353—to John Murray


November 17, 1813.



My Dear Sir,—
That
you and I may distinctly understand each other on a subject, which, like "the dreadful reckoning when men smile no more,"
1
makes conversation not very pleasant, I think it as well to
write
a few lines on the topic.—Before I left town for Yorkshire, you said that you were ready and willing to give five hundred guineas for the copyright of
The Giaour
; and my answer was—from which I do not mean to recede—that we would discuss the point at Christmas. The new story may or may not succeed; the probability, under present circumstances, seems to be, that it may at least pay its expences—but even that remains to be proved, and till it is proved one way or the other, we will say nothing about it. Thus then be it: I will postpone all arrangement about it, and
The Giaour
also, till Easter, 1814; and you shall then, according to your own notions of fairness, make your own offer for the two. At
the
same time, I do not rate the last in my own estimation at half
The Giaour
; and according to your own notions of its worth and its success within the time mentioned, be the addition or deduction to or from whatever sum may be your proposal for the first, which has already had its success
2
.


My account with you since my last payment (which I believe cleared it off within five pounds) I presume has not
much
increased—but whatever it is have the goodness to send it to me—that I may at least meet you on even terms.


The pictures of Phillips I consider as
mine
, all three; and the one (not the Arnaut) of the two best is much at
your service
, if you will accept it as a present, from Yours very truly,
Biron
.


P. S.—The expence of engraving from the miniature send me in my account, as it was destroyed by my desire; and have the goodness to burn that detestable print from it immediately.






Footnote 1:
 
The What d'ye call't?
by John Gay (act ii. sc. 9):
"So comes a reckoning when the banquet's o'er,
The dreadful reckoning, and men smile no more."
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Footnote 2:
  Murray replies, November 18, 1813,
"I restore the Giaour to your Lordship entirely, and for it, the Bride of Abydos, and the miscellaneous poems intended to fill up the volume of the small edition, I beg leave to offer you the sum of One Thousand Guineas, and I shall be happy if you perceive that my estimation of your talents in my character of a man of business is not much under my admiration of them as a man."
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354—to John Murray


November 20, 1813.



More work for the
Row
. I am doing my best to beat "
The Giaour
"—
no
difficult task for any one but the author. Yours truly,

B.


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355—to John Murray


November 22, 1813.



Dear Sir
,—I have no time to
cross
-investigate, but I believe and hope all is right. I care less than you will believe about its success, but I can't survive a single
misprint
; it
choaks
me to see words misused by the Printers. Pray look over, in case of some eyesore escaping me. Ever yours, B.


P. S.—Send the earliest copies to Mr. Frere, Mr. Canning, Mr. Heber, Mr. Gifford, Lord Holland, Lady Melbourne (Whitehall), Lady C. L. (Brocket), Mr. Hodgson (Cambridge), Mr. Merivale, Mr. Ward, from the author.


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356—to John Murray


November 23, 1813.



Dear Sir
,—You wanted some
reflections
, and I send you
per Selim
(see his speech in Canto 2d, page 46.), eighteen lines in decent couplets, of a pensive, if not an
ethical
tendency. One more revise—poz. the
last
, if decently done—at any rate the
pen
ultimate. Mr.
Canning's
approbation (
if
he did approve) I need not say makes me proud
1
.


As to printing, print as you will and how you will—by itself, if you like; but let me have a few copies in
sheets
.


Ever yours,


B.






Footnote 1:
  Canning wrote the following note to Murray:
"I received the books, and, among them, The Bride of Abydos. It is very, very beautiful. Lord Byron (when I met him, one day, at dinner at Mr. Ward's) was so kind as to promise to give me a copy of it. I mention this, not to save my purchase, but because I should be really flattered by the present. I can now say that I have read enough of Mad. de Staël to be highly pleased and instructed by her. The second volume delights me particularly. I have not yet finished the third, but am taking it with me on my journey to Liverpool."
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357—to John Murray


November 24, 1813.



You must pardon me once more, as it is all for your good: it must be thus:
He makes a Solitude, and calls it Peace.
"
Makes
" is
closer
to the passage of Tacitus
1
, from which the line is taken, and is, besides, a stronger word than "
leaves
."
Mark where his carnage and his conquests cease—
He makes a Solitude, and calls it—peace.
You will perceive that the sense is now clearer, the "
He
" refers to "
Man
" in the preceding couplet.


Yours ever,


B.






Footnote 1:
 
"Solitudinem faciunt—pacem appellant."
Tacitus,
Agricola
, 30.

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358—to John Murray


November 27, 1813.



Dear Sir,—If you look over this carefully by the
last proof
with my corrections, it is probably right; this
you
can
do
as well or better;—I have not now time. The copies I mentioned to be sent to different friends last night, I should wish to be made up with the new Giaours, if it also is ready. If not, send
The Giaour
afterwards.


The
Morning Post
says
I
am the author of
Nourjahad1!!
This comes of lending the drawings for their dresses; but it is not worth a
formal contradiction
. Besides, the criticisms on the
supposition
will, some of them, be quite amusing and furious. The
Orientalism
—which I hear is very splendid—of the Melodrame (whosever it is, and I am sure I don't know) is as good as an Advertisement for your Eastern Stories, by filling their heads with glitter. Yours ever, B.


P. S.—You will of course
say
the truth, that I am
not
the Melo-dramatist—if any one charges me in your presence with the performance.






Footnote 1:
  The same charge is made in the
Satirist
(vol. xiii. p. 508).
Illusion, or the Trances of Nourjahad
, was acted at Drury Lane, November 25, 1813. It is described by Genest (
The English Stage
, vol. viii. p. 403) as "a Melo-dramatic spectacle in three acts by an anonymous author." "Nourjahad" was acted by Elliston; "Mandane," his wife, by Mrs. Horn.

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359—to John Murray


November 28, 1813.



Dear Sir,—
Send
another copy (if not too much of a request) to Lady Holland of the
Journal
1
, in my name, when you receive this; it is for
Earl Grey
—and I will relinquish my own. Also to Mr. Sharpe, Lady Holland, and Lady Caroline Lamb, copies of
The Bride
, as soon as convenient.

Ever yours,

Biron
.


P. S.—Mr. W. and myself still continue our purpose; but I shall not trouble you on any arrangement on the score of
The Giaour
and
The Bride
till our return,—or, at any rate, before
May
, 1814,—that is, six months from hence: and before that time you will be able to ascertain how far your offer may be a losing one: if so, you can deduct proportionably; and if not, I shall not at any rate allow you to go higher than your present proposal, which is very handsome, and more than fair.


I
have
had—but this must be
entre nous
—a very kind note, on the subject of
The Bride
, from Sir James Mackintosh, and an invitation to go there this evening, which it is now too late to accept
2
.






Footnote 1:
  The Rev. John Eagles (1783-1855), scholar, artist, and contributor (1831-55) to
Blackwood's Magazine
, edited
The Journal of Llewellin Penrose, a Seaman
, which Murray published in 1815.

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Footnote 2:
 
"Lord Byron is the author of the day; six thousand of his Bride of Abydos have been sold within a month."
Sir James Mackintosh (
Life
, vol. ii. p. 271).

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360—to John Murray.


November 29, 1813.



Sunday—Monday morning—three o'clock—in my doublet and hose,—
swearing
.


Dear Sir,—I
send
you in time an Errata page, containing an omission of mine
1
, which must be thus added, as it is too late for insertion in the text. The passage is an imitation altogether from Medea in Ovid, and is incomplete without these two lines. Pray let this be done, and directly; it is necessary, will add one page to your book (-
making
), and can do no harm, and is yet in time for the
public
. Answer me, thou Oracle, in the affirmative. You can send the loose pages to those who have copies already, if they like; but certainly to all the
Critical
copyholders.


Ever yours,
Biron
.


P. S.—I have got out of my bed (in which, however, I could not sleep, whether I had amended this or not), and so good morning. I am trying whether
De l'Allemagne
will act as an opiate, but I doubt it.






Footnote 1:
 
The Bride of Abydos
, Canto II. stanza xx. The lines were:
"Then, if my lip once murmurs, it must be
No sigh for Safety, but a prayer for thee."
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361—to John Murray


November 29, 1813.



"
You have looked at it!
" to much purpose, to allow so stupid a blunder to stand; it is
not
"
courage
" but "
carnage
;" and if you don't want me to cut my own throat, see it altered.


I am very sorry to hear of the fall of Dresden.


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362—to John Murray


Nov. 29, 1813, Monday.



Dear Sir,—You will act as you please upon that point; but whether I go or stay, I shall not say another word on the subject till May—nor then, unless quite convenient to yourself. I have many things I wish to leave to your care, principally papers. The
vases
need not be now sent, as Mr. W. is gone to Scotland. You are right about the Er[rata] page; place it at the beginning. Mr.
Perry
is a little premature in his compliments
1
: these may do harm by exciting expectation, and I think
we
ought to be above it—
though
I see the next paragraph is on the
Journal
2
, which makes me suspect
you
as the author of both.


Would it not have been as well to have said in 2 cantos in the advertisement? they will else think of
fragments
, a species of composition very well for
once
, like
one ruin
in a
view
; but one would not build a town of them.
The Bride
, such as it is, is my first
entire
composition of any length (except the Satire, and be damned to it), for
The Giaour
is but a string of passages, and
Childe Harold
is, and I rather think always will be, unconcluded. I return Mr. Hay's note, with thanks to him and you.


There
have
been some epigrams on Mr. W[ard]: one I see to-day
3
.


The first I did not see, but heard yesterday. The second seems very bad and Mr. P[erry] has placed it over
your
puff. I only hope that Mr. W. does not believe that I had any connection with either. The Regent is the only person on whom I ever expectorated an epigram, or ever should; and even if I were disposed that way, I like and value Mr. W. too well to allow my politics to contract into spleen, or to admire any thing intended to annoy him or his. You need not take the trouble to answer this, as I shall see you in the course of the afternoon.