[HN Gopher] The digital typewriter and the unnecessarily costly ...
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       The digital typewriter and the unnecessarily costly pursuit of
       focus
        
       Author : Apocryphon
       Score  : 40 points
       Date   : 2022-07-14 07:10 UTC (1 days ago)
        
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       | cultofmetatron wrote:
       | the refresh rate on the latest kindle is pretty impressive. It
       | has wifi and descent refresh rate as well as a usbc port.
       | 
       | amazon could easily add a dock that lets you turn it into a
       | distraction free writing device. Hell they could just add some
       | software that lets you connect it to a existing usbc keyboard for
       | the same purpose.
        
         | myself248 wrote:
         | You could also do this easily on that $60 laptop or any
         | chromebook just by running an editor full-screen in kiosk mode.
         | For some reason, this obvious answer is not preferred by anyone
         | pursuing this bizarre line of thought.
        
           | floren wrote:
           | "I'll really be able to buckle down and write GOOD stuff,
           | just as soon as I get that new [pen/laptop/$600 digital
           | typewriter]" is not an uncommon line of thought among wannabe
           | writers.
           | 
           | Compare with amateur photographers who spend most of their
           | time obsessing over gear on forums instead of just taking
           | pictures.
        
             | cultofmetatron wrote:
             | The photography thing hits home. I see all these people
             | obsessing over prime lenses because "thats what pros use."
             | Better to to be out taking photos with a phone camera than
             | oggling 1k+ glass. Personally I use the nikon 24-200mm.
             | purists may scoff a the use of such a big zoom and a
             | relatively high fstop but its small enough to always be in
             | my baga and flexible enough to cover a large range of uses.
        
           | coffeefirst wrote:
           | Yep. If this is about writing, shut off your wifi, open
           | Word/iAWriter/Google Docs/Ulysses/it doesn't matter just quit
           | messing with the font.
           | 
           | If it's about aesthetics--if you want to light candles and
           | put on an old jazz recording and feel like you're a postwar
           | novelist living in Paris--that's totally fine too, you can
           | pick up a _real_ typewriter for under $100.
           | 
           | E-Ink is amazing for ebooks, but I'm not sure what the appeal
           | of this low-tech/high-tech thing is, especially given the
           | price.
        
           | cartesius13 wrote:
           | E-ink display though
           | 
           | >You could also do this easily on that $60 laptop or any
           | chromebook
           | 
           | You couldn't because these devices don't have an e-ink
           | screen. This would be the entire point of having a kindle as
           | a writing device. Otherwise you would be correct
        
             | jfim wrote:
             | It's too bad that transflective displays didn't pan out,
             | the OLPC display was perfectly workable and worked well
             | outdoors too. It would be the ideal kind of display for
             | such a device, which doesn't really need high resolution.
        
       | antonymy wrote:
       | You can skip the first two sections of this rant entirely if you
       | don't care about his life story or his opinions on the creative
       | process, by the way. The product review starts over 900 words
       | into it, in the third section. I have no reason to doubt this man
       | is paid by the word, I bet his grocery list has an ISBN label.
        
       | joshmarinacci wrote:
       | I'm really hoping the Raspberry Pico will get USB host mode. Then
       | anyone could build a little word processor with a USB keyboard
       | and an eInk screen.
        
       | dwaltrip wrote:
       | TL;DR It doesn't let you edit. Which is frankly insane.
       | 
       | P.S. This blog post was way longer than it needed to be.
        
         | netsharc wrote:
         | The fact that the title had an "-- or --" and took the whole
         | screen on a 1080p desktop display hinted me to this...
        
       | jrm4 wrote:
       | It really is odd to me that there's not a wide range of "general
       | purpose computing e-ink devices" out there, and even odder that
       | this thing is apparently not that either.
        
         | ghaff wrote:
         | Refresh times is probably part of it. And once you start
         | creating special-purpose devices, your market drops off a lot.
         | I guess if I spent a lot of my days reading scientific papers a
         | Remarkable tablet might be interesting but I don't so it isn't.
         | (And, oh, an iPad works pretty well too and I can do a lot of
         | other things with it too.)
        
           | dredmorbius wrote:
           | Modern e-ink displays can update at about 2 Hz at highest
           | quality and at up to ~8--10 Hz, possibly better, with reduced
           | quality (more ghosting / lower resolution).
           | 
           | If usage is for reasonably static material and navigation
           | tends to be via pagination rather than scroll, it works quite
           | well.
           | 
           | Full video is possible, if of lower quality than on an
           | emissive display.
           | 
           | I've written a set of my own recommendations for e-ink Web
           | and App design here:
           | 
           | https://diaspora.glasswings.com/posts/638a8d10e041013afba844.
           | ..
           | 
           | Mostly because it seems no one else had.
        
         | dredmorbius wrote:
         | Display cost remains a huge barrier, with little thanks to
         | E-Ink's (the company) control over patents and I'm presuming
         | excusive contracts.
         | 
         | I've some sympathy as hardware is a mug's game and price
         | competition when it does hit is absolutely brutal.
         | 
         | That said, the 10" and 13" displays available now are
         | excellent, and are being found in Android tablets (sold as
         | e-book readers, but fully general-purpose). The Onyx BOOX line
         | for example.
         | 
         | Android itself is hugely limiting in numerous ways. I'd like to
         | see actual e-ink laptops, and suspect we will before too much
         | longer.
         | 
         | A quick note on power use: if the device is only used for
         | reading reasonably static text, battery life is exceptional.
         | Once radios, backlights, and in particular web-surfing are
         | added to the workload, power draw really ramps up. You'll get a
         | full day or two off a charge, but not a week or more as with
         | reading books.
        
           | Qworg wrote:
           | In comparison to the BOOX - I love my Remarkable2 and it is a
           | Linux box under the hood.
        
             | dredmorbius wrote:
             | I considered the Remarkable.
             | 
             | For my primary use: a portable library, 16 GB onboard
             | storage was simply too little. The BOOX Max Lumi offered 64
             | GB, and the Lumi II has 128 GB, which I could really use,
             | and ultimately I'd prefer more still.
             | 
             | Remarkable has since shifted to a cloud/subscription
             | business model, which makes me happier for my choice.
             | 
             | I'd prefer Linux under the hood, really. But not with the
             | senseless HW sacrifices that Remarkable are imposing.
             | 
             | I'll add that Onyx's post-purchase support of the platform
             | has been refreshing after Samsung devices that saw no
             | updates at all. There've been about 4--5 in a year and a
             | half, including specifically addressing issues I'd
             | reported.
        
         | dietrichepp wrote:
         | My sense is that trying to browse the internet on e-ink kinda
         | sucks, so you're left with devices that you don't browse the
         | web with... and they're competing against tablets, phones, and
         | laptops. It's hard for me to imagine what market you'd have for
         | an consumer e-ink device besides e-readers and word processors.
        
           | dredmorbius wrote:
           | Browsing on e-ink works quite well.
           | 
           | Better if you're using a browser optimised for the medium.
           | Einkbro is excellent:
           | 
           | https://github.com/plateaukao/browser
        
       | Animats wrote:
       | The author is grumbling that this very special purpose device
       | doesn't have quite the feature set he wants.
       | 
       | The era of writing on paper was backed by a large human staff of
       | typists, rewriters, fact-checkers, editors, and Linotype
       | operators. Everything was re-keyed several times before it
       | reached print. It's not about nostalgia for typewriters. It's
       | about nostalgia for _servants_.
        
       | jszymborski wrote:
       | I'm a PhD student, and as a result often have to write. I've
       | always had the problem of editing as I type, constantly back
       | tracking, writing alternate versions of a sentence, insisting
       | that I get it right the first pass.
       | 
       | Increasingly, I've taken to outlining my work (like Xe Iaso
       | recommends[0]) on pad and paper (helps if you have a nice pen and
       | nice paper), and then trying to write a stream of consciousness
       | for each section.
       | 
       | Then, I'll go to my text editor of choice and start forming more
       | coherent, cogent, and discrete thoughts and arguments from the
       | previous word salad.
       | 
       | All to say, I appreciate that typewriters make it really hard to
       | revise your work while you're writing as it facilitates that
       | draft phase. Same deal with writing in pen, you can only scratch
       | out so much before the page becomes an ink rag.
       | 
       | Perhaps this implementation was sloppy in that it _only_ has this
       | no-cursor/no-backspace mode. A physical dial could be a cool
       | alternative ("Draft Mode", "Editing Mode")
       | 
       | [0] https://xeiaso.net/blog/doing-a-writing
        
       | gandalfff wrote:
       | Being offline helps. I've recently taken to writing on a Power
       | Mac G5 paired with a Cinema display. Nothing fancy, just a window
       | of TextEdit. No notifications or Internet to distract. A silent
       | operating system running on a loud tower. My writing happy place.
        
         | flobosg wrote:
         | I use an old Thinkpad x220 on a virtual console running micro.
        
       | dietrichepp wrote:
       | We had something like this in school circa 1995 or 1996.
       | 
       | It had a keyboard and a three-line LCD display. It was powered by
       | batteries, and could be connected to a computer as a keyboard via
       | ADB. Press a button on the device, and it would send your
       | document as a series of keypresses to the computer. I think our
       | classroom had two of these? I'm not sure. You could take them
       | outside and write, and then bring them back to the classroom and
       | dump them into the computer. No software necessary.
       | 
       | When I try to look it up, I get results for AlphaSmart. I wonder
       | how much they cost at the time. Sometimes you can figure that out
       | by digging through computer catalogs on the Internet Archive.
       | 
       | https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/AlphaSmart
       | 
       | I understand that this is a whole category of devices called
       | "word processors", but I'm a bit too young and I never really
       | encountered them besides the AlphaSmart (which required a
       | computer). You can dig up old commercials for word processors on
       | YouTube.
       | 
       | AT&T: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=piROIAJ6Jhg
       | 
       | Wang: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AuX-6761KTQ
        
         | themadturk wrote:
         | Yes, he even mentioned the AlphaSmart in the article. I had a
         | Neo...an excellent writing device with a great keyboard,
         | fantastic battery life, and enough storage to keep me satisfied
         | for a week or so (and the editor was full screen, none of this
         | "only go forward" crap). The only thing it required a computer
         | for was to offload the text you'd written...and with additional
         | software, you could even upload files to it and modify the
         | fonts to give you more lines per screen.
        
           | dietrichepp wrote:
           | Hah, I didn't quite make it to the end of the article! I see
           | that you can still buy the AlphaSmart Neo online.
        
       | vr46 wrote:
       | I love a good hatchet job and this was definitely it.
        
       | devonnull wrote:
       | This reads like a long rant about having a case of buyer's
       | remorse. That said, I can understand his frustrations with a
       | device like the Freewrite.
        
         | ghaff wrote:
         | Yeah.
         | 
         | A few comments as someone who has done a lot of writing both
         | pre- and post-computers.
         | 
         | - I am most _certainly_ not Hemingway but you could write on a
         | typewriter--especially inverted pyramid, newspaper style. Yes,
         | you did compose a sentence or a paragraph mentally. And, then,
         | between you and /or an editor there was various (literal)
         | cutting and pasting/scratching out/etc.
         | 
         | - However, you get used to certain styles of doing things.
         | These days, I mostly don't even like writing someplace I don't
         | have Internet access because I'm accustomed to being able to
         | check facts, look something up, etc. on the fly. Hard copies of
         | research materials are just a partial solution.
         | 
         | - Yes, focus is a thing but there are probably better ways to
         | achieve it than using something that is so suboptimal in other
         | ways.
        
           | dietrichepp wrote:
           | I'd like to add that literal copy/paste is, in many ways,
           | superior to the way it works in a computer.
           | 
           | If you have something printed out, you can cut up the
           | paragraphs or sentences and physically rearrange them until
           | you figure out an order that makes sense. It's much faster
           | than doing the same thing with ctrl-X ctrl-V, and when you
           | ctrl-X, the material you've cut vanishes from sight.
        
             | dredmorbius wrote:
             | Ted Nelson really hammers this point a lot.
             | 
             | Unless you've had experience with physical paste-ups, it's
             | hard to appreciate.
             | 
             | In vi/vim, the concept of seting marks then moving copy
             | (especially with a split in the buffer so that the original
             | / destination locations are both visible) comes reasonably
             | close. It at least avoids that intermittent disappearance
             | onto the clipboard / paste buffer.
        
               | ghaff wrote:
               | If I'm working on ad copy or tight marketing copy for an
               | about section of a website, getting physical can
               | absolutely be a good idea.
               | 
               | That said. I have a lot of writing experience and I'm
               | mostly not going to sweat the average 1,000 word piece I
               | write. I do like starting off in Scrivener for the odd
               | longer piece I write on a Mac.
        
               | dredmorbius wrote:
               | IME structure starts mattering somewhere above the 6,000
               | word mark (about 12 printed pages, 24 typewritten).
               | 
               | For longer works --- fiction or otherwise --- structure
               | matters far more, and works written without consideration
               | to this tend to show this as much lower in quality.
               | 
               | That said, many writers (both before and after invention
               | of typewriters) would _dictate_ their works to an
               | assistant who would either write longhand or type the
               | text. If you read a lot of 19th and early 20th century
               | material, this is sometimes evident in the style, which
               | tends toward conversational. I 'm presuming these would
               | typically at least begin with notes.
               | 
               | John McPhee is an example of a writer whose works are
               | heavily structured, and who relies on index cards for
               | drafting his stories, as well as extensive editing and
               | rewriting. (See also Niklaus Luhmann and Nabokov.)
        
       | dhosek wrote:
       | I disagree with the premise that a typewriter is a lousy first-
       | draft device. My old-school writing technique before I got my
       | first computer was to type a first draft (on a manual
       | typewriter), full of typos and ^H^H^HXXX corrections. Since I had
       | a manual typewriter back in high school, but tended not to have
       | paper for it, most of those first drafts were typed onto whatever
       | paper I could come up with. Then, I would edit it on paper and do
       | a clean draft on the electric typewriter at the school newspaper
       | office, using liquid paper to fix the inevitable typos.
       | 
       | I still do something similar now, although I use Word instead of
       | a typewriter. I print the first draft, edit on paper and retype
       | from scratch for a second draft. I always print that and do (at
       | least) one more editing round afterwards. Sometimes I may do a
       | complete retype deep into the revising practice as things become
       | more dramatically changed.
        
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