[HN Gopher] Ask HN: How to get better at writing?
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       Ask HN: How to get better at writing?
        
       I've been writing for a while but I feel like I've stagnated for a
       while. What have other people done?
        
       Author : matthewfcarlson
       Score  : 130 points
       Date   : 2022-12-25 14:57 UTC (8 hours ago)
        
       | pier25 wrote:
       | Writing is really mostly editing and polishing.
       | 
       | Try to read something out loud and you'll immediately hear if it
       | works in terms of punctuation.
       | 
       | Don't try to be smart and writerly. Find your natural voice. The
       | point is to communicate something, not impressing with your
       | skills.
       | 
       | Listen to the music of your prose. Don't repeat the same length
       | of sentences over and over again.
        
       | eptcyka wrote:
       | By writing more.
        
       | BurningFrog wrote:
       | What has really helped me is two things.
       | 
       | 1. Condense. Much of good writing is simply signal/noise ratio!
       | 
       | First write a draft that says all you want to say. Then go over
       | it again and again, removing/rephrasing un-needed words and
       | syllables. 20% compression is a decent result.
       | 
       | 2. "Rubber ducking". Imagine showing the text to someone likely
       | to read it. I've developed an "inner stranger" I show text or
       | code to. He doesn't have my specialized knowledge, but is
       | reasonably smart.
       | 
       | Implied above is to always write a draft that you edit. Do NOT
       | try to form a perfect text in your mind before writing!
        
       | selfhifive wrote:
       | Read books by Gary Provost on writing. Writing Tools by Roy Peter
       | Clark. Draft number 4 by McPhee. They contain a variety of ideas.
       | Writing Tools is great if you want to identify and drill
       | techniques. Provost's books cover everything and are written
       | well.
        
       | lallysingh wrote:
       | Two things:
       | 
       | 1. Read about writing. The very tactical stuff like "On Writing
       | Well" and "Writing Tools" and "The Craft of Scientific Writing"
       | 
       | 2. Imitate writers you like. Try reading someone else's work,
       | then reproducing it in their style.
        
       | balderdash wrote:
       | The Mountain Man's Field Guide to Grammar: A Fearless Adventure
       | in Grammar, Style, and Usage
       | 
       | https://a.co/d/40wyBTq
        
       | gre wrote:
       | Write 2x and cut 1/2
        
       | yef wrote:
       | Read more in order to identify the types of writing you admire,
       | enjoy and perhaps wish to emulate on some level. I like William
       | Zinsser's books, On Writing Well is the "flagship" I guess.
       | 
       | If you're writing in public, like a blog, try giving yourself a
       | deadline and permission for the post not to be perfect.
        
         | tanticen wrote:
         | Zinsser's On Writing Well was my game changer, can't recommend
         | highly enough. And it's a fun read too.
         | 
         | The main takeaway is to simplify text as much as possible. That
         | doesn't mean dumbing it down, and it doesn't mean abandoning
         | creativity. It's just the opposite: Once you get rid of all the
         | excess junk, the reader will hear your genuine voice.
        
       | denton-scratch wrote:
       | I'd say that if you want to write well, read good writers.
       | 
       | There's different styles of writing, for different purposes.
       | Entertainment, intellectual debate, instruction etc. You didn't
       | say what you wanted to write about.
       | 
       | What's a good writer? Well, someone who writes well, to your
       | taste, and in your domain. Or if you want to write commercially,
       | someone who is commercially successful; whether or not they write
       | well, I suppose.
       | 
       | For many purposes, a knowledge of logic and rhetoric is probably
       | going to help.
       | 
       | It's hard to say - you haven't given much away.
        
       | DantesKite wrote:
       | Rewriting (by hand) the works of authors you admire is a great
       | way to boost your writing skills.
       | 
       | It'll give you an intuition and "taste" for the texture of
       | writing; why you find it so compelling, even if you don't
       | consciously know the rules they're applying.
       | 
       | Highly recommend.
        
       | suwicked1 wrote:
       | [dead]
        
       | glitchc wrote:
       | Reading good writing is the first step towards improving your
       | written output. Observe the techniques that resonate with you and
       | incorporate them into your style. It will feel clunky at first,
       | like any new exercise, but over time will become more fluid and
       | seamless. Reading also builds a large vocabulary, which is
       | essential to achieve fluid prose.
       | 
       | Read the best authors for the intended style, be it story-
       | writing, critical analysis or business communication. It all
       | depends on the style of writing you would like to master. It's
       | theor techniques that you want to emulate and make your own.
       | 
       | Write to evoke an emotion. There must be a purpose to your
       | writing. If to inform, guide the reader to an ah-ha moment. Your
       | writing will be memorable if the reader feels something.
       | 
       | Cut fluff. Every word must have a purpose. Less is more.
       | 
       | Good writing is about refining your own voice. Write as you
       | speak, speak as you write, and both will improve.
       | 
       | Ultimately, have fun with it. Experiment with different styles.
       | Writing is an art, it requires creativity. This must be
       | cultivated and grown. In time, over many poorly crafted drafts, a
       | unique voice, all your own, will emerge.
       | 
       | Best of luck!
        
         | tdhz77 wrote:
         | A professor at Harvards entire course is dedicated to the
         | refinement process. You start with what they call "write your
         | best story". Every assignment afterward is the removal of
         | something unnecessary from the original story. Each assignment
         | is not adding to, but subtracting. Each word and sentence must
         | matter. Painful but rewarding.
        
         | nequo wrote:
         | > Reading good writing is the first step towards improving your
         | written output. Observe the techniques that resonate with you
         | and incorporate them into your style.
         | 
         | Do you have specific authors whose writing really resonated
         | with you? How have they changed your writing?
        
           | glitchc wrote:
           | I would say Judt and Hemingway were strong influences: Judt
           | for his clarity of thought, Hemingway for his emotional
           | brevity.
        
         | hamburglar wrote:
         | Another important skill is being able to read your own writing
         | as if you are different readers. Think about how much someone
         | knows and how something will sound to someone who doesn't know
         | as much. What's their mental picture as they start reading,
         | what is it after they are one paragraph in, etc. Make sure you
         | aren't making leaps they can't follow. Try this out while
         | modeling people of various levels of familiarity with the
         | subject so your writing isn't tedious to someone who already
         | knows a bit. Make sure you aren't wasting their time. Make sure
         | you've defined your terms before using them. Read it over and
         | over trying to get yourself into other people's shoes every
         | time. Have empathy for every reader you're writing for.
        
       | mancerayder wrote:
       | Read some fiction you might not normally read, sometimes you'll
       | find phrases or sentences so interesting in the way they're
       | constructed it's a learning experience. One example for me was
       | reading Charles Dickens. Reading some of his stuff as a child in
       | school was an inferior experience to reading it as an adult.
       | 
       | Write a lot, and repeatedly re-read what you wrote (when it's
       | done in its entirety). You'll naturally correct yourself or tune
       | it.
        
       | alexpetralia wrote:
       | Despite what you may think of Jordan Peterson, he has a very
       | useful guide for how to write better:
       | https://jordanbpeterson.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/02/Essay...
        
       | farleykr wrote:
       | My personal experience has led me to believe that there's truly
       | no substitute for reading a lot and writing a lot. But the funny
       | thing is that you may not realize how true that is until you've
       | gotten sick and tired of trying to find shortcuts and hacks. You
       | can get burnt out on reading and watching material about _how_ to
       | write well but it can be helpful in moderation. The best resource
       | I've found is the Belief Agency YouTube channel. They have a lot
       | of great interviews /shows about how command of the concept of
       | storytelling can improve your communication, written or
       | otherwise. Brian McDonald's books are great too---especially
       | Invisible Ink. One more thing I've found helpful is to take up a
       | practice that has nothing to do with writing---gardening in my
       | case---and see if you can learn some things that shape the way
       | you think about the writing process. All of these things should
       | lead you back to a regular practice of reading and writing
       | though. It's like an archaeological dig. Most of the time you're
       | just throwing dirt over your shoulder but once in a while you
       | find treasure.
        
       | wpietri wrote:
       | Lots of good advice here, but one thing I haven't seen mentioned
       | is this:
       | 
       | https://hemingwayapp.com/
       | 
       | It can be fun to paste in some writing and see where you agree
       | and disagree with it.
        
       | invalidname wrote:
       | I blogged every day for a while. That helped but it was grueling.
       | With everything, practice makes perfect.
       | 
       | Working with an editor is huge. I worked with several editors and
       | reviewers both when submitting to other blogs and when writing my
       | books. I learned a lot.
       | 
       | There are great writer assistance tools such as Write Good, etc.
       | They helped with avoiding weasel phrasing, etc.
        
       | dr-neptune wrote:
       | Some things that have helped me:
       | 
       | - grammarly (mostly excellent, I ignore some suggestions)
       | 
       | - reading books more with stylistic elements that push the
       | boundaries of what you're used to. I write technical blogs, but
       | I've found some inspiration reading very different writing. Some
       | examples are Thomas Pynchon, James Joyce, Greg Egan
       | 
       | - setting up constraints. Can you explain this in less sentences
       | without making a long run-on sentence? How concise can you make
       | this whole post? On the flipside, can you avoid all the most
       | common adjectives when describing something? If you take a
       | tokenized word count on your work, what words do you rely on? Can
       | you delete them?
        
       | rognjen wrote:
       | One piece of advice I keep coming across over and over is to
       | publicize it and get feedback as much as possible.
        
       | rmk wrote:
       | > I've been writing for a while but I feel like I've stagnated
       | for a while.
       | 
       | You could rewrite this to say "I have been writing for a while,
       | but feel like I have stagnated for some time now."
       | 
       | Be a ruthless editor of your own writing, to begin with. Read
       | actual printed words that have been through rigorous editing.
       | Examples include print magazines and newspapers.
       | 
       | Read Strunk and White's Elements of Style and try to put it into
       | practice in your writing. Read a variety of works, both fiction
       | and nonfiction. Read classic writers such as Melville, Trollope,
       | or Hemingway and pay attention to the plot devices and writing
       | style (you will have to re-read individual pieces in isolation,
       | again and again).
       | 
       | Take every opportunity to write, including in this forum or other
       | places where you can write and have an actual conversation with
       | like-minded, intelligent people. I'm sure there are internet
       | forums and subreddits for aspiring writers where you will find
       | opportunities aplenty to write, critique and hone your craft.
        
       | blockwriter wrote:
       | Keeping a daily diary by hand is a good first step. When you're
       | reading, look for sentences whose construction surprises you or
       | is otherwise novel. If you can, try to pay attention to how the
       | parts of speech are being used to form the sentence's structure.
       | Rereading the diary once a month and making line edits will put
       | into mind your own bad habits. In time, an intuitive set of
       | reasoning about how to marry the idea to the structure of the
       | sentence will develop. Continuing to express, articulate, and
       | expand on that reasoning will make the act of writing more
       | enjoyable and the writing itself better.
       | 
       | Sentences should have a quality that makes them individually
       | memorable.
        
       | pricees wrote:
       | Write often, about anything.
       | 
       | Perhaps try nicheless.blog, I write there regularly. Given a 300
       | word limit, I can write one or two thoughts. The word limit
       | necessitates merciless editing, if i care to have a coherent
       | message to say to the reader.
       | 
       | I write about, literally, anything, at first. Writing is a muscle
       | rarely used by anyone. It is a superpower that could be mastered,
       | or at least harnessed, by everyone.
       | 
       | Currently I write about boring ole everyday subjects. Putting in
       | the work. However, I am getting ready to try flash fiction, then
       | perhaps a short story.
       | 
       | Good luck.
        
         | buzzkill90 wrote:
         | Yes, what was that Steven King advice; "...two shitty pages in
         | a day"
        
       | azhenley wrote:
       | What I did: (1) start a blog, (2) force yourself to write at a
       | specific frequency at all costs, like once a month, (3) plan and
       | schedule future writing topics and times, (4) be very intentional
       | with each sentence and paragraph, and (5) start with an outline
       | for each post and iterate on it before filling in with details.
       | 
       | #5 feels like a superpower to me. It has made writing so much
       | easier. It forces me to really understand (and to realize what I
       | don't understand) about the topic.
        
       | hit8run wrote:
       | Use chatgpt :)
        
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       | pryelluw wrote:
       | - Write more. Meaning output not length.
       | 
       | - Rewrite more. Same as above.
       | 
       | - Seek feedback from qualified sources.
       | 
       | There really isn't that much more. If you want to write more yet
       | you fail to write more, then maybe you should schedule periods of
       | time for just writing. I do it and can't recommend it enough. 15
       | minutes a day of pure writing time is better than an hour every
       | other day.
        
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       | WhitneyLand wrote:
       | Having people read your writing who can give constructive
       | criticism can be a huge help.
       | 
       | It can be people you know, but there are also online writing
       | communities that will give candid feedback in a safe environment.
       | Usually the catch is you'll have to return the favor for someone
       | else in the community, but that's not a bad thing.
        
       | tacosbane wrote:
       | Rewrite, rewrite, rewrite.
        
       | mbigras wrote:
       | Do the Technical Writing One course [1] and consider Google
       | developer technical documentation style guide highlights [2].
       | Both those links are about technical writing which is primarily
       | about clarity. Since I started focusing on clarity when writing,
       | I find any writing fun and engaging.
       | 
       | -[1] https://developers.google.com/tech-writing/one
       | 
       | -[2] https://developers.google.com/style/highlights
        
       | blondin wrote:
       | many have already advised to read a lot, write a lot. allow me to
       | add a 2022 piece of advice: ask ChatGPT to review what you write.
       | or rewrite in the style you are trying to achieve.
       | 
       | let us know how it goes :)
        
       | jason-phillips wrote:
       | 1. Read the Elements of Style by E.B. White. It describes how to
       | write in active voice for positive effect.
       | 
       | 2. Practice converting your thoughts to the written word so that
       | they're clearly understood by anyone. That is the exercise at
       | hand and it takes practice.
       | 
       | 3. Once you've mastered clearly communicating your ideas, add
       | some cleverness to your writing. Use double-entendre and practice
       | economy of words. Leave something for the reader to guess,
       | allowing one's imagination to fill the gaps with what you didn't
       | say.
       | 
       | 4. Finally, practice the art of showing versus telling, i.e., the
       | art of story-telling versus an analytical accounting of facts.
        
       | pjmorris wrote:
       | Find people to read and critique your work. The time I spent in
       | 'reading group' in grad school helped me curb some bad writing
       | habits and develop other good ones. My mom used to participate in
       | 'writers groups', in-person and online to get feedback on her
       | poetry and prose.
        
       | chiefalchemist wrote:
       | Creative writing? Or improving the quality of your personal /
       | professional comms?
        
       | stared wrote:
       | Write -> give other people for proofreading -> rewrite -> publish
       | -> gather feedback.
       | 
       | There is no other way than practice. Feedback speeds up this
       | learning process a lot and improves the result significantly.
       | 
       | Everything else varies from person to person. Some write daily;
       | some don't for months - then dive into their writing modes. Some
       | start with an outline, and some - pour a stream of thoughts into
       | the computer.
       | 
       | Nevertheless - what is your goal, and what blocks you in the
       | process?
        
         | ghaff wrote:
         | I'd probably substitute editing for proofreading (which for me
         | implies copyediting). Particularly starting out you may be
         | looking for more structural feedback than a copyeditor will
         | often provide.
         | 
         | But other than that I agree. There are probably a few books
         | worth reading but it's more about writing and getting good
         | feedback. Past a certain point, you can probably dispense with
         | some of that feedback depending on the nature of what you're
         | writing. But it's essential to get started.
        
       | jameshush wrote:
       | I signed up for classes. A speech writing one, and even a joke
       | writing one. I'm in a writing group too for comedy, but it's made
       | my work writings excellent too. I'm an average-ish comedian but
       | my work presentations are off the chart now.
        
       | KerryJones wrote:
       | 1. Write a lot
       | 
       | I think much of the other advice on this page is very valid (and
       | I'll repeat some below), but what I often find missing from
       | advice like this is simply do the thing a lot with some sort of
       | feedback/iteration loop. While this is true for most professions,
       | it is specially true for writing: write a lot.
       | 
       | Other useful things to help: 2. Define the purpose of your
       | writing 3. Define who your target audience is (is this a novel,
       | article writing, marketing, etc) 4. Define who you are as the
       | author (are you a subject matter expert, the narrator of a story,
       | a friend)
       | 
       | Learn some of the basics: - Elements of Style is a good place to
       | start - Use Grammarly - Read, a lot
        
       | willhinsa wrote:
       | By reading and writing
       | 
       | Read "bad quality" works too. And know that you're going to write
       | a lot of "bad quality" works too, before people to start to get
       | what you're trying to say.
        
       | s-xyz wrote:
       | I am not an expert on this matter, but what works for me is to
       | practice and write for a specific use case. In addition, reading
       | helps.
        
       | cbracketdash wrote:
       | Jordan Peterson has written a great PDF on writing:
       | https://archive.org/details/essay-writing-guide-jordan-peter...
        
       | tmoertel wrote:
       | If you want to get better at writing, _be deliberate_ : practice
       | with the goal of learning and becoming better. (1) read good
       | works and study their authors' choices and techniques, (2) write
       | often to strengthen your writing muscles and develop your style,
       | (3) practice rewriting and editing (your writing and others), and
       | (4) get feedback on your writing.
       | 
       | Books on writing can help, but there is no subsitute for doing
       | the work. Being deliberate about learning from the work, however,
       | will speed your improvement.
       | 
       | With regular work, you'll be noticably better after a month or
       | two, especially if you're getting feedback. After a year, you'll
       | be a different person. Your writing will be faster, easier, and
       | better.
       | 
       | But don't stop then. You're just getting started :-)
        
       | googletron wrote:
       | By writing and editing.
        
       | greggarious wrote:
       | Shitty first drafts
       | 
       | https://wrd.as.uky.edu/sites/default/files/1-Shitty%20First%...
        
       | grepLeigh wrote:
       | What kind of writing do you enjoy most? What kind of writing are
       | you trying to improve?
        
       | signaru wrote:
       | There's a video where Alan Moore recommends reading terrible
       | books. Knowing what frustrates me in years of poorly presented
       | university textbooks helps me in a way.
        
         | brezelgoring wrote:
         | A buddhist monk recommends reading D-tier detective books to
         | drill patience and contemplation for others.
         | 
         | Quite the exercise it is.
        
       | WastingMyTime89 wrote:
       | Writing is both an art and a craft but like every skill it
       | improves with deliberate practice. It means having an idea of
       | what good writing is - so most likely taking a course or being
       | trained - actually writing a lot and having someone skilled
       | criticise and correct.
        
       | MrLeap wrote:
       | If you have time and a gaming machine, maybe I can help? If
       | nothing else, maybe you can help me help you ;)
       | 
       | I'm making a game/text editor I'm hoping to help people write
       | more prolifically / creatively. There's a free demo on steam. If
       | anyone gives it a try please let me know what you think.
       | 
       | https://store.steampowered.com/app/1537490/Tentacle_Typer/
        
       | soferio wrote:
       | Steven Pinker, "The Sense of Style", is a book about the science
       | of how to write well. YouTube talk here:
       | https://youtu.be/3ZKTmsgqi0U
        
       | andsoitis wrote:
       | Get people to critique your writing. Ultimately, writing is
       | communication and recipients can give you a lot of actionable
       | feedback. Without such a feedback loop it will be very hard to
       | become meaningfully better at writing. Often the feedback will be
       | relevant to a particular piece, though sometimes to writing in
       | general.
        
         | tkgally wrote:
         | You can also find someone else who wants to become a better
         | writer and offer advice to each other. Reading another person's
         | writing while thinking about how it might be improved, and
         | discussing your suggestions with the author, might benefit you
         | as much as the advice you receive about your own writing.
        
       | rpastuszak wrote:
       | Check out The Fieldstone Method by G. M. Weinberg.
       | 
       | I also made a web app to help develop my writing habit and
       | improve fluency: https://enso.sonnet.io
       | 
       | I've enjoyed it so far and have been writing consistently for
       | almost 3 years so far (ca 800 words per day).
        
       | tptacek wrote:
       | I've read drafts from people who truly write well and have come
       | to the conclusion that the biggest thing they're doing that I'm
       | not is revising. I write straight through and maybe do a single
       | pass after to punch things up and get rid of passive voice, and
       | so everything I write reads like an HN comment (which, don't get
       | me wrong, is a useful local optimum for me). The good writing
       | I've watched happen was revised _a lot_. Besides not having the
       | talent, I lack the patience, which is liberating.
       | 
       | Also: this book is great: https://www.amazon.com/Style-Clarity-
       | Chicago-Writing-Publish...
        
         | kasey_junk wrote:
         | The other thing the very good writers I know do that I don't is
         | practice. That is they will write explicitly for no audience
         | but in a form they'd want to present to a hypothetical audience
         | for a hypothetical reason.
         | 
         | This allows them all the benefits of practice in other
         | endeavors. They can experiment, get faster, build "muscle
         | memory" etc.
         | 
         | I don't know why I keep being surprised that the answer to
         | being good at things is working at it.
        
       | 99failures wrote:
       | Reading makes you a better writer.
       | 
       | Writing makes you a better thinker.
       | 
       | Better thinking leads to better everything.
       | 
       | David Mamet's writings on writing are the best.
        
         | wellthisisgreat wrote:
         | Hey, which Mamet's books on writing would you recommend? Thanks
        
       | stets wrote:
       | write more, read good writing. emulate good writing. read books
       | on writing? Stephen King's "on writing" is recommended all the
       | time
        
         | drakonka wrote:
         | To add to all of this, reading books in the same genre that you
         | want to write in (whether fiction or nonfiction) helps a lot.
         | 
         | For the longest time with my fiction I was just focusing on
         | writing writing writing and reading about writing. I'd always
         | loved to read, but surprisingly never really read that much in
         | my target genre. When I started, it's like another gate of
         | improvement was opened up: analyzing the beats and conflict
         | points of successful books in my genre immediately helped me
         | see what I was lacking in mine. And being exposed to the
         | wording preferences and writing styles of other authors gave me
         | so many "Aha!" moments when it comes to formulating enticing
         | prose.
         | 
         | I'm still not a good fiction writer by any stretch of the
         | imagination, but the improvement has been steady when coupling
         | reading in my genre with more writing.
        
       | ducharmdev wrote:
       | Writing a lot is important, but being able to get feedback on
       | your writing can prevent you from developing bad habits you may
       | not be aware of.
       | 
       | When I was in college for English, getting regular feedback from
       | professors and the writing center helped me learn things I
       | wouldn't have figured out on my own.
       | 
       | But of course, context matters: that was great for improving my
       | general writing skills and my academic writing, but if you're
       | doing creative writing, technical writing, etc., ideally you want
       | feedback from people that are experts in the kind you're
       | interested in.
        
       | ianai wrote:
       | Set aside what you wrote for about two weeks and read it. Reading
       | aloud what you wrote, too. Emphasis on smaller sentences-less
       | than 10 words on average. Never more than 20 words.
        
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       | karaterobot wrote:
       | Gene Wolfe, my favorite writer, said that the advice he gave
       | people was to pick a short story they thought was perfect, and
       | try to rewrite it word for word from memory.
       | 
       | Presumably the idea is that you run into the same challenges the
       | original author did -- how to get from one scene to the next, how
       | to direct or misdirect the reader, etc. -- and by solving those
       | challenges you understand the mechanics of storytelling at a
       | deeper level. Since you've got the "perfect" version of the story
       | as a key, you aren't just guessing, and there is a right and
       | wrong answer.
       | 
       | He also said that, to his knowledge, nobody had ever taken him up
       | on this advice.
       | 
       | But, Wolfe was a fantastic writer, and an engineer, so I assume
       | his approach would be a practical and useful one for anyone
       | willing to put in the work.
       | 
       | I just spent about 30 minutes trying to find the source of the
       | quote, but failed. /shrug
        
         | clucas wrote:
         | Stephen Fry has talked about trying to rewrite scenes from The
         | Great Gatsby from memory, and the renewed appreciation he got
         | for Fitzgerald's prose after that attempt.
         | 
         | https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=oSdLfPas8dw around around 10
         | minutes. Good stuff!
        
         | RBerenguel wrote:
         | It's in _The Best of Gene Wolfe_, and is copied verbatim here
         | in case anyone is curious:
         | https://raymondwriteswrongs.wordpress.com/2015/04/22/writing...
         | 
         | PS: I'm more of a fan of Zelazny, but I enjoyed quite a lot The
         | Book of the New Sun
        
           | karaterobot wrote:
           | Wow, thanks. I never would have thought to look there.
           | 
           | Zelazny was my first love. :)
        
       | tdekken wrote:
       | I truly struggled with writing for the longest time, but three
       | practices helped tremendously. The practices are 1) writing with
       | a piecemeal approach, 2) accumulating notes as fuel for
       | tomorrow's writing, and 3) rewriting with keyword outlines.
       | 
       | My most important shift was to start writing nonlinearly. Instead
       | of writing a beginning, middle, and end, I instead gather
       | together all the claims, facts, etc. and develop them
       | individually without concern for the overall logical structure.
       | Eventually, the pieces start fitting together and the linear
       | structure emerges. It is so much easier to start with too much
       | and whittle it down.
       | 
       | Where do these claims, facts, etc. come from? This is what your
       | note taking system should create. As I read a text, I highlight
       | relevant sections and then go back through to paraphrase them.
       | These notes are organized around topics and solve the daunting
       | blank page problem.
       | 
       | How should you paraphrase? Keyword outlining is the practice of
       | picking a handful of _keywords_ from a source text, setting aside
       | the original text, and then paraphrasing using the keyword
       | outline and your recollection of the original text. This is a
       | subtle shift from the typical approach of changing a few words of
       | the source text to paraphrase it. This is also great practice for
       | honing your sentence and paragraph writing skills.
        
       | lowken wrote:
       | This technique helped me become a better writer.
       | 
       | Get a cheep spiral notebook and a nice pen.
       | 
       | Then collect some example writings that represent the best
       | writing style you aspire to. I prefer short stories and essays,
       | but for larger examples (novels) you can focus on single
       | chapters.
       | 
       | Every day spend about 1/2 hour copying the example writing by
       | hand into the spiral notebook. When you are done copying about
       | two pages into your spiral notebook review the pages and identify
       | different writing techniques. I used this technique to learn
       | copywriting so I identified different persuasion techniques
       | including what's the catch addresses or Promise.
       | 
       | However, you could also use this same technique to become a
       | better novelist. So maybe you identify alliteration, irony,
       | foreshadowing, etc.
       | 
       | Why does this work? This have been studies on the powerful
       | learning effect of writing notes by hand. The technique I
       | described follows the same principals. By copying great writing
       | by hand you are engaging multiple senses at one time. You are
       | feeding your conscious and subconscious mind rich example writing
       | that will help you improve your own writing.
       | 
       | Anyway, this worked for me. Good luck.
        
         | thorncorona wrote:
         | I am happy you found success copying others' writing but highly
         | doubt that rote copying is what made the difference. It's more
         | likely that you learned through analysis.
         | 
         | Learning works through synthesis of material, which is the main
         | takeaway from the writing studies you mentioned, however when
         | copying writing no synthesis occurs. Also these studies were
         | recently duplicated and results did not match the original
         | conclusion.
        
       | fedeb95 wrote:
       | Read a lot. Write a lot. Repeat
        
       | sandworm101 wrote:
       | You can only ever be as good as that which you read. Read only
       | blog post and you will sound like a blogger. Read only classics
       | and you will sound like a scholar. If you read enough you will
       | become your own best critic. Stop trying to write better and
       | spend that time reading the best material you can find.
       | 
       | The same is true for all aspects of language. If you want to
       | speak better, don't watch TV news or LA sitcoms. Watch classic
       | British comedy (Blackadder) or BBC science docs (Brian Cox) that
       | will expand your practical vocabulary and sense of proper
       | diction.
        
         | 1retep wrote:
         | This is such a good point. After 3 years of writing and reading
         | (mostly) math proofs, I wrote everything in proof-like fashion.
        
         | SapporoChris wrote:
         | "You can only ever be as good as that which you read." I
         | disagree. If your statement was true, progress would never
         | occur. Obviously writers can learn by reading the writing of
         | other good writers, but the are not bound by what they have
         | read. The ability to exceed is always present.
        
       | selykg wrote:
       | A prior discussion that was helpful for me:
       | 
       | https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=31060362
        
       | sherilm wrote:
       | "Have something to say". Everything else is secondary.
        
       | tazoptica wrote:
       | Read a lot and write a lot but also edit your own work a lot,
       | putting intervals between editing passes. There is no shortcut. A
       | million words and you'll be publishable. Three or for million and
       | you might start to approach good. A third party editor might help
       | but could also hurt and isn't worth it unless the project
       | requires it. Beyond what grammarly can do, labelled data is going
       | to be in short supply-- it's mostly an unsupervised problem. Your
       | most important editor will be you.
        
       | electrondood wrote:
       | Read a ton. Write constantly. Write for the trash can. Writer's
       | block is caused by the pressure of obligation. Write like you're
       | speaking plainly to a friend. If you can remove words without
       | losing meaning, do it.
        
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