[HN Gopher] Stories We've Seen Too Often
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       Stories We've Seen Too Often
        
       Author : ddougj
       Score  : 121 points
       Date   : 2023-05-15 14:15 UTC (8 hours ago)
        
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       | ivraatiems wrote:
       | If you're reading this and thinking "aw damn, my idea is cliche,
       | I'll never get something published!" or similar, don't worry too
       | much.
       | 
       | Once you subtract the ones that are either just straight-up wish
       | fulfillment, or otherwise reliant on racist/sexist/ageist
       | stereotypes, a lot of the ideas listed here are still perfectly
       | good ideas for a story. They'd be more than "original" enough to
       | drive an episode of _Black Mirror_ or the plot of a mainstream
       | blockbuster movie - areas where originality isn 't as important
       | as executing the concept in a way that has market appeal (and is
       | hopefully also high quality).
       | 
       | The issue is more just that the audience for these stories are
       | the editors of a speculative fiction magazine, and readers of
       | that same relatively niche speculative fiction magazine. That is,
       | people who spend a _lot of time_ reading fiction. They, in
       | particular, have seen all this stuff before. After a while, if
       | your _whole job_ is reading stories, of course you 're going to
       | get tired of even very good stories about things you've seen a
       | hundred times before.
       | 
       | There's plenty of other places to submit to. If you have
       | confidence in your work and you think your story is worth people
       | reading, but this list suggests these particular editors won't
       | like it... just send it somewhere else.
        
         | bombcar wrote:
         | Hasn't it been said there's only 7 basic stories in the world?
         | https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Seven_Basic_Plots or
         | something.
         | 
         | But who _cares_ that The Lion King and Hamlet may be the same
         | story at the base, they 're certainly different enough to be
         | enjoyable each in their own right, and I wouldn't substitute
         | one for the other in some strange form of economization.
        
           | readthenotes1 wrote:
           | The wiki article left off Vonnegut's take on this
           | 
           | https://bigthink.com/high-culture/vonnegut-shapes/
        
           | marttt wrote:
           | See also: Soviet folklorist Vladimr Propp identified 7
           | typical characters and 31 basic structural elements in fairy
           | tales: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vladimir_Propp#Narrative
           | _struc...
           | 
           | Another interesting classification discovered from Propp's
           | Wikipedia entry: Aarne-Thompson-Uther Index of folktale
           | types: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aarne%E2%80%93Thompson%E
           | 2%80%9...
        
             | NeoTar wrote:
             | I have thought that Sci-Fi / speculative fiction stories
             | are in a really good position to be categorised by
             | something similar to Aarne-Thompson-Uther index.
             | 
             | Consider some basic stories like:
             | 
             | * a person travels backwards through time to prevent a
             | tragedy.                 - By doing so they cause the
             | tragedy to occur.            - On returning to their own
             | time they discover the tragedy was necessary for their
             | society.
             | 
             | * a person travels backwards in time to meet their hero.
             | - they discover the person didn't exist and become them.
             | - they discover the person isn't as heroic as they hoped
             | and coach them.
             | 
             | Just four examples, but I'm sure you can see how many
             | stories fit into each.
        
         | lloeki wrote:
         | I seem to have understood that this list is about things that
         | would get rejected when they're the sole point of the story,
         | but they'd be fine as plot devices within a more fleshed out
         | narrative structure.
         | 
         | Even then, I can recall very good reads (or watches) that could
         | readily fit squarely in one of those boxes but are either very
         | well executed that you either don't see it coming, or even if
         | you do you continue nonetheless, or that have specific context
         | or otherwise build up that makes it very good even if it can be
         | narratively distilled down to a simple this or that.
         | 
         | Also also, this list seems extremely small when compared to
         | tvtropes.org with which, when I catch myself running down that
         | time sink again, I always end up thinking that every single
         | plot has already been written though sheer bruteforce.
         | 
         | IOW _execution_ also matters.
        
         | sdwr wrote:
         | The list seems to cover 90% of all sci-fi, and, if you squint a
         | little, 80% of all stories ever written.
        
           | TheFreim wrote:
           | Pure originality is exceptionally rare, but that's not really
           | a bad thing. More and more I believe that the human
           | experience is primarily defined by rhymes and analogy, trying
           | to avoid reusing prior work is futile.
           | 
           | "What has been is what will be, and what has been done is
           | what will be done; and there is nothing new under the sun"
           | (Ecclesiastes 1:9, RSV2CE).
        
             | ivraatiems wrote:
             | I think you are right, but also, that it is totally
             | legitimate for Strange Horizons to say "we really really
             | want only original work." So long as they don't also say
             | "only original work is valid to create", which is where I
             | (and maybe they, given the disclaimers) take issue with
             | this list.
        
           | morelisp wrote:
           | Since Strange Horizons publishes far less than 10% of all
           | science fiction, that seems fine.
        
           | m463 wrote:
           | I wonder if some stories work well with the peer group of
           | authors/editors, but not so much with audeiences.
           | 
           | For example, it's annoying to me as a reader when stories are
           | straight-up rewrites of say the odyssey or hakespeare, or put
           | greek/roman gods in our universe. (same with computer games
           | that are hex based and show the hexes, or card-based games
           | that show the cards)
        
       | thriftwy wrote:
       | My least favourite story is "A lot of things happened to the
       | protagonist and the world around him, but in the end everything
       | is exactly like it was before all that".
       | 
       | Homer is dead, we live in linear time, can we please _please_
       | have some progress for a change?
       | 
       | A notorious offender is Terry Pratchett's Discworld. When the
       | world needs to change, it happens between the books. In any book,
       | you know you will end up with the same status quo as when you
       | started reading.
       | 
       | Even if we are talking about something happening off-world, the
       | experience would completely change the character. They can't just
       | resume being young, shy and ignorant. Even some PTSD would be
       | better than nothing.
        
         | hammock wrote:
         | What stories are you thinking of. There are a lot of stories
         | that fit your description except that the protagonist is
         | usually (implicitly, often) changed in some way, they learned a
         | lesson, they have a new perspective, etc
        
         | the_af wrote:
         | > _A notorious offender is Terry Pratchett 's Discworld_
         | 
         | The wording implies an _offense_ has been committed, but this
         | is not the case.
         | 
         | For one, because it's false: progress happens _in book_ in
         | Discworld. There 's a series of "industry/progress" novels that
         | illustrate change in the Discworld.
         | 
         | But also, because the timelessness of Discworld is what makes
         | it appealing. With some exceptions, you can read a lot of the
         | novels in any order. This makes them _good_ , not bad.
        
         | robotresearcher wrote:
         | You're forgetting the books specifically about the development
         | of the post office and the railways at least.
         | 
         | Edit: and the police, and the telegraph
        
         | cableshaft wrote:
         | Sounds like pretty much every Coen Brothers movie to me, at
         | least so far as the world not changing at the end.
         | 
         | Isn't that the case for most people, that they don't end up
         | changing the world or society around them? At best maybe they
         | helped open a hole in the dike for water to seep through for
         | future generations.
         | 
         | Obviously that's not the case for superhero or chosen one
         | stories, but true for most people in life.
        
           | thriftwy wrote:
           | Then go with a simple plot, with no bombast and no world in
           | danger.
        
         | NeoTar wrote:
         | Are there any specific discworld books you'd like to highlight?
         | 
         | Some certainly fit into that pattern (I'm thinking specifically
         | Soul Music and Moving Pictures) but things do evolve in the
         | interconnected series.
         | 
         | Especially considering the later 'Industrial Revolution'
         | stories - the Truth, Going Postal, Making Money all made some
         | incremental changes to Ankh Morpork. The last (and sadly one of
         | the worst) books Raising Steam had the biggest potential to
         | change the fantasy world with the introduction of railway
         | travel.
        
           | thriftwy wrote:
           | Equal Rites, these Rock and Opera books, one with the dragon,
           | etc...
        
       | kej wrote:
       | As an aside, I really like the disclaimer's approach, kind of
       | like the Disney+ messages on certain movies, where they say they
       | don't necessarily agree with something but still present it in
       | the original form.
        
         | derbOac wrote:
         | To me, it was a little disconcerting, like "we've stopped
         | receiving _these_ things too much, people got the message, and
         | now we 're receiving _other_ things too much, but aren 't going
         | to update this to tell you what they are, and are leaving it
         | for posterity."
         | 
         | Maybe there aren't new overdone stories, people see the list
         | and stop. But that seems unlikely to me. In either case, it
         | would be nice if there was a list that was updated, or some
         | statement about things being better.
        
           | rdlw wrote:
           | It's just an old list some editors put together for fun,
           | there's no requirement to regularly update something you made
           | a decade ago. If anything, I'd say there's an obligation to
           | keep the original text available as long as you're
           | maintaining the website. I don't find any of this
           | disconcerting.
        
           | kayodelycaon wrote:
           | I'm a fiction writer and I don't have such expectations of
           | this list.
           | 
           | Some publishers have a short list of things they don't take
           | due to having too many submitted. I don't think that's what
           | this list it. For one it is far too detailed to keep updated.
           | 
           | I see this list as a subset of bad storytelling they were
           | seeing often. It's not a subset of things they didn't accept.
           | (There is significant overlap.) It's an important
           | distinction.
           | 
           | Lists like these get published occasionally and they become
           | part of the history of the internet. They truly are a
           | snapshot in time.
        
       | gregmac wrote:
       | Something that stuck out to me was a side-note:
       | 
       | > Note that we do like endings that we didn't expect, as long as
       | they derive naturally from character action.
       | 
       | This, to me, is probably the biggest thing that makes me hate a
       | story:
       | 
       | The character is faced with a situation and reacts in a way
       | contrary to the way we'd expect them to act based on what we've
       | seen so far. It soon becomes obvious they made that decision only
       | to move the plot to a specific ending or scene.
        
         | slg wrote:
         | This is a big problem for serialized stories now that fan
         | theorizing on the internet is so common. A good plot shouldn't
         | be completely predictable to your audience, but events need to
         | flow from one to the other because characters and their worlds
         | should have consistency. This creates predictability and means
         | some small percentage of your audience can now guess what is
         | going to happen.
         | 
         | That was fine a decade or two ago when a person might guess the
         | ending to a TV show and blurt it out to their partner on the
         | couch. However, now that small group that guesses the plot
         | correctly will share their predictions on the relevant
         | subreddit which will be picked up by blogs and suddenly
         | everyone knows where you were going.
         | 
         | When that happens, the creatives are faced with the choice to
         | change that ending or just deal with the twists and turns
         | getting spoiled. Westworld is a memorable example of the
         | creators changing the show because fans guessed what was
         | happening next. The end result was that the show didn't make
         | any sense because it prioritized unpredictability over all else
         | and eventually the world and characters didn't make any sense
         | anymore.
        
           | bsder wrote:
           | > When that happens, the creatives are faced with the choice
           | to change that ending or just deal with the twists and turns
           | getting spoiled.
           | 
           | I disagree wholeheartedly.
           | 
           | The big problem with every single writer nowadays is a
           | complete and total inability to _stick the ending_.
           | 
           | I'm really trying _very_ hard to come up with a TV show, book
           | or movie that I thought really stuck the ending in the last
           | 10 years (I 'm being generous--in reality I'd even say 30
           | years). A whole host of the fan theories are _WAY_ better
           | than what practically all current writers crap out.
           | 
           | If I'm being charitable, I'll describe the problem as writers
           | lack varied life experience. If I'm being uncharitable, it's
           | that most writers are just not very intelligent.
        
             | erehweb wrote:
             | I recommend The Good Place throughout, particularly the
             | ending.
        
             | ManuelKiessling wrote:
             | ,,Bodyguard", the BBC miniseries, and ,,My Name" from South
             | Korea, both on Netflix, as well as ,,Your Name", from 2016
             | (now THAT was one final act and ending!).
        
             | SantalBlush wrote:
             | Breaking Bad had a very decent ending. It wasn't overblown,
             | it didn't have contrived plot twists, and it was consistent
             | with the the way the characters behaved in previous arcs.
        
             | slg wrote:
             | I could give you a list of endings that I thought were
             | great, but if you can't think of a single ending that you
             | found satisfying, that sounds more like a you problem than
             | all of humanity simply stopped writing good endings.
        
               | yamtaddle wrote:
               | Seems akin to complaints that there aren't enough good
               | movies or TV shows these days.
               | 
               | That's so _very_ not the case that the person complaining
               | either isn 't looking very hard, or else have such narrow
               | taste that they're excluding most works without even
               | considering them.
        
           | yamtaddle wrote:
           | Show runners and writers giving a shit that someone on Reddit
           | guessed their clever twist is the entire problem here. If
           | zero people out of _thousands or more_ actively speculating
           | online thought of the thing you did, that 's probably because
           | _it doesn 't make sense_. Adjusting to avoid anything that's
           | been guessed almost necessarily means veering into bad
           | writing.
        
             | bobsmooth wrote:
             | >Show runners and writers giving a shit that someone on
             | Reddit guessed their clever twist
             | 
             | This is what ruined Westworld.
        
       | Animats wrote:
       | Of course, all this is because everything has been done. Read
       | Chaucer's "The Canterbury Tales". Read one story half way, and
       | ask yourself how it will end. You'll be right.
       | 
       | In 1483, there was so little published entertainment that plot
       | twists were unnecessary.
        
       | ilyt wrote:
       | To be entirely fair
       | 
       | > Scientist uses himself or herself as test subject.
       | 
       | This is very real plot that even got some people Nobel prize
       | 
       | https://www.nobelprize.org/prizes/medicine/2005/press-releas...
       | 
       | Interview with some details
       | 
       | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yPLA69a5OOU
        
         | permo-w wrote:
         | also surely "scientist experiments on themselves" is far too
         | broad to dismiss out of hand
        
           | the_af wrote:
           | I don't think any in the list are dismissals. If you remove
           | every item, you're left with nothing that can be said about
           | anything in scifi. The items also include plots used by
           | acknowledged authors in celebrated stories.
           | 
           | This is like TV Tropes: a trope is neither good nor bad, it
           | just is. It can be overused, it can be subverted, it can be
           | played straight or played with, but the one thing you cannot
           | do: avoid tropes entirely.
        
       | blueflow wrote:
       | These are called tropes, and there is a wiki about them:
       | https://tvtropes.org/
        
       | readthenotes1 wrote:
       | There has to be some irony that this list of plot points has been
       | done so many times, from Campbell's hero's journey, Vonnegut's
       | shapes, TV tropes, etc.
       | 
       | And still we enjoyed it.
       | 
       | I am sure some English professor somewhere is gnashing his teeth
       | saying something about here's another analysis he doesn't need to
       | see...
        
       | mcv wrote:
       | I've got to admit, there's a lot of inspiration in that list.
       | Though maybe use a couple and not make one of these the sole
       | interesting thing about the story. Also, execution always
       | matters.
       | 
       | And some of these should definitely be avoided at all costs.
        
       | dsr_ wrote:
       | What Strange Horizons really wants is a high-quality SF/F/Horror
       | story.
       | 
       | They see hundreds or thousands of low-quality stories for every
       | high-quality story. And nobody wants to be told that the reason
       | that they aren't being published is that their story sucks.
       | 
       | But everyone sane can see that their story might have been done
       | before, perhaps too often -- so it doesn't hurt as much to be
       | told that your story is being rejected because it's on this list.
        
       | malfist wrote:
       | A crazy number of these items seem like incel fan fics. I wonder
       | how many crazy people send in stories about their fantasies?
        
       | pwdisswordfishc wrote:
       | > The author is apparently unaware of the American constitutional
       | amendment prohibiting cruel and unusual punishment, and so
       | postulates that in the future, American punishment will be extra-
       | cruel in some unusual way.
       | 
       | I am also tired of following American news
        
       | aidenn0 wrote:
       | Pretty much all of my favorite pulp sci-fi stories use at least
       | two of the items on the list. Of course, that's reasonably
       | forgivable because:
       | 
       | 1. They used more than one
       | 
       | 2. They were published long before this list was made.
       | 
       | 3. Pulp
       | 
       | [edit]
       | 
       | e.g. 5,271,009 by Alfred Bester hits at least 4 of these while
       | also poking fun at various wish-fulfillment stories
        
         | jandrese wrote:
         | Also, several of them are ridiculously broad.
        
       | rcme wrote:
       | > Fatness is used as a signal of evil, dissolution, and/or moral
       | decay, usually with the unspoken assumption that it's completely
       | obvious that fat people are immoral and disgusting.
       | 
       | My favorite novel that uses this trope has to be A Confederacy of
       | Dunces.
        
         | bsder wrote:
         | "A Confederacy of Dunces" struck me much more as a chronicle of
         | weird people and their foibles with a large dose of regional
         | flavoring--sort of like Napoleon Dynamite but focused on a city
         | underbelly.
         | 
         | I don't remember "fatness" being a signal of evil, and I don't
         | remember any of the non-fat people being any better than the
         | fat ones.
         | 
         | However, it has been quite a while since I read the novel, and
         | I really didn't like it very much. So, my memory may be faulty,
         | and your mileage may vary.
        
           | rcme wrote:
           | The main character, Ignatius J. Reilly, was extremely fat,
           | which was part of his ignoble caricature.
        
         | [deleted]
        
       | gadders wrote:
       | >> White protagonist is given wise and mystical advice by Holy
       | Simple Native Folk.
       | 
       | That's Avatar ruined.
        
         | elil17 wrote:
         | I feel like Avatar is more "White protagonist genuinely
         | switches sides."
        
           | chasd00 wrote:
           | i thought it was more "check out this new plugin package I
           | got for my CGI rig" heh.
        
       | smnrchrds wrote:
       | > _10. Someone calls technical support; wacky hijinx ensue._
       | 
       | > _a. Someone calls technical support for a magical item._
       | 
       | > _b. Someone calls technical support for a piece of advanced
       | technology._
       | 
       | This one seems appealing. Are there any good books with this
       | theme?
        
         | WorldMaker wrote:
         | It's a running theme in some of John Scalzi's short fiction. I
         | believe several can be found searching his blog, but the
         | easiest place to find them are probably his collections. A
         | couple were adapted as shorts in the anthology animated series
         | "Love, Death, and Robots" (Netflix Original) most notably the
         | Emmy-winning short "Automated Customer Service".
        
         | robocat wrote:
         | Similar theme: Service Call by Philip K Dick - in the fourth
         | volume of short stories called "Minority Report".
         | Sir, I'm the repairman you asked for; I'm here to fix your
         | swibble.
         | 
         | Yes, contains tropes, but still brilliantly written. Easier to
         | be novel in 1955!?
         | 
         | The book has a bunch more great short stories - old school but
         | good school.
        
         | sdenton4 wrote:
         | Magical Help Desk was a COVID-era LARP where you could call in
         | and get tech support for your magic items.
         | 
         | https://www.intramersive.com/magical-help-desk
        
       | lifefeed wrote:
       | My old least-favorite-trope isn't on here, maybe writers have
       | finally stopped writing it.
       | 
       | > (Somehow, a man and a women end up alone on a planet. This is
       | the last dialog.)
       | 
       | > Man: I never caught your name.
       | 
       | > Women: I'm Eve.
       | 
       | > Man: Hi Eve, I'm Adam.
        
         | [deleted]
        
         | iainmerrick wrote:
         | My first encounter with this one was Alan Moore poking fun at
         | it in _2000AD_ :
         | https://64.media.tumblr.com/27760dbb610ca38e29db4551f3991cbb...
         | (I guess it was a hoary old chestnut even back then)
        
         | JJMcJ wrote:
         | > Madam, I'm Adam
         | 
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         | number6 wrote:
         | Wow. Mind blown! /s
        
       | Animats wrote:
       | Most of these are all plots of successful movies or TV shows.
       | 
       | * Creative person is having trouble creating. Creative person
       | meets a muse...
       | 
       | Xanadu, the movie.
       | 
       | * Weird things happen, but it turns out they're not real.
       | 
       | About half of Twilight Zone episodes.
       | 
       | * An AI gets loose on the Net, but the author doesn't have a
       | clear concept of what it means for software to be "loose on the
       | Net."
       | 
       | Terminator
       | 
       | * Technology and/or modern life turn out to be soulless.
       | 
       | "The Office"
       | 
       | "The Lorax"
       | 
       | This one goes all the way back to "The Machine Stops".
       | 
       | * Bad person is told they'll get the reward that they "deserve,"
       | which ends up being something bad.
       | 
       | Several Twilight Zone episodes.
       | 
       | * Person is floating in a formless void; in the end, they're
       | born.
       | 
       | "2001"
       | 
       | * Person uses time travel to achieve some particular result, but
       | in the end something unexpected happens that thwarts their plan.
       | 
       | That one really has been done to death in SF.
       | 
       | * A mysteriously-named Event is about to happen ("Today was the
       | day Jimmy would have to report for The Procedure"), but the
       | nature of the Event isn't revealed until the end of the story,
       | when it turns out to involve death or other unpleasantness.
       | [Several classic sf stories use this approach, which is one
       | reason we're tired of seeing it. Another reason is that we can
       | usually guess the twist well ahead of time, which makes the
       | mysteriousness annoying.]
       | 
       | This is the plot of the New Testament.
       | 
       | * In the future, an official government permit is required in
       | order to do some particular ordinary thing, but the specific
       | thing a permit is required for isn't (usually) revealed until the
       | end of the story.
       | 
       | That was a 1950s thing, and seems to have died out.
       | 
       | * Someone calls technical support; wacky hijinx ensue. Someone
       | calls technical support for a magical item.
       | 
       | "Oh My Goddess" anime
        
         | rcme wrote:
         | > * A mysteriously-named Event is about to happen ("Today was
         | the day Jimmy would have to report for The Procedure"), but the
         | nature of the Event isn't revealed until the end of the story,
         | when it turns out to involve death or other unpleasantness.
         | [Several classic sf stories use this approach, which is one
         | reason we're tired of seeing it. Another reason is that we can
         | usually guess the twist well ahead of time, which makes the
         | mysteriousness annoying.]
         | 
         | This is also the plot of an amazing short story called The
         | Icarus Gland. It's written by a Russian author, and all of the
         | translations are terrible. But, even with the terrible
         | translation, it still captivates and keeps you on the edge of
         | your seat.
        
       | billjohnston wrote:
       | Reminds me of Vonnegut on the "shapes" of stories:
       | 
       | https://bigthink.com/high-culture/vonnegut-shapes/
        
       | liotier wrote:
       | Might as well go to the authority for recycled story bits:
       | https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Tropes There is more
       | to storytelling than just originality.
        
         | yamtaddle wrote:
         | > This is not a canonical list of bad stories or story cliches.
         | This is a list of types of stories that we at SH have seen too
         | often; it's not intended to be a complete list of all types of
         | bad stories, nor are all the items on the list necessarily bad.
        
         | kayodelycaon wrote:
         | For those who haven't been to TV Tropes, be warned, you will be
         | there for a long time. It's a wiki-walk of nearly infinite
         | depth.
         | 
         | Now, if anyone needs me for the next 3 weeks, you'll know where
         | to find me. :)
        
         | the_af wrote:
         | Exactly. Originality is overrated.
         | 
         | Tropes exist. What matters is what you build with them.
        
         | st_goliath wrote:
         | Besides TV tropes, the page made me think of the quite
         | entertaining "How Not to Write a Novel"[1][2], which not only
         | details tropes to avoid, but also quite humorously illustrates
         | them with short stories.
         | 
         | If you're already a TV Tropes addict, I can strongly recommend
         | the book.
         | 
         | [1]
         | https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/HowNotToWr...
         | 
         | [2] https://www.amazon.com/Write-Novel-Them-Misstep-
         | Misstep/dp/0...
        
       | philipkglass wrote:
       | If you liked this list, you may also find the Turkey City Lexicon
       | interesting:
       | 
       | https://www.sfwa.org/2009/06/18/turkey-city-lexicon-a-primer...
       | 
       | It's also aimed directly at aspiring science fiction writers, but
       | it's been referenced enough times on Charles Stross's blog (and
       | other SF venues) that some of its terms have entered my
       | vocabulary and that of other SF readers I know.
       | 
       | EDIT: this list _does_ contain the story type lifefeed mentions
       | in a sibling content.
       | 
       |  _- Adam and Eve Story
       | 
       | Nauseatingly common subset of the "Shaggy God Story" in which a
       | terrible apocalypse, spaceship crash, etc., leaves two survivors,
       | man and woman, who turn out to be Adam and Eve, parents of the
       | human race!!_
        
         | rikroots wrote:
         | That second introduction to the TC Lexicon describes - exactly!
         | - the process used in a poetry workshop I attended back in the
         | late 80s[1]. The outcome of each session was also the same,
         | drowning our sorrows in a nearby pub after the meeting, but
         | also forming some strong and long-lasting bonds with our fellow
         | masochists. I'd say I learned 80% of what I know about writing
         | poetry from that workshop, and un-learned 100% of what I
         | thought I knew before I started.
         | 
         | [1] Poetry in the Making, led by Laurie Smith at the City Lit -
         | the critique was brutal, but worth it in the end!
         | https://www.citylit.ac.uk/
        
         | sdenton4 wrote:
         | Neal Stevenson got away with this by getting rid of Adam and
         | adding six additional Eve's.
        
           | fknorangesite wrote:
           | He also got away with it by not making it a sudden twist at
           | the end; it was never a surprise - it's the title of the
           | book.
        
             | readthenotes1 wrote:
             | I was left in suspense how seven eyes fit in until I reread
             | the title after reading the book...
        
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       | bgirard wrote:
       | I wish I could ask Netfix/recommendation engines to strike
       | stories matching a certain story profile. In particular I rarely
       | enjoy a story about point 4. I like watching something without
       | spoilers so avoiding 'Weird things happen, but it turns out
       | they're not real' is really difficult.
        
         | foobarian wrote:
         | I wish that recommendation engines had a "rational fiction
         | score" for their content. Things like Expanse, Sanderson's
         | Mistborn series (were it to be filmed as a show, ah, one can
         | dream) or 2001 Odyssey would rate highly, things like "From..."
         | not so much.
        
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       | AlbertCory wrote:
       | If you remember the original premise of _Seinfeld_ it was:
       | 
       | No hugging, no changing.
       | 
       | So he was reversing the standard (by then) TV trope of
       | "characters learn from their mistakes, hug each other, the end."
       | 
       | Of course, "no hugging, no changing" _itself_ is a trope.
        
       | hn8305823 wrote:
       | > Evil people hook the protagonist on an addictive substance and
       | then start raising the price, ruining the protagonist's life.
       | Addictive substance = debt       Evil people = Federal Reserve
        
       | koboll wrote:
       | >30. Brutal violence against women is depicted in loving detail,
       | often in a story that's ostensibly about violence against women
       | being bad.
       | 
       | Finally, a perfectly succinct explanation for why I can't stand
       | watching The Handmaid's Tale.
        
         | jandrese wrote:
         | I still say there is very little daylight between The
         | Handmaid's Tale and any random Gor novel. The only difference
         | is in the Gor universe the guys are actually enjoying it.
        
       | Animats wrote:
       | The classic essay on this subject is "From Elfland to
       | Poughkeepsie" in "The Language of the Night", by Ursula LeGuin.
        
       | abruzzi wrote:
       | The amusing thing is how many of the items on their list bring to
       | mind a great short story, or a great novel, or movie. Point being
       | that many of them CAN be good, but usually aren't.
        
         | the_af wrote:
         | Almost all in the list can be used in good stories. And have
         | been used, in fact.
         | 
         | This is a list of tropes. Tropes are neither good or bad, they
         | just are (well, _some_ tropes are obviously bad or outdated,
         | but you get my meaning).
         | 
         | Might as well claim that using words in text is bad.
        
         | mcphage wrote:
         | > is how many of the items on their list bring to mind a great
         | short story
         | 
         | That may be how so many of these ended up on this list: someone
         | wrote a great story with an original premise, and lots of other
         | people are like "Oh, I like that idea, I'll write my own story
         | using a similar idea", and then editors get sick of receiving
         | them.
        
       | Gordonjcp wrote:
       | "As you know, Bob..." crops up in just about everything Neal
       | Stephenson does, although I've always thought it's better framed
       | as "Right, I had to learn a *lot* about 17th Century French Naval
       | vessels / encryption / diving equipment / evolutionary biology /
       | the semiotics of theology / whatever else, so now *you* get to
       | learn it too!"
       | 
       | I actually quite like those bits.
        
         | robotresearcher wrote:
         | '1984' and 'The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy' get around
         | this by just having longish excerpts from a book that's
         | important to the plot. And these bits are really good.
        
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