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From: "Arjan van Leeuwen" <avleeuwen@piwebs.com>
To: "FreeBSD gnats submit" <FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org>
Subject: [PATCH] (handbook/desktop) Give better description of Opera features
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>Number:         92842
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] (handbook/desktop) Give better description of Opera features
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    ceri
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Feb 05 14:20:02 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:    Thu Feb 09 20:28:10 GMT 2006
>Last-Modified:  Thu Feb 09 20:28:10 GMT 2006
>Originator:     Arjan van Leeuwen
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.0-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
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System: FreeBSD 6.0-RELEASE #13: Sun Nov  6 14:50:54 CET 2005
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>Description:


This patch better explains the features of Opera (not just a browser)
and removes the bias towards the Mozilla suite in the Desktop chapter
of the handbook.


>How-To-Repeat:





>Fix:


--- desktop-chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- desktop/chapter.sgml	Sun Dec 18 04:02:31 2005
+++ /home/avleeuwen/temp/chapter.sgml	Sun Feb  5 15:15:02 2006
@@ -177,9 +177,8 @@
 	<primary><application>Mozilla</application></primary>
       </indexterm>
 
-      <para><application>Mozilla</application> is perhaps the most
-        suitable browser for your FreeBSD Desktop.  It is modern,
-        stable, and fully ported to FreeBSD.  It features a very
+      <para><application>Mozilla</application> is a modern,
+        stable browser that is fully ported to FreeBSD.  It features a very
         standards-compliant HTML display engine.  It provides a mail
         and news reader.  It even has a HTML composer if you plan to
         write some web pages yourself.  Users of
@@ -321,10 +320,14 @@
 	<primary><application>Opera</application></primary>
       </indexterm>
 
-      <para><application>Opera</application> is a very fast,
-        full-featured, and standards-compliant browser.  It comes in
-        two favors: a <quote>native</quote> FreeBSD version and a
-	version that runs under Linux emulation.</para>
+      <para><application>Opera</application> is a
+        full-featured and standards-compliant browser.  It also
+        comes with a built-in mail and news reader, an IRC client,
+        an RSS/Atom feeds reader and much more.  Despite this, 
+        <application>Opera</application> is relatively lightweight
+        and very fast. It comes in two favors: a <quote>native</quote> 
+        FreeBSD version and a version that runs under Linux 
+        emulation.</para>
 
       <para>To browse the Web with the FreeBSD version of <application>Opera</application>,
         install the package:</para>
--- desktop-chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---



>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->ceri 
Responsible-Changed-By: ceri 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Feb 5 19:07:23 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll shepherd this in. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=92842 

From: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>
To: Arjan van Leeuwen <avleeuwen@piwebs.com>
Cc: "FreeBSD gnats submit" <FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org>
Subject: Re: docs/92842: [PATCH] (handbook/desktop) Give better description of Opera features
Date: Sun, 5 Feb 2006 19:11:21 +0000

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 On 5 Feb 2006, at 14:18, Arjan van Leeuwen wrote:
 
 > -      <para><application>Opera</application> is a very fast,
 > -        full-featured, and standards-compliant browser.  It comes in
 > -        two favors: a <quote>native</quote> FreeBSD version and a
 > -	version that runs under Linux emulation.</para>
 > +      <para><application>Opera</application> is a
 > +        full-featured and standards-compliant browser.  It also
 > +        comes with a built-in mail and news reader, an IRC client,
 > +        an RSS/Atom feeds reader and much more.  Despite this,
 > +        <application>Opera</application> is relatively lightweight
 > +        and very fast. It comes in two favors: a <quote>native</ 
 > quote>
 
 "flavors" is spelled incorrectly here [1].
 
 Are all these features enabled with the standard download?  I've  
 never noticed any of these...
 
 Ceri
 -- 
 That must be wonderful!  I don't understand it at all.
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From: Arjan van Leeuwen <avleeuwen@piwebs.com>
To: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>
Cc: "FreeBSD gnats submit" <FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: docs/92842: [PATCH] (handbook/desktop) Give better description of Opera features
Date: Mon, 6 Feb 2006 00:09:54 +0100

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 Op zondag 05 februari 2006 20:11, schreef Ceri Davies:
 > On 5 Feb 2006, at 14:18, Arjan van Leeuwen wrote:
 > > -      <para><application>Opera</application> is a very fast,
 > > -        full-featured, and standards-compliant browser.  It comes in
 > > -        two favors: a <quote>native</quote> FreeBSD version and a
 > > -	version that runs under Linux emulation.</para>
 > > +      <para><application>Opera</application> is a
 > > +        full-featured and standards-compliant browser.  It also
 > > +        comes with a built-in mail and news reader, an IRC client,
 > > +        an RSS/Atom feeds reader and much more.  Despite this,
 > > +        <application>Opera</application> is relatively lightweight
 > > +        and very fast. It comes in two favors: a <quote>native</
 > > quote>
 >
 > "flavors" is spelled incorrectly here [1].
 
 You're right. Corrected patch attached.
 
 >
 > Are all these features enabled with the standard download?  I've
 > never noticed any of these...
 
 Yep. Actually, it's impossible to download Opera without them. Try them if you 
 can, they're pretty good too :). Opera has a quick start guide online on how 
 to use the mail client:
 
 http://www.opera.com/support/tutorials/mail/quickstart/
 
 Best regards,
 
 Arjan
 
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 --- desktop/chapter.sgml	Sun Dec 18 04:02:31 2005
 +++ /home/avleeuwen/temp/chapter.sgml	Mon Feb  6 00:04:55 2006
 @@ -177,9 +177,8 @@
  	<primary><application>Mozilla</application></primary>
        </indexterm>
  
 -      <para><application>Mozilla</application> is perhaps the most
 -        suitable browser for your FreeBSD Desktop.  It is modern,
 -        stable, and fully ported to FreeBSD.  It features a very
 +      <para><application>Mozilla</application> is a modern,
 +        stable browser that is fully ported to FreeBSD.  It features a very
          standards-compliant HTML display engine.  It provides a mail
          and news reader.  It even has a HTML composer if you plan to
          write some web pages yourself.  Users of
 @@ -321,10 +320,14 @@
  	<primary><application>Opera</application></primary>
        </indexterm>
  
 -      <para><application>Opera</application> is a very fast,
 -        full-featured, and standards-compliant browser.  It comes in
 -        two favors: a <quote>native</quote> FreeBSD version and a
 -	version that runs under Linux emulation.</para>
 +      <para><application>Opera</application> is a
 +        full-featured and standards-compliant browser.  It also
 +        comes with a built-in mail and news reader, an IRC client,
 +        an RSS/Atom feeds reader and much more.  Despite this, 
 +        <application>Opera</application> is relatively lightweight
 +        and very fast. It comes in two flavors: a <quote>native</quote> 
 +        FreeBSD version and a version that runs under Linux 
 +        emulation.</para>
  
        <para>To browse the Web with the FreeBSD version of <application>Opera</application>,
          install the package:</para>
 
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: ceri 
State-Changed-When: Thu Feb 9 20:26:54 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thank you! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=92842 
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