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From: Daniel Summer <dvdan23@hotmail.com>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Grammatical error in handbook
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>Number:         92670
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Grammatical error in handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    jcamou
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Feb 01 07:20:02 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:    Thu Feb 02 14:20:36 GMT 2006
>Last-Modified:  Thu Feb 02 14:20:36 GMT 2006
>Originator:     Daniel Summer
>Release:        FreeBSD-6
>Organization:
AcceleratedServers
>Environment:
>Description:
The word "rebuilded" occurs in the FreeBSD handbook. This word however does not occur in the english dictionary. Perhaps this should be changed to "rebuilt".

              Tip: By default, when you build a custom kernel, all kernel modules also will be rebuilded. If you 
want to update a kernel faster or to build only custom modules, you should edit /etc/make.conf before starting to build the kernel:


Cheers.

>How-To-Repeat:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig-building.html
>Fix:
vi or emacs.              
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-bugs->freebsd-doc 
Responsible-Changed-By: linimon 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Feb 1 07:55:00 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Reassign. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=92670 

From: Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk>
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org, dvdan23@hotmail.com
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/92670: Grammatical error in handbook
Date: Wed, 1 Feb 2006 17:50:55 +0000

 Hello,
 
    here is a diff, I've also changed the content a bit, since I didn't
    like the way the sentence has been written.
 
 --- chapter.sgml~	Fri Jan 20 16:10:55 2006
 +++ chapter.sgml	Wed Feb  1 17:47:02 2006
 @@ -383,7 +383,7 @@
  
      <tip>
        <para>By default, when you build a custom kernel,
 -	<emphasis>all</emphasis> kernel modules also will be rebuilded.
 +	<emphasis>all</emphasis> kernel modules will be rebuilt as well.
  	If you want to update a kernel faster or to build only custom
  	modules, you should edit <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>
  	before starting to build the kernel:</para>
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->jcamou  
Responsible-Changed-By: jcamou 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Feb 1 18:05:57 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Over to me. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=92670 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed  
State-Changed-By: jcamou 
State-Changed-When: Thu Feb 2 14:19:13 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed, thanks for the submission. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=92670 
>Unformatted:
