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Date: Mon, 6 Feb 2006 12:08:40 GMT
From: Enrique Matas Snchez <cronopios@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Meanless sentence in handbook?
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>Number:         92885
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Meanless sentence in handbook?
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    trhodes
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Feb 06 12:10:04 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:    Sun May 21 22:35:17 GMT 2006
>Last-Modified:  Sun May 21 22:35:17 GMT 2006
>Originator:     Enrique Matas Snchez
>Release:        6.0-STABLE x86
>Organization:
FDP-es
>Environment:
>Description:
              In section "Understanding MAC Labels" (Chapter 15.4 of the handbook) it is written:

    Numeric grade numbers used for comparison:compartment+compartment; thus the following:

Is that proper English?
I am not a native speaker, but, is not `numeric' or `numbers' redundant?
Should not there be an `are' before `used'?

Thanks.
>How-To-Repeat:
              Visit "Understanding MAC Labels" (chapter about Mandatory Access Control) of the handbook.
>Fix:
              
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed May 10 19:01:44 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Tom is the right person to let us know what this part 
of the MAC chapter means. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=92885 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Sun May 21 22:34:40 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
I've committed a fix, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=92885 
>Unformatted:
