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From: Kaneda Hiloshi <vanitas@ma3.seikyou.ne.jp>
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Subject: [send-pr]: possible typo and incorrect description in isdnd.8
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>Number:         9886
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       possible typo and incorrect description in isdnd.8
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Feb  2 14:40:01 PST 1999
>Closed-Date:    Sun Mar 7 08:51:28 PST 1999
>Last-Modified:  Sun Mar  7 08:52:31 PST 1999
>Originator:     Kanenda
>Release:        FreeBSD 2.2.1-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
FreeBSD jp-man project
>Environment:

.\"	$Id: isdnd.8,v 1.1 1998/12/27 21:47:00 phk Exp $ 
http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/src/usr.sbin/i4b/isdnd/isdnd.8   rev 1.1

>Description:

o line 297:
     of no match is found
  -> if no match is found

o line 302-305: 
    In case the daemon decided to accept the message,
    the kernel signal the then active connection by sending
    a MSG_CONNECT_ACTIVE_IND message to the daemon.
 
 -> In case the daemon decided to accept the call,
    the kernel signals the active connection by sending
    a MSG_CONNECT_ACTIVE_IND message to the daemon.

     # o  I think it is a `call' that the deamon accepts, not a `message'.
     # o  signal -> signals    (or `will signal')
     # o  `then' seems to be unnecessary or misplaced to me...

 If I am misunderstunding due to the lack
of knowledge of English, forgive me.
Thanks.

>How-To-Repeat:

man 8 isdnd

>Fix:
	
Try the following patch:

--- isdnd.8.orig	Wed Feb  3 07:04:48 1999
+++ isdnd.8	Wed Feb  3 07:25:21 1999
@@ -294,12 +294,12 @@
 With the information contained in this message, the
 .Nm
 searches the entry section of its configuration database and if a match is
-found, it accepts or rejects the call or, of no match is found, it ignores the
+found, it accepts or rejects the call or, if no match is found, it ignores the
 call - all by issuing a
 .Em I4B_CONNECT_RESP
 ioctl message with the appropriate parameters to the kernel.
 .Pp
-In case the daemon decided to accept the message, the kernel signal the then 
+In case the daemon decided to accept the call, the kernel signals the
 active connection by sending a
 .Em MSG_CONNECT_ACTIVE_IND
 message to the daemon.
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: hm 
State-Changed-When: Sun Mar 7 08:51:28 PST 1999 
State-Changed-Why:  
has been fixed by the recent update of i4b to release 0.71.00 
>Unformatted:
