[HN Gopher] The impotence of being clever
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       The impotence of being clever
        
       Author : vitabenes
       Score  : 180 points
       Date   : 2022-12-03 11:21 UTC (11 hours ago)
        
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       | eternalban wrote:
       | I am watching Rossellini's _Cartesius_ -- the intellectual
       | biography of Rene Descartes -- and was thinking of submitting a
       | link to it; it is held to be a very accurate if not an exciting
       | film. Watching this film I think I may have a clue as to when
       | cleverness became a  "public nuisance".
       | 
       | One of the TIL moments for me in the film is learning _why_ the
       | conservative intellectuals of the day were dead against  "new
       | planets" discovered by telescopes. It turns out, since _all_
       | their natural sciences were governed by Zodiac hand-me-downs from
       | Babylon via Aristotle and Avicenna -- ~ "all natural phenomena
       | are caused by the movements of heavenly bodies" -- having their
       | magic number Seven (7) be supplanted was a complete intellectual
       | crisis.
       | 
       | It was "cleverness", being "aloof" and "an outsider" that marks
       | the man, Descartes (at least as depicted here). He repeatedly
       | makes the point in the film as to why he chose to live among
       | Dutch merchants and sailors instead of fellow geeks in Paris! ("I
       | want to be left alone to think and reflect").
       | 
       | I think pre-Enlightenment the conservative ethos was held to be
       | 'godly' and 'true'. Then a sequence of brilliant clever men such
       | as Descartes heedlessly began to question practically every
       | received wisdom. And then by the time our witty man of letters
       | comes around, it had become _fashionable_ and no longer the
       | unique instrument of true wits and true minds.
       | 
       | -
       | 
       | A reviewer: _" At first glance this is the most tedious of
       | Rossellini's portraits, double the length, with even more
       | repetitive talk about a more abstract subject: the correct use of
       | mind."_
       | 
       | https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0161382
       | 
       | magnet:?xt=urn:btih:26FF01235DA0205BFA466939EED0EA5100CBB3BE
        
       | whoami_nr wrote:
        
       | photochemsyn wrote:
       | Language expressing value judgements on the quality of
       | intelligence:
       | 
       | genius -> brilliance -> intelligence -> cleverness -> cunning
       | 
       | I think Dungeons & Dragons character sheets were insightful in
       | prodiving separate values for 'intelligence' vs. 'wisdom' (with
       | the former being more valuable for wizards, and the latter for
       | clerics).
       | 
       | What exactly differentiates these categories is a matter of
       | dispute, although many examples come to mind - such as, building
       | FTX/Alameda took a lot of cleverness, though not much wisdom.
       | Generally, wisdom implies the possession of an internal moral
       | compass or at least incorporation of risk assessment into one's
       | decision-making process.
       | 
       | Coming up with well-regarded tests for both intelligence and
       | wisdom in individual people, however, seems to be an unsolved
       | problem. One issue in assigning such quantitative values to
       | people is that, as with strength and dexterity, human beings can
       | improve these characteristics to some extent. Some will claim
       | that the _limits_ of character value development are genetically
       | determined, but the reality is that most people don 't spend the
       | time and energy training themselves up to any such limit.
        
       | toolslive wrote:
       | Sometimes I feel like a cyclops: being able to see the future of
       | things, without being able to change the outcome, doesn't make
       | you very happy.
        
         | bazoom42 wrote:
         | You are thinking of Kassandra of Troy.
        
           | toolslive wrote:
           | """ According to legend, the Cyclopes had only one eye after
           | making a deal with Hades, god of the underworld, in which
           | they traded one eye for the ability to see the future and
           | predict the day they would die. """
           | 
           | https://www.greek-gods.info/monsters/cyclopes/
        
             | toolslive wrote:
             | iirc it's also mentioned in "the never ending story"
        
           | tunap wrote:
           | I thought of Leto Atreides II in the 4th Dune book.
           | 
           | edit: not the op.
        
       | thenerdhead wrote:
       | > Very often, this kind of cleverness comes in the form of seeing
       | through illusions.
       | 
       | I've been thinking about this a lot recently, especially seeing
       | the same individuals bring an insane amount of attention to
       | whatever they want. Most of it looks controversial to the general
       | public, but is not so much based in their realities.
       | 
       | I think most clever people are simply beyond the good and evil we
       | define as a society and make up their own values & ethics (A very
       | Nietzsche way to look at it). The Seinfeld example is great in
       | this article because that's exactly what I think about when I
       | think of Larry David. He's a very clever person given the best
       | comedy is relatable, even if it is morally wrong as defined by
       | society.
        
       | pkoird wrote:
       | Arthur Conan Doyle 's Sherlock Holmes is also guilty of an
       | unusual kind of cleverness. I remember reading this one story
       | (whose name I forgot) where Sherlock essentially concludes that a
       | person he's looking for is pretty intelligent just because the
       | hat of the person is big and deep (after all, if the head is big,
       | there's got to be more brains).
        
         | politelemon wrote:
         | That would be the Blue Diamond.
         | https://targmne.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/thebluediamond_b...
         | 
         | Page 4
        
         | carl_dr wrote:
         | > "It is a question of cubic capacity," said he; "a man with so
         | large a brain must have something in it."
         | 
         | That's from The Adventure of the Blue Carbuncle.
         | 
         | There are at least a couple of other examples of this line of
         | thought in the books :
         | https://www.ihearofsherlock.com/2011/03/skull-was-of-enormou...
        
       | trabant00 wrote:
       | This strikes home for me. The witty jokes I make to isolate
       | myself from a world I often can make no sense of. The isolation
       | that hides insecurities and the lack of courage to take leaps of
       | faith and participate in an imperfect society rather than hang at
       | the periphery and judge it.
       | 
       | Whatever the reasons/excuses - genetics, upbringing, current
       | social trends towards individualism, whatever - I can find no
       | solution though. Whenever I force myself to get involved I end up
       | disilusioned and eventually angry. Impotence describes it
       | perfectly.
       | 
       | So in the end one must asume that whatever is lacking, be it
       | wisdom or faith, or humblesness, it really is lacking and
       | preventing me from making any significant impact. And being only
       | clever is similar to being a clown.
        
       | yamrzou wrote:
       | > Very often, this kind of cleverness comes in the form of seeing
       | through illusions [...] But this kind of cleverness that cuts
       | through illusions can become its own kind of illusion.
       | 
       | Sometimes being clever is about the ability of self-delusion as
       | long as it serves one's goal, as described in _On Self-Delusion
       | and Bounded Rationality_ --
       | https://www.scottaaronson.com/writings/selfdelusion.html
        
       | yason wrote:
       | Cleverness, like fire, is a good servant but a bad master.
        
       | TheOtherHobbes wrote:
       | The lack of self awareness in this piece was entertaining.
       | 
       | Writing about impotent pretensions to cleverness on on the
       | Internet on a site on the Internet hardly anyone will read,
       | quoting Seinfeld, Raymond Chandler, a vintage movie script, and
       | Kierkegaard, and name-checking Oscar Wilde and Einstein, all
       | under the modest tag "Critical Reflections on Contemporary
       | Culture" is... quite a look.
        
         | sdwr wrote:
         | Lack of self! The author is a ghost. I read it as a cry for
         | help. "I am lonely", he says. But it's worse than that, because
         | there is no him to be lonely. His cognition is bound up in
         | fragments of other people's fictional lives.
        
         | bryanrasmussen wrote:
         | >on a site on the Internet hardly anyone will read
         | 
         | what does that have to do with the lack of self-awareness?
        
         | drooby wrote:
         | But your comment is the quintessential HN comment.
         | 
         | And my comment is the quintessential backlash to the snarky
         | quintessential comment.
         | 
         | Oh god. Are we becoming too self-aware. Someone shut us off.
        
           | tonnydourado wrote:
           | Where's the big eraser from looney tunes when we need it
        
         | exo-pla-net wrote:
         | Somebody here lacks self-awareness, but I'm not sure it's the
         | author. To quote the article:
         | 
         | > Another way to redeem passive lurking is by making a clever
         | joke that shows that you are above the whole thing. Twitter's
         | quote tweet function, especially, enables users literally as
         | well as metaphorically to appear above the conversation and to
         | cleverly one-up their opponents from this privileged position.
         | The game, in effect, is this: Who can appear the most above it
         | all? But the circumstances of posting--alone at the controls
         | with no one around but everyone watching--all but guarantee
         | that posts are alloyed with insecurity, however clever they
         | might be. Like the too-clever detective whose need to exhibit
         | command tends to result in more chaos, the clever poster's
         | attempt to stand above the medium's stupidity merely reveals
         | dependence on its meager pleasures. Cleverness devolves from
         | the output of analytical acuity into a transparent show put on
         | to allay the anxieties of passive consumption.
        
         | karaterobot wrote:
         | I don't think this is correct. You're conflating
         | pretentiousness with cleverness, and also making the claim that
         | quoting or name-checking a few pillars of western culture is
         | pretentious. It's not: if you're writing a piece about culture,
         | it's sort of par for the course. Whether it's being written on
         | a "site on the Internet hardly anyone will read" is irrelevant
         | to whether it's being clever or not, but it's certainly ironic,
         | because you read it, and I read it, and it's on the front page
         | of HN.
         | 
         | And, if you still think that it's trying to be clever, and you
         | think that invalidates its point, doesn't that argue for its
         | thesis?
        
           | randcraw wrote:
           | If a thing is clever, doesn't that define it as essentially
           | superficial and insubstantial? And isn't cleverness that
           | serves only to elevate the author, pretentious? Given the
           | meandering focus of the piece and the author's penchant for
           | dropping names rather than making clear points and
           | reinforcing them via reason or contrast, 'pretentious' seems
           | apropos.
           | 
           | IHMO, cleverness always lacks substance; it's superficial,
           | droll, better-than-banal -- but never synonymous with
           | brilliant or everlasting. Pretension is cleverness that
           | serves only the author. Both apply here, I fear.
        
         | overbytecode wrote:
         | There is nothing in it to indicate a lack of self awareness.
         | Even if it is "clever", in the detached, above-it-all sense, it
         | doesn't make the premise any less valid. Sometimes a piece can
         | not escape being _hypocritical_ if the object it is
         | scrutinizing is so ever-present that includes the article
         | itself.
         | 
         | It's like if you wrote an essay on the limitations of language,
         | and then someone went "But you're using language to write it".
         | Well that part is inescapable, isn't it? Just like you can't
         | really scrutinize _cleverness_ (in the sense the author
         | intended), without being clever, without being _above it all_ ,
         | at least for the duration of the article. You need that vantage
         | point for any sweeping reflections on current culture.
         | 
         | Funny enough, I didn't consider quoting Seinfeld or Oscar Wilde
         | as symptoms of the particular strain of cleverness the author
         | is referring to.
        
         | JadeNB wrote:
         | Is quoting Seinfeld a pretension to cleverness? If so, the
         | times have changed!
        
           | mdp2021 wrote:
           | I am afraid they did. I have seen quotes from that on the
           | Spectator to defend a pro-abortionist stance, in a text where
           | the actual argument was a pelvic taunting.
        
             | JadeNB wrote:
             | Maybe I don't understand what a pretension to cleverness
             | is. I can believe that someone might misquote _Seinfeld_ ,
             | or any cultural resource, to appear to lend support to an
             | argument that it doesn't (although why someone would think
             | even an argument actually supported by _Seinfeld_ was made
             | stronger thereby I don 't know--the show is famously and
             | intentionally about awful, shallow people). However, to me,
             | a pretension to cleverness involves an attempt to signal
             | some sort of cultural cachet--here, I think of cleverness
             | as being synonymous with a sort of tricky or practical
             | intelligence. Does _Seinfeld_ carry that cachet?
             | 
             | > ... in a text where the actual argument was a pelvic
             | taunting.
             | 
             | I don't understand what this means, but I suspect that
             | better understanding it would not make my life any better.
        
               | mdp2021 wrote:
               | > _I don 't understand what this means, but I suspect_
               | 
               | I interpret it that while afraid, you do not mind me
               | explaining, also/at least for others that may not have
               | understood.
               | 
               | Argument: "We adopt this stance, because it allows X and
               | doing differently would cause Y and Z".
               | 
               | The Spectator, a few months ago: "It is like in that
               | Seinfeld episode where she expressed her concerns and he
               | replied that all [slur] are [slur]. Yeah, take that,
               | [slur], because this [vulgarity] has met your
               | [relative]".
               | 
               | Edit: and when I read that, I thought that the current
               | decadence, each day more evident, is abusing boundaries.
               | 
               | Edit: ...although, I suspect that this type of articles
               | that The Spectator has so horribly decided are
               | acceptable, could actually be tolerated, under the
               | circumstance that they are read and acted by Mike Meyers
               | in a costume.
        
         | starkd wrote:
         | What an odd comment to make. His central thesis about
         | "cleverness" allowed him to tie together a number of disparate
         | elements. It is what writers do strive to do. If this was in
         | the New Yorker would that confer legitimacy? That feels very
         | elitist.
         | 
         | The flow of the writing reminded me a lot of Paul Graham's
         | essays.
        
           | sdwr wrote:
           | If it was in the New Yorker, it would be grounded much
           | better. It would include an interview with an academic
           | invested in the subject, or a profile on someone in the news
           | (but not too popular!), or frame it through the writer's home
           | life.
           | 
           | That confers legitimacy in a way that a frozen block of
           | quotes does not.
           | 
           | Same thing with Paul Graham. He actually did things, and wove
           | those experiences into his writing. The exact same thoughts
           | coming from nobody mean a hell of a lot less.
        
             | codemonkey-zeta wrote:
             | > it would include [access to intellectual elite] or a
             | profile on someone [from the political or cultural elite]
             | 
             | > Same thing with Paul Graham. He [is part of the financial
             | elite]. The exact same thoughts coming from [some pleb]
             | mean a hell of a lot less.
             | 
             | So... _actual_ elitism. This isn 't a very charitable way
             | of engaging with literature, and it's your own loss.
             | 
             | Plenty of "nobodies" had thoughts that became legitimate
             | well after their own lifetimes.
        
           | mdp2021 wrote:
           | > _tie together a number of disparate elements. It is what
           | writers do strive to do_
           | 
           | Very hopefully not. A game of associations ("first", "test",
           | "try", "feel", "skin"...) is already <<t[ying] together a
           | number of disparate elements>>. But randomly, in idleness,
           | possibly decadent.
           | 
           | Writers (should be supposed to) try to present a coherent
           | complex idea - defending a thesis, modelling a description,
           | disclosing potentially fruitful relations - by making its
           | ideal structure explicit through some relatively fixed
           | perspective form. That remains, structuring information (and
           | in a loop of criticism checks), in a set of globally (as
           | opposed to locally) strong relations (between the nodes).
           | With a so implied Purpose in the statements.
           | 
           | Which by the way seems to have been an intended target of
           | TFA. Compromising a lot with its enemy, though.
        
             | jancsika wrote:
             | > Writers (should be supposed to) try to present a coherent
             | complex idea - defending a thesis, modelling a description,
             | disclosing potentially fruitful relations - by making its
             | ideal structure explicit through some relatively fixed
             | perspective form. That remains, structuring information
             | (and in a loop of criticism checks), in a set of globally
             | (as opposed to locally) strong relations (between the
             | nodes). With a so implied Purpose in the statements.
             | 
             | I remember reading something similar from an old Ernest
             | Hemingway interview.
             | 
             | Does anyone who knows what I'm talking about have a link?
        
               | mdp2021 wrote:
               | I'd like just to specify that I composed that paragraph
               | on the spot. _Rem tene, verba sequentur_.
               | 
               | If Hemingway said something similar, I'd say it is not
               | specifically because great minds think alike - also that
               | -, but because we described the same thing. There is an
               | infinite number of ways to describe, say, a glass through
               | <<relatively fixed perspective form[s]>>, but a pretty
               | limited number of <<ideal structure[s]>> pertaining.
        
               | jancsika wrote:
               | > If Hemingway said something similar
               | 
               | Sorry, I shouldn't have written similar. It's literally
               | word for word equivalent.
               | 
               | Have you ever considered rewriting the complete works of
               | Ernest Hemingway, but for different reasons?
        
               | mdp2021 wrote:
               | Well, since I in fact have written it from scratch, as an
               | original - though saying nothing new but an actual state
               | of things -, please do find the exact quotation, so we
               | will wonder upon the "magic" that allegedly happened.
               | 
               | Incidentally: I checked, because I was intrigued - though
               | probably "<<for different reasons>>", i.e. to compare the
               | views - and I could not find it. I saw that there exists
               | an "Hemingway on Writing", 2019. But I do not know. I
               | admit I never read Hemingway (owing to queues). Though I
               | can guess we have pretty different styles: syntactic vs
               | paratactic.
               | 
               | Edit: but if that "magic" happened - /if/ -, I know the
               | trick, and I can already tell you. If, e.g., "a
               | circumference is the set of points equidistant from a
               | centre", the ways in which you can say that idea will
               | collapse into that.
        
       | civopsec wrote:
       | As if such an obvious observation needed to be stated.
        
         | bloqs wrote:
         | Looks like someone didnt read the article, or indeed the
         | headline properly
        
           | civopsec wrote:
           | Clever observation.
        
         | calculated wrote:
         | If this is sarcastic and you wrote it after reading the full
         | article I get it. If not no offence but maybe you should read
         | it.
        
           | kwhitefoot wrote:
           | I read all the way to the end and concluded much the same.
           | 
           | The sort of cleverness that the essay is complaining about
           | seems to me to be summed up in the phrase: "you're so sharp
           | you'll cut yourself".
        
             | civopsec wrote:
             | Too clever by half?
        
       | marcovvssr wrote:
       | I asked ChatGPT to summarize it after reading the whole thing and
       | made a pretty good job. Maybe is better to read the part about
       | being humble in the full version but still...
       | 
       | Cleverness is often seen as a positive quality, but it is also
       | associated with being an outsider. In modernity, this has led to
       | the proliferation of cleverness in public life, often in the form
       | of contrived knowingness and irony. This has led to cleverness
       | becoming a currency online, with people competing for likes and
       | subscribers with clever jokes and analyses. There is an affinity
       | between cleverness and alienation, as exemplified by the
       | detective archetype, who is a detached and calculating outsider.
       | This kind of cleverness often takes the form of seeing through
       | illusions and can be found in popular media, online commenting,
       | and in fiction. The proliferation of cleverness in public life
       | has led to it becoming a nuisance and being criticized by figures
       | such as Oscar Wilde and Soren Kierkegaard. It is important to
       | distinguish between genuine wisdom and cleverness, and not to
       | value the latter over the former.
        
         | starkd wrote:
         | This is one of the problems with chatGPT. Good writing is not
         | just a way to communicate ideas. It is also a way to develop
         | ideas that are worth exploring. Being proficient with language
         | - good language skills - means being proficient with ideas. It
         | is easy to lose site of this when you're profession is a
         | technical one that mostly reads instruction manuals or
         | technical documentation.
        
         | mdp2021 wrote:
         | Now the matter becomes to identify the unintelligence expected
         | of ChatGTP in its product.
         | 
         | I see a few (e.g. linking 'Kierkegaard' and 'proliferation'),
         | but it would be probably more interesting to do the same on an
         | article presenting some solid argument.
         | 
         | > _Pretty good job_
         | 
         | Do you think the summary is really structured? Does it present
         | an argument? Does it identify its nodes?
         | 
         | Or is it more like Woody Allen having made that speed-reading
         | course and concluding that War and Peace is about Russia?
        
           | Mathnerd314 wrote:
           | I think it's about as cogent as the original article. Which
           | is to say, a ball of mud.
        
           | marcovvssr wrote:
           | I tried to ask ChatGPT to make a more comprehensive summary
           | but it gave me a very similar output, i think because
           | "summary", to the model, has to match certain conditions of
           | length, it is a very limiting factor; to my understanding,
           | this tool wasn't meant to be used for this type of article
           | (at the moment), instead, i find it perfect for summarizing
           | long blog posts optimized for SEO.
           | 
           | However, if your goal was to just know what to expect from
           | the article and then read it, it made a 'Pretty good job'.
        
         | sdwr wrote:
         | I like that summary better than the actual article. The article
         | read as floaty and artificial. ChatGPT's sickly sweet tone
         | peeks through a bit here, but the pacing is much better.
        
       | crims0n wrote:
       | Really enjoyed this essay, the parallels between the flaneur of
       | old and modern lurkers is a brilliant connection. Really makes me
       | question how much time I should be spending on twitter and
       | reddit.
        
         | mdp2021 wrote:
         | > _question how much time_
         | 
         | Advice: question /why/. The rest should follow.
        
       | hprotagonist wrote:
       | _" Irony has only emergency use. Carried over time it is the
       | voice of the trapped who have come to enjoy their cage."_
       | 
       | Lewis Hyde "Alcohol & Poetry: John Berryman and the Booze
       | Talking"
        
         | cateblanchett wrote:
         | love john berryman, shout out john berryman
        
           | hprotagonist wrote:
           | it's usually attributed to DFW, but that's because he quotes
           | it approvingly in "E Unibas Pluram"
        
       | Konohamaru wrote:
       | From the essay:
       | 
       | > Think of the way adolescents try a knowing remark to project
       | worldliness when their egos are threatened.
       | 
       | What does this mean?
        
       | IAmGraydon wrote:
       | >Our popular media are drenched in contrived knowingness and
       | irony. And cleverness has become something like a currency
       | online, where hordes of commenters and commentators compete for
       | likes and subscribers with world-weary analyses and smug jokes.
       | What should we make of this apparent degradation?
       | 
       | That those people are clearly not clever at all and most can't
       | think for themselves so they just parrot whatever they heard from
       | others? Trying to feign cleverness and actually being clever are
       | not the same thing.
        
       | BLKNSLVR wrote:
       | Interesting read
       | 
       | > Another way to redeem passive lurking is by making a clever
       | joke that shows that you are above the whole thing. Twitter's
       | quote tweet function, especially, enables users literally as well
       | as metaphorically to appear above the conversation and to
       | cleverly one-up their opponents from this privileged position.
       | The game, in effect, is this: Who can appear the most above it
       | all?
       | 
       | This sounds like the proletariat mimicking their leadership, in
       | that the above is a description of how politics seems to work. We
       | need a better class of example-setters before we're going to see
       | better behaved societies.
       | 
       | The topic of discussion is quickly lost, and any hope of progress
       | towards a resolution along with it, amongst a competition of
       | witticisms.
       | 
       | I'm quite happy with this cleverness of mine:
       | 
       | "I'd rather be right than popular, and I often am."
       | 
       | But this could just be an intellectual hedging of my bets against
       | whatever the real-life-vulnerability equivalent of down votes is;
       | Stern, disapproving glares.
        
         | starkd wrote:
         | I think this is the downsides of cleverness that Oscar Wilde
         | eludes to. Its overuse can be hollow, snide and become
         | downright mean and cynical. Very emotionally draining.
        
       | bjornlouser wrote:
       | "Is there really something wrong with being clever? ...
       | cleverness functions more as a cover for vulnerability ...
       | reframe forced alienation ... use forms of cleverness to evade
       | such suffering ..."
       | 
       | I appreciate cleverness in others when it helps me avoid my own
       | suffering. Unfortunately I still suffer most of the time.
        
       | mounceyboy wrote:
       | And kierkegaards aphorisms are a master collection of witticisms
        
         | mdp2021 wrote:
         | Thanks for the advice!
         | 
         |  _The humor of Kierkegaard: an anthology_ (edited by Thomas C.
         | Oden)
         | 
         | https://archive.org/details/humorofkierkegaa0000kier
        
       | pclmulqdq wrote:
       | I completely disagree with this piece, and I think the author is
       | missing a few key details that lead him wrong.
       | 
       | The author focuses a lot on the trappings of cleverness - the
       | witticisms and the "outsider" nature of the clever individual.
       | This is the wrong thing to focus on. People with conventional
       | ideas today exploit these trappings (with the help of
       | professional marketing and PR teams) to give themselves an air of
       | importance and brilliance. It's no surprise that when you focus
       | there, you will find cleverness to be "impotent."
       | 
       | Instead, cleverness defined as a cross-disciplinary ("outsider")
       | perspective is incredibly valuable in the modern world. A lot of
       | cleverness comes from people who otherwise seem very boring -
       | they are clever in their specialty and in their own way, but not
       | the supposed "renaissance men" that media personalities seem to
       | be attracted to.
        
         | starkd wrote:
         | I don't think cleverness is quite the same as inventiveness or
         | a skill that equips you for a job. It is more a psychological
         | tool people often use to navigate the world. I think that's
         | what the essay was getting at.
        
         | BLKNSLVR wrote:
         | You're hitting the right point in that it's focusing on the
         | first type of cleverness, but that's because that's the type of
         | cleverness that society and social networks find to drive
         | "engagement" and therefore it's treated as far more important
         | than your second definition of cleverness, which is the type
         | that provides progress to technology and society and politics
         | and so on - but it's boring because society's issues that need
         | solving are so deep and complex and niche that any cleverness
         | in the solution is lost to anyone but experts in the same
         | field.
         | 
         | And so what the layperson sees, because it's what's chosen by
         | the engagement maximising algorithm, is only ever type 1
         | cleverness. Hence it's the topic.
         | 
         | Which is ironic in itself, a well written article about the
         | focus being wrong because the focus is wrong.
         | 
         | (My pithy summation is also such an example, it's clever but
         | adds or solves fucking nothing, welcome to my career).
        
         | lo_zamoyski wrote:
         | > "renaissance men" that media personalities seem to be
         | attracted to
         | 
         | I believe the word you're looking for is "dilettante".
        
       | spicyusername wrote:
       | > Who can appear the most above it all? But the circumstances of
       | posting--alone at the controls with no one around but everyone
       | watching--all but guarantee that posts are alloyed with
       | insecurity, however clever they might be.
       | 
       | It definitely feels like much of always-online culture is a
       | defense mechanism against feeling scared and powerless, even as
       | it presents itself as anything but.
        
       | at_a_remove wrote:
       | I believe I got a programming job once because, after
       | interviewing applicants, I said, "Programmers should be capable
       | of being clever, but not relying on it." And I meant it in the
       | Einsteinian sense, after many interviews of duds. It was then
       | gently suggested that perhaps I ought to fill the role.
       | 
       | However, the other form of being clever, the _Fight Club_ "How's
       | the working out for you? -- Being clever?" is shallow and often
       | contagious, in the sense that a clever turn of phrase or a meme
       | might replace rational thought. I'll give an example: whenever
       | someone might suggest that someone else who is mentally ill might
       | be violent, the stock response (I'll give you a bit to think of
       | it) is some variant "Mentally ill people are in more danger of
       | having violence inflicted on them than average people."
       | 
       | It's interesting as a response, it might even be true, but it in
       | _no way answers_ the actual question: is there a statistically
       | larger incidence of violence from the mentally ill as compared to
       | the norm? And then if you press further, you can get something
       | like  "The vast majority of people with mental health problems
       | are no more likely to be violent than anyone else," which is yet
       | another clever evasion and still doesn't answer the question.
       | 
       | This is just one example, but a lot of "memetic politics" contain
       | such obscuring cleverness. It's a magic trick, at best, and
       | should be stamped out wherever it appears, as a terrible shim
       | jammed in, separating us just a little bit more from the real
       | world.
        
       | fullshark wrote:
       | Chock full of pop culture references but no reference to this
       | great scene from Fight Club: https://youtu.be/vX8Zc8UGGu4. Which
       | basically makes the same point in 15 seconds.
        
       | mdp2021 wrote:
       | > _What should we make of this apparent degradation?_
       | 
       | Make it apparent. Oh, but in a way the author did.
       | 
       | Bad signals: <<Even if it can get on our nerves sometimes>>;
       | <<associations>>; <<positive>>; <<is seen>>; <<many will
       | identify>>; <<we tend to use>>; ... <<redeem ... by making a
       | clever joke ... that shows>>; <<to appear>>; <<the game>> ...
       | 
       | The accusation of levity is circular, acted from a perspective
       | firmly installed in levity.
       | 
       | Very little appears of any constructive consideration of the
       | Point: we have to manage a World, we need well processed
       | information, we had been since the dawn of time, playing is for
       | spare time - and Stern is mostly playing.
       | 
       | --
       | 
       | > _the medium's stupidity_
       | 
       | In spite of a number of faults, let us hold HN dear for the goods
       | it offers.
        
       | [deleted]
        
       | cateblanchett wrote:
       | the most unintentionally meta essay ever written
        
         | camjohnson26 wrote:
         | These comments are meta too.
        
           | cateblanchett wrote:
           | i just dont entirely agree that cleverness should be classed
           | as 'bad'. cleverness is entertaining. it's ok for things to
           | just be fun.
        
       | mrwh wrote:
       | Entertaining article. For all the references to pre-Internet
       | things and people, I can't help but feel it's mainly about a
       | certain sort of Twitter cleverness. The witty reply to this or
       | that outrage that, in the end, changed absolutely nothing. Not
       | cleverness, then (and really, of all places, tech very much
       | rewards cleverness), but impotent wit.
        
       | dj_mc_merlin wrote:
       | > The philosopher Ludwig Wittgenstein was tormented by the
       | thought that he was "merely clever" and criticized himself and
       | others for valuing cleverness over genuine wisdom.
       | 
       | This torments me too. Growing up I was top of my class/district
       | (same as my parents and theirs, which really suggests a genetic
       | component), but then when I started working with other smart
       | people I realized that only gets you so far.
       | 
       | To make wise decisions, you need to have the proper mindstate to
       | make genuine "human" decisions, rather than using just your
       | intelligence. In fact, if you're smart enough, you can
       | "logically" prove wrong things to yourself like "this is
       | impossible". Wisdom is knowing that whenever you say that, you
       | have made a mistake in your logic at some point.
       | 
       | It's very hard to teach people to start thinking like this. The
       | junior engineers who can think on their feet are usually mentored
       | better since that's the part you can't teach..
       | 
       | The tormenting part is this: the same can be said of most other
       | areas of life. I've seen so many genuinely smart people
       | completely mess up personal areas of their life by refusing to
       | think, or do things differently. Despite having a strong
       | apparatus for thinking, they don't "wake up" and use it, they
       | just form all kinds of delusions that they can prove to
       | themselves using their strong proving abilities. Despite being
       | wise in some areas, this wisdom doesn't extend to the others.
       | 
       | I think this is why depression rates are higher in more
       | intelligent people. There's a better ability to comprehend and
       | change your life, but that usually doesn't translate to the
       | willpower and wisdom needed to do so. Those are separate things
       | one has to have/train. An inbalance in the two causes great
       | upset/lost potential.
        
         | jason-phillips wrote:
         | > To make wise decisions, you need to have the proper mindstate
         | to make genuine "human" decisions, rather than using just your
         | intelligence.
         | 
         | I recognize this as empathy. It is something of a superpower
         | when used to its full potential.
        
           | nwienert wrote:
           | It's more than that. I'd argue there are "IQs" for culture
           | (what's the best outcome in a meta sense), power (what
           | words/actions lead to maintaining dominance), social (how
           | does everyone likely feel and react to what I say, related to
           | power) and many more.
           | 
           | So undervalued by many.
        
         | tonnydourado wrote:
         | > same as my parents and theirs, which really suggests a
         | genetic component
         | 
         | Does it? Could be as much a product of a privileged upbringing
         | and generational welth reproducing themselves. Do you have an
         | adopted sibling you grew up with, that had the same
         | environments and opportunities, but turned out to be a moron?
         | As a control group, you know.
         | 
         | I find odd how people are so quick to jump to genetics to
         | explain a thing so complex as a human being inside a society.
         | There's SO many forces acting on it at all times, picking genes
         | over all the others feels like an oversimplification.
        
           | joebob42 wrote:
           | I don't think anyone is claiming that's the only factor, but
           | it does seem that some people have higher natural aptitudes
           | for some modes of thought, at least to me.
        
           | dj_mc_merlin wrote:
           | I said suggests, not proves. It can't prove anything, it's
           | just one data point. It does seem very unlikely for a dozen
           | people to score so well academically if genetics wasn't a
           | factor at all, or? Why didn't other, richer people score
           | higher than any of them? And why did they marry other
           | intelligent people?
           | 
           | > privileged upbringing and generational welth reproducing
           | themselves
           | 
           | I come from an ex Soviet satellite state, I don't think your
           | assumptions of what my parents/grandparents' life was like is
           | accurate. I had a more privileged upbringing, but that
           | doesn't explain 2 generations away.
        
             | fsckboy wrote:
             | > (same as my parents and theirs, which really suggests a
             | genetic component)
             | 
             | I am not at all put off by genetic explanations (go
             | genes!), but it does equally suggest environment and
             | upbringing as a common element, it's a series of poster
             | children for it.
        
               | dj_mc_merlin wrote:
               | I concede you have a point there. My opinions are colored
               | by my experiences.
               | 
               | As a personal story that I will share since it also has
               | value as an experiment: I did not see my father between
               | the ages of 0-3 and 7-19. That means he was not there for
               | a large part of my developmental phase, in which I formed
               | a lot of my viewpoints on the world (at the time,
               | obviously).
               | 
               | What astounded me was that when I met him, he shared a
               | lot of those viewpoints. A lot of my behaviour that I
               | thought was specific to me, was not. Even small things
               | like preference for walking etc. I will not list
               | everything obviously but it really ingrained in me that a
               | lot of what I considered "my identity" was not chosen in
               | any way by me. We grew up in rather different
               | environments/countries too.
               | 
               | I think most humans would rather not face the fact that
               | their identity is scarcely chosen. But learning to accept
               | that means you can experience a lot more, since your ego
               | doesn't mind losing parts that aren't "really part of it"
               | anyway. Or at least it's less scary.
        
             | sophacles wrote:
             | I drive a pickup truck. Like my dad, grandpa and uncles. Do
             | you think there might be a genetic compent to my choice of
             | vehicle? Its strongly suggested as such, according to you.
        
               | dj_mc_merlin wrote:
               | I see your point, but choice of transportation vehicle is
               | more obviously dependent on environment than
               | intelligence.
        
               | riversflow wrote:
               | Is it? You are supposing that people don't choose their
               | environment.
        
               | zosima wrote:
               | I think there is a strong genetic component for owning a
               | pickup truck. Just like for dog ownership:
               | 
               | https://www.nature.com/articles/s41598-019-44083-9
               | 
               | Obviously, there is also a strong environmental factor.
               | But lacking either, will probably result in no pickup
               | truck.
        
           | [deleted]
        
           | archsurface wrote:
           | Wealth and privileged upbringing do not result in
           | intelligence. On the contrary, children brought up being able
           | to goof around in comfy surroundings often turn out to be
           | mediocre regardless of the standard of their education.
        
         | SubiculumCode wrote:
         | "Growing up I was top of my class/district (same as my parents
         | and theirs, which really suggests a genetic component).
         | 
         | No it doesn't. It implicates an inheritable component, just not
         | necessarily a genetic one. Education, wealth, culture,
         | prosperity, etc.
        
           | eastbound wrote:
           | > Education, wealth, culture, prosperity, etc.
           | 
           | Wow, would you think it's possible that there is a
           | correlation between intelligent people and groups which
           | create education, wealth, culture, prosperity, etc.?
        
         | jmcgough wrote:
         | Ironic that there's several assumptions around things you've
         | tried to logic out without looking at research.
         | 
         | >I think this is why depression rates are higher in more
         | intelligent people. There's a better ability to comprehend and
         | change your life, but that usually doesn't translate to the
         | willpower and wisdom needed to do so.
         | 
         | Other possibilities:
         | 
         | - intelligent people have a history of being bullied and
         | develop anxiety/depression from that
         | 
         | - they struggle with impossibly high expectations placed on
         | them
         | 
         | - genes associated with intelligence increase risk of mental
         | illness
         | 
         | - they rely too much on their intellect at an early age and
         | fail to develop other important skills
         | 
         | - intelligent people may be more arrogant and have difficulty
         | maintaining friendships
         | 
         | - a higher correlation of neurodivergence and the difficulties
         | of living in a world not designed for them
        
           | janeerie wrote:
           | The other alternative is that this is not actually true. I'm
           | having trouble finding any evidence that intelligence is
           | correlated with depression.
        
             | ReactiveJelly wrote:
             | Maybe it's sampling bias, then.
             | 
             | Intelligent people are more likely to realize they're
             | depressed, go online, talk about depression, and meet other
             | intelligent people who are also depressed?
        
           | dj_mc_merlin wrote:
           | > Ironic that there's several assumptions around things
           | you've tried to logic out without looking at research.
           | 
           | Yes, exactly! I'm aware of it and can't stop doing it. You do
           | it too I bet. It's a very annoying flaw in the human psyche.
           | 
           | edit: to be clear, you can stop. It requires some energy to
           | open up your mind though, so you can't do it forever or
           | you'll burn out, at least in my experience.
        
         | citizenpaul wrote:
         | >genuinely smart people completely mess up personal areas of
         | their life by refusing to think
         | 
         | This really reminds me of some guy I used to work with. He
         | would spew random madness like people don't really need to eat
         | because alive is an arbitrary state. I really have no idea how
         | he functioned outside of his CS job.
         | 
         | He was also annoying at work because I would say things like
         | the customer needs this then he would retort with some more
         | madness like "well if you think about it blah blah the customer
         | doesn't really matter." An I would just have to be like "ok
         | thats great just get your feature assignments done on time".
         | through gritted teeth. He did always get his work done.
        
           | AtlasBarfed wrote:
           | The pedant is like a man living zeno's paradox of Achilles
           | and the Tortoise.
           | 
           | You'll never get anywhere pedantically deconstructing things
           | with no bounds.
        
             | citizenpaul wrote:
             | Yeah I always said he is either going to be dead in a
             | dariwin award level situation or destroy the world.
             | 
             | He currently works at Northrop Grumman so not looking good
             | for us.
        
         | szundi wrote:
         | Not only genes, but certain memes can be inherited also without
         | any DNA.
        
         | agumonkey wrote:
         | Interesting bit about limits, I'm in a similar boat. But beside
         | the social aspect of reaching groups of stronger people,
         | something that changed is that my brain used to grok everything
         | out of the blue, and one day.. it didn't.[0] It's not that
         | things became harder but as if a big wall of confusion
         | appeared, while other were still seeing clearly (or so it seems
         | to my panicked eyes). During the years I managed to climb
         | stairs I couldn't before, so it's not a matter of being able to
         | grok things, but what became out of phase with college level
         | content in my brain that killed any speed.
         | 
         | [0] for instance, I was top of my class not by choice but
         | merely because I enjoyed reading all the things all the time
         | because it was so natural, so pleasurable. That pleasure is far
         | away most of the time now.
         | 
         | The emotional / personal aspect of abuse of "thinking" is also
         | interesting.
        
         | ip26 wrote:
         | _they just form all kinds of delusions that they can prove to
         | themselves_
         | 
         | Perhaps this is another manifestation of the fear of failure
         | that prevents some smart people from taking chances. E.g.,
         | admitting they were wrong and the normies were right would mean
         | they aren't smart after all, so they entrench and apply every
         | brain cell to convincing themselves they are right, to the
         | point of delusion.
        
       | xyzelement wrote:
       | The contrast between cleverness of this form and religion
       | resonates with me as someone who's gone from atheism to deep
       | appreciation of the truth of religion.
       | 
       | Our love of our own cleverness is the ego's attempt to assert its
       | relevance. "I am smart. I can figure out the world on my own. I
       | am right in what I think and believe" whereas religion puts us in
       | our place, as mortal and limited beings in an infinite and
       | eternal universe, whose knowledge and even theoretical ability to
       | grasp the ultimate truth is limited.
        
         | riskable wrote:
        
           | xyzelement wrote:
           | I haven't seen religion truncate the search for truth. In my
           | understanding, many of the men to whom we owe our
           | understanding of the world were religious.
           | 
           | Newton and Darwin were driven to understand how G-d
           | implements his designs.
           | 
           | The Big Bang was theorized by a Catholic priest scientist who
           | was looking for (and found) the moment of creation. Edward
           | Hubble who proved the big bang through observation was a
           | deeply religious Christian.
        
         | mdp2021 wrote:
         | Careful. The purpose is not epistemic.
        
         | mangamadaiyan wrote:
         | Either that, or you could be fooling yourself by thinking "I'm
         | smart, I've realised that religion has all the answers". Who
         | knows?
        
           | xyzelement wrote:
           | I haven't encountered religion to claim to have _all the
           | answers_. I have seen it deeply acknowledge man 's
           | limitations and the resultant profound awe of the mystery.
        
             | mdp2021 wrote:
             | The poster and you are talking about different things. You
             | are describing the reaction of a class of practitioners and
             | he is describing the reaction of a different class of
             | approachers. You have identified two different real
             | profiles.
        
       | svnpenn wrote:
       | I dont know if Reddit has always been like this, but it is now.
       | Essentially 90% of all top level comments are some dumbass joke,
       | or some pop culture reference, or some winking cutesie reply. It
       | makes me sick just thinking about it. I'm not saying it all has
       | to be high minded essays for every comment, but what you have now
       | is the equivalent of elementary school playground talk. Grow the
       | fuck up.
        
         | fullshark wrote:
         | It was like that before, but the jokes were in-jokes that made
         | it feel like a community, e.g. a reference to bacon, narwhals,
         | or some other nonsense. This was interspersed with genuinely
         | thoughtful replies. Eventually the site got too big, the LCD
         | quips won out and the conversation became junk food for the
         | mind.
        
       | brudgers wrote:
       | Possibly related:
       | 
       |  _Too Clever by Half_
       | 
       | https://www.epsilontheory.com/too-clever-by-half/
       | 
       | https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=17079369
        
       | skybrian wrote:
       | The article doesn't really get at how wittiness works in social
       | media, where clever jokes tend to work against actually
       | explaining things and genuine curiosity about what's going on. We
       | know less than we pretend, but the knowing attitudes often hide
       | the gaps in our understanding. Better to ask sincere questions
       | and look for their answers. And if you're not actually curious,
       | at least support the people who are.
        
       | maksimur wrote:
       | Be clever but be humble too. There's not a lot to it. The first
       | will propel you very far and the second will help when the first
       | doesn't suffice anymore.
        
         | cainxinth wrote:
         | I'm reminded of a line from comedian John Mulaney: "Just
         | because you're accurate doesn't mean you're interesting."
        
           | BLKNSLVR wrote:
           | They're almost inversely related in practise, because
           | accuracy requires understanding of the subtleties, so if you
           | have to explain the accuracy then the audience already
           | doesn't understand the subtleties, and if they don't
           | understand the subtleties it's usually because they don't
           | find them interesting.
           | 
           | The above is also an example.
        
       | phonescreen_man wrote:
       | The irony of the witty. The cleverest of quips. To be more sure
       | of yourself by standing above the rest. For the clever themselves
       | may just find it was the loudest whom made the news that day.
       | 
       | What a breathe Omm
        
       | the-printer wrote:
       | Am I the only one who found this essay to be meandering? It's
       | frustrating because I felt from the headline that it was going to
       | make a valid point about the odd gloss of humor as a way of
       | social/existential self-defense that is permeating our time. And
       | I think that that's what the author may actually be getting at. I
       | found the quotes pulled into the comments here to be great re:
       | quote tweets, but I felt like the essay itself was almost like a
       | granite obelisk of one cultural reference after the other.
        
         | Veen wrote:
         | It is meandering, but that's a good thing so far as I am
         | concerned. It's an essay in the old-fashioned exploratory
         | Montaignian style where the journey matters as much as the
         | destination, not the sterile persuasive plod of the modern
         | style.
        
           | the-printer wrote:
           | Are you referring to "Classic" style of prose as it is
           | portrayed in the book "Clear and Simple as the Truth"? If so,
           | good point. But in my opinion, taking your observation into
           | consideration, the piece now falls even flatter if I were to
           | interpret it as an attempt at that style of writing.
           | 
           | If the author stuck to just dissecting only Twitter or
           | Seinfeld or Kierkegaard or Einstein using some supporting of
           | details derived from just one of of those references, or even
           | tied in one extra reference for robustness, that'd be great
           | in my opinion. But this essay reads like it was constructed
           | from a bunch of transcluded notes from an Obsidian vault or a
           | zettelkasten (where reference upon reference can be taking
           | due to bi-directional links between notes).
           | 
           | I can go as far as to say that this is less classic prose,
           | than it is prose in the manner of a Family Guy episode.
        
             | Veen wrote:
             | > Are you referring to "Classic" style of prose as it is
             | portrayed in the book "Clear and Simple as the Truth"?
             | 
             | No, although that's an excellent book. I'm referring to the
             | essay-writing tradition that started with Michel de
             | Montaigne (who first used the word 'essay' in that sense).
             | He was a skeptic and thought of essays as wandering and
             | exploratory, not probative.
             | 
             | https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Essays_(Montaigne)
             | 
             | https://plato.stanford.edu/entries/montaigne
        
           | nostromo95 wrote:
           | However, in Montaigne's essays he often doesn't have a clear
           | thesis at the beginning of the essay. You are reading his
           | (magisterial) thinking transcribed onto the page.
           | 
           | The OP gestures towards a thesis ('here's why society's
           | championing of cleverness is bad') and then spends paragraphs
           | meandering around it.
        
         | dgreensp wrote:
         | I agree, the writing is entertaining, but it doesn't stick to
         | any particular points. If it did, there would be more
         | accountability for the author to say things that lead to useful
         | conclusions, I think. At times I found myself wondering what
         | the author was getting at, but then they would move on.
         | 
         | Is talking about "culture" a way of lumping fiction and reality
         | together? Fictional always-right, wisecracking detectives
         | aren't real, but there are real detectives, and presumably some
         | clever ones whose actual cleverness is of real practical use.
         | Fictional scientists who are more passionate than logical
         | aren't real, but there are real scientists, whose cleverness is
         | presumably valuable. Realistic work of professionals doesn't
         | make for good reading. Fiction is entertainment in the first
         | place.
        
         | giraffe_lady wrote:
         | I don't intend this meanly, but do you read much non-technical
         | nonfiction? New yorker articles, memoirs, things like that?
         | This one is not particularly an outlier, but also not a ton of
         | that stuff gets posted to HN.
        
           | allgreed wrote:
           | This is quite an interesting phenomenon, though it's more
           | unique. I find those kind (can't come up with a sensible
           | qualifier... the best thing that comes to mind is "upper
           | middle class normie journalism") of pieces incomprehensible
           | on the higher strata of the parsing tree. I understand the
           | words (which is not always the case with fiction, eg
           | Blindsight - there are pages where I need to do multiple
           | dictionary lookups, English is not my native tongue thou),
           | the sentences more or less clearly denote facts or ideas,
           | but... the more I read of them the less they make sense
           | together.
           | 
           | Yet another funny thing occurred to me: I'm not sure I'm
           | enjoying much non-technical non-fiction. Is Bret Devereaux[0]
           | technical? Well, tekhne, the root word hints at craft, art or
           | skill. The articles focus on the "how to" (move armies,
           | organize settlements or even write better fiction) merely
           | using "how it was" as a teaching aid and inspiration. So the
           | conclusion would follow that all kinds of guides are
           | technical.
           | 
           | Then if a published piece of writing is neither technical
           | (guide / manual) nor fiction (art) - what is it? Isn't it
           | just... data?
           | 
           | [0] https://acoup.blog/
        
             | giraffe_lady wrote:
             | Yeah I'm not necessarily trying to endorse that style of
             | writing either, and I think "upper middle class normie
             | journalism" is a pretty good name for it.
             | 
             | But I do notice that HN tends to have a hard time
             | with/disparage writing that doesn't state a clear thesis
             | and move towards it directly. Writing that makes its point
             | "between the lines" or through braiding apparently
             | unrelated thoughts together and expecting the reader to
             | finish the splice are not well received here.
             | 
             | I also think that, like consuming only social media
             | probably atrophies your attention span, reading only
             | "direct" prose atrophies your ability to experience the
             | ride of other styles and receive what they have to give.
             | 
             | And again I don't really intend this as a value judgement.
             | Both styles have their place and there is no moral
             | imperative to enjoy all approaches to writing. But having a
             | limited palate accidentally, being blind to that, and
             | thinking the fault is entirely in anything that lies
             | outside of it is in a very literal sense pathetic. And here
             | I often sense that it is perceived as virtuous distance
             | from foolishness instead.
        
               | yamtaddle wrote:
               | > But I do notice that HN tends to have a hard time
               | with/disparage writing that doesn't state a clear thesis
               | and move towards it directly. Writing that makes its
               | point "between the lines" or through braiding apparently
               | unrelated thoughts together and expecting the reader to
               | finish the splice are not well received here.
               | 
               | I think that reaction's a combination of that sort of
               | writing _sometimes_ being amateurish wankery poorly-
               | imitating better writers with better ideas, and an awful
               | lot of tech- and science-nerd sorts having decided around
               | 5th grade that they were already expert readers and
               | literature and language classes were just a bunch of
               | time-wasting made-up bullshit that couldn 't possibly
               | teach them to be better readers or writers. "It's this
               | entire field that's wrong, not me!"
               | 
               | Poor literacy is almost as prevalent as poor math skills,
               | folks are just less comfortable owning up to it. Plus a
               | lot more people overestimate how good they are at it, I
               | think, than do with math skills.
        
               | randcraw wrote:
               | HN's content is entirely nonfiction, which demands a
               | focused and discuplined style of writing: claim, defense,
               | conclusion. Because its goal is to entertain, fiction
               | frees the author to meander, muddle, or mislead -- all of
               | which impede making or defending a thesis.
               | 
               | If an article is nonfiction, then get to the point and
               | stay there, dammit.
        
               | giraffe_lady wrote:
               | Yeah see this is the sort of very narrow-minded view of
               | nonfiction I'm talking about. It's fine if that's the
               | only thing you can bring yourself to value but it doesn't
               | put the fault in the writing.
        
           | tpmx wrote:
           | A ton of that stuff _does_ get posted to HN.
           | 
           | There's meandering with multiple sometimes subtle qualities
           | along the way and there's ... meandering.
        
           | raldi wrote:
           | Based on the fact that this is the top-rated comment, it
           | would seem to be a position shared by a significant chunk of
           | the HN readership.
        
             | giraffe_lady wrote:
             | I think a significant chunk of the HN readership doesn't
             | frequently read non-technical nonfiction, yes.
        
               | raldi wrote:
               | Is that not also a true statement about the population at
               | large?
        
               | giraffe_lady wrote:
               | Maybe I don't know. But we've self-selected into a forum
               | where the main activity is the discussion of writing so I
               | would expect us to be more practiced and open-minded
               | about it than average.
        
           | starkd wrote:
           | It reminded me of one of Paul Graham's essays. It is
           | important to hone writing skills as a way of looking more
           | deeply at issues and understanding them.
        
         | bnralt wrote:
         | I did to. I actually find a lot of writing meandering these
         | days (for instance, almost all of the stuff from
         | SlateStarCodex/AstralCodexTen).
         | 
         | I think part of the issue is that these kinds of essays serve
         | both as an argument and jumping off point for discussion, but
         | also as a form of entertainment. If you enjoy the
         | entertainment, you might enjoy the argument being padded and
         | meandering. But if you're mostly interested in hearing the
         | argument and responding, this type of writing can fell like
         | it's intentionally wasting your time.
        
           | randcraw wrote:
           | I think the rise of meander is more likely a sign of
           | inattention and the inability to focus. An essay is much more
           | powerful and memorable if it can state a clear thesis and
           | defend it memorably and undeniably.
           | 
           | In today's writing, perhaps because we demand so great a
           | volume of it, purposeful prose financially rewards the
           | author's extra effort less than ever before, and is less
           | appreciated by readers because they're less willing to pause
           | their pace of consumption to reflect on subtleties and
           | unobvious insights. The online written word has evolved into
           | a 24x7-driven ehpemeral commodity, where cleverness alone is
           | the desiderata that makes or breaks the work and its auteur.
        
           | starkd wrote:
           | You do not have to respond to everything. Some writing is an
           | opertunity for reflection. If you respond without some
           | reflection, you become more of an NPC.
        
             | bnralt wrote:
             | On a forum I could give things a couple of days and then
             | write a response. Or I could start my own thread on the
             | topic. But that's less of an option in places like HN. If I
             | write a comment here two days from now, there's a good
             | chance that zero people will see it. If I want to discuss
             | the topic but not the essay, what are my options? I could
             | start my own blog, write my thoughts on the matter, submit
             | it to HN, hope that I'm one of the 1% of the submissions
             | that make it past the screeners who hang out on "New," then
             | hope I actually generate some discussion and don't
             | immediately fall off the page.
             | 
             | I actually agree with you that more reflection in general
             | is a good idea (though I don't necessarily agree that these
             | kinds of essays engender that kind of reflection, but
             | that's a separate topic). However, the online communities
             | that exist now are designed to dissuade people from doing
             | anything (reflection, research, editing, etc.) that take
             | more time.
        
               | starkd wrote:
               | This kind of writing has its own rewards. It is just as
               | valuable to the writer as the reader. Paul Graham makes
               | the point that developing writing skills also develops
               | your ideas. If you cannot articulate your ideas well
               | enough for others to understand it, it is likely the case
               | your idea is still fully undeveloped.
        
               | bnralt wrote:
               | I mean, certainly there are plenty of things people want
               | to comment on without writing a blog post on it. This
               | discussion, for example. We're discussing this with
               | relatively quickly written comments, not as blog posts
               | that we spend a great deal of time on, put away for a
               | day, come back to edit, etc.
               | 
               | It's also the case that time is limited, and there are
               | some topics we don't want to spend much time on. It's
               | common to see people argue that if you don't spend as
               | much time on the topic as them, then your opinions on it
               | aren't as worthy, but I can't really agree with that.
               | It's very often used as a way to defend poor beliefs
               | against obvious criticisms. You see it a lot with
               | conspiracy theories. "You can't dismiss this unless
               | you've read all of the writings on it!" But only true
               | believers are going to subject themselves to dozens of
               | books on a crank theory.
        
               | mannykannot wrote:
               | There is no reason to expect you will find the sort of
               | dialogue you want unless you take some steps to initiate
               | it yourself. The people who regularly appear on the front
               | page of HN did not start off doing so.
        
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         | astroalex wrote:
         | I found the writing beautiful. Sometimes if writing "gets to
         | the point" too directly, it can fail to make an interesting
         | point at all. Weaving together lots of references and ideas
         | provides a lot more nuance and richness IMO.
        
         | dclowd9901 wrote:
         | It was hard not to read it and think "this guy is analyzing
         | cleverness? Like this?" It's hard to read it and not feel the
         | author themself wasn't peacocking their cleverness. And I'm not
         | entirely fond of the attempt at reinforcing a point this
         | abstract trying to use quotes or excerpts from sources. It's an
         | idea; it doesn't need evidence. It's just meant to evoke
         | thought. I'm ok with that and don't need you to try to prove it
         | by something Kierkegaard said.
         | 
         | I think the piece does resound a bit if you can clean off the
         | gunky verbal tripe and look at what they're trying to say.
         | There's a definite problem regarding people trying to be
         | clever. I'm just not convinced that's the source of the
         | problem. Just a symptom.
        
           | lo_zamoyski wrote:
           | > It's an idea; it doesn't need evidence. It's just meant to
           | evoke thought. I'm ok with that and don't need you to try to
           | prove it by something Kierkegaard said.
           | 
           | The point of citing Kierkegaard is to make use of the
           | insights of others to try to explain something and to shed
           | light on it. What the author is examining starts as a vague,
           | confused, and murky impression that requires refinement,
           | analysis, and effort to get to the essence of the thing.
           | Clarity is not a given. Do you presume to know all there can
           | be said about a thing? If not, then looking at what others
           | have said is an opportunity to grow in wisdom and break out
           | of the provincialism of one's own limited perspective, if
           | only by the very act of wrestling with their material. I
           | thank the wise who came before me for showing me the way and
           | enriching my understanding of reality.
        
         | randcraw wrote:
         | Agreed. Curiously that meander makes the implicit point that
         | the author never made explicitly, that cleverness is shallow.
         | It's all about witty one-liners that lead no deeper than
         | eliciting a smirk and a mote of respect for the joker's
         | facility with an unobvious turn of phrase. Little surprise that
         | Wilde wanted to be remembered for more than merely that, which
         | alas, he isn't.
        
         | Konohamaru wrote:
         | It was extremely good reading. It read like something Scott
         | Alexander would write if Scott Alexander were a four-
         | dimensional thinker.
        
       | xianshou wrote:
       | The title reads to me as a tautology - we use "clever" as opposed
       | to "intelligent" or "formidable" to connote self-contained,
       | puzzle-like displays of intellect. If you are clever but also
       | pragmatic and effective, people will start using very different
       | words to describe you.
        
         | randcraw wrote:
         | I think clever is also used differently among Brits than Yanks.
         | Brits equate it with intellect and imagination. Americans see
         | cleverness less charitably, as an self-serving tactic in a game
         | that leads to winning. A clever person in the States is often
         | just a trickster.
        
       | herodotus wrote:
       | When I was managing programmers I sometimes warned them about
       | being careful to distinguish between cleverness and wisdom. Never
       | realized that Wittgenstein had made this remark.
       | 
       | In the context of programming, the best person on my team was
       | wise, but he sometimes could not resist being clever to the
       | detriment of the readability of the code. To me, clever code is
       | the stuff you might find (admittedly these are extreme) on the
       | The International Obfuscated C Code Contest. "Wise" code is code
       | that does what it needs to do but is clear. The weakest person on
       | a team should be able to read and understand (and maybe fix bugs
       | in) this code.
       | 
       | We had one example where the person in question had just read
       | about multiple inheritance in C++ and just could not resist the
       | urge to use it in some key code that none of the rest of us
       | understood at all! I made him rewrite it without multiple
       | inheritance.
        
         | remram wrote:
         | I can't help but think of a parallel between "wisdom vs
         | cleverness" and "difficulty vs complexity". (from Rich Hickey's
         | definition: https://paulrcook.com/blog/simple-made-easy)
         | 
         | Being clever rather than wise will push you to find those
         | simple/elegant solutions that are not easy to understand or
         | maintain. In reverse being wise rather than merely clever you
         | will go with the boring or seemingly complex solution if it is
         | easier for the team to understand and maintain.
        
       | hilbert42 wrote:
       | I'm clever enough to at least know I'm stupid.
        
         | levinb wrote:
         | I've always told myself that, "I'm smart enough to know I'm not
         | as smart as I think I am."
        
           | erwincoumans wrote:
           | Indeed, self-evaluating your smartness precisely seems
           | unlikely: you are more likely more or less smart.
        
         | tartoran wrote:
         | Say that outloud and often and some people will use it against
         | you.
        
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