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Date: Thu, 19 May 2005 05:02:54 GMT
From: David Adam <zanchey@ucc.gu.uwa.edu.au>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] Typo in Firewall Packages section of Firewalls chapter
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>Number:         81242
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Typo in Firewall Packages section of Firewalls chapter
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu May 19 05:10:02 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Thu May 19 08:43:20 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Thu May 19 08:43:20 GMT 2005
>Originator:     David Adam
>Release:        FreeBSD 5-STABLE
>Organization:
University Computer Club, UWA
>Environment:
Linux mussel 2.6.10-1-686-smp #1 SMP Fri Mar 11 01:49:45 EST 2005 i686 GNU/Linux

>Description:
The second paragraph in chapter 24.3, Firewall Packages, has a typo (build in instead of built-in).
>How-To-Repeat:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls-apps.html
>Fix:
This patch is also available at http://zanchey.ucc.asn.au/freebsd/firewalls.chapter.2.patch

--- firewalls.chapter.orig      2005-05-08 22:15:43.000000000 +0800
+++ firewalls.chapter.2 2005-05-19 13:01:16.000000000 +0800
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@
       from your system, although they go about it different ways and
       have different rule syntaxes.</para>

-    <para>The reason that &os; has multiple build in firewall packages
+    <para>The reason that &os; has multiple built-in firewall packages
       is that different people have different requirements and
       preferences.  No single firewall package is the best.</para>

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: blackend 
State-Changed-When: Thu May 19 08:43:00 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed.  Thanks. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=81242 
>Unformatted:
