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From: Alec Berryman <alec@thened.net>
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Subject: [patch] Punctuation and grammar fix for article "hats"
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>Number:         92826
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Punctuation and grammar fix for article "hats"
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Feb 04 22:20:02 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:    Sat Feb 04 22:31:47 GMT 2006
>Last-Modified:  Sat Feb 04 22:31:47 GMT 2006
>Originator:     Alec Berryman
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.0-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD shredder.bowdoin.edu 6.0-STABLE FreeBSD 6.0-STABLE #0: Sat Jan 21 01:26:30 EST 2006 root@shredder.bowdoin.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/SERVER i386

>Description:
Missing a period between sentences and subject/verb mismatch.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- hats-punctuation-grammer.diff begins here ---
Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/hats/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.8 article.sgml
--- article.sgml	8 Aug 2004 13:43:55 -0000	1.8
+++ article.sgml	4 Feb 2006 21:59:44 -0000
@@ -79,11 +79,11 @@
   <para>Hats are answerable to core.  If they are doing good jobs,
     core will leave them alone.  If they are doing a bad job, core has
     the option to remove them.  Hats are expected to work with core if
-    core has issues with their performance of their duties They serve
+    core has issues with their performance of their duties.  They serve
     at the pleasure of core.</para>
 
   <para>Core sometimes will impose additional, specific requirements
-    for a given hat that does not apply to all hats.  These conditions
+    for a given hat that do not apply to all hats.  These conditions
     may change over time.</para>
 
   <para>Committers and others working with hats are expected to use
--- hats-punctuation-grammer.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: ceri 
State-Changed-When: Sat Feb 4 22:31:12 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thank you. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=92826 
>Unformatted:
