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From: Duane Whitty <duane@dwlabs.ca>
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Subject: [patch] An update of the article
 "Choosing the FreeBSD Version that is Right for You"
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>Number:         98344
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] An update of the article "Choosing the FreeBSD Version that is Right for You"
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    linimon
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Jun 02 02:10:08 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:    Sun Aug 22 00:10:30 UTC 2010
>Last-Modified:  Sun Aug 22 00:10:30 UTC 2010
>Originator:     Duane Whitty
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.1-STABLE i386
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>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dwpc.dwlabs.ca 6.1-STABLE FreeBSD 6.1-STABLE #0: Tue May 9 00:04:45 ADT 2006 duane@dwpc.dwlabs.ca:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/DWPC-KERNEL i386


	doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide/article.sgml,v 1.9
>Description:
	This is a merge of the uncommitted articel"A Guide to Understanding the FreeBSD Version Labels"
	with the already existing article "Choosing the FreeBSD Version that is Right for You".
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

	version-guide.diff available at 
	http//www.dwlabs.ca/freebsd/docs/version-guide/version-guide.diff
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->feedback 
State-Changed-By: linimon 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jun 18 21:07:55 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
Unfortunately you have mixed whitespace changes (tabs) with content 
changes, and this makes it very difficult to see exactly what has changed. 

The Style Guide says both that whitespace changes should be committed 
separately from content changes, and that the standard for indentation is 
two spaces for each level, with each instance of 8 spaces, starting at 
the beginning of the line, changed to a tab.  Can you please revise the 
patch according to this indentation and resubmit? 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->linimon 
Responsible-Changed-By: linimon 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jun 18 21:07:55 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Since I wrote the original article, I'll take this. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=98344 

From: Duane Whitty <duane@dwlabs.ca>
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/98344: [patch] An update of the article
 "Choosing the FreeBSD Version that is Right for You"
Date: Thu, 17 Aug 2006 14:11:16 -0300

 The diff, modified as per style (9), is available at
 http://www.dwlabs.ca/freebsd/docs/version-guide/version-guide.diff
 
 Thanks,
 
 Duane Whitty
State-Changed-From-To: feedback->closed 
State-Changed-By: pgj 
State-Changed-When: Sun Aug 22 00:08:57 UTC 2010 
State-Changed-Why:  
The original diff has disappeared. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=98344 
>Unformatted:
