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From: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
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Subject: Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of postfix)
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>Number:         67859
>Category:       ports
>Synopsis:       Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of mail/postfix)
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-ports-bugs
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Jun 12 03:10:22 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Sat Jun 19 10:11:16 GMT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Sat Jun 19 10:11:16 GMT 2004
>Originator:     Chris Pepper
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD www.reppep.com 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #15: Sun May 30 22:18:46 EDT 2004 root@www.reppep.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/REPPEP i386


	
>Description:
	Postfix's tlsmgr man page has some awkward and incorrect English.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	portinstall postfix; man tlsmgr
	
>Fix:
	Patch below
	

--- tlsmgr.8.diff begins here ---
--- tlsmgr.8	Wed Jun  9 23:36:12 2004
+++ tlsmgr.8.fixed	Fri Jun 11 22:33:44 2004
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@
 OpenSSL PRNG has a pool size of 8192 bits (= 1024 bytes). The pool
 is initially seeded at startup from an external source (EGD or
 /dev/urandom) and additional seed is obtained later during program
-run at a configurable period. The exact time of seed query is
-using random information and is equally distributed in the range of
-[0-\fBtls_random_reseed_period\fR] with a \fBtls_random_reseed_period\fR
+run at a configurable interval. The exact time of each successive seed
+query is randomly distributed in the range of
+[0-\fBtls_random_reseed_period\fR] with \fBtls_random_reseed_period\fR
 having a default of 1 hour.
 
 Tlsmgr can be run chrooted and with dropped privileges, as it will
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 .ad
 .fi
 Tlsmgr is not security-sensitive. It only deals with external data
-to be fed into the PRNG, the contents is never trusted. The session
+to be fed into the PRNG; its content is never trusted. The session
 cache housekeeping will only remove entries if expired and will never
 touch the contents of the cached data.
 .SH DIAGNOSTICS
--- tlsmgr.8.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->feedback 
State-Changed-By: vs 
State-Changed-When: Thu Jun 17 11:52:07 GMT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
Forwarded PR to maintainer. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=67859 

From: "Volker Stolz" <vs@freebsd.org>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org, pepper@reppep.com,
	vivek@khera.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: ports/67859: Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of mail/postfix)
Date: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 13:51:48 +0200

 Forward PR to maintainer for reviewing. Shouldn't this be submitted to the  
 original authors instead of the port?
 
 Volker

From: Vivek Khera <vivek@khera.org>
To: "Volker Stolz" <vs@freebsd.org>
Cc: pepper@reppep.com, freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: ports/67859: Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of mail/postfix)
Date: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 09:53:52 -0400

 On Jun 17, 2004, at 7:51 AM, Volker Stolz wrote:
 
 > Forward PR to maintainer for reviewing. Shouldn't this be submitted to 
 > the original authors instead of the port?
 
 The port should not be fixing these things.  Please contact the 
 original software author.
 

From: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
To: Vivek Khera <vivek@khera.org>
Cc: "Volker Stolz" <vs@freebsd.org>, freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: ports/67859: Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of
 mail/postfix)
Date: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 10:48:21 -0400

 At 9:53 AM -0400 2004/06/17, Vivek Khera wrote:
 >On Jun 17, 2004, at 7:51 AM, Volker Stolz wrote:
 >
 >>Forward PR to maintainer for reviewing. Shouldn't this be submitted 
 >>to the original authors instead of the port?
 >
 >The port should not be fixing these things.  Please contact the 
 >original software author.
 
 Vivek,
 
 	Can you be a bit more specific? I don't find tlsmgr.8 in the 
 postfix-2.2-20040616, postfix-2.1.3, or pfixtls-0.8.18-2.1.0-0.9.7d 
 packages, and it's not clear to me from the Makefile where you get it.
 
 
 						Thanks,
 
 
 						Chris Pepper
 --
 Chris Pepper:               <http://www.reppep.com/~pepper/>
 Rockefeller University:     <http://www.rockefeller.edu/>

From: Vivek Khera <vivek@khera.org>
To: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org, "Volker Stolz" <vs@freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: ports/67859: Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of mail/postfix)
Date: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 11:04:50 -0400

 On Jun 17, 2004, at 10:48 AM, Chris Pepper wrote:
 
 > At 9:53 AM -0400 2004/06/17, Vivek Khera wrote:
 >> On Jun 17, 2004, at 7:51 AM, Volker Stolz wrote:
 >>
 >>> Forward PR to maintainer for reviewing. Shouldn't this be submitted 
 >>> to the original authors instead of the port?
 >>
 >> The port should not be fixing these things.  Please contact the 
 >> original software author.
 >
 > Vivek,
 >
 > 	Can you be a bit more specific? I don't find tlsmgr.8 in the 
 > postfix-2.2-20040616, postfix-2.1.3, or pfixtls-0.8.18-2.1.0-0.9.7d 
 > packages, and it's not clear to me from the Makefile where you get it.
 >
 
 tlsmgr man page is part of the tls patches.  it is not part of stock 
 postfix.
 

From: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
To: Vivek Khera <vivek@khera.org>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org, "Volker Stolz" <vs@freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: ports/67859: Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of
 mail/postfix)
Date: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 11:11:47 -0400

 At 11:04 AM -0400 2004/06/17, Vivek Khera wrote:
 >On Jun 17, 2004, at 10:48 AM, Chris Pepper wrote:
 >
 >>At 9:53 AM -0400 2004/06/17, Vivek Khera wrote:
 >>>On Jun 17, 2004, at 7:51 AM, Volker Stolz wrote:
 >>>
 >>>>Forward PR to maintainer for reviewing. Shouldn't this be 
 >>>>submitted to the original authors instead of the port?
 >>>
 >>>The port should not be fixing these things.  Please contact the 
 >>>original software author.
 >>
 >>Vivek,
 >>
 >>	Can you be a bit more specific? I don't find tlsmgr.8 in the 
 >>postfix-2.2-20040616, postfix-2.1.3, or pfixtls-0.8.18-2.1.0-0.9.7d 
 >>packages, and it's not clear to me from the Makefile where you get 
 >>it.
 >>
 >
 >tlsmgr man page is part of the tls patches.  it is not part of stock postfix.
 
 	But who is the author you're telling me to contact, and where 
 is the source, so I can verify my patch? I can't find tlsmgr.8 in 
 <ftp://ftp.aet.tu-cottbus.de/pub/postfix_tls/pfixtls-0.8.18-2.1.0-0.9.7d.tar.gz> 
 (guessed from the Makefile).
 
 
 						Thx,
 
 
 						Chris Pepper
 -- 
 Chris Pepper:               <http://www.reppep.com/~pepper/>
 Rockefeller University:     <http://www.rockefeller.edu/>

From: Vivek Khera <vivek@khera.org>
To: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org, "Volker Stolz" <vs@freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: ports/67859: Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of mail/postfix)
Date: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 11:30:18 -0400

 On Jun 17, 2004, at 11:11 AM, Chris Pepper wrote:
 
 > 	But who is the author you're telling me to contact, and where is the  
 > source, so I can verify my patch? I can't find tlsmgr.8 in  
 > <ftp://ftp.aet.tu-cottbus.de/pub/postfix_tls/pfixtls-0.8.18-2.1.0 
 > -0.9.7d.tar.gz> (guessed from the Makefile).
 >
 >
 
 TLS is a patch file, not a bunch of files.  look in the patch file.
 

From: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
To: Vivek Khera <vivek@khera.org>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org, "Volker Stolz" <vs@freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: ports/67859: Language cleanups in tlsmgr.8 (part of
 mail/postfix)
Date: Fri, 18 Jun 2004 16:47:47 -0400

 At 11:30 AM -0400 2004/06/17, Vivek Khera wrote:
 >On Jun 17, 2004, at 11:11 AM, Chris Pepper wrote:
 >
 >>	But who is the author you're telling me to contact, and where 
 >>is the source, so I can verify my patch? I can't find tlsmgr.8 in 
 >><ftp://ftp.aet.tu-cottbus.de/pub/postfix_tls/pfixtls-0.8.18-2.1.0-0.9.7d.tar.gz> 
 >>(guessed from the Makefile).
 >>
 >
 >TLS is a patch file, not a bunch of files.  look in the patch file.
 
 	After 4 rounds, I give up on this Easter egg hunt. If you 
 refuse to tell me where the file is, or who to report to, you can 
 report it yourself or drop it.
 --
 Chris Pepper:               <http://www.reppep.com/~pepper/>
 Rockefeller University:     <http://www.rockefeller.edu/>
State-Changed-From-To: feedback->closed 
State-Changed-By: vs 
State-Changed-When: Sat Jun 19 10:10:46 GMT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
Closed on submitter's request: Will submit fix to upstream. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=67859 
>Unformatted:
