[HN Gopher] How to Write a Logline Producers Won't Pass On
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       How to Write a Logline Producers Won't Pass On
        
       Author : lovestaco
       Score  : 21 points
       Date   : 2024-01-14 12:55 UTC (10 hours ago)
        
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       | tptacek wrote:
       | I like articles like this even though I'll never write a
       | screenplay because it's fun to think of ways to apply it to
       | ordinary persuasive writing. That said: if the craft of
       | screenplay writing interests you, and if you haven't already,
       | immediately subscribe to the Scriptnotes podcast, which is Craig
       | Mazin (Chernobyl, Last of Us) and John August (Go, Big Fish), for
       | like 600 episodes.
        
         | aidenn0 wrote:
         | Ah _Go_ is one of those movies that got lost in the field in
         | 1999; it would have been the top film of the spring in many
         | other years, but opening 1 week after _The Matrix_ leaves it
         | with few people my age (I was a senior in HS when it came out)
         | knowing about it.
        
         | FreakLegion wrote:
         | Emphatically seconded. They also have great guests, like Scott
         | Frank (recently discussed on HN from a New Yorker article:
         | https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=38812736). I started
         | listening in 2020 and between workouts and long drives have
         | made it through every single episode.
        
       | T3OU-736 wrote:
       | Hah. I read 'logline' in the context of logging information by a
       | running process, and thought the post was about log lines that a
       | logging infrastructure would not pass on for some reason.
       | 
       | Been computering too much :)
        
       | yowlingcat wrote:
       | Very cool. I wonder how much of this approach is reusable in
       | marketing.
        
       | yodon wrote:
       | OP's proposed logline for Star Wars would have been a total fail
       | in the era when the logline was needed, namely before the film
       | was made or known.
       | 
       | >Luke Skywalker, a spirited farm boy, joins rebel forces to save
       | Princess Leia from the evil Darth Vader, and the galaxy from the
       | Empire's Death Star.
       | 
       | This is probably not an article you want to learn logline writing
       | from.
        
         | erehweb wrote:
         | It seems that this is being used as an example of a lackluster
         | logline coming from a generator, though it's not completely
         | clear.
         | 
         | ----- TRY USING A LOGLINE GENERATOR Maybe you're stuck for
         | ideas, either way, a generator is a cool way to brainstorm, but
         | not end up with a final product. A logline generator can give
         | direction for a character you want to write about, but any
         | generator or formula will leave you with something lackluster.
         | 
         | Star Wars: A New Hope Luke Skywalker, a spirited farm boy,
         | joins rebel forces to save Princess Leia from the evil Darth
         | Vader, and the galaxy from the Empire's Death Star.
        
           | closed wrote:
           | Another hint that it's a deliberately lackluster example is
           | that it violates a rule given in the article: don't use
           | character names.
        
       | nvahalik wrote:
       | Is it just me or is there some application here to writing user
       | stories?
        
       | snowwrestler wrote:
       | Studio Binder is my go-to example when talking about well-run
       | inbound content marketing.
       | 
       | They produce long articles that rank well in search for a wide
       | variety of popular keywords related to movies and TV. But the
       | articles are actually helpful and informative--so much so that
       | they also drive organic social traffic (example: this post on
       | HN). And each article features a few conversion widgets, but not
       | so many where it's hard to read the content.
       | 
       | I know nothing about the ROI and other back-end data for this
       | program. It must be working for them, though, because it's been
       | going for a while.
        
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