productive for everyday chat and
           | memes.
           | 
           | (I have heard that Eliezer Ben-Yehuda made a big mistake in
           | not creating any swear words for Modern Hebrew, leading to a
           | substantial overlap in comprehensible swearing between jewish
           | and arabic communities in J'lem. That said, I understand
           | "chinga tu madre ... cabron" perfectly well, so probably any
           | language communities in close contact will swear at each
           | other perfectly comprehensibly whether they share a
           | vocabulary or not)
        
       | empath-nirvana wrote:
       | Conlangs are cool and all and I haven't seen the new movie yet,
       | but the thing that sort of annoyed me about the first one is that
       | the book is _heavily_ inspired by a non-fiction book called
       | Sabres of Paradise, about an islamic uprising against the Russian
       | Empire:
       | 
       | https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Imam_Shamil
       | 
       | And the book is _full_ of arabic, persian and russian
       | terminology, and Islamic cultural and religious references, and
       | the director and screenwriter have said that it's basically
       | orientalism and ornament and they've gotten rid of it because
       | it's distracting, but I don't think it's ornament, and I think
       | the Islamic influences on the Fremen are a core part of the
       | story, and it's missing a lot without it.
       | 
       | The book is meant to be about _our future_ and the fact that
       | Muslims still exist and are important in the future isn't just
       | like "flavor", it was an innovative idea at the time in science
       | fiction and still is.
       | 
       | It just seems kind of wrong to expend so much thought inventing
       | new languages for the movie when it had so much context and
       | culture already there to use.
        
         | gherkinnn wrote:
         | > have said that it's basically orientalism and ornament and
         | they've gotten rid of it because it's distracting
         | 
         | I like the books and the first film, haven't seen part 2 yet.
         | But this has to be bullshit. Is it about orientalist ornaments
         | or did the studio want to avoid a midwit outrage over the
         | frequent use of the term "Jihad"?
        
           | empath-nirvana wrote:
           | I'm sure that's part of it.
        
           | jfyi wrote:
           | I think largely so, very likely.
           | 
           | Just from memory, there was also the name "Usul" described as
           | meaning "the strength at the base of the pillar". In the same
           | context, I could see that drawing outrage too.
        
         | arcbyte wrote:
         | The connotations to western audiences carried by Arabic words
         | and imagery in 1965 is vastly different to the connotations
         | conveyed today. It would be incredibly distracting and
         | offputting to modern audiences trying to grasp the core story.
        
           | lupusreal wrote:
           | When we dumb things down for the lowest common denominator,
           | we're just left with slop. I understand the economic
           | incentive to reach the widest audience possible, but I wish
           | our culture was better at telling idiots to go pound sand.
        
             | ethanbond wrote:
             | Connotations aren't an affliction of idiots...
        
               | lupusreal wrote:
               | Maybe in the general case, but in this specific case?
               | Inability to look past islamaphobic 'connotations' and
               | prejudices to enjoy something like Dune seems like a
               | affliction of idiots to me.
        
           | Lord-Jobo wrote:
           | I think this is the strongest reason to avoid it, and I would
           | have done the same. It's just going to lead the audience to
           | weird places and confusion. And distract from all of the
           | other things Dune has going for it. Replicating the EFFECT on
           | the audience of a book written in 1965 is really a big
           | undertaking.
           | 
           | Even if you ignore the rather blunt stereotyping and
           | selective aspects of Islamic cultures that Herbert injected.
           | Or carried over from another story, as was highlighted
           | earlier.
        
             | Supermancho wrote:
             | Relevant? https://youtu.be/YSFyotLlhxA?t=669
        
           | empath-nirvana wrote:
           | To be honest I think it makes it more important to keep it.
        
             | HelloMcFly wrote:
             | Perhaps artistically, but almost certainly not
             | commercially.
        
           | lbrindze wrote:
           | This is not a strong justification. If you switched out
           | "arabic words and imagery" for say "blackface" would it still
           | hold? There was a time where seeing non-white actors in film
           | would have been considered distracting and off-putting, but
           | we seem to have moved past that as a society, so why are we
           | holding on to this justification now?
           | 
           | Moreover, distracting and off putting to whom? This article,
           | in part, is responding to how distracting it is for fans of
           | the books and readers to see the source material changed in a
           | pretty crucial way. As others have said, its not exactly
           | obvious to me that the use of these words and language are
           | even possible to separate from the core story.
           | 
           | I get that this is a film executive's decision looking at the
           | commercial viability of their product if they whitewash the
           | story (or not), but at the end of the day we can't really say
           | what the commercial success would (or wouldn't) have been if
           | this language were preserved. To me this demonstrates more
           | the entrenchment of the people who are in the position to
           | make these choices rather than what audiences are willing to
           | consume.
           | 
           | After all, consider the fact that Dune has remained important
           | enough, despite the claim that Arabic (and specifically
           | Muslim) imagery is used throughout that someone decided to
           | greenlight two feature film adaptations so far.
        
           | bertil wrote:
           | I assumed some of that was because they kept, and highlighted
           | really, the fact that their religion was the result of
           | deliberate manipulation by the Bene Gesserit. I can't
           | remember if they explicitly say "planted prophets," but it
           | felt more plain than in the book; I can see how making that
           | statement when the culture is explicitly Arabic and the
           | religion Islam would be more incendiary than science fiction
           | is usually trying to be.
        
             | Jtsummers wrote:
             | In the book they explicitly say that the Bene Gesserit
             | planted stories and prophecies in populations so they could
             | exploit them, if needed, later. That's what Paul and
             | Jessica do.
        
           | throw4847285 wrote:
           | But if you take out those connotations, there isn't really
           | much left to Dune. The people who read it as kids and found
           | its word-building novel either never watched Lawrence of
           | Arabia or know nothing about the history of the Middle East.
           | 
           | That's not to say the book isn't enjoyable, or even great.
           | It's just that it mashes together various real people and
           | historical incidents and draws much of its power from them.
           | If you know the real story, it's impossible not to notice the
           | parallels. If you remove the parallels, you lose the story's
           | power.
        
             | mr_toad wrote:
             | > But if you take out those connotations, there isn't
             | really much left to Dune.
             | 
             | Hydraulic despotism. The pitfalls of manipulating religion.
             | The trap that both present to those who use them. That's
             | what most of the book is about.
             | 
             | If you just focus on historical analogies you're missing
             | some major themes of the book. And that's ignoring the
             | thematic exploration of precognition and omniscience, the
             | ecological themes etc.
        
             | vkou wrote:
             | If you remove the window dressing, the rest of the story
             | stays.
             | 
             | 1. Colonisation and the relationship of colonisers and
             | colonized.
             | 
             | 2. Great leaders and what happens to them (explored further
             | in Messiah and Children, with some really horrible
             | consequences)
             | 
             | 3. Environmentalism, feudalism, social stagnation, power
             | structures, mutually assured destruction...
             | 
             | 4. Exploration of a society that explicitly rejects
             | thinking machines, in favor of using people _as_ machines.
        
           | kragen wrote:
           | if some social group today finds itself 'put off' by arabic
           | words and imagery, does that make it more praiseworthy to
           | _omit_ arabic words from a story you are telling them, or to
           | _emphasize_ arabic words in a story you are telling them? i
           | would tend more towards the latter; i don 't think that kind
           | of thing merits coddling
        
         | olah_1 wrote:
         | > the director and screenwriter have said that it's basically
         | orientalism and ornament and they've gotten rid of it because
         | it's distracting
         | 
         | I honestly didn't notice. The Fremen still seem heavily middle
         | eastern to me.
        
           | bertil wrote:
           | Amusingly, neither Zendaya nor Javier Bardem are Middle-
           | Eastern, but they can easily play so because skin color works
           | that way. I think the fact that it could just as well be a
           | post-El-Nino Chihuahuan desert makes sense too.
        
             | dragonwriter wrote:
             | > Amusingly, neither Zendaya nor Javier Bardem are Middle-
             | Eastern, but they can easily play so because skin color
             | works that way.
             | 
             | Well, given the history of the Iberian peninsula, there's
             | likely a little more to it in Bardem's case...
        
         | shagie wrote:
         | While non-cannon (with the writing of the prequels), from The
         | Dune Encyclopedia ...
         | 
         | > The earliest history of the native inhabitants of Arrakis
         | indicates that they were the sole remnant of a people known as
         | the Zensunni Wanderers, originally followers of a "prophet"
         | named Maometh, circa 1381 E.G. The Fremen broke away from the
         | main sect to establish their own religion based on an
         | ultraconservative notion of living life according to "the ways
         | of the fathers." Given the Fremen's roots in such a religion
         | and the particularly life- threatening environment that Arrakis
         | afforded them, the Fremen developed a set of cultural
         | institutions unique in their perfect balance between the
         | philosophical world view demanded by imposed Fremen faith and
         | the harsh reality imposed by Arrakis's nature. These
         | institutions remained stable for thousands of years and are
         | significantly changed by only two events. The first was the
         | arrival of Pardot Kynes as the first planetologist of Arrakis.
         | The second was the transfer of the governance of Arrakis from
         | the House Harkonnen to House Atreides in 10190 and the
         | subsequent emergence of Paul Atreides as Paul Maud'Dib. Kynes
         | expanded the cultures of the Fremen to include the hope for a
         | second flowering of Arrakis; Paul Maud'Dib forever changed that
         | culture, thus, for all intents, the ancient culture of the
         | Fremen ceased with his rise to power.
         | 
         | And an example from first page of the section on Fremen
         | Language: https://i.imgur.com/jiRQNVv.png and a bit from the
         | history of the language: https://i.imgur.com/QQq5gfO.png
        
           | euroderf wrote:
           | I've reviewed this kind of Dune background material and I
           | still don't quite get how the Zensunnis and others managed to
           | get to other star systems before the advent of FTL. I've seen
           | no mention of (for example) generation ships.
        
             | shagie wrote:
             | In this timeline... FTL was discovered in 13004 BG (before
             | guild) and 12200 BG was "The Empire of Ten Worlds" followed
             | by 11200 BG which was "The Empire of a Thousand Worlds"
             | 
             | It wasn't until 7593 BG when I.V. Holtzman was born. 5022
             | BG was "The Empire of Ten Thousand Worlds".
             | 
             | The order of the mentats was established in 1234 AG. In
             | 2800 AG you have the beginnings of the Zensunni Migration.
             | 7193 AG was Zensunni on Rossak buying passage from the
             | space guild to Arrakis.
             | 
             | Paul Atreides was born in 10175 AG.
             | 
             | ---
             | 
             | FTL existed before the guild, it was mediated by computers
             | and wasn't entirely safe.
             | 
             | There are about 10,000 years between the founding of the
             | guild (and safe non-computer FTL) and the events of Dune.
             | 
             | ---
             | 
             | A page from the start of the timeline of the Zensunni
             | Wanderers history - https://i.imgur.com/Xw8qbpO.png
        
               | euroderf wrote:
               | 404 on the imgur
        
               | shagie wrote:
               | Works for me... a non-direct link to the .png
               | https://imgur.com/a/vddl6z6
               | 
               | If you are interested in it, a number of sources have the
               | pdf online which (as you can see from page numbers) isn't
               | small.
        
         | belval wrote:
         | > and it's missing a lot without it
         | 
         | Could you clarify what it is missing exactly? Genuinely curious
         | as I read the books before watching the movie and I didn't
         | really feel like the movie was missing anything?
         | 
         | > The book is meant to be about _our future_ and the fact that
         | Muslims still exist and are important in the future isn't just
         | like "flavor", it was an innovative idea at the time in science
         | fiction and still is.
         | 
         | Respectfully I think this is reading too deep into it. Herbert
         | borrowed Arabic words and concepts to build a hardy middle-
         | eastern-adjacent culture, it's hardly the focus of the book.
        
           | empath-nirvana wrote:
           | > Respectfully I think this is reading too deep into it.
           | Herbert borrowed Arabic words and concepts to build a hardy
           | middle-eastern-adjacent culture, it's hardly the focus of the
           | book.
           | 
           | https://reactormag.com/the-muslimness-of-dune-a-close-
           | readin...
           | 
           | It's more than that.
        
             | regentbowerbird wrote:
             | Very interesting read, thank you.
        
             | dingnuts wrote:
             | I always thought the Arabic references in Dune, and also
             | the desert planet that produces the fuel by which commerce
             | operates, was a downright obvious social commentary on oil
             | and the geopolitics at the time the book was published
             | 
             | Honestly I always thought the metaphor was borderline heavy
             | handed, to the point that I never continued reading after
             | the first book because the metaphor was boring to me
             | 
             | Now I feel positively gaslit. Did I imagine all this?
        
               | empath-nirvana wrote:
               | You didn't imagine it, but he didn't draw all his
               | references from the arabian peninsula and islamic culture
               | is more than saudi arabia.
        
               | bertil wrote:
               | No, the reference to Arabic oil is heavy-handed at least,
               | but Frank Herbert has denied this was intentionally just
               | that, without denying there were obvious elements. He's
               | claimed they represent a wider yearning for freedom.
        
               | philwelch wrote:
               | I'm not sure the timing actually works out for that. Arab
               | oil production was significantly behind the United States
               | and Russia during the Second World War, but represented a
               | major share of oil production by 1973, as seen in the
               | effects of the embargo imposed in response to the Yom
               | Kippur War.
               | 
               | Dune was written in the 1950's, but the geopolitical
               | metaphors are a few decades older than that; the
               | character of Paul Atreides is clearly a parallel to T.E.
               | Lawrence, which places the geopolitical context firmly
               | within the First World War. That's a different part of
               | the Middle East (the Levant as opposed to the Hejaz and
               | Gulf), a different strategic value relating to long
               | distance travel (the Suez Canal as opposed to oil), and a
               | much older world of competing colonizers. And not to put
               | too fine a point on it, the Ottomans also had a padishah
               | emperor!
        
               | kragen wrote:
               | opec was formed in 01960; dune was published as a serial
               | in 01963 and as a book in 01965, in the usa, by an author
               | from the usa
               | 
               | https://www.eia.gov/energyexplained/oil-and-petroleum-
               | produc... says that in 01960 the usa produced 8.11
               | million barrels of oil per day and consumed 9.80, with
               | net imports of 1.61. (not sure what happened to the other
               | 0.08.) net imports had grown dramatically over the
               | previous decade, and oil was already a significant factor
               | in usa political involvement in the middle east, in
               | affairs such as the iranian coup. also, petroleum was a
               | major strategic resource in the second world war; the
               | usa's naval blockade against japanese oil imports is
               | commonly cited as a major factor in japan's decision to
               | attack the usa
               | 
               | by 01965 us net imports were up to 2.28 million barrels
               | per day, so it was an issue of growing geopolitical
               | importance, but still only a fraction of the importance
               | opec and oil imports would have in the 01970s
        
           | stvltvs wrote:
           | The Fremen follow the Zensunni religion (exactly what it
           | sounds like), so continuity with real world cultures is a big
           | part of the story. Another example, the Bene Gesserit are
           | called Reverend Mother.
        
             | kevvok wrote:
             | And presumably 'Gesserit' is meant to be a distortion of
             | 'Jesuit'
        
         | babyshake wrote:
         | The Russian element is interesting, as it stood out to be on my
         | last rewatch of the 2021 film that the main villain (Stellan
         | Skarsgard) is named "Vladimir Harkonnen".
        
           | SideburnsOfDoom wrote:
           | And the Padishah Emperor is called Shaddam IV.
           | 
           | Dune the novel, is where I learned the word "jihad" long
           | before it was commonly known. It wasn't used in the film
           | much, since as noted, the world has moved on.
        
             | realfeel78 wrote:
             | The world has moved on from Jihad? What world are you
             | living in?
        
               | SideburnsOfDoom wrote:
               | The _word_ can't be used casually like that any more. The
               | world has moved on from using the word casually as exotic
               | unfamiliar flavour, without inviting unwelcome ignorant
               | reflexive antagonism. For an example of that, I refer you
               | to your own comment.
        
               | samatman wrote:
               | The Fremen jihad isn't exotic unfamiliar flavor. It's
               | jihad.
        
               | SideburnsOfDoom wrote:
               | Whoosh https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Use%E2%80%93mention_
               | distinctio...
        
               | samatman wrote:
               | Are you a professional doofus, or is it more of a thing
               | you do online for fun.
        
               | kybernetikos wrote:
               | I assumed he was talking about the Butlerian Jihad, which
               | is an idea that feels particularly fresh and relevant
               | today. "Thou shalt not make a machine in the likeness of
               | a human mind"
        
               | omnibrain wrote:
               | I would not say that Jihad was used casually in Dune. But
               | when you read only the first part it looks like the hero
               | is promoting Jihad as something good. When the truth,
               | considering all parts of this sentence, is way more
               | complex if you read on and even reread it.
               | 
               | I think the studio (execs) just were afraid of having a
               | blockbuster with a hero that promotes Jihad.
        
               | SideburnsOfDoom wrote:
               | > I think the studio (execs) just were afraid of having a
               | blockbuster with a hero that promotes Jihad.
               | 
               | Agreed, they will use an different equivalent term such
               | as "holy war" for the reasons given above.
               | 
               | The meaning of that fictional cataclysm is not casual,
               | but the word choice in Dune the 1965 novel, using an
               | unfamiliar middle-eastern term for it, I think was. These
               | are separate things, and I refer you again to this: https
               | ://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Use%E2%80%93mention_distinctio..
               | .
        
             | bertil wrote:
             | The Emperor is very obviously coded as the Shah of Iran.
             | 
             | I'm not sure how much Herbert differentiated Persian from
             | Arabic culture --I don't think he would conflate the two--
             | but at the time of the Shah was seen as the most decadent
             | ruler, independently of religion: in 1971, six years after
             | the first book came out, he threw the biggest party ever
             | (literally). I don't know if Herbert approved of Salvator
             | Dali as the Emperor in Jodorowsky's version but that makes
             | more sense to code him as excessive and dangerous because
             | unpredictable (something Christopher Walken will do
             | amazingly well; Jeff Goldblum could have been great too)
             | than conflating him with Muslim references.
             | 
             | The references are beyond specific houses: Jihad is also
             | used for the "Butlerian Jihad" which is started by the
             | viceroy of the League of Noble, and a Harkonen ally, not
             | something coded with the Freemen, who seemingly don't know
             | about it, or the Emperor who only takes over much later and
             | at Harkonens' expenses.
        
             | EdwardDiego wrote:
             | I like that he's the Padishah, an Iranian word.
             | 
             | Fun fact - a rock band from NZ named themselves "Shihad"
             | after a member had read Dune and got the word jihad wrong.
             | When they tried to break into the US market, they renamed
             | themselves "Pacifier" because, well, you know, Shihad/jihad
             | wasn't a great connotation post 9/11. And the name was
             | appropriate because their music as Pacifier rather sucked.
        
           | Apocryphon wrote:
           | Harkonnen is actually a real-world Finnish surname.
        
         | huytersd wrote:
         | Completely agree. Seems like a lot of people are taking this
         | nonsensical complaint of "cultural appropriation" to basically
         | peer pressure people into self segregating. The negative
         | experiences of African Americans during slavery/post slavery
         | when it comes to the specific issue of cultural appropriation
         | really doesn't apply to most other ethnicities who view someone
         | else adopting their culture with genuine happiness.
        
         | jhbadger wrote:
         | Technically the Fremen aren't exactly Muslim (although they
         | seem to be Muslim-coded) -- they are members of a new religion
         | called Zen-Sunni, which was formed when Zen Buddhism and Sunni
         | Islam merged at some point in the future. And the other major
         | religion Orange Catholicism presumably likewise is a merge of
         | Protestantism ("Orange") back into Catholic Christianity.
        
           | FrustratedMonky wrote:
           | I wish there was more background on this. What was original
           | concept with putting Zen Buddhism and Islam together?
           | 
           | Did Herbert have a plan for this combo, or was he just making
           | up some future backstory? Like sometimes happens when authors
           | aren't really sure there will be a sequel at all, and just
           | scatter some future references around.
        
             | wirrbel wrote:
             | If i recall correctly zensunni in the book also used/read
             | the orange-catholic bible.
             | 
             | Overall I think the topic of religion stays vague apart
             | from Herbert making use of the trope of a Messiah and using
             | syncretism as a symbol that major shifts happened in the
             | human societies that brought opposing religions together.
        
               | simonh wrote:
               | In particular the OC Bible was compiled as a synthesis of
               | all the major existing religious traditions of the time
               | after the Butlerian Jihad, which united humanity in
               | revolt against the thinking machines. The resulting total
               | ban on computational devices as heresy lead to the rise
               | of the Spacing Guild's monopoly on interstellar
               | navigation.
        
             | Apocryphon wrote:
             | It was set dressing for a syncretic far future. All of this
             | stuff is in the appendix where it is not very much explored
             | because it's meant to be evocative more than illustrative.
        
             | empath-nirvana wrote:
             | I think he was just riffing on the general idea of
             | religious syncretism -- all religions are syncretic to an
             | extent, some more obviously than others.
        
             | bigger_cheese wrote:
             | >Did Herbert have a plan for this combo, or was he just
             | making up some future backstory?
             | 
             | It has been a very long time since I read all the novels so
             | I can't recall all the details. It is a major plot point in
             | book 5 "Heretics of Dune" zensunni leads to the alliance
             | between the Bene Gesserit and the Tleilaxian's. The
             | Tleilaxu follow a strict interpretation of the religion in
             | secret and during a meeting between the faction leaders one
             | of the reverend mothers is able to deduce this from their
             | speech patterns and manipulate them into an alliance which
             | has some ramifications.
             | 
             | Considering the Tleilaxu aren't introduced until book 2 (I
             | think) I assume it was planned out ahead of time by
             | Herbert.
        
         | rukuu001 wrote:
         | On the one hand I imagine that Russian and Arabic viewers would
         | find inclusions from their languages very distracting, but then
         | the story is so clearly about Americans and Russians squabbling
         | over colonized Arabic territory, and all of them getting
         | screwed over by 'larger forces', that I don't think changing
         | the language makes a real difference.
        
           | empath-nirvana wrote:
           | A lot of the story and setting is taken almost _word for
           | word_ from Sabres of Paradise, which takes place in the
           | Caucuses, before the soviet union existed and before America
           | got involved in the middle east.
           | 
           | https://arnoldkhan.medium.com/how-the-sabre-of-paradise-
           | insp...
        
           | mr_toad wrote:
           | The Harkonnen are stereotypical medieval despots, almost
           | cartoonishly so.
        
         | nverno wrote:
         | > It just seems kind of wrong to expend so much thought
         | inventing new languages for the movie when it had so much
         | context and culture already there to use.
         | 
         | It did all work great in the books, and would certainly have
         | worked in the movies as well. But, the effort and care they've
         | put into this additionally world-building seems totally in the
         | spirit of the original Dune to me. There were a number of
         | things that I had imagined differently when reading the books,
         | but this was a rare case where I think they've done an
         | excellent job bringing their version to the screen.
        
         | FrustratedMonky wrote:
         | "and the fact that Muslims still exist and are important in the
         | future isn't just like "flavor", it was an innovative idea at
         | the time in science fiction and still is."
         | 
         | But, think of the alternative.
         | 
         | The Fremen are an 'extremist' religious group, that easily kill
         | any foreigner, and are manipulated into a 'jihad'.
         | 
         | If the Movie doubled down to making them "Islamic Flavored".
         | Then the movie and director would get crucified for portraying
         | Muslims in an un-favorable light.
         | 
         | The book might have used Islamic Flavor, but it does not do it
         | to show Islam favorably. It shows them as radical brutal desert
         | dwellers.
        
           | Apocryphon wrote:
           | On the contrary, as the Fremen are shown to be the oppressed
           | indigenous, the movie would be stoned for casting jihad in
           | too positive a light, as an admirable ideal! The book hardly
           | shows the Great Houses nor the Imperium as any better than
           | the savage freedom fighters. If anything the series isn't
           | really sympathetic towards any particular subgroup of
           | humanity.
        
         | renewiltord wrote:
         | They were just trying to avoid jihad and all that because of
         | present geopolitical positioning. You can't have the hero be
         | threatening to go ISIS on the universe. You'll get canceled.
        
           | mr_toad wrote:
           | Paul was trying to avoid the Jihad too. It was a fairly major
           | plot point.
        
         | rstarast wrote:
         | I mean it's basically just Rambo 3 in space innit?
        
         | lukan wrote:
         | "The book is meant to be about _our future_ "
         | 
         | The book is meant to be about _one_ possible future. It is
         | explicitely not meant as a prediction how humanity will
         | develope.
        
           | 0xbadcafebee wrote:
           | Within the lifetime of the universe, all futures are
           | possible. I don't find it particularly interesting whether
           | that future is directly a result of us, or some completely
           | identical hominid that evolved the same way on the other side
           | of the galaxy.
        
         | wolverine876 wrote:
         | The OP covers that in some detail. Search for "Why did Herbert
         | Arabize the Fremen?"
        
         | VoodooJuJu wrote:
         | Even if it were just ornament, it still should have been
         | included. Ornament is aesthetics, it's beautiful. Their
         | reasoning is bullshit.
         | 
         | The director omitted those things not as an artistic decision,
         | but because of his and his group's modern political dogmas.
        
       | bryanrasmussen wrote:
       | Arabic just wouldn't survive all that time, but Atreides, Gurney
       | Halleck, Reverend Mother, and Duncan Idaho - that stuff's built
       | to last!
        
         | nwhnwh wrote:
         | Boring bait.
        
           | GeoAtreides wrote:
           | Is it? Atreides is not a made up word, it directly references
           | the descendants of Atreus from the greek myths -- Agamemnon
           | himself (well, his voice) makes an appearance! "Reverend
           | mother" is a (catholic) religious term. So these particular
           | terms survived, but jihad didn't? Arabic, like op said,
           | didn't? OP made a good point.
        
             | bryanrasmussen wrote:
             | I don't know that I made a good point,
             | 
             | I figured just sort of an obvious point that the Arabic
             | wouldn't have lasted but all these other things would have
             | explanation doesn't pass the smell test.
             | 
             | Arabic is problematic for various reasons so they cut it
             | and then figured they also needed to make up a bunch of
             | bull about cutting it, companies got to spin their
             | investment but it devalues the art of the whole to me.
             | 
             | If they had said hey it's problematic for lots of reasons
             | so we cut it, sorry. I'd be like yeah ok. But the
             | explanation is just not believable coming from a language
             | designer of some intelligence who would have had the same
             | thought I did only probably much stronger, quicker, and
             | deeper.
             | 
             | To paraphrase - it's difficult to get a man to make a
             | truthful argument when the big bucks depends on him lying -
             | but he still knows he's lying for pay.
        
       | fallingfrog wrote:
       | Science fiction is always really hard, because when you think
       | about it, many of the cultural references of today would be
       | baffling to people 200 years ago. But when we write a story that
       | takes place 200 years in the future, the references can't be
       | baffling to the reader, first because then the story wouldn't
       | make sense, but also because nobody is so creative that they can
       | invent 200 years of actual culture. So, they pretty much always
       | use events and themes from current and past events and then re-
       | interpret them in creative ways. Dune is no different- and I love
       | the book but is there another resource you can think of that is
       | found buried in the desert that is needed for transportation that
       | western powers fight wars over?
        
         | ddoolin wrote:
         | I was thinking about this recently while reading the fourth
         | book in the series and you put my thoughts into words tidily.
         | 
         | Tangentially, I also think the time gap between the third and
         | fourth books (some 3,500 years) necessitated some more
         | creativity with changes to the culture but I got the impression
         | that the author _still_ reused a lot of the same references
         | despite the gap which felt kind of lazy, like humanity was just
         | TOO stagnant for that long. That 's when I started thinking
         | that it must be a difficult endeavor to just invent a lot of
         | new culture, especially when you've got to do service to the
         | previous books in the series. The fifth book appears to follow
         | the same trend despite another 1,500 years of time.
        
         | ska wrote:
         | All fiction is anchored in "its" time to some significant
         | degree. SF & Fantasy give the author more freedom to place a
         | story, but as you note the author is incapable of entirely
         | divorcing themselves from their context. Intentionally or
         | otherwise, most fiction has allegorical elements reflecting
         | _current_ stories or ideas. Often this is intentional I think,
         | with (some) authors in these genres engaging in ongoing social
         | /political/whathaveyou issues in a way that sidesteps
         | constraints and perspectives you would have in a "present day"
         | setting.
        
       | languagehacker wrote:
       | Here's my take as a person with two linguistics degrees, one of
       | which had a big computational focus on historical change:
       | 
       | The person who constructed the languages eschewed using the
       | literary influences because he didn't believe that the phonemic
       | inventory would be consistent over tens of thousands of years due
       | to prior information that we have about diachronic change in
       | language families.
       | 
       | What he fails to take into account is the fact that the wide
       | availability of audiovisual distribution of language has a
       | conservational effect that we've not really seen before. So for
       | instance, while there is a large variety of English dialects in
       | the US, "Broadcast English" and "General American" are quite
       | stable and broadly available.
       | 
       | What they've done with the constructed languages of Dune would be
       | like if they made a new Clockwork Orange movie without any of the
       | Nadsat dialect. It robs something from the original text, all so
       | a hobbyist can make something internally consistent that he's
       | personally satisfied with and that may be marketed to future
       | consumers. That sucks.
        
         | euroderf wrote:
         | But then again there is the Mentat language that we hear Thufir
         | Hawat use in the Lynch version. Has anyone bothered to analyze
         | this and maybe expand upon it ?
        
         | granzymes wrote:
         | On the other hand, the characters in Dune have almost no
         | information about Earth. Over the mindbogglingly long time
         | scale between our present day and the events in the
         | books/films, it's not only possible but likely that almost all
         | of those audiovisual aids have been lost.
        
         | mr_toad wrote:
         | The Butlerian Jihad which destroyed all computers probably
         | wiped out most audio visual media.
        
       | jrks11o wrote:
       | Archive link anyone pls?
        
