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Date: Thu,  1 Sep 2005 16:36:59 +0200 (CEST)
From: Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk>
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Subject: Typo in the handbook's Permissions section
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>Number:         85572
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Typo in the handbook's Permissions section
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Sep 01 14:40:15 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Thu Sep 01 15:57:18 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Thu Sep 01 15:57:18 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Daniel Gerzo
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.4 i386
>Organization:
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>Environment:
System: FreeBSD daemon.rulez.sk FreeBSD #2: Fri May 27 23:16:31 CEST 2005 danger@daemon.rulez.sk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/daemon i386

>Description:
	While I was translating the Unix Basics section of the
	Handbook, I've found a typo in the Permissions section
	of this chapter. Well, there's a following sentence:

	"These file flags add an additional level of control over
	files, helping to ensure that in some cases not even the
	root can remove or files."

	Notice the word "or" at the end of this sentece. This
	does not really make sence and it seems like somebody
	forgot to add some word, or added one extra word.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	check out this link:
	http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/permissions.html
>Fix:

	Since there are to possibilities how this typo was created,
	I found two ways how to fix this. Here are the diffs:

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.orig	Thu Sep  1 16:25:46 2005
+++ chapter.sgml	Thu Sep  1 16:26:29 2005
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@
 
       <para>These file flags add an additional level of control over
 	files, helping to ensure that in some cases not even the
-	<username>root</username> can remove or files.</para>
+	<username>root</username> can remove files.</para>
 
       <para>File flags are altered by using the &man.chflags.1; utility,
 	using a simple interface.  For example, to enable the system
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---

or

--- chapter.sgml.diff2 begins here ---
--- chapter.sgml.orig	Thu Sep  1 16:25:46 2005
+++ chapter.sgml	Thu Sep  1 16:27:02 2005
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@
 
       <para>These file flags add an additional level of control over
 	files, helping to ensure that in some cases not even the
-	<username>root</username> can remove or files.</para>
+	<username>root</username> can remove or edit files.</para>
 
       <para>File flags are altered by using the &man.chflags.1; utility,
 	using a simple interface.  For example, to enable the system
--- chapter.sgml.diff2 ends here ---
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
To: Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/85572: Typo in the handbook's Permissions section
Date: Thu, 1 Sep 2005 17:49:34 +0300

 On 2005-09-01 16:36, Daniel Gerzo <danger@rulez.sk> wrote:
 > --- chapter.sgml.diff2 begins here ---
 > --- chapter.sgml.orig	Thu Sep  1 16:25:46 2005
 > +++ chapter.sgml	Thu Sep  1 16:27:02 2005
 > @@ -591,7 +591,7 @@
 >
 >        <para>These file flags add an additional level of control over
 >  	files, helping to ensure that in some cases not even the
 > -	<username>root</username> can remove or files.</para>
 > +	<username>root</username> can remove or edit files.</para>
 >
 >        <para>File flags are altered by using the &man.chflags.1; utility,
 >  	using a simple interface.  For example, to enable the system
 
 "or alter", perhaps?
 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Thu Sep 1 15:56:41 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed with "alter" after submitter's approval of the wording change. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Sep 1 15:56:41 GMT 2005 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=85572 
>Unformatted:
