The lines themselves, perhaps, may be better thus—("choose," or
"refuse"—but
yourself
, and don't mind "Sir Fretful"
):
As flash'd the volumed blaze, and {sadly}/{ghastly} shone
The skies with lightnings awful as their own.
The last
runs
smoothest, and, I think, best; but you know
better
than
best
. "Lurid" is also a less indistinct
epithet than "livid wave," and, if you think so, a dash of the pen will
do.
I expected one line this morning; in the mean time, I shall remodel and
condense, and, if I do not hear from you, shall send another copy.
I am ever, etc.
Twelfth Night
, act iii. sc. 4.
Dryden's
Annus Mirabilis
, stanza 231:
"A key of fire ran all along the shore,
And lightened all the river with a blaze;
The wakened tides began again to roar,
And wondering fish in shining waters gaze."
Churchill's
Times
, lines 701, 702:
"Bidding in one grand pile this Town expire,
Her towers in dust, her Thames a Lake of fire."
Nathaniel Lee (circ. 1653-1692), the dramatist, wrote
The Rival Queens
(1677), in which occurs the line:
"When Greek join'd Greek then was the tug of war."
He collaborated with Dryden in
Œdipus
(1679) and
The Duke of
Guise
(1682). His numerous dramas were distinguished, in his own
day, for extravagance and bombast. His mind failing, he was confined
from 1684 to 1688 in Bethlehem Hospital, where he is said to have
composed a tragedy in 25 acts.
The Critic
, act i. sc. I. "Sneer," speaking of "Sir
Fretful Plagiary," says,
"He is as envious as an old maid verging on the desperation of six and
thirty; and then the insidious humility with which he seduces you to
give a free opinion on any of his works can be exceeded only by the
petulant arrogance with which he is sure to reject your observations."
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250—to Lord Holland
September 26, 1812.
You will think there is no end to my villanous emendations. The fifth
and sixth lines I think to alter thus:
Ye who beheld—oh sight admired and mourn'd,
Whose radiance mock'd the ruin it adorn'd;
because "night" is repeated the next line but one; and, as it now
stands, the conclusion of the paragraph, "worthy him (Shakspeare) and
you
," appears to apply the "
you
" to those only who were
out of bed and in Covent Garden market on the night of conflagration,
instead of the audience or the discerning public at large, all of whom
are intended to be comprised in that comprehensive and, I hope,
comprehensible pronoun.
By the by, one of my corrections in the fair copy sent yesterday has
dived into the bathos some sixty fathom:
When Garrick died, and Brinsley ceased to write.
to
live
is a much more serious concern, and ought not to
be first; therefore I will let the old couplet stand, with its half
rhymes "sought" and "wrote."
Second thoughts in every thing are best, but, in rhyme, third and fourth
don't come amiss. I am very anxious on this business, and I do hope that
the very trouble I occasion you will plead its own excuse, and that it
will tend to show my endeavour to make the most of the time allotted. I
wish I had known it months ago, for in that case I had not left one line
standing on another. I always scrawl in this way, and smooth as much as
I can, but never sufficiently; and, latterly, I can weave a nine-line
stanza faster than a couplet, for which measure I have not the cunning.
When I began
Childe Harold
, I had never tried Spenser's measure,
and now I cannot scribble in any other.
all, my dear Lord, if you can get a decent
Address
elsewhere, don't hesitate to put this aside
.
Why did you not trust your own Muse? I am very sure she would have been
triumphant, and saved the Committee their trouble—"'tis a joyful one"
to me, but I fear I shall not satisfy even myself. After the account you
sent me, 'tis no compliment to say you would have beaten your
candidates; but I mean that, in
that
case, there would have been
no occasion for their being beaten at all.
are but two decent prologues in our tongue—Pope's to
Cato
—Johnson's to Drury-Lane
.
, with the epilogue to
The Distrest Mother
and, I think,
one of Goldsmith's
, and a prologue of old Colman's to Beaumont and
Fletcher's
Philaster
, are the best things of the kind we
have.
P.S.—I am diluted to the throat with medicine for the stone; and
Boisragon wants me to try a warm climate for the winter—but I won't.
"Such are the names that here your plaudits sought,
When Garrick acted, and when Brinsley wrote."
At present the couplet stands thus:
"Dear are the days that made our annals bright,
Ere Garrick fled, or Brinsley ceased to write."
"I am almost ashamed," writes Lord Holland to Rogers, October 22, 1812
(Clayden's Rogers and his Contemporaries, vol. i. p. 115), "of
having induced Lord Byron to write on so ungrateful a theme
(ungrateful in all senses) as the opening of a theatre; he was so
good-humoured, took so much pains, corrected so good-humouredly, and
produced, as I thought and think, a prologue so superior to the common
run of that sort of trumpery, that it is quite vexatious to see him
attacked for it. Some part of it is a little too much laboured, and
the whole too long; but surely it is good and poetical.... You cannot
imagine how I grew to like Lord Byron in my critical intercourse with
him, and how much I am convinced that your friendship and judgment
have contributed to improve both his understanding and his happiness."
Pope wrote the Prologue to Addison's
Cato
when it
was acted at Drury Lane, April 13, 1713.
Johnson wrote the Prologue when Garrick opened Drury Lane,
September 15, 1747, with
The Merchant of Venice
. "It is," says
Genest (
English Stage
, vol. iv. p. 231), "the best Prologue that
was ever written." Johnson wrote the Prologue to Milton's
Comus
,
played at Drury Lane, April 5, 1750; to Goldsmith's
Good-Natured
Man
, played at Covent Garden, January 29, 1769; and to Hugh Kelly's
A Word to the Wise
, played at Drury Lane, March 3, 1770.
The Distrest Mother
, adapted from Racine by Ambrose
Philips, was first played at Drury Lane, March 17, 1712. Addison is
supposed (Genest,
English Stage
, vol. ii. p. 496) to have written
the epilogue.
It is impossible to say to which of Goldsmith's epilogues
Byron refers. A previous editor of Moore's
Life, etc
., identified
it with his epilogue to Charlotte Lennox's unsuccessful comedy,
The
Sister
, which was once played at Covent Garden, February 18, 1769,
and then withdrawn.
George Colman the Elder, who edited an edition of Beaumont
and Fletcher (10 vols., 1778), wrote the prologue to
Philaster
,
when it was produced at Drury Lane, October 8, 1763.
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251—to Lord Holland
Sept. 27, 1812.
I
this is the third scrawl since yesterday—all about epithets.
I think the epithet "intellectual" won't convey the meaning I intend;
and though I hate compounds, for the present I will try (
col'
permesso
) the word "genius gifted patriots of our line"
instead.
Johnson has "many coloured life," a compound —— but they are always
best avoided.
, it is the only one in ninety lines
, but will
be happy to give way to a better. I am ashamed to intrude any more
remembrances on Lady H. or letters upon you; but you are, fortunately
for me, gifted with patience already too often tried by
Your etc., etc.,
Byron
.
This, as finally altered, stood thus:
"Immortal names emblazon'd on our line."
Reduced to seventy-three lines.
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252—to Lord Holland
September 27, 1812.
I have just received your very kind letter, and hope you have met with a
second copy corrected and addressed to Holland House,
some
omissions and this new couplet,
As glared each rising flash
1, and ghastly shone
The skies with lightnings awful as their own.
As to remarks, I can only say I will alter and acquiesce in any thing.
regard to the part which Whitbread
wishes to omit, I believe
the
Address
will go off
quicker
without it, though, like
the agility of the Hottentot, at the expense of its vigour. I leave to
your choice entirely the different specimens of stucco-work; and a
brick
of your own will also much improve my Babylonish turret. I
should like Elliston to have it, with your leave. "
" and "mourn"
are lawful rhymes in Pope's
Death of the Unfortunate Lady
.—Gray
has "forlorn" and "mourn"—and "torn" and "mourn" are in Smollett's
famous
Tears of Scotland
.
As there will probably be an outcry amongst the rejected, I hope the
Committee will testify (if it be needful) that I sent in nothing to the
congress whatever, with or without a name, as your Lordship well knows.
All I have to do with it is with and through you; and though I, of
course, wish to satisfy the audience, I do assure you my first object is
to comply with your request, and in so doing to show the sense I have of
the many obligations you have conferred upon me.
Yours ever,
B.
At present:
"As glared the volumed blaze."
Samuel Whitbread (1758-1815) married, in 1789, Elizabeth,
daughter of General Sir Charles Grey, created (1806) Earl Grey, and
sister of the second Earl Grey, of Reform Bill fame. The son of a
wealthy brewer, whose fortune he inherited, he entered Parliament as
M.P. for Bedford in 1790. Raikes, in his
Journal
(vol. iv. PP.
50, 51), speaks of him, at the outset of his career, as a staunch
Foxite, and "much remarked in society." Comparing him with his
brother-in-law Grey, he says,
"Mr. Whitbread was a more steady character; his appearance was heavy;
he was fond of agriculture, and was very plain and simple in his
tastes. Both were reckoned good debaters in the House, but Grey was
the most eloquent."
An independent Whig, and an advocate for peace with France, Whitbread
supported Fox against Pitt throughout the Napoleonic War, strongly
opposed its renewal after the return of the emperor from Elba, and
interested himself in such measures as moderate Parliamentary reform,
the amendment of the poor law, national education, and retrenchment of
public expenditure. On April 8, 1805, he moved the resolutions which
ended in the impeachment of Lord Melville, and took the lead in the
inquiries, which were made, March, 1809, into the conduct of the Duke of
York. He was a plain, business-like speaker, and a man of such
unimpeachable integrity that Mr., afterwards Lord, Plunket, in a speech
on the Roman Catholic claims, February 28, 1821, called him "the
incorruptible sentinel of the constitution."
When he moved the articles of impeachment against Lord Melville, Canning
scribbled the following impromptu parody of his speech (
Anecdotal
History of the British Parliament
, p. 222):
"I'm like Archimedes for science and skill;
I'm like a young prince going straight up a hill;
I'm like—(with respect to the fair be it said)—
I'm like a young lady just bringing to bed.
If you ask why the 11th of June I remember
Much better than April, or May, or November,
On that day, my lords, with truth I assure ye,
My sainted progenitor set up his brewery;
On that day, in the morn, he began brewing beer;
On that day, too, commenced his connubial career;]
On that day he received and he issued his bills;
On that day he cleared out all the cash from his tills;
On that day he died, having finished his summing,
And the angels all cried, 'Here's old Whitbread a-coming!'
So that day still I hail with a smile and a sigh,
For his beer with an E, and his bier with an I;
And still on that day, in the hottest of weather,
The whole Whitbread family dine all together.—
So long as the beams of this house shall support
The roof which o'ershades this respectable Court,
Where Hastings was tried for oppressing the Hindoos;
So long as that sun shall shine in at those windows,
My name shall shine bright as my ancestor's shines,
Mine recorded in journals, his blazoned on signs!"
An active member of Parliament, a large landed proprietor, the manager
of his immense brewery in Chiswell Street, Whitbread also found time to
reduce to order the chaotic concerns of Drury Lane Theatre. He was, with
Lord Holland and Harvey Combe, responsible for the request to Byron to
write an address, having first rejected his own address with its
"poulterer's description of the Phœnix." He was fond of private
theatricals, and Dibdin (
Reminiscences
, vol. ii. pp. 383, 384)
gives the play-bill of an entertainment given by him at Southill. In the
first play,
The Happy Return
, he took the part of "Margery;" and
in the second,
Fatal Duplicity
, that of "Eglantine," a very young
lady, loved by "Sir Buntybart" and "Sir Brandywine." In his capacity as
manager of Drury Lane, Whitbread is represented by the author of
Accepted Addresses
(1813) as addressing "the M—s of H—d"—
"My Lord,—
"As I now have the honour to be
By Man'ging a Playhouse a double M.P.,
In this my address I think fit to complain
Of certain encroachments on great Drury Lane," etc., etc.
Whitbread strongly supported the cause of the Princess of Wales. Miss
Berry (
Journal
, vol. iii. p. 25) says that he dictated the
letters which the Princess wrote to the Queen, who had desired that she
should not attend the two drawing-rooms to be held in June, 1814. "They
were good," she adds, "but too long, and sometimes marked by Whitbread's
want of taste."
The strain of his multifarious activities affected both his health and
his mind, and he committed suicide July 6, 1815.
"By foreign hands thy humble grave adorn'd,
By strangers honour'd, and by strangers mourn'd."
(Pope.)
"Stay, oh stay! nor thus forlorn,
Leave me unbless'd, unpitied, here to mourn."
(Gray.)
"Mourn, hapless Caledonia, mourn
Thy banish'd peace, thy laurels torn."
(Smollett.)
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Cheltenham, September 27, 1812.
Dear Sir,—I sent in no
Address
whatever to the Committee; but
out of nearly one hundred (this is
confidential
), none have been
deemed worth acceptance; and in consequence of their
subsequent
application to
me
, I have written a prologue, which
has
been received, and will be spoken. The MS. is now in the hands of Lord
Holland.
I write this merely to say, that (however it is received by the
audience) you will publish it in the next edition of
Childe
Harold
; and I only beg you at present to keep my name secret till
you hear further from me, and as soon as possible I wish you to have a
correct copy, to do with as you think proper.
I am, yours very truly,
Byron
.
P. S.—I should wish a few copies printed off
before
, that the
Newspaper copies may be correct
after
the