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Date: Sun, 3 May 2009 18:00:30 GMT
From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@doc.bsdgroup.de>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Superfluous "the" in the FAQ, which was left when editing revision 1.1010
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>Number:         134190
>Category:       misc
>Synopsis:       Superfluous "the" in the FAQ, which was left when editing revision 1.1010
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-bugs
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          sw-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun May 03 18:10:00 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:    Sun May 03 18:21:10 UTC 2009
>Last-Modified:  Sun May 03 18:21:10 UTC 2009
>Originator:     Benedict Reuschling
>Release:        7.2-PRERELEASE
>Organization:
The FreeBSD German Documentation Project
>Environment:
FreeBSD atlantis.reuschling.org 7.2-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 7.2-PRERELEASE #18: Thu Apr 23 22:00:35 CEST 2009     root@atlantis.reuschling.org:/tank/obj/usr/src/sys/ATLANTIS  i386
>Description:
In Revision 1.1010 of the FAQ document, a "the" was left in the sentence. This results in a "the this" (a minor language nit).


>How-To-Repeat:
Compare the two revisions:
https://doc.bsdgroup.de/cgi-bin/cvsweb.cgi/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml.diff?r1=1.1009;r2=1.1010;cvsroot=FreeBSD;f=h

or search for "the this" in the FAQ's book.sgml.
>Fix:
Apply the attached patch that removes the superfluous "the".

Patch attached with submission follows:

--- book.sgml.old	2009-05-03 19:52:04.833437439 +0200
+++ book.sgml	2009-05-03 19:52:18.078478639 +0200
@@ -9065,7 +9065,7 @@
 	  <programlisting>set openmode passive</programlisting>
 
 	  <para>Care should be taken with this option.  You should also
-	    use the this command to limit the amount of time that
+	    use this command to limit the amount of time that
 	    &man.ppp.8; waits for the peer to begin negotations:</para>
 
 	  <programlisting>set stopped <replaceable>N</replaceable></programlisting>


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: manolis 
State-Changed-When: Sun May 3 18:20:37 UTC 2009 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=134190 
>Unformatted:
