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Long sentences can digress, meander, sing; the effect is a headlong immersion. Books with never-ending sentences are difficult to put down: Since there is no natural place to pause, halting anywhere feels like an interruption.
posted by chavenet on Jun 09, 2026 at 1:04 AM
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swerve of shore, sure ️
posted by HearHere at 4:31 AM
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To each her own. I don't find one-sentence books unputdownable, even though experimental fiction is probably my preferred genre. Books without paragraphs: same thing. The relationship between effort demanded and reward gained becomes problematic for me. OK, I have read a couple of Krasznahorkai novels, and have read some chapters of Seiobo Down Below a few times. Put me down as undecided, then. Why am I even posting this?
posted by kozad at 6:06 AM
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> This year's Pulitzer Prize for Fiction, awarded to the novel Angel Down by Daniel Kraus, was a victory for the long sentence.
I stopped reading here.
posted by AlSweigart at 6:15 AM
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> Or maybe you don't. Angel Down has no period, but it has paragraphs, chapters, and section breaks. Do these qualities detract from the singleness, or the sentenceness, of its single sentence? Does it matter?
Yes. It seems gimmicky when you realize he just replaced the period at the end of long sentences with a new paragraph that begins with "and". Maybe the novel is good, but here's what I found on a book excerpt website for the opening of chapter one:
and Cyril Bagger considers himself lucky, he ought to be topped off, gone west, bumped, clicked it, pushing daisies, a new landowner, napooed, just plain dead, not only dead but scattered around in globs, for the last thing he saw was a shell dropping on top of him with the noise of colliding freight trains, a jim-dandy of a shot from Fritzy the Hun, and kind of ironic, seeing how the whole reason Bagger prefers burial duty is artillery shells can't reach this far behind the frontline trench, but this shell sure did, the way he always pictures it in dreams, a red skull of fire screaming down, giving him one second to think, That old Bagger luck has finally run out,
and the afterlife, for the brief time he knew it, had been delectable, he was gentled back into the arms, and the long, long legs, of Marie-Louise, the prostituée on whom he'd lavished all his francs when the Butcher Birds of the 43rd had been stationed in Vosges, pretty, dry, warm, quiet, bloodless Vosges, where every inhale was Marie-Louise's La Rose Jacqueminot parfum, her rosewater hair and periwinkle powders, every exhale the flutter of her dyed red hair and the lace whatchamacallits of her lingerie,
and so the last thing he wants is someone fucking with him and demanding, "You alive?," to which Bagger responds, "Fuck no," to which the man laughs mirthlessly and pulls him up by the armpits like a breech birth, so Bagger the newborn unseals his eyelids, a crust of mud, oil, and embarrassing tears, and discovers he's being lifted from the burial pit he'd been digging when the mortar hit, now blown to triple its size and is stacked with triple the dead, all being sprayed with quicklime and hastily carpeted in soil,
and Bagger would have been buried alive if not for this sharp-eyed private, he really ought to reward him with a cigarette, but Bagger's distracted by the corpses packed slick hot on all sides of him, one dead doughboy nearly beheaded by a pelvic bone, another who bit it collecting his intestines in one of his boots, a third stomped so flat by a shell that his spinal column protrudes from his gaping mouth,
and yet Bagger, by his own baffled accounting, is intact all the way down to his little piggies, so how the fuck is he alive when everyone who'd been near him, by the look of it, was exploded, shredded, and scattered, he tries to credit the corpse he'd been carrying, it must have absorbed the shrapnel, but a nagging voice insists it's a miracle, which only pisses him off, he'll be goddamned if he's going to start believing in miracles here in hell,
and once his ass is on solid ground, more or less, he realizes this marshy patch of land between the Argonne Forest and River Meuse has fallen quiet, and there's nothing more suspicious, a Western Front quiet is tetchy, one side always gets itchy and opts to bleed a few hundred more men over a few inches of land so ruined only a maniac would want it,
and so Bagger sits up with vision aswirl and shoos away the filthy pelt of air, the pigeon-gray smoke and eyeball-white fog, and beyond the hills of diarrheal mud and the pappy craters from whence those hills were upchucked, Bagger sees trucks and carts and wheeled guns crunching east, looks like the whole fucking U.S. First Army, III Corps, 43rd Division has vacated the scene with the likely exception of Bagger's lowly Company P, forever dangled like a gonorrheal dick from the brigade's leftmost flank,
and Bagger feels for his haversack, still there, and extracts his Bible, and opens it, and stuffs his nose into the gutter, and inhales, doesn't give a fuck about kings and shepherds and carpenters and prophets, but the damp protean smell of the book's red leather and the woody scratch of its onionskin pages, each one half-mooned by his father's finger-stains, has a smelling-salt effect on Bagger, has since he was a kid, it brings him back to the cramped study over the church where Bishop Bernard Bagger labored on sermons, back when Cyril's heart, now filled with smoke, was filled with what must have been hope,
Come on, ya coward, put it all in one forever paragraph like a Trumper's antivaxx Facebook post. I'd read that edition of the book for the sheer thrill of its manic format.
posted by AlSweigart at 6:37 AM
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SOLAR BONES! Yesterday I was trying to remember Solar Bones. Gorgeous novel.
There are several of my favorite books noted in this article.
posted by Thivaia 2.0 at 7:40 AM
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Also, as noted, Angel Down is a particularly readable variation on the one-sentence conceit. It's pretty good, weird WWI story and an actual, honest-to-God horror novel in the event anyone's avoiding it because it seems too pretentious/academic/ etc.
posted by Thivaia 2.0 at 7:45 AM
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