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Date: Wed, 20 Apr 2005 10:05:17 GMT
From: Zheyu Shen <free.bsd@gmx.net>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: twe(4) man page typos
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>Number:         80133
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       twe(4) man page typos
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    brueffer
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Apr 20 10:10:16 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Sun May 15 09:16:26 CEST 2005
>Last-Modified:  Sun May 15 09:16:26 CEST 2005
>Originator:     Zheyu Shen
>Release:        5.2R
>Organization:
none
>Environment:
FreeBSD qilin.kojo.net 5.2-RELEASE FreeBSD 5.2-RELEASE #5: Sun Apr 17 13:55:18 CST 2005     zheyu@qilin.kojo.net:/usr/src/sys/i386/compile/KERNEL_QILIN_5_2  i386

>Description:
two typos in the twe(4) man page
>How-To-Repeat:
read twe(4) man page
>Fix:
--- /home/ncvs/src/share/man/man4/twe.4	Wed Mar  9 22:19:56 2005
+++ /home/zheyu/twe.4	Sun Apr 17 11:05:15 2005
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 .Nm
 driver provides support for AMCC's 3ware 5000/6000/7000/8000 series
 PATA/SATA RAID adapters.
-These adapters were formerly know as
+These adapters were formerly known as
 .Dq 3ware Escalade .
 .Pp
 These devices support 2, 4, 8, or 12 ATA disk drives
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@
 .It twe%d: device_add_child failed
 .It twe%d: bus_generic_attach returned %d
 .Pp
-Creation of the disk devices failed, either due to communications
+Creation of the disk devices failed, either due to communication
 problems with the adapter or due to resource shortage;
 attachment of one or more units may have been aborted.
 .El

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->feedback 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Wed Apr 20 12:45:36 CEST 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed the first part of the patch, awaiting feedback on the 
second part. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-By: brueffer 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Apr 20 12:45:36 CEST 2005 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Grab this. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=80133 

From: Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
To: Zheyu Shen <free.bsd@gmx.net>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/80133: twe(4) man page typos
Date: Wed, 20 Apr 2005 12:45:34 +0200

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 On Wed, Apr 20, 2005 at 10:05:17AM +0000, Zheyu Shen wrote:
 >  .It twe%d: device_add_child failed
 >  .It twe%d: bus_generic_attach returned %d
 >  .Pp
 > -Creation of the disk devices failed, either due to communications
 > +Creation of the disk devices failed, either due to communication
 >  problems with the adapter or due to resource shortage;
 
 Hi,
 
 i have committed the first part of the patch.  I'm not sure about the
 second part.  As far as I know, both versions are correct.  What do our
 native speakers here think?
 
 - Christian
 
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State-Changed-From-To: feedback->patched 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Thu May 12 18:19:13 CEST 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Also committed the second part.  Though both forms are correct, 
your suggestion seems better.  Thanks! (MFC pending) 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=80133 
State-Changed-From-To: patched->closed 
State-Changed-By: brueffer 
State-Changed-When: Sun May 15 09:15:17 CEST 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
All done.  Thanks for the submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=80133 
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