[HN Gopher] Writing tools I learned from The Economist
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       Writing tools I learned from The Economist
        
       Author : ahsoli
       Score  : 368 points
       Date   : 2021-04-05 15:29 UTC (7 hours ago)
        
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       | achempion wrote:
       | They definitely have decent journalism but I just can't stand the
       | website and cancelled my subscription (although very liked
       | content and hope they fix website to make it usable).
       | 
       | The issue I have is that they display ads on a page. I don't mind
       | ads in general but they actually embed animated banners which are
       | very distracting and it worsens reading experience a lot, and you
       | have to pay for such a privilege to stare at flashy animated ads
       | of some clothing.
        
         | mjd95 wrote:
         | I also find it extremely annoying in the Economist. The New
         | Yorker has the same problem.
         | 
         | I used AdblockPlus which works well. I resent having to use an
         | ad blocker to read the journalism I'm a paid subscriber for,
         | but at least it works.
        
         | stevesimmons wrote:
         | The phone app is very good. I almost never use the Economist
         | web site.
        
         | randomsearch wrote:
         | The iPhone app is lovely
        
       | 1cvmask wrote:
       | The Economist has always been upfront about their bias in
       | coverage and that has helped them all along. They were
       | established to challenge the Corn Laws in the United Kingdom.
       | 
       | https://www.economist.com/free-exchange/2007/01/29/the-econo...
       | 
       | Their coverage of countries at odds to the US elite/national
       | security state ranges from being slanted to suspect word choice
       | to falsehood by omissions to complete lies.
       | 
       | They are open about being a mouthpiece and an advocate and not
       | impartial. Among the 100s (since 1843) of false coverage of
       | countries on the receiving end of Anglo Saxon imperial aggression
       | and genocide (English-speaking countries etc) look at their fake
       | coverage of the coup in Chile and more recently the one in
       | Bolivia. With non-white and non-European countries like Syria,
       | Iraq, Libya, Yemen, Vietnam etc they openly advocate their
       | destruction. (worth looking into their archives for those who
       | want to study manufactured consent)
       | 
       | This helps serve the policy objectives of lowering non-white
       | populations:
       | 
       | https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Replacement
        
         | jpttsn wrote:
         | You're suggesting the Economist is open about its globalist
         | bias, but meanwhile they also have another secret bias, which
         | is white supremacy?
        
       | supernova87a wrote:
       | If I took lessons in writing from the Economist, my writing would
       | appear to take a few scant observations and then apparently jump
       | to suggest what the world should do about a certain long unsolved
       | problem as if no one else had thought about that before, like
       | some sophomore at Oxford just discovering the 2nd chapter of a
       | textbook.
       | 
       | I find that style of writing a little bit obnoxious, so I have
       | not taken my lessons from the Economist.
        
         | kspacewalk2 wrote:
         | A lot more would be revealed by contrary examples, either yours
         | or those you greatly prefer, stylistically, over The Economist.
        
       | twobitshifter wrote:
       | The first lesson in the article gave me a junior high flashback.
       | We were supposed to organize our paragraphs into the form:
       | 
       | Introductory Sentence
       | 
       | Concrete detail
       | 
       | Commentary
       | 
       | Commentary
       | 
       | Concrete detail
       | 
       | Commentary
       | 
       | Commentary
       | 
       | Concrete detail
       | 
       | Commentary
       | 
       | Commentary
       | 
       | Concluding sentence
       | 
       | --- next paragraph
       | 
       | It works, but writing that way was such a toil. Sometimes there
       | is no value in 2 sentences of commentary and sometimes more
       | explanation is needed. Sometimes it's best to present three
       | details all at once, instead of one by one. My teacher lifted the
       | requirement on me after I ignored the rule but still wrote a
       | quality essay.
        
       | eli wrote:
       | The AP has some useful writing manuals beyond the styleguide they
       | are famous for. The _Guide To News Writing_ is a great place to
       | start and somewhere I 've got a book of just examples of ledes
       | (first sentences).
       | 
       | Being able to write in this style is useful for all kinds writing
       | besides reporting the news.
        
       | macintux wrote:
       | In high school, there were two magazines I'd read regularly: _The
       | Atlantic_ had an absurdly inexpensive subscription price (I think
       | it was $14 for 2 years at the time) and _The Economist_ was...not
       | inexpensive, so I'd just pick up a copy when I was fortunate
       | enough to visit a bookstore that carried it.
       | 
       | The Economist was the only magazine in my life I would regularly
       | read cover to cover. Every article revealed something I didn't
       | know about the world, or about my own country, and the
       | information was _dense_. Most articles were just a few
       | paragraphs, so I didn't have time to get bored before I'd move on
       | to the next one.
        
         | libeclipse wrote:
         | I really appreciate how The Economist packs articles full of
         | facts and information, allowing you to form your own opinion,
         | while still arguing an opinion of their own.
        
         | kristofferR wrote:
         | Such a shame that the paper quality became totally thrash [1].
         | 
         | The transparent/semi-translucent paper they switched to made it
         | absolutely unreadable for me. Such a shame, I really enjoyed
         | reading it. I read some articles online, but it's not the same
         | as having a magazine in my hands.
         | 
         | https://www.quora.com/Why-is-The-Economist-printed-on-such-t...
        
           | xycodex wrote:
           | I'm not too sure about the paper quality/weight/foldability
           | tradeoff, but I appreciate the fact that it's really light
           | and I can just fold it in half and stuff it into my inside
           | jacket pocket and go out and read it over coffee.
        
         | csomar wrote:
         | I'm not sure if it's universal; where I live, the US embassy
         | offers free magazines for anyone (and, yes, they have The
         | Economist). The downside is that they are a couple months old.
        
           | CalChris wrote:
           | Yeah, they usually have a library. I read the papers at the
           | library at the American Embassy in Prague. Apparently Kafka
           | used to work there.
           | 
           | https://d2v9ipibika81v.cloudfront.net/uploads/sites/22/2015/.
           | ..
        
         | 3pt14159 wrote:
         | I did the same thing when I was roughly 15 or so. What was
         | funny about The Economist subscription at the time was that it
         | asked you your honorific (Mr., Mrs., etc.) and I checked off
         | "Sir." thinking of it as harmless high school mischief.
         | 
         | Little did I know that I inadvertently set off a tracking
         | campaign into whom they resold subscriber data to. I would get
         | all sorts of promotional magazines and other unsolicited mail
         | for "Sir. Zach Aysan" or similar. Still makes me chuckle to
         | this day.
        
           | loughnane wrote:
           | I did exactly the same. It's still funny.
        
         | JackFr wrote:
         | Among other things, in the US, the Economist was the only news
         | magazine which covered Africa and Latin America consistently.
         | 
         | If you were literate and interested, after being exposed to the
         | Economist it was impossible to read Time, Newsweek or US News &
         | World Report. It was eye-opening just how bad they were.
        
           | macintux wrote:
           | US News & World Report in particular was embarrassingly bad,
           | but I felt the worst when traveling abroad and the only US
           | newspaper I saw in some locations was USA Today. What they
           | must think of us.
        
             | ghaff wrote:
             | USA Today was deliberately created as a colorful low-brow
             | but not really tabloid-y paper that, among other places,
             | tended to be the paper of choice to leave outside your
             | hotel room in the morning. My favorite quote about it was
             | something to the effect of: "It's the newspaper for people
             | who find the nightly news too challenging to understand."
        
             | CalChris wrote:
             | Back in the day when the _International Herald Tribune_ was
             | publishing, I 'd read it. It was 8 pages and available at
             | most train stations. It was bits of the _NY Times_ and
             | _Washington Post_. I don 't think it had any original
             | content but the ads were interesting. The _USA Today_ was
             | available but it really wasn 't any good.
        
           | subsubzero wrote:
           | I have been reading the economist for 4+ years now, my
           | primary reason for reading it are having an outside view on
           | the US which delivers a perspective alot of US based
           | newspapers don't have. (I'm based in the US).
           | 
           | In addition they have alot of military/technology coverage
           | and extensive China coverage. US news really did not cover
           | the fact that Xi Jinping is now China's leader for life(2018,
           | which is huge news) the economist wrote several articles
           | about this. They also tend to do pretty well with macro trend
           | analysis and predictions.
           | 
           | Lastly there are no long form/in the weeds articles which I
           | just really don't have time for, think vanity Fair, Atlantic,
           | and the New Yorker.
        
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           | krrrh wrote:
           | In the nineties I was targeted by a direct mail campaign they
           | ran on Canadians with the eye-catching title "Un-American",
           | in which then made the pitch that it was a reliable source of
           | world news that wasn't overly dominated by a US perspective.
           | It worked, and I subscribed for a decade.
        
       | 0_____0 wrote:
       | I too enjoy the economist. Their level-headed style and
       | combination of numeracy and humanism are welcome in an often
       | dogmatic and sensationalist media climate.
       | 
       | The tools that you describe are how all news should be written!
       | The inverted pyramid of information -- broad but important bits
       | at the top, details at the bottom -- is a structure I remember
       | from my high school newspaper class.
       | 
       | I do want to point out that there's a fine line between using
       | precise words and being intelligible to the public. "Traduced,"
       | as you introduce in example, isn't a common word where I'm from,
       | and could be expressed in other ways (slandered, defamed,
       | maligned) that are in more common circulation. A case of 'know
       | thine audience' I suppose.
        
         | kwhitefoot wrote:
         | > where I'm from Where is that? And is maligned that much more
         | common than traduced? Is either one intelligible to the average
         | person in the street (wherever they are from)?
         | 
         | Anyway, I quite like to read a word that I have never used, it
         | enriches my vocabulary.
        
           | 0_____0 wrote:
           | I'm from the West Coast, USA. I'm familiar with The Economist
           | and find that their vocabulary selection trends toward words
           | used in the Commonwealth. "Traduced" is far more commonly
           | used in the UK than in the US, if use in search terms is to
           | be believed [1]
           | 
           | I also enjoy learning new words, but the point of the article
           | was how to communicate clearly, not how to enrich your
           | readers' vocabularies.
           | 
           | [1]: https://trends.google.com/trends/explore/GEO_MAP/1617643
           | 200?...
           | 
           | [edit: and here's a comparison map showing that maligned is
           | searched for over traduced at a ratio of 7:3 in the UK, 9:1
           | in the US. https://trends.google.com/trends/explore?q=traduce
           | d,maligned... ]
        
             | pessimizer wrote:
             | Also, "traduce" is euphemistic, so you can't be sure what
             | it means even if you know the Latin. In romance languages
             | it just means "translate."
        
               | kwhitefoot wrote:
               | But in English it does not mean translated. In that sense
               | it is a false friend, it shares etymology with Romanian
               | traduce but not meaning.
        
       | great_reversal wrote:
       | Thought this was about writing tools in Go...
        
       | sandGorgon wrote:
       | This is the latest version of the Economist Style Guide -
       | http://cdn.static-economist.com/sites/default/files/pdfs/sty...
        
       | martingoodson wrote:
       | I highly recommend subscribing to the Economist. Every week I
       | flip through the edition on the app, saving interesting-looking
       | articles. Then I _listen_ to the saved articles in order when I'm
       | cooking or whatever. It's like having a personalised, world-class
       | podcast on topics of your choosing. I only recently realised that
       | all of the articles are made available in audio form to
       | subscribers. The subscription is a steal for this service.
        
       | bolzano wrote:
       | While The Economist has some redeeming factors and is often worth
       | reading, it should be noted that it is not the objective
       | dispassionate newspaper it claims to be. The Financial Times is
       | far more honest about its commitments.
       | 
       | It is one of the main journals of the liberal business elite and
       | has a fairly awful (and fascinating) anti labour history. It
       | cloaks itself in a casual Oxbridge patina of disinterested
       | expertise, but at its core, it radically advocates for liberal
       | international capital, deregulation and privatisation.
       | Neoliberalism to use a modern polysyllabic word.
       | 
       | Its stance towards the Irish famine should give one a taste of
       | its beliefs, and they haven't changed much in 170 years or so...
       | There have been some wonderful articles written on this
       | publication, and I'd urge anyone to take a look at the
       | publication from another angle.
       | 
       | [1] What the Economist doesn't tell you -
       | https://www.prospectmagazine.co.uk/magazine/what-the-economi...
       | 
       | [2] "The Economics of the Colonial Cringe," about The Economist
       | magazine; Washington Post, 1991 -
       | https://www.theatlantic.com/technology/archive/1991/10/-quot...
       | 
       | [3] How The Economist Thinks -
       | https://www.currentaffairs.org/2017/05/how-the-economist-thi...
        
         | martingoodson wrote:
         | This is from a recent edition-is it 'radically advocating' for
         | deregulation?
         | 
         | 'Today big tech is in disrepute, not unlike banks after the
         | Wall Street Crash of 1929 and the situation in 2008. In both
         | cases, regulators marched in. [...] Lawmakers and regulators
         | should apply that ethos by imposing similar obligations on the
         | tech titans'
        
         | anonu wrote:
         | I've been a long-time reader of the Economist - probably
         | started reading it around age 13 before they went full color
         | (an event that made me think they would lose a bit of their
         | sober reporting). Over the years I've picked up on their
         | neoliberal stance on world affairs - they are not a neutral
         | party by any means. They push some strong opinions and often
         | venture into predictions on future political events that, more
         | often than not in recent years, have turned out flat wrong.
        
       | tlaagag wrote:
       | From an ideological of view, the Economist is a prime example of
       | things that, in my opinion, are not very like-able about "the
       | anglophone world". So it's probably only consequent to learn
       | english with it and immerse oneself in the proper mindset along
       | the way.
        
       | hnmullany wrote:
       | The reason why the Economist articles all read the same is that
       | they go through a process called "subbing" or sub-editing by the
       | same small group of editors who own the Economist's "voice".
       | 
       | I interned at the Economist one summer in college and wrote two
       | articles for it - the published articles bore a small
       | relationship to what I had submitted. The sub-editors seemed to
       | be mostly George Smiley-type Oxford and Cambridge PhD's of a
       | certain age with an eclectic range of expertises, as far as I
       | recall.
        
         | bambax wrote:
         | Letters to the editor probably go through the same meat
         | grinder.
         | 
         | I sent a comment once, that was published. It had been entirely
         | rewritten, with almost no loss of meaning but complete overhaul
         | of style, and no indication that it had been the case.
         | 
         | I didn't mind that it was rewritten, but thought they should
         | disclose that fact.
         | 
         | Edit: I mean I think they should make it clearer _to readers_
         | that published letters have been rewritten, and in some cases,
         | heavily.
        
           | halhod wrote:
           | we do. all letters sent in by emailed in get the following
           | autoreply:
           | 
           | "The Economist thanks you for your letter, which has been
           | passed to the author of the article. _All letters are edited_
           | if selected for publication either in print or online.
           | 
           | We will need to know where you are writing from, so please
           | ensure you have supplied the name of the city, town or
           | village and the country if that is not obvious.
           | 
           | If you do not wish your letter to be published send an e-mail
           | promptly to letters@economist.com."
        
             | throw14082020 wrote:
             | That sounds insane. You want to rewrite a comment and still
             | pin it on the comments author? Sounds North Korean esque,
             | if the movie "The Interview" is a good representation of
             | that.
        
               | Spooky23 wrote:
               | The town I grew up in had a local weekly newspaper that
               | published unedited letters. It was fun -- basically an
               | analog message board.
               | 
               | One problem is that normal humans don't write concisely.
               | The other is that the Economist is a global
               | publication... you probably would not be happy with long-
               | form musings of Johnny Random from Papua New Guinea.
               | You're opting in for highbrow British style.
        
               | ectopod wrote:
               | Every newspaper that I've ever read does this. There will
               | be a blurb on the letters page saying something like "We
               | reserve the right to edit letters". It's clear to both
               | readers and correspondents.
               | 
               | If you don't like the terms, don't engage.
               | 
               | Edited to add: newspapers in the UK take libel law
               | seriously so you have some confidence they won't grossly
               | misrepresent your views.
        
               | TuringTest wrote:
               | It still doesn't make sense to attribute to a reader some
               | words they didn't write.
               | 
               | Also there's a difference between the expectation that
               | the letter can be truncated or just the gist of it
               | extracted for reasons of space, and entire sentences or
               | paragraphs rewritten in full. I would have never expected
               | the latter even with a "right to edit letters reserved"
               | disclaimer.
        
               | Veen wrote:
               | That's what editors do. Everything you have read in a
               | published book, magazine, or newspaper has been edited
               | and often substantially rewritten by someone whose name
               | is not on the cover or byline. Letters pages aren't
               | comment threads; they're part of the publication and that
               | means they're edited for style and content, just like
               | everything else.
               | 
               | (As someone who writes for a living, I can tell you that
               | it takes a little getting used to, especially when an
               | editor butchers a sentence you're pleased with. But it's
               | part of the process you learn to accept eventually -- and
               | they were probably right.)
        
               | dylan604 wrote:
               | How I miss the days of reading text that has been edited.
               | Today's websites seem to have completely eliminated the
               | editing stage before release. One of my big pet peeves is
               | when multiple authors are contributing where you're
               | reading the article, and then the next author's section
               | comes in recapping what you've just read like it was
               | meant to be another stand alone article. There is so much
               | redundant information that an editor would have caught
               | easily. It also implies to me that nobody is actually
               | reading the article about to be released from start to
               | end, nor do they read it aloud. That was a proofreading
               | tip from long ago as it makes the mind slow down instead
               | of auto-correcting when reading quietly.
        
               | ghaff wrote:
               | Yes, and while I generally get given final review on
               | things these days, if I were working on a publication
               | with tight deadlines, I wouldn't expect that. And I
               | mostly don't do a great job with headlines anyway so I'm
               | mostly happy to have editors throw away whatever I put in
               | as a placeholder :-)
               | 
               | I do occasionally revert changes when I'm reviewing--
               | usually because I wrote something poorly and an editor
               | misinterpreted--but I reject relatively few suggestions.
               | I figure that if I wrote something that confused my
               | editor or they just didn't like it, a lot of readers will
               | feel similarly.
        
               | Closi wrote:
               | The problem is that a letter that makes an excellent
               | point might not make it with the required berevity and
               | clarity.
               | 
               | A letter to the editor might read:
               | 
               | > I saw on your article about the size of foodstuffs that
               | food items are not getting smaller - actually people are
               | just getting bigger. Very interesting article, quite
               | funny and relevant as I've been collecting food items
               | since I was a child and can confirm that this isn't
               | always true. I've got a few exapmles where it holds, but
               | I also have a kit kat from when I was 18 (born 1979) that
               | used to be 500g and now they are 250g as standard. I'm a
               | big fan and this is the first time I have spotted a huge
               | glaring error! Please explain that one!
               | 
               | Clearly that would need to be reframed. I'm not
               | particularly good, but I can see why a newspaper might
               | want to shorten it:
               | 
               | > In last week's article The Economist argued that
               | foodstuffs were not getting smaller, however I own a
               | standard kit-kat from the 1997 that is double the size of
               | ones available in shops today. Thoughts?
               | 
               | The above is probably an improvement from a readers
               | perspective, conveys the points of the original message,
               | and they aren't usually attributed to a specific,
               | identifiable person anyway (usually something like John
               | from London) so I don't think there is any huge scandal
               | here.
        
               | Emma_Goldman wrote:
               | The London Review of Books doesn't, and it has the best
               | letters I've read.
        
               | throw14082020 wrote:
               | Is "everyone does it" a good argument?. Clear to all? Not
               | according to @bambax. Also, libel law? Why are you
               | bringing up libel law. Manipulation of comments and fake
               | reviews isn't libel.
        
               | Matticus_Rex wrote:
               | IIRC misattribution of quotes can be libelous in some
               | jurisdictions if it causes harm to reputation.
        
             | nindalf wrote:
             | I'm surprised GP didn't expect that the letter would be
             | edited.
             | 
             | One of my letters was published. I fully expected that it
             | would be edited and was pleased with the result. You can
             | see both versions here - https://gist.github.com/nindalf/12
             | a533f6ff64d7f146845f289acd.... I thought the edited version
             | conveys the intent well.
        
             | pessimizer wrote:
             | Disclosed to the reader, not to the letter writer.
        
               | bambax wrote:
               | Yes, that was my point and I should have made it better.
               | 
               | (Also, there's a difference between editing and
               | rewriting.)
        
               | [deleted]
        
           | motohagiography wrote:
           | Before my internet addiction distracted me from it, I made a
           | sport of writing letters to newspapers, and my success rate
           | for over a decade was about 8/10 published to submitted. I
           | had one or two in the Economist, with many more in the
           | Financial Times, and others in lesser known papers. They're
           | all in a drawer somewhere now as some very humble personal
           | trophies.
           | 
           | However, my final one was edited so horrendously and
           | offensively in print that the only charitable interpretation
           | was that English was not the letters editor's first language.
           | After a few emails back and forth, and the terse revelation
           | from a very piqued editor that English was in fact her first
           | language, she graciously corrected the online version. My
           | advice to anyone who wants emulate the house style of The
           | Economist is that they should read P.G. Wodehouse first.
           | 
           | I stopped writing letters after that because it signalled a
           | shift in culture at the papers, where the people working for
           | them didn't seem to have the same relationship to truth they
           | once appeared to. The feeling of opening that salmon coloured
           | paper to find your letter in it (with only modest surprise)
           | and giving your morning coffee a smug celebratory sip is one
           | of the things upvotes on the internet have not yet been able
           | to replace.
        
