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Date: Wed, 8 Feb 2006 04:08:24 GMT
From: Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: minor nit in the documentation primer (fdp-primer)
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>Number:         93017
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       minor nit in the documentation primer (fdp-primer)
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Feb 08 04:10:07 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:    Fri Feb 10 15:19:39 GMT 2006
>Last-Modified:  Fri Feb 10 15:19:39 GMT 2006
>Originator:     Ben Kaduk
>Release:        freebsd-current
>Organization:
University of Illinois
>Environment:
FreeBSD prolepsis.urh.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #20: Sun Jan 29 15:09:06 UTC 2006     kaduk@prolepsis.urh.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/PROLEPSIS  i386
>Description:
On the typographic conventions page, the order in which "commands, files, and directories" are listed does not correspond to the examples in the adjacent column.
>How-To-Repeat:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/preface-conventions.html
>Fix:
--- book.sgml   Wed Feb  8 03:01:35 2006
+++ book.sgml.orig      Wed Feb  8 03:01:04 2006
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
          
          <tbody>
            <row>
-             <entry>The name of files, commands, and directories. On screen
+             <entry>The name of commands, files, and directories. On screen
                computer output.</entry>
              <entry><para>Edit your <filename>.login</filename>
                  file.</para><para>Use <command>ls -a</command> to list all

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Fri Feb 10 15:17:54 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
Instead of relying on a particular order to denote that 
there is a difference between the three sorts of text, 
I split the three entries in separate rows. 

Thanks for the inspiration of the change :) 



Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Feb 10 15:17:54 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=93017 
>Unformatted:
