a. Percy's Reliques, III, 93, 1765. b. Letter of T. Gray to Mason, June, 1757 (?): Gray's Works, ed. Gosse, II, 316.
Jamieson's Popular Ballads, I, 18; Jamieson, in The Scots Magazine, 1803, LXV, 698, stanzas 1, 3.
A.
11. siluen: compare 73, 83, 143, 153, etc.
23, 4. In the MS., these go with 3: compare 20.
32. rumeth.
43, 4. These precede what is printed as 6.
51, 61, 121. out many.
63. as schoole masters: compare 133.
65, 6. These lines may be the last half of a stanza. There is nothing corresponding in the page's repetition of his master's message.
171, 2. Joined in the MS. with 18.
184. then my.
21. At least one stanza must be lost after 20.
221, 2 precede 21, and 223, 4 make a stanza with 213, 4: the order being 221, 2, 21, 223, 4.
224. 2 or 3.
261. Only half the n in the MS. Furnivall.
302. but 3.
321. curteouset.
And for & throughout.
B.
23. For is a later insertion.
23, 61. Oh.
61, 2. Originally, O do I not, And do I not.
93. to go to: come written over go.
132, 143. of.
142. That is a later insertion.
182. And is a later insertion.
184. Originally, He should neer have been.
C.
"This ballad was forwarded to me by my good friend Andrew Crawfurd, of John's Hill, Lochwinnoch. He wrote it from the recitation of Mrs Storie, wife of William Storie, laborer, in Lochwinnoch. It was a song of Mrs Storie's grandmother. It is queried if this should not be Babe Norice.... The interlineary corrections were made in consequence of Mrs Storie singing the ballad over to myself." Motherwell. The interlineary corrections have been adopted. The earlier readings follow.
Barnard for Barnet.
54. speir nae bauld baron's.
61. Barnard's ha.
83. and I doubly vow.
101. wee lad.
121. gay wanting.
131. braw manteil.
134. nae bauld baron's.
161. to a busking gane.
162. drest him.
191. Barnard liftit his.
193. has sneddit.
194. And aff frae his bodie.
204. lady wanting.
The affected spelling I suppose to be Crawfurd's.
74, 91. quhan.
In the Appendix to his Minstrelsy, p. xvii, Motherwell adopts the reading Babe Norice in 11, and prints burning gowd in 14.
D.
"This copy is from the recitation of Margaret Paterson, alias widow Michael, a very old woman residing at Dovecote Ha, Barhead. She is a native of Banffshire, and learned the ballad there in her infancy. She mentions that she has heard it sung with many variations, but this copy was considered to be the right way. It is seventy years since she committed it to her memory. 4th August, 1826." Motherwell.
E.
In his Minstrelsy, p. 269, Motherwell says that the reciter learned the ballad from her grandmother. He goes on to say: She mentions that at a later period of her life she also committed to memory 'Gill Morice,' which began with young lasses like her to be a greater favorite and more fashionable than the set which her grandmother and other old folks used to sing, under the title of 'Chield Morice.'
175. Written and dezar dish, the d of and being carried on to the word following.
193. douce makes no apparent sense. Motherwell prints done.
201. Stood originally And when he came to the green wood.
262. No doubt a corruption of the familiar Beheld baith dale and down.
294. heaviy, perhaps representing the actual sound. Motherwell prints heavy.
F. a.
In eight-line stanzas. Wh and y are substituted for the initial quh and z cherished by ballad imitators.
54. shall.
304. He's gar.
b.
12. fame it wexed.
14. Nae for.
16. Carron's.
31. Ye maun rin this.
32. maun rin.
33. feet.
41. Ah na, ah na.
The four stanzas which follow, "produced and handed about in manuscript," in consequence of an advertisement, were introduced into his copy by Percy.
After 26:
After 27:
The following stanzas were appended to the ballad in the edition reprinted by Percy:
The copy lent me by Mr Macmath lacks the four stanzas inserted by Percy, but has the eight given immediately above. The following are the variations from F.
21. will I.
74. thy body.
102. thy cost.
183. maun cum.
261. sits.
263. means a' these folks.
264. she tarrys.
271. And whan he cam to guid.
273. first saw.
274. Kemeing down.
282. Than my, misprint.
304. gard.
344. they lay.
354. hip was.
The eight stanzas follow which are printed immediately above.
[139] The edition of 1755 is not known now to exist. Mr David Laing showed Motherwell a copy, without place or date, with the title: Gill Morice, An Ancient Scots Poem. The foundation of the tragedy called Douglas, as it is now acted in the Concert-Hall, Canongate. There was no material difference between this edition and that which was reprinted in the Reliques, except that it lacked the four stanzas which Percy introduced. Motherwell's Minstrelsy, p. 259, note.
In Herd's MSS, I, 7, II, 70, there are half a dozen more stanzas, from The Weekly Magazine, August 13, 1772, which continue the story still further. My lady flings herself over a craig, my lord seeks death in battle. But, as Sir Walter Scott notes in the margin, these verses are "formed on the conclusion of Douglas, which tragedy is founded on the original ballad." These stanzas are printed by Jamieson, I, 21.
Mr Macmath has communicated to me an early copy of 'Gil Morice,' without place or date, in conjunction with a parody, entitled The Seven Champions of the Stage, printed in 1757, which satirizes Parson Home's efforts to get his Agis and his Douglas acted by Garrick. This copy of 'Gil Morice' might be another edition of that which Mr Laing possessed. Its variations, which are of slight consequence, will be given in the notes to F.
[140] The name of the heroine in the tragedy of Douglas was originally Lady Barnard, as in the ballad; it was altered to Lady Randolph when the play was produced in London. Motherwell, p. 257, note.
[141] Minstrelsy, p. 269, note. Mr Aytoun considers that E is only the copy printed in the middle of the last century purged, in the process of oral transmission, of what was not to the popular taste, "and altered more." There is no doubt that a copy learned from print may be transformed in this way, but it is certain that old tradition does not come to a stop when a ballad gets into print. Mrs Thomson's account of the matter Aytoun does not heed. It is difficult to understand why Aytoun printed the stanzas from Percy's Reliques, at I, 149 f, 2d ed., except as a simple courtesy to his correspondent.
[142] Already cited in The Ballad Minstrelsy of Scotland, Glasgow, 1871, p. 316.
A. a. 'Bonny Barbara Allan,' Tea-Table Miscellany, IV, 46, ed. 1740; here from the edition of London, 1763, p. 343. b. 'Sir John Grehme and Barbara Allan,' Percy's Reliques, 1765, III, 131.
B. a. 'Barbara Allen's Cruelty,' etc., Roxburghe Ballads, II, 25; reprint of the Ballad Society, III, 433. b. Roxburghe Ballads, III, 522. c. Broadside formerly belonging to Percy. d. Percy's Reliques, 1765, III, 125.
C. 'Barbara Allan,' Motherwell's MS., p. 288, from recitation.
A a is wrongly said by Stenhouse, The Scots Musical Museum, IV, 213, to have appeared in Ramsay's Miscellany in 1724. It is not even in the edition of 1733, but, according to Mr Chappell, was first inserted in that of 1740. Ramsay's copy is repeated in Herd, 1769, p. 29, 1776, I, 19, Johnson's Museum, p. 230, No 221, and Ritson's Scotish Song, II, 196. C was perhaps derived from Ramsay, but possibly may have come down by purely oral tradition. Some later copies of B have Reading Town for Scarlet Town (Chappell).
The Scottish ballad is extended in Buchan's MSS, I, 90, Motherwell's MS., p. 671, to forty-one stanzas. In this amplified copy, which has no claim to be admitted here, the dying lover leaves his watch and gold ring, his Bible and penknife, a mill and thirty ploughs, nine meal-mills and the freights of nine ships, all to tocher Barbara Allan. This is the ballad referred to by Charles Kirkpatrick Sharpe in Stenhouse's edition of the Museum, IV, 300*, as sung by the peasantry of Allandale. Doubtless it was learned by them from some stall-print.
Pepys makes this entry in his Diary, January 2, 1666: "In perfect pleasure I was to hear her [Mrs Knipp, an actress] sing, and especially her little Scotch song of Barbary Allen." Goldsmith, in his third essay, 1765, p. 14, writes: The music of the finest singer is dissonance to what I felt when an old dairy-maid sung me into tears with 'Johnny Armstrong's Last Good-night,' or 'The Cruelty of Barbara Allen.'[143]
A b is translated by Loève-Veimars, p. 379, von Marées, p. 34; B d by Bodmer, I, 85.
a. The Tea-Table Miscellany, IV, 46, ed. 1740; here from the London edition of 1763, p. 343. b. Percy's Reliques, III, 131, ed. 1765, "with a few conjectural emendations from a written copy."
a. Roxburghe Ballads, II, 25; reprint of the Ballad Society, III, 433. b. Roxburghe Ballads, III, 522. c. A broadside formerly belonging to Bishop Percy, d. Percy's Reliques, 1765, III, 125.
Motherwell's MS., p. 288; from Mrs Duff, Kilbirnie, February 9, 1825.
A. b.
13. o the.
44. a wanting.
51. Remember ye nat in the tavern, sir.
52. Whan ye the cups wer fillan.
53. How ye.
64. And wanting.
71. Then hooly, hooly.
72. And hooly, hooly.
82. deid-bell knellan.
83. that wanting.
84. It wanting.
94. I 'se.
B. a.
Barbara Allen's Cruelty, or, The Youngman's Tragedy. With Barbara Allen's Lamentation for her Unkindness to her Lover and her Self.... Printed for P. Brooksby, J. Deacon, J. Blare, J. Back. Black Letter.
134. undone we.
b.
Barbara Allen's Cruelty, or, The Young Man's Tragedy. No name of printer.
13. for my own.
22. they were.
24. the sake of.
34. name is.
44. thy name is.
53. Then wanting.
61. she came to him.
63. came to him.
64. a wanting.
72. you are.
74. As I am on my death-bed lying.
81. If you are on your death-bed lying.
83. from your.
84. Then farewell: said wanting.
92. on him.
93. and wanting: to you all.
101. And wanting: out one day.
102. bells.
103. And they.
112. And saw.
113. corps said she.
123. cry'd out.
131. in his.
134. will quite undo me.
141. A wanting.
143. more kind.
144. In time of life.
153. eer.
c.
Title the same as in a. Printed and sold at the Printing-office in Bow-Church-Yard, London.
13. for my own.
22. they wore.
34. name is.
43. And thou.
44. thy name is.
53. O little.
61. she came to him.
63. came to him.
64. a wanting.
72. you are.
74. As I am on my death-bed lying.
83. from your.
84. Then farewell: said wanting.
92. on him.
93. to you all.
101. And wanting: out one day.
102. bells.
103. And they.
112. And espy'd.
113. corps said she.
123. cry'd out.
134. will quite undo me.
141. A wanting.
143. more kind.
144. In time of life.
154. eer.
16 as in b.
d was "given, with some corrections, from an old printed copy in the editor's possession." That these corrections were considerable, we know from the [asterism] at the end. The old printed copy is very likely to have been c, and, if so, the ballad was simply written over. It does not seem necessary to give the variations under the circumstances. In 23 Percy has Yong Jemmye Grove.
C.
21. bonny should perhaps be comely, as in 31.
42. Originally written To see my white... courting.
52. Originally dwelling.
53. Originally it's.
54. The is written over His, probably as a conjecture.
72. After stoutly, slowly? as a conjectural emendation.
74. lying. 'An ingenious friend' of Percy's suggested the transposition of lying and dying in A 32, 4.
[143] Pepys is cited by James Farquhar Graham, The Scottish Songs, II, 157, and Goldsmith by Chappell, The Roxburghe Ballads, III, 433.
A. 'Lady Alice.' a. Bell's Ancient Poems, Ballads, and Songs of the Peasantry of England, p. 127. b. Notes and Queries, Second Series, I, 418. c. Notes and Queries, Second Series, I, 354.
B. 'Giles Collins and Proud Lady Anna,' Gammer Gurton's Garland, p. 38, ed. 1810.
This little ballad, which is said to be still of the regular stock of the stalls, is a sort of counterpart to 'Lord Lovel.' A writer in Notes and Queries, Second Series, I, 418, says: This old song was refined and modernized by the late Richard Westall, R. A.