         | nobody9999 wrote:
         | https://archive.is
        
       | VyseofArcadia wrote:
       | I do object to calling them languages. They're real languages
       | that happen to have been created for a work of fiction.
       | 
       | If someone in a Dune created a new kind of cookie, and a real
       | baker had actually written a recipe for and baked said cookies,
       | you wouldn't write the article "'Dune' and the Delicate Art of
       | Making Fictional Cookies". You'd write the article "The
       | Controversial Cookie from 'Dune'".
        
         | VyseofArcadia wrote:
         | I accidentally a word.
         | 
         | > I do object to calling them _fictional_ languages.
        
           | samatman wrote:
           | Too bad, because that's what they're called, in conlang
           | circles and everywhere else:
           | https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fictional_language
        
         | brcmthrowaway wrote:
         | God I wish I had drink a Ratkajino
        
       | edaemon wrote:
       | This is only slightly related but I noticed in Dune (2021) that
       | the Sardaukar spoken language seems dubbed over the actor's
       | voice. I've wondered if it the language's inclusion was a late
       | production choice. It looks like they're saying the English
       | subtitles but we hear dubbed audio:
       | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qWK3nkJhneE.
        
       | photochemsyn wrote:
       | Rather shallowly researched article, doesn't even mention
       | 'Chakobsa':
       | 
       | https://dune.fandom.com/wiki/%22Neo-Chakobsa%22_(2020s_film_...
        
       | ametrau wrote:
       | Pushing that marketing campaign now with the new release.
        
         | brcmthrowaway wrote:
         | HailCorporate!
        
       | dhosek wrote:
       | Reminds me of a woman I dated in my twenties who had invented a
       | language while in college. She had written a few sentences on a
       | classroom blackboard to show it to a friend but didn't erase it.
       | A day or two later, she showed up at a linguistics class to hear
       | the professor and one of her classmates trying to grasp the
       | structure of this language they had never seen before.
        
       | lukan wrote:
       | "Of the Arabic excisions in the new "Dune" films, two in
       | particular stand out. One is of jihad, Herbert's term for the
       | fervent crusade led by Paul Atreides with the Fremen against the
       | oppressive interstellar regime. Herbert saw jihad as the
       | embodiment of messianic and religious passion--a force that is
       | socially transformative and potentially liberating, but also
       | dangerous and to be feared: "The ancient way, the tried and
       | certain way that rolled over everything in its path." Though now
       | the word is overwhelmingly associated with Islamic extremism and
       | terrorism, the original "Dune" offers a nuanced consideration of
       | the concept that goes beyond simplistic and negative portrayals."
       | 
       | I do not think the original Dune books did not portray the jihad
       | in a good way. It was the way that led Paul to triumph over the
       | Imperator, but it was also the path, that lead him to burn worlds
       | and establish a cruel theocracy. Which was only hinted at in the
       | first books, but showed completely in Dune Messiah. Which is why
       | many did not like it anymore as the glorious hero was dismantled.
        
         | legohead wrote:
         | I read all the books, and in one of the forwards by his son, he
         | mentioned that Frank wanted to make Paul an antihero. He knew
         | his audience wouldn't like it, but that's kind of the point of
         | his books in the first place. Basically, you can't have nice
         | things because that's what it means to be human.
        
           | lukan wrote:
           | That was the foreword to Dune Messiah.
           | 
           | "Basically, you can't have nice things because that's what it
           | means to be human."
           | 
           | But I would disagree to this conclusion. I rather think his
           | goal was (among many others) to show that you cannot have
           | nice things, when your "heros" of the culture stand for
           | glorious war. No matter if it was a "good war" at first.
        
       | gunnaraasen wrote:
       | I really enjoyed the first Dune movie by Villenueve and decided
       | to read Dune for the first time in anticipation the second movie.
       | 
       | Reading the book, I was surprised by the focus on mysticism and
       | Islamic references, which were only a minor background element in
       | the first movie. I do think the religious elements add depth to
       | the story beyond the typical SciFi space opera and is a likely a
       | strong contributing factor to Dune's enduring cultural impact.
       | It's unfortunate the movies shied away from those references
       | despite the potential consternation it may have stirred up.
       | 
       | For those that have recently read the book, this article by
       | Harris Durrani on the probable influence of muslim theological
       | development on Frank Herbert's Dune world is engrossing.
       | 
       | https://reactormag.com/the-muslimness-of-dune-a-close-readin...
        
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