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From: Julien Gabel <jpeg@thilelli.net>
Reply-To: Julien Gabel <jpeg@thilelli.net>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
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Subject: Very little cosmetic/ponctuation changes for the GEOM (geom-striping) chapter of the Handbook.
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>Number:         85353
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] minor cosmetic/punctuation changes for the GEOM (geom-striping) chapter of the Handbook.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    trhodes
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Aug 27 16:20:16 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Thu Oct 19 03:34:51 GMT 2006
>Last-Modified:  Thu Oct 19 03:40:17 GMT 2006
>Originator:     Julien Gabel
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.4-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD titeuf.thilelli.net 5.4-STABLE FreeBSD 5.4-STABLE #0: Sun Aug 21 14:49:33 CEST 2005 root@titeuf.thilelli.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/TITEUF i386

>Description:
When command(s) follow a sentence, i think the sentence may end with a ':',
as found in other part of the book (geom-mirror for example).

An other point is when a kernel module is loaded, the .ko extension may be
forgotten.  We can see this in other documentation and the kldload(8) manual
page.

>How-To-Repeat:
Compare with the corresponding chapter:
 http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom-striping.html

>Fix:

Here is a little patch:

--- chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml	Sat Aug 13 03:11:37 2005
+++ /tmp/chapter.sgml	Sat Aug 27 17:53:32 2005
@@ -148,13 +148,13 @@
       <step><para>Load the <filename>geom_stripe</filename>
         module:</para>
 
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>kldload geom_stripe.ko</userinput></screen>
+    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>kldload geom_stripe</userinput></screen>
 	</step>
 
       <step><para>Ensure that a suitable mount point exists.  If this
         volume will become a root partition, then temporarily use
         another mount point such as <filename
-        role="directory">/mnt</filename>.</para>
+        role="directory">/mnt</filename>:</para>
 
         <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mkdir /mnt</userinput></screen>
       </step>
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
         the following command could be used to stripe two unused,
         unpartitioned <acronym>ATA</acronym> disks:
         <filename>/dev/ad2</filename> and
-        <filename>/dev/ad3</filename>.</para>
+        <filename>/dev/ad3</filename>:</para>
 
         <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>gstripe label -v st0 /dev/ad2 /dev/ad3</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -201,12 +201,12 @@
 
       <para>Many numbers will glide across the screen, and after a few
         seconds, the process will be complete.  The volume has been
-        created and is ready to be mounted:</para>
+        created and is ready to be mounted.</para>
     </step>
   </procedure>
 
   <para>The following command can be used to manually mount a newly
-    created disk stripe.</para>
+    created disk stripe:</para>
 
   <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mount /dev/stripe/st0a /mnt</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@
 
   <para>The geom module must also be automatically loaded during
     system initialization, by adding a line to
-    <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>.</para>
+    <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>:</para>
 
   <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>echo 'geom_stripe_load="YES"' &gt;&gt; /boot/loader.conf</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@
 	  system to a &man.loader.8; prompt.  Load the kernel module
 	  manually:</para>
 
-	<screen>OK? <userinput>load geom_mirror.ko</userinput>
+	<screen>OK? <userinput>load geom_mirror</userinput>
 OK? <userinput>boot</userinput></screen>
 
 	<para>If this works then for whatever reason the module was not
--- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: "Julien Gabel" <jpeg@thilelli.net>
To: "Gary W. Swearingen" <garys@opusnet.com>
Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/85353: Very little cosmetic/ponctuation changes for the 
     GEOM (geom-striping) chapter of the Handbook.
Date: Sun, 28 Aug 2005 22:30:17 +0200 (CEST)

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 >>>    <para>The following command can be used to manually mount a newly
 >>> -    created disk stripe.</para>
 >>> +    created disk stripe:</para>
 
 >> It's probably not worth changing, but I find "the following" to be
 >> redundant in sentences that ends with ":".
 
 > Agreed.
 
 >> In decreasing order of verbosity:
 >>
 >> The following command can be used to manually mount a newly created
 >> disk stripe.
 >>
 >> This command can be used to manually mount a newly created disk stripe:
 >>
 >> To manually mount a newly created disk stripe:
 
 > This one may be better i think, since it is more concise.
 
 >> And while opinions differ, IMO, it should be "newly-created".
 
 > Don't have a preference about this one.
 
 
 Ok.  I reworked a little bit this one, trying to adapt it to what
 was said.  In the same time, try to avoid the repeated words like
 "following" and "created".
 
 Please find a new patch attached.
 
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From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc: jpeg@thilelli.net
Subject: Re: docs/85353: [patch] minor cosmetic/punction changes for the
 GEOM (geom-striping) ...
Date: Fri, 13 Oct 2006 00:50:40 -0400

 Hi,
 
 Could you provide the diff in a non-encoded format.  It would just
 make life easier.  Thanks,
 
 -- 
 Tom Rhodes
State-Changed-From-To: open->feedback 
State-Changed-By: joel 
State-Changed-When: Fri Oct 13 08:30:40 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
Feedback requested. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=85353 

From: "Julien Gabel" <jpeg@thilelli.net>
To: "Tom Rhodes" <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/85353: [patch] minor cosmetic/punction changes for the 
     GEOM (geom-striping) ...
Date: Sat, 14 Oct 2006 14:48:49 +0200 (CEST)

 Hello,
 
 > Could you provide the diff in a non-encoded format.  It would just
 > make life easier.  Thanks,
 
 When using send-pr(1), i usually use the -a flag to automatically
 attach a file.  I don't known why the first patch was sent correctly,
 but not the second reworked-one.
 
 My last known patch on this subject can be downloaded at:
  - http://www.thilelli.net/~jgabel/store/pub/PR/85353/
 
 As a side note, i don't work on this (little, and not so important)
 patch since 28/08/2005.  I don't known -- and don't check -- if it
 apply cleanly on the current chapter.sgml file.
 
 Thank you,
 --
 Julien Gabel.
 
State-Changed-From-To: feedback->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Thu Oct 19 03:33:30 UTC 2006 
State-Changed-Why:  
You're right, patch did not apply.  I manually merged and in 
some minor cases reworded and then applied it to the chapter. 
Thanks for the submission! 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-By: trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Oct 19 03:33:30 UTC 2006 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Over to me. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=85353 

From: dfilter@FreeBSD.ORG (dfilter service)
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/85353: commit references a PR
Date: Thu, 19 Oct 2006 03:31:21 +0000 (UTC)

 trhodes     2006-10-19 03:31:14 UTC
 
   FreeBSD doc repository
 
   Modified files:
     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom chapter.sgml 
   Log:
   A few wording fix ups to the GEOM chapter.
   
   PR:             85353
   Submitted by:   "Julien Gabel" <jpeg@thilelli.net> (original submission)
   
   Revision  Changes    Path
   1.25      +18 -23    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.sgml
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