[HN Gopher] Ask HN: Is there an "uncanny valley" effect with sta...
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       Ask HN: Is there an "uncanny valley" effect with startup MVPs?
        
       I am asking because I have noticed that as I build better landing
       pages for my MVPs I get judged more harshly. This got me thinking
       if there is a way in which having a not particularly attractive
       landing page might get people to approach the product in a
       different way.
        
       Author : etewiah
       Score  : 146 points
       Date   : 2022-05-31 08:51 UTC (14 hours ago)
        
       | dsugarman wrote:
       | I think people probably do, I imagine it feels like a broken
       | promise to them. My question would is why spend so much time on
       | the marketing instead of the product? You need a core group of
       | users to really love the product instead of a lot of people to
       | kind of like it. It sounds like you got some users and a lot of
       | feedback already which is awesome, I would get to work on getting
       | the product really awesome for those early adopters who stick
       | around. You can continuously market to those who didn't with
       | every feature release so they see the rate of progress.
        
       | wbsss4412 wrote:
       | I think the metaphor works in a sense.
       | 
       | The issue with your landing page is that it comes off as
       | "designery" while at the same time not showing the polish that an
       | actual designer would produce.
       | 
       | I can see that you're trying, but it is clear that you don't
       | quite grasp what the intent of the design elements is supposed to
       | be.
        
       | sideproject wrote:
       | There is a reason why there exists an entire "landing page
       | industry" because there is a level of science and art mixed into
       | building it.
       | 
       | If you think it's visually stunning without being informative or
       | just pure information without attention-grabbing visuals, then
       | you'll fall on either side of the hill.
       | 
       | Then there are other factors including your target audience,
       | copy-test, sentiment, color combinations etc.
       | 
       | I've build many landing pages in my life time and I am not sure
       | if I still get it. If you are optimizing for HN-audience, I would
       | say it also requires a different strategy (e.g. demo first
       | without signing up?)
        
         | codeptualize wrote:
         | I very much agree with this. I think approaching landing pages
         | as storytelling makes them a lot easier to approach and
         | understand (still hard to do well).
         | 
         | Everything should be in support of telling the main narrative,
         | while also keeping attention. It's a balance as you say; a dry
         | story isn't very interesting, irrelevant attention grabbing
         | isn't very interesting either (or very briefly to be followed
         | by disappointment and confusion).
         | 
         | What's challenging with landing pages is that for a lot of
         | products the story of the product just isn't that exciting, you
         | can add bells and whistles but that isn't going to make your
         | story any more interesting. Finding a good narrative is imo
         | half the battle.
        
       | lifefeed wrote:
       | Are you getting the same number of comments for better landing
       | pages, but the comments are getting more detailed and nit-picky?
        
       | thecleaner wrote:
       | Do an A/B test. Please do share the results. :)
        
         | etewiah wrote:
         | Yeah, I probably should. In any case for the next Show HN I do
         | I think I will deliberately have a lofi landing page and see
         | how that goes ;)
        
         | tyingq wrote:
         | Might be fun to build a "Show HN" that serves up different
         | pages to everyone that visits. Then watch us argue with each
         | other about the merits of the product.
        
       | naet wrote:
       | Checking your actual landing page (
       | https://propertywebbuilder.com ) and my opinion is... that it
       | isn't a very good landing page. The sizing and spacing are
       | awkward and blocky, your color scheme clashes with your images,
       | the images are generic and tacky, everything is too big and wide,
       | etc. Maybe because you worked on it you feel that it is a great
       | modern style landing page, but that isn't how it reads to me (and
       | seemingly to other people as well).
       | 
       | Maybe you look at a SIMPLER site like https://tom.preston-
       | werner.com/ and mistakenly equate that with a "worse" landing
       | page. Actually though this simple page has bullet proof styling,
       | and slapping some stock images on it like you did on your page
       | wouldn't make it better, it would make it way worse.
       | 
       | Rather than looking for an external factor like a "mythical
       | uncanny valley" to explain your landing page's poor performance,
       | look inwards at your individual styling and what could be
       | improved.
        
         | yupper32 wrote:
         | Oh jeez, yeah that first site looks like an auto-generated
         | scam/spam website. I'd never enter anything into that website.
        
         | kristjansson wrote:
         | W.. Why does a landing page have a loading bar?
        
         | pantulis wrote:
         | To be fair with OP, comparing Preston-Werner's blog to a
         | landing page is not really an apples to apples comparison,
         | imho, as the purpose is totally different.
         | 
         | Still, OP has lots of work to do on that landing page, but not
         | only on the design (there are a gazillion templates for that)
         | but on how does it convey the value of the service it's
         | offering. Also almost all clicks take inmediately to a login
         | page without much explanation.
        
         | wbsss4412 wrote:
         | I think their uncanny valley metaphor is still apt in this
         | situation though.
         | 
         | They're trying to take design principles that are common among
         | professionally designed webpages and apply them. They are,
         | unfortunately, doing so quite poorly, and it is leading to a
         | worse result.
         | 
         | Edit: typo
        
           | 8ytecoder wrote:
           | Is it though? I'm not even a designer but I can see the color
           | coordination isn't ideal and a bit harsh. Sections are not
           | delineated clearly. There's isn't a clear separation between
           | heading and body in styling. These things are designer 101.
        
             | marcosdumay wrote:
             | > color coordination
             | 
             | > Sections are not delineated clearly
             | 
             | > separation between heading and body
             | 
             | Personally, when I open that site, I have no idea what it's
             | about at all (yeah, it's something related to house-
             | hunting). Only when I scroll down an entire screen-height,
             | I get some high level explanation.
             | 
             | All the things you noted are there, but I don't think
             | fixing them would solve anything.
        
             | wbsss4412 wrote:
             | As I said, they are attempting to copy things that are
             | common all over the internet, but doing so poorly.
             | 
             | Do you not see how their current page takes design cues
             | from professional pages?
        
         | sertorius wrote:
         | Not to pile on, but there's also a typo right on the first
         | screen: "Lisitings". Also, inconsistent use of periods on
         | bullet points.
        
         | [deleted]
        
         | bartread wrote:
         | The worst part is that after you've added a property and
         | clicked the big button you're forced to sign up or sign in. I
         | can't even see whether or not the service is useful without
         | creating an account and, with it, yet another vector for
         | unsolicited communication (GDPR be damned, etc., and yes I have
         | trust issues here).
         | 
         | Maybe at least give me a taste of something useful before I
         | have to sign up?
         | 
         | I was much less bothered by the layout and colours.
        
           | duped wrote:
           | That's actually a feature and not a bug, a little activation
           | energy is a great way to filter out people you probably can't
           | convert to signups.
           | 
           | But you still need a demo video at the very least
        
         | arduinomancer wrote:
         | Yeah that page needs a smaller maximum width and less
         | whitespace
         | 
         | It looks way too wide and spaced out on a regular desktop
         | monitor
        
         | sefrost wrote:
         | When I click the "start house hunting now" button it directs me
         | straight to a login page, with an error message. Which is
         | annoying because I just wanted to see what the site actually
         | does.
        
           | evandale wrote:
           | This is what stopped me from using the site. I went through
           | the work to find a url for a house, pasted it into the box
           | that claims "Get started by entering the url for a property
           | you are interested in" and get a login screen. That's not
           | quite what getting started means to me.
        
             | sigg3 wrote:
             | Get stopped.
        
           | marcosdumay wrote:
           | Oh, yeah. Your site not working at all is a known cause of
           | low conversion rates.
        
           | dailybagel wrote:
           | Clicking "Start house hunting now" does all that, _and_
           | breaks the back button functionality on Safari.
        
       | bilekas wrote:
       | > if there is a way in which having a not particularly attractive
       | landing page might get people to approach the product in a
       | different way
       | 
       | The colour scheme is a bit jarring.. Some odd spacing choices and
       | no real direction of what the service does.
       | 
       | I'm pretty awful on my own with UI and UX, I rely heavily on
       | others but when I'm in a pinch, I'll try find some inspiration on
       | Behance or such. After years and years of outsourcing and
       | studying other peoples work, I think I can notice what works and
       | whats interesting new and what just seems off..
       | 
       | Its definitely a marathon and not a race so don't take this
       | negatively. Don't be afraid to rely on other people for it!
        
       | ei8htyfi5e wrote:
       | This is an issue with getting feedback on designs too. Wonder if
       | there is overlap in the problem space.
       | 
       | If you present pixel perfect designs for feedback, feedback is
       | less specific because users think the product is finished.
       | However, when it's a pencil sketch, users become critical and
       | critique everything because they don't think anything is set in
       | stone. I try to present LoFi everything until final sign off.
        
       | jdvh wrote:
       | Getting harsh feedback isn't so bad, really. You get that kind of
       | feedback either because people think your MVP is something it's
       | not or because of quality issues, and you can fix both.
       | 
       | A bad landing page filters out people who are just moderately
       | interested. They'll just close the tab and move on. That's going
       | to skew the feedback you'll get.
       | 
       | If you don't get (much) feedback at all you're in a much worse
       | spot. Then you don't know if your MVP sucks, or it doesn't but
       | your landing page sucks, or maybe both are fine but you're just
       | not getting the right traffic. It's way harder to figure out what
       | to do when nobody seems to care at all about what you've built.
        
       | quickthrower2 wrote:
       | Sound like you have a sophisticated audience who are used to
       | overly slick and modern landing pages. There is a good book about
       | knowing where your market is at [1] in terms of sophistication.
       | 
       | [1] https://breakthroughadvertisingbook.com
        
       | michaelscott wrote:
       | This is partially why UX research typically starts with rough
       | wireframes rather than full application design, even in front of
       | clients. The idea is that the lack of fidelity forces the
       | client/user to focus on the functionality of the app rather than
       | the bells and whistles of the design (especially of the visual
       | kind).
       | 
       | The impression I think is that the more polished a product or MVP
       | looks, the more "finished" it is and therefore the more open
       | it'll be to criticism (there's literally more of the product to
       | criticise). This could be a good thing, since it gives you much
       | more insight into what needs to be improved for the final product
        
         | MatthiasPortzel wrote:
         | > the more polished a product or MVP looks, the more "finished"
         | it is and therefore the more open it'll be to criticism
         | (there's literally more of the product to criticise).
         | 
         | I definitely agree with this, from what I've found both giving
         | and reviving feedback.
        
         | seanwilson wrote:
         | > This is partially why UX research typically starts with rough
         | wireframes rather than full application design, even in front
         | of clients. The idea is that the lack of fidelity forces the
         | client/user to focus on the functionality of the app rather
         | than the bells and whistles of the design (especially of the
         | visual kind).
         | 
         | I've found the tricky stage to be when you're getting closer to
         | high-fidelity but you're not quite there yet and need client
         | feedback to progress. Caveating everything the client should
         | "ignore for now" can be exhausting and sometimes doesn't work
         | (e.g. they'll nitpick the things you don't need feedback on
         | yet), but polishing everything to high-fidelity levels before
         | you can show it is incredibly time consuming. Are there any
         | interesting tricks at this stage?
         | 
         | I also use the phrase "uncanny valley" for this in-between
         | stage of design where there's a risk the client is going to
         | harshly judge parts of the design that aren't ready for
         | feedback yet. Is there another phrase for this?
         | 
         | I'll usually try to gauge at the start of a project how
         | receptive the client is to brainstorming over rough work
         | because it's much more efficient this way.
        
           | mrcartmeneses wrote:
           | It really depends how strong the client brand is and how
           | competent the client staff are that you're working with.
           | 
           | But the important thing is to take an evidence-based
           | approach.
           | 
           | A good idea is to keep it low fidelity for as long as
           | possible until the UX is worked out and tested. Then high-fi
           | it along the brand guidelines.
           | 
           | Then test test test, again.
           | 
           | The best way of getting a good result for your client is to
           | take an evidence-based approach where the initial product is
           | set up as an experimental baseline and further improvements
           | are tested against that baseline, be that through automated
           | A-B testing or focus groups of representative users.
           | 
           | Focus on getting something small to market as soon as
           | possible and adding/improving features in an evidence-based
           | way.
           | 
           | If the client has feedback you don't like, test it anyway and
           | charge them. They might be right.
           | 
           | Focus group testing should take place before presenting to
           | clients. Use paper prototypes with paper cutouts or using an
           | app such as POP.
           | 
           | Don't guess! Test!
           | 
           | As a rule when doing UX you want three possible designs (one
           | of which should be a bit "out there") and you should test
           | each design with representative users. You learn a lot more
           | from in person research than from A/B testing. A/B testing
           | should always be used to verify changes or features. But you
           | need to focus group at the design stage.
        
             | seanwilson wrote:
             | I agree with this but I was more thinking about the jump
             | from low to high fidelity mockups for the MVP landing page
             | scenario where there isn't strong branding yet and multiple
             | phases of user testing for many design choices isn't in
             | budget either. Even when the branding is strong, it's still
             | useful to brainstorm with the client over work in progress
             | for early feedback too.
             | 
             | As an aside, what do you do when clients are resistant to
             | doing user testing?
        
         | endymi0n wrote:
         | ...to the point that (great) UX and wireframing tools like
         | Balsamiq look crappy _on purpose_:
         | https://balsamiq.com/wireframes/
         | 
         | Which all kinda makes sense, with the intuitive reasoning
         | being: If you had time and money to sink into a pixel-perfect
         | design, you're already one step beyond product-market fit, so
         | creating a too good impression might not work in your favor.
        
       | rsweeney21 wrote:
       | If I could offer some advice from the perspective of a developer
       | that has built several MVPs and done all my own design work.
       | (FWIW Two of my MVPs made it to real businesses generating over
       | $1M in ARR each.)
       | 
       | Find a product that has a design you want to emulate and just
       | copy it. Copy the colors, font styles, font sizes, element
       | spacing, drop shadows...everything. For the illustrations or
       | other content that is copy protected, just buy something that
       | looks similar from shutterstock or some other website. I've
       | followed this model repeatedly.
       | 
       | Design is important because a polished website can make you look
       | like you are a larger, well established company. But it's not
       | worth your time as a founder to master design.
       | 
       | That being said, the design on propertysquares.com looks
       | amateurish and makes me feel like you are small.
        
         | Normal_gaussian wrote:
         | Be careful with that copying. All that you are telling them to
         | copy is in fact implicitly copyrighted and forms part of the
         | deliberately designed image of the pages. Be particularly
         | careful copying from any company in the same space.
        
       | nkrisc wrote:
       | My experience presenting designs of various levels of fidelity,
       | is this:
       | 
       | If the design appears _obviously_ incomplete or unfinished, much
       | critical judgement is withheld since it 's assumed that whatever
       | criticism they have will be addressed by the final design.
       | Depending on your goal, this can be helpful or even
       | counterproductive (maybe the finished design _won 't_ be how they
       | assume it will be). Or others will instead focus on high-level
       | feedback like addressing the overall theme and direction instead
       | of the minutiae of the design.
       | 
       | If the design appears highly polished, then any issue, however
       | minor, is assumed to be "finalized" and thus the criticism pours
       | out.
       | 
       | If you make it appear completed, then people will assume it is in
       | fact completed. If you're still working on it, make it look
       | clearly unfinished.
       | 
       | However, no matter how much you stress it is a prototype or make
       | it look as such, _someone_ will still criticize the the fact it
       | 's all in black and white and all the text says "Lorem ipsum".
        
         | ohwellhere wrote:
         | Some app prototyping[0] have a "sketch" style that draws wobbly
         | lines in order to simulate this and promote this effect.
         | 
         | I've seen it first hand numerous times. Even if a
         | client/audience feels the need to offer feedback/criticism
         | ('cause they always do) the level of polish even affects how
         | they frame the feedback/criticism.
         | 
         | [0]: and data charting tools, presumably more
        
         | ab_testing wrote:
         | So back to geocities style page with an under construction gig.
         | :)
        
         | tannerc wrote:
         | This is exactly right.
         | 
         | I believe we're conditioned to understand various fidelities of
         | information based on the principles of design. These
         | fundamental principles--things like contrast, balance,
         | proportion, hierarchy, motion, and variety--help us determine
         | how to interpret what we experience.
         | 
         | For example: a webpage that has clear hierarchy of information,
         | is visually balanced, uses motion to attract attention and
         | convey concepts, is much more likely to be interpreted as a
         | final product. Whereas a page that is a bit disorganized may be
         | understood as in early development.
         | 
         | The problem is most landing pages are one page, so the creator
         | invests considerable time in making them look and work well,
         | leading to the perception of a complete project.
         | 
         | Then when the time comes to build a fully functional
         | website/product, there's a lot more to invest in and so less
         | time is spent.
         | 
         | Paradox of shipping an MVP product or business, I guess.
        
       | ilikeitdark wrote:
       | I'd personally get rid of the expression "dead simple". Dead or
       | any other negative words should be avoided.
        
       | brudgers wrote:
       | To get to a MVP, the focus should be on making the product better
       | not the landing page better.
       | 
       | Making the landing page better is easy pretend work.
       | 
       | Making the product better is hard real work.
       | 
       | Good luck.
        
       | etewiah wrote:
       | So, some explanation is due here. My site is not ready for a
       | public launch yet - I just made this post because of what I found
       | out from testing with a small number of my friends. A few people
       | followed my profile to find out what I am working on and now the
       | cat's out of the bag - on the one hand I'm happy for the
       | publicity but on the other hand I'm bummed that I'm not ready for
       | it.
       | 
       | Believe me, the site was worse a few weeks ago - or at least a
       | lot more basic. The feedback I got from the few people I showed
       | that site to was quite positive though. As I made what I thought
       | were improvements though I started getting more and more negative
       | feedback hence the observation in my original post.
       | 
       | True, some of what I thought were improvements probably made the
       | site worse. The lesson I've learnt is still valid though - I
       | should have paid someone early on in the product development
       | stage to take care of the UI.
       | 
       | I will pay someone this week to do that and hopefully launch
       | properly sometime in June. I bet when I actually do a "Show HN"
       | with a decent looking landing page it will not garner as much
       | interest as this has - people love picking out mistakes!
       | 
       | Still, a big thank you to everyone who has provided feedback.
       | I've fixed the obvious errors. Will tackle the others when I get
       | the chance.
        
       | codeptualize wrote:
       | I do think there is something like the uncanny valley effect. The
       | distinction is likely "no design"/minimalism vs "bad design".
       | 
       | Some pages show very clearly that the focus was not on designing
       | a good looking appealing page, either minimal on purpose, or just
       | a bit dated (like hackernews, or old reddit). Not bad, it's
       | familiar, functional, fine.
       | 
       | Other pages are designed to do other things; for example evoke
       | desire, excitement and/or delight (like Apple, Stripe).
       | 
       | Then there are pages that want to be Apple, but don't quite
       | succeed. A lot of websites that use Bootstrap or material design
       | are like that. It's superficial design, they have some of the
       | styles, but it's very clear there is a lack of design, lack of
       | storytelling, lack of substance. It's a bit cringy to look at, it
       | evokes negative feelings.
       | 
       | That doesn't mean all is lost, even experienced designers often
       | go through that phase in the design process, they just are
       | unlikely to release it haha. Keep asking yourself questions; What
       | do I want it to do? Why isn't it doing it right now? Why does it
       | look off? Look at examples that do achieve what you want, what
       | exactly is it that is different? Etc etc. And then iterate,
       | iterate, iterate.
       | 
       | Design often looks simple/obvious, but it takes a lot of
       | practice, perseverance and struggle to get good at it.
        
       | samwillis wrote:
       | I can't find it now, but I remember reading about 10 years ago
       | about how long and ugly landing pages convert better. Now, I
       | wouldn't necessarily subscribe to that theory, but it's an
       | interesting one.
        
         | marban wrote:
         | You mixed up pure and objectively ugly with ugly by design and
         | unique.
        
         | bryanph_ wrote:
         | Here's a weird take: because the landing page is so vague the
         | user doesn't know whether the app is useful or not so the user
         | will sign up just to take a look at the app to figure out what
         | it actually is. Once the user realizes it isn't for them they
         | bounce. So higher signup rate, higher bounce rate in this case?
         | Total baseless speculation here :D
        
         | password4321 wrote:
         | https://hn.algolia.com/?query=lingscars&sort=byDate&type=com...
        
       | a_square_peg wrote:
       | I think there is definitely an 'uncanny valley' with web pages
       | and why UX-designers exist.
       | 
       | When a non-designer makes an update, there is always something
       | off, whether it's the font, color-scheme, or sizing that's quite
       | apparent. I'm not a designer myself but I think I can tell when a
       | website had a lot of effort put into the initial design but not
       | so much on maintenance and content updates - something always
       | seems a bit off.
        
       | laurencei wrote:
       | "I have noticed that as I build better landing pages for my MVPs
       | I get judged more harshly"
       | 
       | Can I ask - why do you think you are building a "better" landing
       | page? If you are getting judged more harshly, doesnt that mean
       | your pages are not actually "better"? Maybe as you are building
       | more pages, your subjective opinion of your own designs has
       | changed....
       | 
       | I've seen it a few times on MVPs launched here. Some new YC
       | company and their flashy homepage, but when I browse the homepage
       | I have no idea _what_ the company _actually_ does. The pages are
       | clean, but the actual idea is vague...
        
         | etewiah wrote:
         | I should have phrased it better. By "better" landing pages I
         | meant more polished with well thought out fonts, colors, text
         | etc.
        
           | rapnie wrote:
           | Maybe just adding some lines of clarification on the state of
           | your MVP is enough to bring back expectations to a more
           | appropriate level ( _" Currently we have [this], for [these
           | reasons]. [Here's] what is on the roadmap"_).
        
             | zupa-hu wrote:
             | Problem is, people don't read before forming a first
             | impression.
        
           | marcinzm wrote:
           | Design does not live in a vacuum. The landing page of a
           | children's game is going to be different than that of a B2B
           | SaaS product. The point of a good design is to convey the
           | brand and a message around the brand rather than to just
           | "look good." If you're an MVP then part of the message is
           | likely that you're an MVP.
        
           | krono wrote:
           | People don't want a drill, they want a hole in their wall.
           | 
           | To me, "better" means more effective i.e. higher conversion
           | rate, wider reach, etc.
        
             | mrcartmeneses wrote:
             | I have two drills: A cordless Makita that be do almost
             | anything including being used as a driver and will go all
             | day long without charge; and a corded Bosch that can go
             | through concrete and stone like butter. I do use them to
             | put holes in my wall. But I value them for being fucking
             | awesome drills too
        
         | Majings wrote:
         | I think the implication is that the product/application which
         | the landing page is promoting is being judged more harshly,
         | rather than the landing page itself.
        
           | IMSAI8080 wrote:
           | But it may be the "better" landing page is less clear, which
           | makes it more frustrating to understand the product, which
           | has a side effect of causing a negative opinion of it. So in
           | this case the landing page is not better because it's failing
           | in it's core job of communicating the product.
           | 
           | It's common design these days to have landing pages that are
           | a giant photo with huge text where you have to scroll for for
           | a mile to be rewarded with nothing but platitudes and
           | hyperbole, one sentence at a time. The simpler page which
           | actually explains the product functionality and the pricing
           | in clear language on one page would be better from the user's
           | perspective.
        
       | ChrisMarshallNY wrote:
       | I worked (in the US), with a French guy, who had lived in the US
       | for many years (as an adult).
       | 
       | He had very little accent. He had obviously worked very hard to
       | remove the accent (big job), but he still understood English as a
       | secondary language, and sometimes had difficulty comprehending
       | dialogue (especially in New York, where we talk quickly).
       | 
       | People didn't cut him slack for the lack of comprehension, where
       | I think they would have, if he had a stronger accent.
       | 
       | I also knew an Italian, who had a strong accent, but a better
       | command of English than most native speakers. I think he
       | deliberately played his accent up.
        
         | marban wrote:
         | Famous people 'trademark' their deliberate accent all the time.
         | From Schwarzenegger to Wolfgang Puck, etc
        
           | DonHopkins wrote:
           | I love Jesse Jackson's eloquent preacher's Black sermonic
           | tradition!
           | 
           | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A1mqg4C0awA
           | 
           | >Green Eggs and Ham narrated by the Reverand Jesse Jackson
           | 
           | >What was great about this skit was that absolutely nobody in
           | that studio even knew Jesse Jackson was there outside of
           | Kevin Nealon who anchored Weekend Update and Lorne Michaels.
           | It was a great surprise to everyone and completely
           | unscripted. Jesse just absolutely nailed that reading.
           | 
           | https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_sermonic_tradition
        
           | QuercusMax wrote:
           | Amusingly enough, Schwarzenegger's Austrian accent is the
           | German version of a hillbilly accent or something, so in
           | German dubs of his movies, they use a different voice actor.
           | I'm told Germans think watching his movies in English is
           | weird because his voice is "wrong".
        
             | ChrisMarshallNY wrote:
             | They liked him in Japan:
             | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XRLe826lyao
        
             | Maultasche wrote:
             | When I lived in Germany, I saw a video clip of Arnold
             | speaking German. To my great surprise, he had the same
             | accent when speaking German that he does when speaking
             | English. He apparently speaks a regional dialect from the
             | part of Austria he comes from, and it really affects how he
             | sounds.
        
         | simonebrunozzi wrote:
         | Italian here. Great English language skills, lived in SF for
         | ~10 years until 2020.
         | 
         | A great trick is to keep some of your accent, so people would
         | know for sure you're a foreigner, but also surprise them with
         | words that only the most literate people would know.
         | 
         | How to do it? Easier if your native language is Italian and you
         | studied Latin at school. There's hundreds of words like that
         | that naturally come to you as the ones you would use if you had
         | to say the same thing in your native Italian language.
        
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           | raverbashing wrote:
           | I agree.
           | 
           | I'd say I have met a lot of native speakers that, while
           | obviously native, have poor vocabulary skills (and also make
           | some grammar mistakes - but not the ones the ESL students
           | usually make)
           | 
           | It's not surprising to have people that have trouble with
           | words like rotund, pulmonary, saturnine, among others. (Or
           | the usual mistakes like "should of", "it's" when they mean
           | "its", etc)
        
             | solveit wrote:
             | > Or the usual mistakes like "should of", "it's" when they
             | mean "its", etc
             | 
             | Incidentally, these (or at least the first) are the
             | mistakes that _only_ native speakers and very fluent people
             | make.
        
         | SenHeng wrote:
         | Foreigners in Japan have the same issue. Pretend not to speak a
         | lick of Japanese and you'll get great service. Speak just a
         | little and suddenly they think you can read Archimedes (or the
         | Japanese equivalent).
        
           | null_object wrote:
           | > Pretend not to speak a lick of Japanese and you'll get
           | great service.
           | 
           | Same here in Sweden: I look South European, so if I speak
           | Swedish I'm just a 'foreigner', if I speak English I'm a
           | tourist who should be impressed by how welcoming and friendly
           | the locals are.
        
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             | wasmitnetzen wrote:
             | As a German in Sweden, asking "Do you speak English?" in
             | Swedish works very rarely. Apparently my accent isn't bad
             | enough. I'm now usually asking "Can we speak English with
             | each other?" (in Swedish) which I find a bit more rude, but
             | works a lot better.
        
               | telesilla wrote:
               | I do the same, it works the world over. Especially if you
               | go the extra mile to learn to say "I am learning, but
               | your language is challenging and I know you will have a
               | better command of English" which serves to flatter and
               | gets you great service.
        
           | marban wrote:
           | They're also aware how difficult it is to learn so you get
           | the extra props for trying. My wife learned Japanese to full
           | professional proficiency and we basically get the extra
           | acknowledgment all the time.
        
           | bitwize wrote:
           | My experience was the opposite. Pretend to speak no Japanese
           | and you will get baffled looks and maybe asked to leave the
           | store. At best you will be treated a little coldly. Speak a
           | little and they will be most accommodating. They will help
           | you fill in the gaps of your language knowledge and do their
           | best to make your experience in Japan smoother.
           | 
           | Overall, Japanese people really are culturally and
           | linguistically fairly isolated on their little island chain
           | -- _and they hate it_. One of the upshots of this is that
           | fluent or even conversational English speakers are quite rare
           | in Japan; and another is that anything and anyone from
           | "overseas" is a potential source of fascination and wonder.
           | (A little scary, too.) So when it comes particularly to the
           | young (< 50 y.o. give or take), as a foreign tourist you will
           | find yourself surrounded by people mildly to extremely
           | intrigued in making a cross-cultural connection -- seeking a
           | "borderless feeling" -- but they have no idea how. With a bit
           | of conversational Japanese, you can establish lines of
           | communication with the Japanese you meet and kick off that
           | connection process, for which they will be quite grateful.
           | 
           | At the very least, learn how to ask for an English speaker if
           | one is available. I did this once in a frozen yogurt shop,
           | and was introduced to the manager, a 22-year-old who wanted
           | to tell me all about her time as an exchange student in
           | California (as well as how to buy yogurt in the shop).
           | 
           | Of course, this was Osaka. So maybe they were just super-
           | accommodating to me so they would get my business. (By
           | comparison to Tokyo, Osaka is hustle town -- matters of
           | decorum and cultural appropriateness can be put aside if it
           | means more business.)
        
             | LAC-Tech wrote:
             | _Of course, this was Osaka. So maybe they were just super-
             | accommodating to me so they would get my business. (By
             | comparison to Tokyo, Osaka is hustle town -- matters of
             | decorum and cultural appropriateness can be put aside if it
             | means more business.)_
             | 
             | LOL this is my experience in Taiwan. I find my Mandarin is
             | miraculously much better at the night markets than it is
             | when asking directions.
             | 
             | Honestly I love being a poor mandarin speaker in Taiwan. I
             | am pretty sure a good chunk of the population has better
             | english than my mando, but if I start with madarin they
             | will respond in kind 90% of the time. My theory is that
             | they're happy for me to struggle with a language than to do
             | the same themselves - fine by me, great opportunity to
             | practice!
        
               | bitwize wrote:
               | > My theory is that they're happy for me to struggle with
               | a language than to do the same themselves
               | 
               | Relatedly, and famously, Shigeru Miyamoto takes interview
               | questions in English and understands it fairly well, but
               | responds via interpreter simply because the idea of
               | people hearing him struggle with English embarrasses him.
        
           | wccrawford wrote:
           | My wife and I went to Tokyo, and it stayed in a hotel by
           | Disney. We spent like 4-5 days in Tokyo itself, and another
           | 4-5 at the Disney parks.
           | 
           | My experience, everywhere in Tokyo from small restaurants to
           | Disney, was that everyone was nervous to try to speak English
           | with me, but willing to try. Even the waitress at one
           | restaurant that clearly didn't speak much English.
           | 
           | When I tried to speak Japanese, they were _delighted_. My
           | language partners have highly praised my accent, which I
           | understand to mean that I 'm not completely horrible. And I
           | have a decent basic vocabulary and horrible grammar.
           | 
           | I have had some instances (both in Tokyo and with my language
           | partners who were _not_ in Tokyo) where they suddenly started
           | talking way above my level, and I had to ask them to explain
           | things, but I think that 's just the weirdness of talking to
           | a full grown adult that speaks like a child, and trying to
           | manage that situation.
        
             | imadethis wrote:
             | The Ri Ben Yu Shang Shou desune! (lit. your Japanese is
             | good) phenomenon. You know you've made it when your
             | Japanese stops getting complimented. Obligatory Dogen:
             | https://youtu.be/Qmfipv-H4_o
        
               | senko wrote:
               | I believe this is true for most languages.
               | 
               | I've had the same happen (and then stop happening, to my
               | delight) to me with English (non-native speaker with
               | fairly strong Eastern European accent).
        
               | throwawaymaths wrote:
               | Except french (in Paris and Quebec -- _some_ other parts
               | of France do this IME, no clue about the rest of the
               | francophone world)
        
               | loufe wrote:
               | What do you mean to say here?
        
             | t_mann wrote:
             | > My language partners have highly praised my accent, which
             | I understand to mean that I'm not completely horrible.
             | 
             | Not trying to be mean at all, but one should be careful
             | with such assumptions, especially in a country like Japan
             | that that abounds with social norms and codes that
             | foreigners are almost guaranteed to get wrong.
        
               | wccrawford wrote:
               | You're correct about being careful about assumptions
               | about culture, but I'm not assuming much here. I've been
               | told and read many times that that's what that means.
        
           | dpifke wrote:
           | I got really frustrated the first time I spent an extended
           | period of time in Germany, and was trying to learn German.
           | Every time I tried to practice the language, native speakers
           | would immediately switch to English.
           | 
           | I assumed this was because my German sucked.
           | 
           | Someone finally explained to me that my beginner German was
           | fine, but most people relished the opportunity to practice
           | their English.
           | 
           | I learned to just keep going in broken German, my
           | conversation partner in broken English. For the most part, it
           | worked.
        
             | theturtle32 wrote:
             | I'm trying in earnest to learn Spanish, and am at
             | intermediate level. I've had similar experiences trying to
             | use Spanish in various contexts particularly in Southern
             | California where I live, where there are a ton of native
             | Spanish speakers that also speak English, and most of them
             | speak FAR better English than I speak Spanish. Years into
             | my language-learning adventure, I continue to feel super
             | intimidated to try to use my Spanish here, locally, because
             | people so often compliment my accent but the conversation
             | quickly switches to English. I always feel like I'm
             | creating frustration and inconvenience by trying to
             | practice my Spanish, though it could just be my nervousness
             | and desire to people-please that lead me to feel that way.
             | 
             | I've had more of this kind of experience (Me speaking
             | intermediate Spanish, with my conversation partner speaking
             | intermediate English) in places outside of my home area
             | where people are more likely to speak Spanish than English
             | on a regular basis: a range of Latin American countries
             | that I've visited, and especially when I visited the U.S.
             | territory of Puerto Rico.
        
               | codethief wrote:
               | You should come to southern Spain. Here, no one speaks
               | English.
        
             | Maultasche wrote:
             | I had the same experience when I was doing an internship in
             | Germany. One particular coworker kept speaking English to
             | me, despite everyone else speaking German to me. At this
             | point, I had lived there for a year already and spoke
             | German pretty well, so comprehension definitely wasn't an
             | issue.
             | 
             | I think he was either used to speaking English with non-
             | Germans or just liked having the opportunity to speak
             | English.
             | 
             | I just kept replying in German and he eventually switched
             | to speaking German to me.
        
             | TomK32 wrote:
             | As a German it took me quite some practice to get over this
             | nicety and stick to German when talking with a foreigner
             | who's bad at German but knows decent English.
        
             | t_mann wrote:
             | There might be something else at play too - it's probably
             | harder for them to remind themselves to slow down / speak
             | in a sufficiently 'textbook-like' style in their own
             | language than it is for them to switch to English.
        
         | robocat wrote:
         | Off-topic, but perfect comedy sketch on exactly that - see link
         | in comment: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=31498200
        
         | thefz wrote:
         | > I also knew an Italian, who had a strong accent, but a better
         | command of English than most native speakers. I think he
         | deliberately played his accent up.
         | 
         | Italian here with a decent grasp of the English language.
         | 
         | 1) some sounds are harder to learn how to pronunciate,
         | especially for American English, and especially 'R' based ones
         | 
         | 2) with time I've grown fond of my accent and wear it as a
         | distinctive badge. Most of my English speaking, European
         | colleagues do the same. Everyone has their own and it makes
         | part of our personality.
        
           | gnicholas wrote:
           | > _1) some sounds are harder to learn how to pronunciate,
           | especially for American English, and especially 'R' based
           | ones_
           | 
           | I would never correct this in a different context, but the
           | word you're looking for is simply "pronounce".
        
             | solveit wrote:
             | or "enunciate", which I guess is what got mixed up.
        
               | cma wrote:
               | Enunciate is wrong here I think, enunciating a word is
               | saying it kind of slow and clear so someone can better
               | understand how it is pronounced.
        
           | itronitron wrote:
           | I'm curious to know when you first considered yourself to
           | have an accent.
        
           | ChrisMarshallNY wrote:
           | _> 2) with time I 've grown fond of my accent and wear it as
           | a distinctive badge. Most of my English speaking, European
           | colleagues do the same. Everyone has their own and it makes
           | part of our personality._
           | 
           | I like that. My acquaintance used to have to peel the girls
           | off him.
           | 
           | I have a very strange accent, that has been stepped on, by
           | many years of traveling.
           | 
           | As a child, I had a British accent, then, I lived in
           | Maryland, and got a slightly "Southern" accent. I have lived
           | in New York for the last thirty years, so that has also
           | affected my accent.
           | 
           | Plus, I have a scratchy, high-pitched voice, anyway (vocal
           | cord damage, as a kid).
        
             | ohwellhere wrote:
             | I am American and have a slight Southern/rural USA accent
             | (much less slight when visiting family), and the responses
             | I get vary so wildly. Some Irish women I met in a bar
             | absolutely loved it, while in big cities in the USA I am
             | sometimes assumed to be an absolute moron.
        
               | ChrisMarshallNY wrote:
               | I get that, a lot, around here; especially when I say
               | "howdy!".
               | 
               | In the real South, Marylanders are considered damn
               | Yankees.
               | 
               | In New York, we're considered damn rednecks.
        
               | zasdffaa wrote:
               | I'm a brit, I don't know much about stuff, so, what is
               | implied by 'yankee'? I wasn't aware it was still used -
               | Is it an insult? And something to do with the civil war?
               | Why are you considered a 'damn Yankee' by Marylanders?
               | 
               | I assumed redneck was an insult but it seems not always
               | from what I've heard. I guess it is here. But what does
               | it mean?
               | 
               | These may seem odd questions but I truly don't know. TIA
        
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               | ilc wrote:
               | "Yankee" is a term used in the south for a northerner.
               | 
               | It is usually not used a positive way.
               | 
               | Much the same, "redneck" is not meant in a positive way
               | up north.
               | 
               | As with many insults, the group the insult is hurled at
               | can own it, and take it up as a term of almost
               | endearment.
        
               | mhink wrote:
               | tl;dr- the joke here is that a Southerner would think
               | Maryland is "the North", and a Northerner would think
               | Maryland is "the South".
               | 
               | "Yankee" is/was a derogatory term for Northerners, most
               | typically used by Southerners during the Civil War and
               | Reconstruction eras. If you want to get technical, it
               | applies most strongly to New Englanders, but when used by
               | a Southerner, it's a pretty broad brush. Nowadays, you'd
               | be hard pressed to actually find someone using the term
               | "yankee" in any sort of serious or angry way. It's much
               | more common to hear it in a tongue-in-cheek way, which is
               | how the parent commenter was using it.
               | 
               | "Damn Yankee" is something of a stereotypical phrase you
               | might hear from that time period, especially
               | Reconstruction, when there were still a lot of hard
               | feelings about the war, as well as about Northerners who
               | moved south to participate in Reconstruction, often known
               | as "carpetbaggers" and who were thought of as
               | profiteering from the situation.
               | 
               | But nowadays it's more of a cultural joke, or meme. Like
               | for example, if someone were to recommend me a barbecue
               | restaurant in, like, Vermont or something, I might say "I
               | don't know if I trust a damn Yankee to make good
               | barbecue!" (To be fair, I would have very low
               | expectations all the same. Barbecue just isn't the same
               | outside the South.)
               | 
               | As for "redneck": it's still something of a disparaging
               | term, and connotes poverty, poor education, and general
               | backwardness. It's sorta like the word "hillbilly" or
               | "country bumpkin", except with a more distinctly Southern
               | vibe. However, it's been partially reclaimed and is often
               | used by country folks to refer to themselves.
               | 
               | However, it's not exactly a term used only by
               | Northerners- it wouldn't be at all surprising to hear
               | (for instance) a Southern doctor or lawyer grumbling
               | about "a bunch of stupid rednecks" causing trouble.
        
               | axus wrote:
               | Washington, DC is the city of Northern charm and Southern
               | efficiency.
        
               | ChrisMarshallNY wrote:
               | _> Washington, DC is the city of Northern charm and
               | Southern efficiency._
               | 
               | Man, I wish I could multi-upvote...
        
               | i_am_jl wrote:
               | Some background before I answer your question:
               | 
               | Between the "North" and the "South" on the Eastern
               | seaboard there is a central area that is in some ways
               | renounced by both "regions". There's _some_ remainder of
               | the Civil War /Mason Dixon line there, but it doesn't
               | follow that delineation today.
               | 
               | For example, in New York someone who grew up in rural
               | Maryland would likely be viewed culturally as a
               | "Southerner". But so would someone from Western
               | Pennsylvania. So would someone from West Virginia,
               | despite West Virginia and Pennsylvania being part of the
               | Union. People in the Deep South would view residents of
               | these areas as "Yankees".
               | 
               | In both cases what is meant is that "Your cultural
               | experience is different enough from ours that you're not
               | 'us', you're 'them'." where 'them' is Southern or
               | Northern, wherever you're not. The thing is, there's a
               | big chunk of the mid-Atlantic seaboard that is unique,
               | not traditionally Southern or Northern.
               | 
               | "Redneck" is usually pejorative for a working class,
               | white, Southerner. When rednecks say "redneck" it usually
               | isn't an insult, but when others use the word it usually
               | is. Calling somewhere a "Redneck bar" is fine, but
               | calling someone in that bar a "redneck" is usually not.
               | 
               | "Yankee" is just a term for Northerner. I'm sure you
               | could say it as an insult, and I'm sure some people think
               | "yankee" is an insult, but if someone calls me a yankee
               | I'd happily agree with them.
        
               | antod wrote:
               | _> "Redneck" is usually pejorative for a working class,
               | white, Southerner. When rednecks say "redneck" it usually
               | isn't an insult, but when others use the word it usually
               | is. Calling somewhere a "Redneck bar" is fine, but
               | calling someone in that bar a "redneck" is usually not._
               | 
               | Here in NZ, "redneck" seems to be morphing away from the
               | "hick" or working class definitions to more of a "racist
               | bigot" connotation that could be applied more widely.
        
         | spaetzleesser wrote:
         | That happened to me when I moved to the US from Germany. When
         | my accent was stronger people talked slower which made it easy
         | to understand. Then my accent got better, people started
         | speaking at their normal speed and I didn't understand them.
         | 
         | Same happened to me in Spanish. I can pronounce Spanish pretty
         | well so when I was a beginner and said something to somebody in
         | Costa Rica they responded with full speed Spanish. So I had to
         | learn to mispronounce more.
        
         | tomcam wrote:
         | When my family goes traveling I am the designated "learn enough
         | local language to get by" person.
         | 
         | I know a little bit of Polish but I speak it with a perfect BBC
         | Polish accent. Worked a long time at it. I noticed that on
         | buses or in restaurants if I told people I didn't understand
         | Polish they completely ignored me and didn't simplify their
         | language. I think because I can speak my few words like a
         | native they just filtered out what I was saying.
         | 
         | The same was not true in Paris. I am not convinced I have a
         | great French accent, however.
        
           | marcus_holmes wrote:
           | I have the same in Berlin. My German is terrible, and I have
           | real problems understanding it. But I have learned to say
           | "Enscheldigung, mein Deutsch ist schlect" (excuse me, my
           | German is terrible) so well that I find a lot of Germans
           | assume I'm being modest and carry on speaking fluent German
           | to me.
        
             | solar-ice wrote:
             | That's a pure misunderstanding; saying your German is
             | terrible doesn't mean you want to speak English or you want
             | someone to say something in simpler words, it just means
             | your German is terrible.
        
               | stdbrouw wrote:
               | Actually, it does imply that you want the counterparty to
               | speak more slowly or otherwise accommodate you. Otherwise
               | there's no reason to point it out at all.
        
               | synu wrote:
               | I've found in Germany it's best to be direct and not rely
               | on implication to make your point.
        
               | jhugo wrote:
               | No, in Germany it just means what it says. If you wanted
               | them to speak slower you would have asked them to.
        
               | Vinnl wrote:
               | I could interpret it to mean "please excuse my mistakes",
               | which is some accommodation, but apparently not what they
               | were after.
        
               | Beldin wrote:
               | Yup. I would indeed take it to mean "apologies that i am
               | butchering this language and/or its grammar". Same thing
               | in The Netherlands: if you're excusing your command of
               | the language, that's polite. If you want to request
               | something, you'd ask. Eg, "nicht zo schnell, bitte".
        
               | DonHopkins wrote:
               | Or maybe they think he's saying "Entschuldigung, ich bin
               | ein schlechter Deutscher."
        
             | marban wrote:
             | You need to work on your Rechtschreibung, too
        
             | bigbacaloa wrote:
             | Germans understand you to mean that your German is
             | terrible, but since if you wanted them to slow down and
             | speak clearly you would have said so, they think nothing
             | more of it than that your German is terrible and you are
             | surprisingly self aware for an American (or whatever you
             | are).
        
           | CraigJPerry wrote:
           | My wife (Polish) frequently gets the cold treatment in busy
           | places when asking for help but my ridiculously rubbish
           | attempts at polish[1] end up with 5 star service and smiles.
           | Smiles in ex-communist small shops are not a thing afaict,
           | except when a foreigner tries to speak Polish.
           | 
           | Me speaking English gets the cold shoulder too. We've tried
           | this out in different situations where we don't make it known
           | we're together just so we can compare and contrast the
           | treatment.
           | 
           | [1] trying to buy a medium size bottle of water with "nie
           | duze, nie male woda nie gazowana po prosze"
        
           | gjulianm wrote:
           | French people can be quite special with the accent and
           | pronunciation, though. For some reason, it's the language
           | where I've had to work the most on the accent and
           | pronunciation to get understood. You can speak weird english
           | and people still understand what you say, but weird french
           | will get you nowhere.
        
             | louissan wrote:
             | Ah oui my friend. Speaking wiz zis accent is a libeRation
             | for uz French people.
        
             | tomcam wrote:
             | I've never had that problem, though I've only visited Paris
             | for more than a month or so at at time. I found the
             | Parisians play along politely with my no-doubt embarrassing
             | efforts.
        
             | vincentmarle wrote:
             | Reminds me of this video: https://twitter.com/killersundyma
             | nn/status/15297936834946826...
        
             | circlefavshape wrote:
             | > You can speak weird english and people still understand
             | what you say
             | 
             | Not necessarily. I'm Irish, and English is my first
             | language. Landing in Atlanta airport a few years ago I
             | asked some airport staff for directions to the bus, and
             | they looked at me blankly. It was only when I said "bus" in
             | a fake American accent that they understood
        
               | codethief wrote:
               | > You can speak weird english and people still understand
               | what you say
               | 
               | I suppose OP meant "weird _non-native_ English ".
               | 
               | Native accents, in my experience, are a different matter.
               | Certain non-American accents (Irish, Scottish come to
               | mind) are just very hard to understand for untrained
               | American ears that have never been exposed to them
               | before.
        
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           | thatjoeoverthr wrote:
           | Poles are just very neurotic about it. I didn't realize this
           | until I started to learn another language (Russian) so I
           | could put the experience of learning Polish in some kind of
           | context.
        
             | KptMarchewa wrote:
             | >Poles are just very neurotic about it.
             | 
             | I'm curious what you mean by that.
             | 
             | TBH I've seen non-slavic person speaking Polish only once,
             | so I don't even have an idea what I'd do in that situation.
        
             | tomcam wrote:
             | Well they had to keep their language alive in secret for a
             | century or so. And AFAIK even teenagers use relatively few
             | slangy terms, the exact opposite of how American youths
             | speak.
        
         | bitwize wrote:
         | Linus Torvalds is like this now. He's a far cry from the famous
         | recording of him saying "Hello, my name is Linus Torvalds and I
         | pronounce Linux as Linux." His American accent is quite good.
         | There are tells here and there, but as a European programmer he
         | has had some baseline English proficiency which he honed, along
         | with his accent, from his many years living in the USA.
        
       | jonnydubowsky wrote:
       | When i come to the page and let my eyes naturally scan through,
       | the phrase Dead Simple sticks out, which is probably not a great
       | catch phrase for this app. It'd be cool if instead, a GIF showing
       | the user experience led me right into trying it out with the
       | "enter address here" section.
        
       | pseudolus wrote:
       | I had to look up your profile and I'm assuming your site is
       | https://propertywebbuilder.com. It looks good but kind of bland
       | in that I can't recall ever having visited a real estate web site
       | that doesn't feature some actual photos of homes. Additionally,
       | you don't appear to have any links to sample pages that
       | incorporate your product.
       | 
       | edit: I noticed that at the very bottom there's a link to a demo
       | but the demo doesn't load.
        
         | puranjay wrote:
         | If I'm honest, the block height for many elements seems a
         | little off. We're used to individual sections occupying the
         | entire screen, but on this site, sections feel like they're
         | bleeding into each other.
         | 
         | Some of the internal elements also seem too squat and
         | compressed, especially the "what makes our websites special"
         | part
        
           | derbOac wrote:
           | Yeah, as a form of friendly feedback, there's something
           | vaguely untrustworthy-looking about the website, like a
           | malware site. Actually as I think about it, there _is_ an
           | uncanny valley phenomenon to me, but in a malware site sense.
           | 
           | To me it has something to do with the typeface choices,
           | and/or the text layout. My eye drifts to the text in the
           | upper left quadrant.
           | 
           | Lack of actual photos is maybe another thing but for me
           | personally there's more to it than that.
        
             | etewiah wrote:
             | Yeah, I didn't do a good job with the propertywebbuilder
             | landing page. With propertysquares I paid a lot less
             | attention to the landing page and found I was getting much
             | better engagement!
        
               | puranjay wrote:
               | Just as some constructive feedback, perhaps you can try a
               | different color palette. On PropertySquares as well, the
               | green, purple, and blue don't seem to mesh well together.
        
         | [deleted]
        
         | etewiah wrote:
         | Damn, I didn't think this post would get so popular. I actually
         | forgot to update my profile here. My current project is
         | https://propertysquares.com :(
        
           | nottorp wrote:
           | They both look like every other landing page i've seen in the
           | past 5 years. Maybe too much polish makes them all look the
           | same?
        
           | sogen wrote:
           | Some quick comments:
           | 
           | - Add more whitespace. Sections are too close to each other
           | 
           | - Reduce font size. The body text is way too large and
           | competes with headers
           | 
           | - Add padding. It would help to have some whitespace on the
           | left and right of your page.
        
           | notahacker wrote:
           | I'm viewing this on an atypical mobile screen, so it's
           | possible my user experience is a long way from the default,
           | but I think the problem here might be less "uncanny valley"
           | and more it being busy with conflicting and confusing user
           | action options. Perhaps before you had something very simple?
           | 
           | The images are fine and there's not much more _to_ the design
           | on mobile. But at the top I 'm told "you previously created a
           | home hunt" which I definitely didn't which links to a form
           | with prefilled demo passwords which is unusual, the main call
           | to action is below the fold, and I'm not sure how important
           | the link to donate to the project via OpenCollective is, but
           | I bet the average first time user is confused by it. The
           | other effect I can imagine is if the first cohort of viewers
           | was the sort of people that browse interesting FOSS projects
           | (who will have used a lot of software with worse landing
           | pages!) and the cohort looking at the current design are
           | homebuyers in general...
        
       | p0nce wrote:
       | I feel a bit of the same when making UIs. If the UI is obviously
       | bad/rushed then people will talk about the features more. If the
       | UI is nice and polished, people will find their own one way to
       | tell how it could have been 1% better.
        
       | alangibson wrote:
       | I'm getting ready to knock out a landing page to see if anyone is
       | interested in a QR code sales tool I built for myself. I'm now
       | thinking of having almost nothing but text explaining that 'hey
       | I'm just trying to gauge interest. Here's what it does in plain
       | language. Get on the mailing list of you're interested.' Almost
       | an anti-landing page.
        
       | BrandiATMuhkuh wrote:
       | I remember from my HCI class that the judgement of people varies
       | depending on how polished your design looks.
       | 
       | If you design looks hand drawn you will get creative feedback.
       | But if your design looks polished you will get binary (harsh)
       | feedback.
       | 
       | You can see that design tools like balsamic have different
       | renderings, exactly because of that.
        
       | jbreckmckye wrote:
       | Could it be your artwork? There is a general backlash against
       | "corporate Memphis", with its cartoonish style and self-assured
       | optimism:
       | 
       | https://t-artmagazine.com/what-is-corporate-memphis-and-why-...
       | 
       | > Illustrations in the style, with its aggressively friendly
       | expressions, portray a world that is uncannily utopian.
        
         | quickthrower2 wrote:
         | The problem isn't that it is bad, it is that it is a trope. I
         | associate the weirdly shaped human-like blobs and office
         | furniture artwork with "they wanna sell me a monthly plan", and
         | if it is one of the free stock looking ones I think "they want
         | me to pay monthly for this thing they knocked up this morning"
        
         | n8cpdx wrote:
         | I don't care about the design language, but what bothers me
         | about it is the idea that they paid someone to come up with an
         | illustration, when they could have used a screenshot.
         | 
         | Showing me corporate Memphis and hiding the product is a major
         | red flag.
        
       | d1sxeyes wrote:
       | Not sure what you mean by 'uncanny valley', this is just a simple
       | case of raising expectations. The better designed the landing
       | page, the higher the expectations of the product.
        
       | mtoddsmith wrote:
       | I'm gonna play stupid and ask "where do I get the url for the
       | properties I'm interested in". It's not explained at all on the
       | page.
        
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