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From: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
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Subject: portaudit typo / elaborate on daily security run emails 
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>Number:         80259
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       portaudit typo / elaborate on daily security run emails
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    trhodes
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Apr 22 18:20:24 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Fri Apr 22 21:43:03 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Fri Apr 22 21:43:03 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Brad Davis
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.4-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD mccaffrey.house.so14k.com 5.4-STABLE FreeBSD 5.4-STABLE #0: Wed Apr 20 22:22:19 MDT 2005 root@mccaffrey.house.so14k.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/SMP i386
>Description:
	Fix a typo (s/power/powerful) & elaborate on the importance of the daily security run emails
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

--- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml	Fri Apr 22 11:51:50 2005
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml	Fri Apr 22 12:03:56 2005
@@ -4733,7 +4733,9 @@
     <para>During the install process, the configuration files for
       &man.periodic.8; will be updated, permitting
       <application>Portaudit</application> output in the daily security
-      runs.  No more configuration will be required here.</para>
+      runs.  Make sure you have been recieving and reading the daily
+      security run emails sent to root's email account.  No more
+      configuration will be required here.</para>
 
     <para>After installation, an administrator must update the database
       stored locally in
@@ -4771,7 +4773,7 @@
       by &os; Port version, along with other web sites which may contain
       security advisories.</para>
 
-    <para>In short, <application>Portaudit</application> is a power
+    <para>In short, <application>Portaudit</application> is a powerful
       utility and extremely useful when coupled with the
       <application>Portupgrade</application> port.</para>
   </sect1>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
To: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/80259: portaudit typo %2F elaborate on daily security run emails
Date: Fri, 22 Apr 2005 13:30:29 -0600

 Here is a new patch per discussion with trhodes@
 
  
 --- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml	Fri Apr 22 11:51:50 2005
 +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml	Fri Apr 22 13:24:28 2005
 @@ -4733,7 +4733,9 @@
      <para>During the install process, the configuration files for
        &man.periodic.8; will be updated, permitting
        <application>Portaudit</application> output in the daily security
 -      runs.  No more configuration will be required here.</para>
 +      runs.  Ensure the daily security run emails, which are sent to
 +      <username>root</username>'s email account, are being read.  No
 +      more configuration will be required here.</para>
  
      <para>After installation, an administrator must update the database
        stored locally in
 @@ -4771,7 +4773,7 @@
        by &os; Port version, along with other web sites which may contain
        security advisories.</para>
  
 -    <para>In short, <application>Portaudit</application> is a power
 +    <para>In short, <application>Portaudit</application> is a powerful
        utility and extremely useful when coupled with the
        <application>Portupgrade</application> port.</para>
    </sect1>
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->jcamou  
Responsible-Changed-By: jcamou 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Apr 22 20:35:35 GMT 2005 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Grab this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=80259 
Responsible-Changed-From-To: jcamou->trhodes  
Responsible-Changed-By: jcamou 
Responsible-Changed-When: Fri Apr 22 21:18:42 GMT 2005 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Over to trhodes as per his request. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=80259 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed  
State-Changed-By: jcamou 
State-Changed-When: Fri Apr 22 21:42:21 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Patch committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=80259 
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