             | aj7 wrote:
             | Heh, heh. As a physicist, I wrote the entire technical
             | section on polarization for my small company's optics
             | catalog. It got "edited" by the personnel manager, a UT
             | Austin English major who was not dumb. Almost had a
             | coronary at age 36.
        
               | zikzak wrote:
               | I had to run a job ad for a programmer so I took the
               | template provided by HR, added my list of buzzwords and
               | acronyms, and corrected the many factual, grammatical,
               | and spelling errors in the original document.
               | 
               | They ran my ad but the only part that varied from the
               | template was my list if "tech skills". Unfortunately,
               | this meant the job ad was "pre-covid" so it stated we do
               | not work remotely, you must be local, etc. Sigh.
        
             | mssundaram wrote:
             | Even in this short sample comment I enjoyed your writing.
             | And I agree, that sounds much more satisfying than updoots
        
         | aj7 wrote:
         | Can't stand the final sentence witticisms. Reduces the
         | credibility of the entire article. You can almost hear those
         | Oxford and Cambridge PhD's chortling about their own
         | cleverness. And no byline is a form of slavery.
        
         | arminiusreturns wrote:
         | Ah, so all the crazy stuff Ive seen from them I should blame on
         | the editors and not the individual writers? Good to know, of
         | course just by reading it you know its the Oxbridge types in
         | charge, and I dont consider that a good thing...
        
         | rmk wrote:
         | This is common. Most publication houses, including magazines
         | and newspapers, have a 'house style' that is enforced by an
         | editorial staff.
        
           | ampdepolymerase wrote:
           | They can probably be replaced by a neural network in time,
           | leaving humans to just doing content reviews.
        
             | ChrisLTD wrote:
             | Isn't that more or less what Grammarly Premium can do? I'm
             | not a subscriber, but their site says it offers suggestions
             | on tone and clarity.
        
             | formercoder wrote:
             | I'd bet against this. Neural networks still don't actually
             | understand the text at all. I would imagine true
             | understanding is required for this task. You can't get to
             | the moon climbing progressively higher trees.
        
             | dominotw wrote:
             | Doesn't 'the voice' evolve overtime though? How can a
             | neural network evolve on its own.
        
               | ampdepolymerase wrote:
               | Train it every year on the senior editors' publication.
        
               | sorokod wrote:
               | The publications that were replaced by a neural network?
        
               | philtar wrote:
               | So we can't get rid of the senior editors after all?
        
               | belinder wrote:
               | Why get rid of them? Automatisation should not mean
               | getting rid of people, it should mean letting them do
               | other things. In this scenario the editors could spend
               | more time on their own writing instead of having to look
               | at junior writer's texts
        
               | HenryBemis wrote:
               | Editors are not necessarily investigators.
               | 
               | (metaphor/similar example follows)
               | 
               | In the same sense that someone who reviews a (IT)
               | technical procedure is not necessarily a systems
               | administrator, but someone who sees things from an angle
               | to ensure RACI model is followed throughout without any
               | generalizations such as "backup is taken" (by who? using
               | which tools? which systems/data are backed up? how often?
               | how long do we keep the tapes? how often do we trash the
               | tapes? where do we store the tapes?). I haven't taken a
               | backup for more than a decade, but I would shred a backup
               | procedure to pieces. If you remove me from the review
               | cycle, I won't go back to writing procedures.
        
               | xapata wrote:
               | Reinforcement learning.
        
               | elcomet wrote:
               | You could do small random variations (evolving the
               | network) and assign some score to them (either number of
               | sales, or scores by the staff)
        
               | dominotw wrote:
               | Hopefully their editors are operating on principles other
               | than increasing sales.
        
               | coldtea wrote:
               | > _How can a neural network evolve on its own._
               | 
               | Same way as humans? Via training on new inputs?
        
               | dominotw wrote:
               | > Via training on new inputs?
               | 
               | There are no new inputs in this case because we got
               | replaced editors with NN.
        
               | coldtea wrote:
               | Nothing stops us from feeding them the work of human
               | editors in 2000000 other publications...
               | 
               | Or their own work, as ranked by readers (e.g. their past
               | posts that had the more views and better engagement).
        
               | RobertKerans wrote:
               | No. This is drastically missing the point of what The
               | Economist (or almost any media org) is. It isn't trying
               | to be an average from 20000000 other publications, or
               | what an average of readers think, or what had good
               | engagement stats (though obviously the latter is a good
               | target for the application of analytical software). It's
               | not a neutral voice, or some down-the-middle average of
               | what readers liked. It's an entity with its own political
               | goals.
        
               | RobertKerans wrote:
               | It's not even vaguely similar to a person, so how would
               | that work? ln this example, if you had a hypothetical AI
               | that understood the UK class system + the political
               | system + the press system + the way these interlocking
               | relationships work from a particular elite PoV then sure,
               | but that's magical thinking. The actual written style is
               | a small part of that; the other things are the inputs.
        
               | coldtea wrote:
               | > _ln this example, if you had a hypothetical AI that
               | understood the UK class system + the political system +
               | the press system + the way these interlocking
               | relationships work from a particular elite PoV then sure,
               | but that 's magical thinking._
               | 
               | It doesn't have to understand any of those in any "human"
               | sense, where it would be able to articulate what it
               | understood on a meta level, etc.
               | 
               | It would just have to reinforce the right patterns and
               | fuzzy connections that lead to success in writing
               | credible looking articles....
        
               | RobertKerans wrote:
               | > It would just have to reinforce the right patterns and
               | fuzzy connections that lead to success in writing
               | _credible looking articles_
               | 
               | We're probably at a point where we can manufacture
               | shallow fakes of the current _writing_ style, and I 'm
               | sure techniques like this will become prevalent (because
               | convenience), but I feel you're missing the point of what
               | I'm saying. It _does_ need to understand these things. If
               | it doesn 't, then what it is is a mechanical reproduction
               | of a _current_ style of writing: that 's a completely
               | different category of thing, it's not even close to
               | similar.
        
         | raverbashing wrote:
         | True. But given the examples in the article this is done in a
         | masterful way.
         | 
         | One place that does this, it's obvious and uncreatively done:
         | Deutsche Welle for their English articles.
        
           | cromka wrote:
           | I am guessing this could come as a side effect of proof-
           | reading articles written by authors who don't write in
           | English with a native fluency?
        
             | raverbashing wrote:
             | Could be (though they have the capability to hire native
             | speakers), or maybe they have a very cookie-cutter manual.
             | (Not sure their German headlines have the same patterns but
             | I think not, or at least it doesn't sound so unnatural)
        
         | Ericson2314 wrote:
         | If Wikipedia is right
         | 
         | > Smiley was born to middle-class parents
         | 
         | Doesn't sound like the Economist
        
           | unsui wrote:
           | In the UK, "Middle Class" is more of a mindset than an
           | economic class (although economic class is definitely a part
           | of it).
           | 
           | You can think of it more as the US middle-upper-class.
           | 
           | This musical number from the UK comedy "Mongrels" more-or-
           | less nails the mindset:
           | 
           | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Yr4yEguWrw
        
             | Ericson2314 wrote:
             | Yeah I know the difference between economic and social
             | class. I'm saying that's the wrong social class for the
             | Economist.
        
               | mandogcat wrote:
               | I'm British, have read the Economist in the past and a
               | friend of mine interned there. I think "middle class" is
               | bang on to describe their audience, which ranges from
               | aspirational students to working professionals who want a
               | quick news summary with some wit. Not many builders
               | (working), dukes (upper) or Oxford faculty (upper middle)
               | would be caught reading it. It's definitely seen as
               | middlebrow fodder for undergraduates.
        
           | Gene_Parmesan wrote:
           | My perhaps incorrect impression has been that middle class
           | means something a bit different in a country with royalty.
        
             | ghaff wrote:
             | Back when they were still moderately important
             | publications, Time and Newsweek were probably similar
             | although more US-centric and mainstream. But similar in
             | that they tended to draw from the Ivies and other
             | establishment schools. Likely significant overlap with the
             | Times and the Post.
        
       | bshimmin wrote:
       | _" Scuppered" means to prevent from succeeding--also to sink a
       | ship deliberately._
       | 
       | I was quite interested to learn this, because I would always have
       | used the word "scuttled" for the deliberate sinking of a ship.
        
       | nindalf wrote:
       | What I like most about the Economist - the obituaries. Each one
       | is about a person who I hadn't heard of before, but after reading
       | it I wish I had.
       | 
       | Sometimes it's the story of an unsung hero, whose life story
       | shines a new perspective on an event we're aware of. For example,
       | the recent obituary of Nikolai Antoshkin, the general who led the
       | response to the Chernobyl reactor.
       | 
       | Other times, it's an ordinary person who lived their life in an
       | ordinary way. But in the wider context, their lives have
       | extraordinary meaning. I'm reminded of the obituary of the last
       | speaker of the Eyak language, which was as much an obituary for
       | the language as it was for them.
       | 
       | OP talks a lot about the style and how they keep it simple, but
       | there is so much beauty in that simplicity.
        
         | klelatti wrote:
         | My favourite is still Jack Scott and Reg Varney (a British
         | weather forecaster and the star of the sitcom "On the Buses")
         | in one week in 2008 .
         | 
         | Just so unexpected as subjects for the Economist and
         | beautifully done in capturing the spirit of a certain period in
         | British life.
         | 
         | [1] https://www.economist.com/obituary/2008/12/04/jack-scott-
         | and...
        
         | lenocinor wrote:
         | They made a book of them in 2008 if you (or anyone else) is
         | interested.
        
       | rmk wrote:
       | The Economist is a great magazine ("newspaper", as they like to
       | call themselves). The emphasis is on presenting facts and educate
       | the reader without any of the proselytizing and moralizing of the
       | major American newspapers. I also love the Wall Street Journal,
       | which is the American newspaper that comes closest to The
       | Economist, save its increasingly shrill editorials and opinion
       | columns.
       | 
       | Can anyone who grew up here explain why Americans prefer partisan
       | media? It boggles my mind and is something I have failed to
       | understand. Elsewhere in the world, being biased is taken as an
       | insult, whereas here, news organizations seem to take pride in
       | it!
        
         | kristianc wrote:
         | It's incorrect to state that the Economist doesn't have a bias:
         | it leans consistently toward free trade, free markets, open
         | borders, and international institutions.
         | 
         | Some of the limits are due to the way that media is regulated
         | in others countries (vs. not regulated at all in the US). In
         | the UK for instance, the major broadcasters have a public
         | service remit, and can be challenged easily via libel laws,
         | regulation etc if they print something which is overtly
         | incorrect. In the US, that is less the case which means that
         | news has evolved into a kind of entertainment rather than a
         | source of information.
        
           | hogFeast wrote:
           | Their position is the globalist hyper-elite (like Martin Wolf
           | in the FT...they all go to Bildeberg). This overlaps heavily
           | with the free market viewpoint but over the past five years
           | or so, it has become heavily diluted in some areas (for
           | example, regulations and fiscal policy...their view tends to
           | match with whatever the IMF thinks, and tends to be fairly
           | reactionary because these ideas have a history of not
           | working...tbh, these views aren't coherent anymore, they make
           | no sense).
           | 
           | It is fair to say that once you descend below the editorials,
           | you will find more interesting viewpoints. But all of the
           | leaders and editorial pieces are totally anodyne. Imo, this
           | is an editorial decision that changed in 2015, and it has got
           | significantly worse.
        
         | jfim wrote:
         | It still has a slant to its reporting, though. It's very
         | neoliberal and almost always calls for deregulation, free
         | markets, free trade, and globalization.
         | 
         | It's pretty factual if you ignore that slant though.
        
         | mrwh wrote:
         | The UK has outrageously partisan newspapers and always has, the
         | Economist is one of the few publications that looks vaguely
         | non-partisan (and as pointed out by others, it's more about
         | being up-front in its classical liberal position). TV news is
         | far more even, by law (but I think that's about to change,
         | sadly).
        
         | alchemism wrote:
         | I believe media de-regulation exacerbated the effect.
         | 
         | On a more philosophical level one might say that all media is
         | biased - and that those who nakedly display their subjectivity
         | are easier to parse using critical analysis than those who mask
         | it through centrist positioning in an ideological spectrum.
        
         | visarga wrote:
         | Lately reasoned debate has become very difficult on account of
         | identity politics and social justice. It's as if the concept of
         | debate is biased against them so they refuse to play the game.
         | And they believe all disagreement with them to be illegitimate.
        
         | helsinkiandrew wrote:
         | The economist is 'biased'. It was actually founded to campaign
         | against the UK's Corn Laws in 1843.
         | 
         | However although it has kept the same free trade agenda it is
         | refreshingly open minded and is not tied to dogma, or political
         | parties.
        
         | throwaway8581 wrote:
         | The Economist is extremely moralizing. It represents the point
         | of view of a city dweller with a high paying job who buys into
         | liberal sensibilities but smugly thinks himself wiser and more
         | prudent than the radicals on the streets. He is a modern day
         | Girondist, at times alarmed to find his kind under the
         | guillotine ( _we are on the same side!_ he might protest) but
         | finding comfort in a magazine that reminds him he is part of
         | the moral and economic elite who really know how to run things.
         | 
         | The political viewpoint of The Economist has shifted. Twelve
         | years ago it was right-liberal, today it is left-liberal, but
         | that is only because the above character has shifted in his
         | views.
        
           | gxqoz wrote:
           | Yeah my college MBA bro roommate for some reason got a
           | subscription he never read (circa 2006). I'd occasionally
           | read it and almost completely rejected its politics at the
           | time.
           | 
           | I got my own subscription a few years ago and now regularly
           | read it. Most of its politics now line up with my own. I'm
           | sure I've changed some, but the paper definitely has changed
           | as well.
        
         | mediaman wrote:
         | The Economist certainly has an ideological bias.
         | 
         | However, unlike many publications, they are fairly forthcoming
         | about it, and are clear about their position.
         | 
         | I don't agree with all of their positions (though I agree with
         | most), but I most of all appreciate that they don't really try
         | to bury opinion into "objective" reporting.
        
         | viburnum wrote:
         | There's an excellent book about The Economist called
         | "Liberalism at Large: The World According to the Economist."
         | Here's a good review:
         | 
         | https://newrepublic.com/article/155962/liberalism-at-large-b...
        
           | mncharity wrote:
           | I've heard it described as "Fleet Street cocktail party", for
           | anticipating where topics will land across insightful-to-
           | clueless.
        
         | pmdulaney wrote:
         | Well, The Atlantic _used_ to be pretty balanced, but since Mrs
         | Jobs took over they 've veered to the left too.
        
         | albertgoeswoof wrote:
         | The economist is very heavily biased towards global capitalism,
         | and they present many strong cases in favour of particular
         | political paths. I'm not sure why so many of their readers see
         | them as neutral, I suspect it's due to the high brow nature of
         | the writing.
         | 
         | At the end of the day there is no way to produce a non-biased
         | publication, you're buying into the stories the publishers
         | choose to publish (fact based or not), your opinion is likely
         | formed before you read the magazine.
        
           | mrwh wrote:
           | The way I read it, the Economist is the newspaper of global
           | capitalism, that's their position. But they are still
           | evidence based, they don't think they can have their own
           | facts (unlike it must be said the modern US right).
        
         | selectodude wrote:
         | I love the Economist, but they're not "non-partisan". They're
         | simply upfront about their bias.
        
           | nxc18 wrote:
           | I think that's the point, though. They have a biased
           | worldview - they own that and highlight it regularly - but
           | that bias doesn't align with any American political party,
           | and I don't get the sense that it is particularly well
           | aligned with existing parties in the UK either.
        
             | selectodude wrote:
             | They're Lib-Dems.
        
               | twic wrote:
               | But only by exclusion. The Economist speaks from a
               | classical/neo liberal viewpoint. Civil liberties, free
               | markets, laissez faire, technocracy. Labour is too
               | statist for them, and the Conservatives are currently too
               | populist (and incompetent). The Economist's position
               | lines up pretty well with the Orange Book wing of the
               | Lib-Dems [1], but much less well with the SDP / social
               | liberal wing.
               | 
               | They have backed all three major parties in general
               | elections in the last twenty years [2].
               | 
               | [1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Orange_Book:_Reclai
               | ming_Li...
               | 
               | [2] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Economist_editorial
               | _stance...
        
           | dragonwriter wrote:
           | "Non-partisan" is not the same thing as non-ideological.
        
             | mrwh wrote:
             | This is a good point. Where the Economist is aligned with,
             | say, the Tories, it's because they both support the same
             | ideas, not because my-party-is-right. (Nowadays the Tories
             | have shifted pretty damn far from those ideas, so it's more
             | apparent that it's ideology that the Economist has, not a
             | partisan affiliation.)
        
           | ptsneves wrote:
           | Indeed. I think from the American point of view they seem to
           | be so centered that it can fall both ways.
           | 
           | For the UK i see them clearly as hardcore liberal democrats.
           | 
           | I think that in the south Europe political landscape they
           | would be orphaned as there even the center parties are not
           | very economically liberal.
        
           | danaliv wrote:
           | Around these parts, you have to be yelling and calling people
           | names to be considered "partisan." Subtlety is lost on us.
           | 
           | (Not /s, but also not _not_ /s?)
        
           | loughnane wrote:
           | I think you can be biased but also non-partisan. Partisan is
           | usually referred to in terms of being an the side of a
           | particular party. The Economist definitely has its bias, but
           | that doesn't align clearly with either the right or the left
           | in American politics.
        
             | clairity wrote:
             | democrat, republican and green are parties, not right and
             | left, which represent an arbitrary dichotomization of a
             | complex landscape otherwise irreducible without losing
             | critical information. that kind of reductionism, i daresay,
             | never leads to meaningful understanding, just loggerheads.
             | 
             | the economist takes a conventional stance of promoting
             | policies that favor the already wealthy. that facet of it
             | is rather banal and certainly not where the exciting ideas
             | for the next millennia are going to emerge from.
        
               | loughnane wrote:
               | It's good point: right and left aren't parties.
               | Unfortunately it's increasingly feeling that way in
               | America; Independents (among which I count myself) don't
               | play a meaningful role and polarization as measured by
               | congressional voting patterns seems to be the highest
               | it's been in decades.
               | 
               | I think it's unfair to say they support policies that
               | favor the already wealthy. Certainly they do sometimes,
               | but they've opposed tax cuts, supported minimum wage
               | increases, etc. I'm ready to be proven wrong but I
               | haven't got that impression when I read it.
        
       | cyberlurker wrote:
       | Can I subscribe to the Economist without having to call them to
       | cancel the subscription?
        
         | tonyedgecombe wrote:
         | No, at least that was the case when I tried a couple of years
         | ago.
        
         | colincooke wrote:
         | Yes, I have done so (I have since resubscribed). I believe it
         | required an email, or at least some weird looking portal. Not
         | as easy as it could be, but certaintly not a call to customer
         | service.
        
           | cyberlurker wrote:
           | Nice, last time I unsubscribed it was a long call of "are you
           | sureeeeee???"
           | 
           | I'll probably still use privacy.com to be safe. But good to
           | hear they addressed that. I've been thinking of subscribing
           | again for a few months.
        
         | Bo0kerDeWitt wrote:
         | I sent them an email saying I wanted to cancel and they
         | confirmed it a few days later. There was no nonsense involved.
         | 
         | I've since resubscribed.
        
       | gentleman11 wrote:
       | I read that news uses a pyramid structure where they say the main
       | point first, then increasingly elaborate for anyone who cares
       | enough to continue reading. However, news is also famous for
       | people only reading the headlines, and skipping the body of an
       | article. It seems good for conveying information but bad for
       | engagement (although some papers and magazines ramble for pages
       | and you never find out what the article is even about because
       | it's 70% tangent and human interest)
        
         | ghaff wrote:
         | Strict inverted pyramid style was so that newspapers could
         | basically randomly cut an article when they ran out of space in
         | the hole the article was filling. A bit of an
         | oversimplification but almost literally true in the case of
         | wire service copy. Also you lost people at jumps.
         | 
         | Magazines are on longer deadlines and can adopt varying styles.
         | That's not to say you hide the lede in the last paragraph, but
         | you do have more flexibility in getting to the point.
         | 
         | The Economist, which actually calls itself a newspaper,
         | probably is roughly inverted pyramid but not as much as AP copy
         | would be.
        
       | baby wrote:
       | This is great! I just rewrote all my chapters' first
       | paragraph[^1] using the first advice of this article.
       | 
       | I'll give back by sharing an advice I learned from ptatcek: the
       | inverted pyramid.[^2]
       | 
       | Here's some example of what I just re-wrote.
       | 
       | Chapter 2:                 - I have talked about cryptographic
       | primitives in the previous chapter, they are constructions that
       | achieve specific security properties and form the building blocks
       | of cryptography.        - In the first part of this book you will
       | learn about several important ones.        + Attributing global
       | unique identifiers to anything, that's the promise of the first
       | cryptographic construction
       | 
       | chapter 3:                 - In chapter 2, you've learned about
       | an interesting construction --hash functions--that on its own
       | doesn't provide much, but if used in combination with a secure
       | channel allows you to verify the authenticity and integrity of
       | some data.        + Mix a hash function with a secret key, and
       | you obtain something called a *message authentication code
       | (MAC)*.
       | 
       | chapter 4:                 - You've learned about authenticated
       | encryption in chapter 4, which is a form of symmetric encryption.
       | - This is an extremely useful cryptographic primitive, yet in the
       | real-world, there exist many situations where different peers do
       | not have a shared secret.       + In chapter 4 you learned about
       | authenticated encryption, a cryptographic primitive used to
       | encrypt data but limited by its symmetry: both sides of a
       | connection had to share the same key.       + In this chapter,
       | I'll lift this restriction by introducing *asymmetric
       | encryption*: a primitive to encrypt to someone else's key without
       | knowing the key.
       | 
       | chapter 12:                 - For as far as I can remember, the
       | term "crypto" has been used in reference to the field of
       | cryptography.       - Recently, I have seen its meaning quickly
       | changing and being used by more and more people to refer to
       | *cryptocurrencies*.       + Can cryptography be the basis for a
       | new financial system?       + This is what cryptocurrencies have
       | been trying to answer since at least 2008, when Bitcoin was
       | proposed by Satoshi Nakamoto (who to this day has yet to reveal
       | their identity).
       | 
       | [^1]: https://www.manning.com/books/real-world-
       | cryptography?a_aid=...
       | 
       | [^2]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Inverted_pyramid_(journalism)
        
         | mimischi wrote:
         | Have a look at "The art of writing science" by Kevin W. Plaxco
         | [1]. He goes over this and similar techniques in length,
         | applying them at the same time.
         | 
         | [1] https://doi.org/10.1002/pro.514
        
       | hankchinaski wrote:
       | can anyone recommend any meta-book on writing techniques and
       | style? I recently picked up "the elements of eloquence" by
       | Forsyth and it's pretty good, but it focuses a lot on rhetorical
       | figures and not more higher-level structures like described in
       | this article
        
         | n0pe_p0pe wrote:
         | Joseph Williams' "Style" is a great one
        
       | marban wrote:
       | Also recommend their daily news snack at
       | https://www.economist.com/espresso
        
       | nmstoker wrote:
       | I respect the writing in the Economist. It's kept to a high
       | standard and they put their cases well with evidence as the
       | article here highlights. Even the times I don't agree with their
       | position, I still respect it.
       | 
       | I wonder how much it helps that their writers are anonymous and
       | therefore less likely to go on personal flights of fancy or
       | building an argumentative approach. It is perhaps puts the
       | individual writer on the backfoot but makes the quality of the
       | publication higher. Personally I think other sources would do
       | well to consider this - frankly I would rather be a fan of an
       | idea than a writer: the former seems reasonable the latter likely
       | to vere into pointless worship. Plus it's much easier to switch
       | to new ideas if they're superceded by better ones in due course.
        
       | mrweasel wrote:
       | One thing I especially like about The Economist is that they
       | consistantly explain who or what something is. It seems stupid to
       | write: HSBC, a bank... I know it's a bank, but some might not,
       | and in the many cases where I don't know a person, a company,
       | technology or idea it's extremely useful.
        
         | gxqoz wrote:
         | NPR's Code Switch podcast had an episode a few years ago on
         | this, which they call the explanatory comma:
         | https://www.npr.org/2016/12/14/504482252/-hold-up-time-for-a...
         | 
         | It gets at what you assume about your audience when you include
         | vs. don't include these.
         | 
         | I'm sometimes amused by what gets the explanatory comma in The
         | New Yorker. I recall one issue where they included one for what
         | an MLA citation was. But in the same issue assumed familiarity
         | with someone like Jacques Derrida and their ideas. (This
         | probably wasn't the exact example, but it was close to this.)
        
         | kwhitefoot wrote:
         | They do the same in their podcasts:
         | https://www.economist.com/podcasts/
         | 
         | Well worth a listen, even it does end up with me muttering
         | curses at the 'radio' sometimes.
        
         | atmosx wrote:
         | What drove me off was the double standards applied by the
         | economist, e.g.:
         | 
         | "Yanis Varoufakis, a self-proclaimed erratic Marxist, [...]" vs
         | "Jeroen Dijsselbloem, the President of the Eurogroup, [...]"
         | 
         | What about "Varoufakis, a PhD economist who taught economics in
         | three continents, [...]" vs "Jeroen Dijsselbloem, the President
         | of the Eurogroup who accidentally claimed he obtained an MA
         | from University College Cork, [...]"
         | 
         | See what I did there? :-)
         | 
         | Truth of the matter is that Varoufakis dwarfs the Eurogroup in
         | terms of knowledge much like Keynes dwarfed everyone else at
         | the Bretton Woods. Both of them, came from a position of
         | weakness and for <reasons> failed to deliver.
         | 
         | The Economist doesn't like Varoufakis, so Varoufakis must
         | always be always shown in a derogatory light, while complete
         | clowns like JD, and many others (see Krugman's assessment of
         | Schauble's speech and analysis, laughable at best - comparing a
         | state's economy to a household) as "high ranking, noteworthy
         | authorities".
         | 
         | Varoufakis is an example ofc. There are others (e.g. Beppe
         | Grillo, Berlusconi, etc.).
         | 
         | The other thing the Economist has (not) going on is that you
         | can tell beforehand what you're going to read... I mean from
         | MILES away, you already know the magazine's stance of
         | everything that matters. China, Russia, Iran (bad)... US
         | (good), UK (okay-ish), EU (almost-good).
         | 
         | Consistently pro-war: Supported and pushed (Syria) for all
         | kinds of invasions (Libya, Ukraine, Iraq, Afghanistan, etc.).
         | 
         | If you take away all that (and it's a lot), the rest is fine
         | :-)
        
           | nindalf wrote:
           | > Consistently pro-war
           | 
           | Whenever the Economist speaks about the Iraq War, they add in
           | parentheses "(which this newspaper supported)". They don't
           | need to do that after so many years, but they do it anyway.
           | That level of candour impressed me.
           | 
           | This from 2018, 15 years after the war started - "Iraq, in
           | other words, is doing well (see article). Some will argue
           | that this justifies America's invasion to overthrow Saddam
           | Hussein (which we supported). It does not. Too much blood was
           | shed along the way in Iraq and elsewhere."
           | (https://www.economist.com/leaders/2018/03/28/fifteen-
           | years-a...)
           | 
           | This level of self-reflection is rare.
        
         | mejutoco wrote:
         | Yes. And with acronyms as well. They are always spelled out the
         | first time, before the abbreviation is used.
        
           | ghaff wrote:
           | Not to criticize but that is, or should be, bog standard in
           | any writing. (Assuming the acronym isn't widely used and the
           | words that it embodies essentially a trivia contest answer).
        
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       | helsinkiandrew wrote:
       | Don't forget the cliches, puns, and references to music and film
       | titles in the headlines:
       | 
       | https://www.economist.com/johnson/2010/10/26/style-guide-ent...
        
       | bovine3dom wrote:
       | Their style guide is available on the Wayback Machine [1]. The
       | first few pages of the introduction are well worth a read.
       | 
       | [1]:
       | https://web.archive.org/web/20021031104254/http://www.econom...
        
         | kspacewalk2 wrote:
         | >Avoid, above all, the kind of jargon that tries either to
         | dignify nonsense with seriousness (Working in an empowering
         | environment, a topic discussed at a recent Economist
         | conference)
         | 
         | I can see why I need to reach for the Wayback Machine to read
         | this great style guide. In the modern world, giving this
         | example is far more trouble than it's worth. People do get
         | touchy about challenges to their carefully promoted jargon, and
         | now they are on the twitter.
        
           | bovine3dom wrote:
           | Frankly I think it's more likely that they took it down
           | because they want to sell more books:
           | https://shop.economist.com/products/the-economist-style-
           | guid...
           | 
           | The book has almost identical content from what I recall. I
           | think they may have admitted defeat on the use of "he" for a
           | hypothetical person of arbitrary gender.
        
             | ghaff wrote:
             | A lot of style guides are behind firewalls these days. I'm
             | not sure all the reasons but it's probably some combination
             | of concerns about revealing somewhat sensitive info and
             | saying things in ways that some might find controversial.
        
               | SllX wrote:
               | More difficult to link to as well. Obviously not
               | impossible if you can find it on the Internet Archive,
               | but not everybody thinks to look there and sometimes you
               | just have to get lucky.
        
         | mr-ron wrote:
         | These are the rules written by George Owell apparently, if you
         | search, many links come up with the same wording.
         | 
         | https://gosolomon.com/content-marketing-and-george-orwells-6...
        
           | [deleted]
        
           | bovine3dom wrote:
           | Yeah - perhaps you missed it, but it says "Keep in mind
           | George Orwell's six elementary rules ("Politics and the
           | English Language", 1946)" just before it enumerates them.
           | 
           | I think lots of good style guides quote them. My favourite is
           | probably Kingsley Amis's "The King's English".
           | 
           | It has the distinct "old man shouts at clouds" energy that
           | one gets best from posthumous volumes.
        
       | wwarner wrote:
       | Related question for anyone passing by: Can you recommend
       | similarly well written publications in Spanish?
        
         | noja wrote:
         | I've been told the long-form El Pais articles are well written.
        
       | aj7 wrote:
       | "I learned writing from The Economist. Back home, it wasn't easy
       | to learn English. No one in my social circle was fluent in the
       | language and I couldn't afford a private tutor. The best I could
       | do was to create my own syllabus. The kiosk near my house had, to
       | my surprise, the newspaper1. I'd save my allowance to buy
       | whatever issue was on the stand. I'd divide each issue into two
       | units: New Vocabulary and Writing Tools. I'd then memorize the
       | novel words and apply the newly-discovered sentence structures to
       | my essays. I kept doing this for three years."
       | 
       | "Learned writing from The Economist. Wasn't easy to learn English
       | at home. No one I knew was fluent and I couldn't afford a private
       | tutor. Best I could do was to create my own syllabus. The kiosk
       | near my house had the Economist. I'd save my allowance to buy
       | whatever issue was on the stand. Divided each issue into 2 units:
       | Vocabulary and Writing Tools. I'd memorize the novel words and
       | apply the newly-discovered sentence structures. Kept doing this
       | for three years."
       | 
       | ["Good university-level" writing is verbose, filled with
       | flourishes and redundant verbosities, and things that can be
       | accurately context-guessed.]
        
         | maximp wrote:
         | I don't follow - what is the second paragraph meant to
         | demonstrate?
        
       | cjohnson318 wrote:
       | I _really_ respect this guy 's effort to learn to write well in
       | English. It's one thing to get by in a foreign language, or to be
       | conversant enough to work in tech, but he's thought about writing
       | in this language in a way that I, as a native speaker, never
       | have. My thoughts on writing are basically just (1) be brief (2)
       | use easy words.
        
         | pmdulaney wrote:
         | I agree! Kudos to this gentleman for his hard work and love of
         | the language.
        
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       | jackconsidine wrote:
       | I'd add one thing to this post: The Economist reliably lists
       | counterpoints to its articles. It has a nuanced feel, rare for a
       | news source. The weekly cycle also helps as sensationalized
       | nonsense doesn't make the cut.
       | 
       | A trick someone told me was to read the sections in reverse
       | (Obit, Books / Arts, Science etc); the writing quality is best
       | towards the end!
       | 
       | PS this post reads a lot like the Johnson column on language,
       | writing etc.
        
         | BitLit wrote:
         | Years ago I was making a pitch to USV... the startup I was
         | pitching was publishing related, and out of the blue one of the
         | partners (Brad) asked me what order I read my Economist in? I
         | paused to think and answered that I read front to back and
         | skipped sections if they didn't look interesting. Then I asked
         | him what order he read it in. He said back to front. The
         | conversation moved on without the chance for me to ask why.
         | Maybe the reason was writing quality.
        
           | pram wrote:
           | The front part (the 'leaders') are opinion pieces. The
           | international sections are usually more straight reporting on
           | events.
        
         | onebike wrote:
         | Yeah, the obituaries are so well written. The recent one they
         | wrote about Chick Corea made a great point about his influence
         | while being extremely personal and delicate. Really made me
         | want to explore more of his music.
        
           | cranekam wrote:
           | I _think_ the obits are all written by one person, Ann Wroe.
           | I heard a really good interview with her a few years ago but
           | I can 't find it now. https://medium.economist.com/the-art-
           | of-writing-an-obituary-... is reasonably interesting.
        
             | halhod wrote:
             | almost all are written by Ann, who is brilliant. the odd
             | one is written by a subject matter expert, or by someone
             | for whom the subject was a source
             | 
             | this one is a particularly good example, that HN may enjoy
             | https://www.economist.com/obituary/2019/02/21/obituary-
             | the-m...
        
             | tclancy wrote:
             | She is the one can't-miss part of the magazine.
        
       | paulpauper wrote:
       | >He scuppered Barack Obama's environmental agenda and voted to
       | confirm Justice Brett Kavanaugh.
       | 
       | How is this better than simply using the word "thwarted"?
        
         | nindalf wrote:
         | The thwarter can be an opponent or an ally but more likely an
         | opponent. The scupperer is the opposite - more likely to be on
         | the same boat as the person who's boat is being scuppered.
        
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