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Subject: [PATCH] English nits in portaudit.1
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>Number:         69935
>Category:       ports
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] security/portaudit: English nits in portaudit.1
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    eik
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Aug 03 02:30:19 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Fri Aug 13 17:08:03 GMT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Fri Aug 13 17:08:03 GMT 2004
>Originator:     Chris Pepper
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD www.reppep.com 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #16: Wed Jul 21 18:25:39 EDT 2004 root@www.reppep.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/REPPEP i386


	
>Description:
	Portaudit has some confusion over subject-verb agreement, and the description is overly restrictive.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	man portaudit
	
>Fix:
	Here's a suggested patch.
	

--- portaudit.1.diff begins here ---
--- portaudit.1	Mon Aug  2 22:20:43 2004
+++ portaudit.1.fixed	Mon Aug  2 22:21:32 2004
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
 
 DDEESSCCRRIIPPTTIIOONN
      ppoorrttaauuddiitt checks installed packages for known vulnerabilities and gener-
-     ates reports including references to security advisories.	Its audience
-     are system administrators or individual users.
+     ates reports including references to security advisories.	Its intended
+     audience is system administrators and individual users.
 
      ppoorrttaauuddiitt uses a database maintained by port committers and the FreeBSD
      security team to check if security advisories for any installed packages
--- portaudit.1.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-ports-bugs->eik 
Responsible-Changed-By: erwin 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Aug 3 06:30:17 GMT 2004 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Over to maintainer 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=69935 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: eik 
State-Changed-When: Fri Aug 13 19:07:36 CEST 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=69935 
>Unformatted:
