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From: "Gary W. Swearingen" <garys@opusnet.com>
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Subject: [patch] pcvt(4) manpage uses "their" for "there", etc
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>Number:         84619
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] pcvt(4) manpage uses "their" for "there", etc
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    murray
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Aug 06 16:00:34 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Tue Aug 16 19:35:50 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Tue Aug 16 19:35:50 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Gary W. Swearingen
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.4-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
none
>Environment:
n/a
>Description:

pcvt(4) manpage has several English problems.

>How-To-Repeat:
n/a

>Fix:

--- pcvt..orig.4	Thu Aug  4 08:21:39 2005
+++ pcvt.4	Thu Aug  4 13:34:09 2005
@@ -142,11 +142,11 @@
 operating system.
 It has been designed to be highly configurable in order to satisfy
 everyone's needs.
-The preferred way for those configurations is to
+The preferred configuration method is to
 provide appropriate
-.Em options
-lines within the config file, possibly overriding the built-in default
-values.
+.Em option
+lines within the kernel configuration file,
+possibly overriding the built-in defaults.
 .Pp
 The following list gives a short overview of the available configuration
 options.
@@ -154,13 +154,9 @@
 .Pa i386/isa/pcvt/pcvt_conf.h
 in the kernel source tree for detailed documentation.
 .Pp
-Note: the following conventions apply to all the Boolean options.
-If an option is given with no value, a value of 1
-(activated)
-is substituted.
-If an option value is given as 0, this options is
-deactivated.
-Any other value is substituted by 1, too.
+Note: The following conventions apply to all Boolean options.
+If an option value is given as 0, the option is deactivated.
+With any other value, or no value, the option is activated.
 If an option
 is omitted, a built-in default is assumed.
 .Bl -tag -width indent
@@ -648,7 +644,7 @@
 .Pp
 Depending on the configuration of a
 .Nm
-driver, their might be a simple screen saver available.
+driver, there might be a simple screen saver available.
 It is controlled
 by the command
 .Pp
@@ -658,7 +654,7 @@
 .El
 .Pp
 taking a pointer to an integer as argument.
-Despite of its command name,
+Despite its command name,
 this is available on
 .Em any
 kind of adaptor if configured in by the

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->patched 
State-Changed-By: murray 
State-Changed-When: Tue Aug 9 14:11:58 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed to -HEAD.  I will MFC after 3 days.  Thanks for the 
submission! 



Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->murray 
Responsible-Changed-By: murray 
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue Aug 9 14:11:58 GMT 2005 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Committed to -HEAD.  I will MFC after 3 days.  Thanks for the 
submission! 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=84619 
State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: matteo 
State-Changed-When: Tue Aug 16 19:35:35 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed and MFCed 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=84619 
>Unformatted:
