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From: Stefan Eggers <seggers@semyam.dinoco.de>
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Subject: camcontrol(8): Grammar error
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>Number:         7975
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       camcontrol(8): Grammar error
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    ken
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Sep 18 11:20:04 PDT 1998
>Closed-Date:    Mon Sep 21 13:45:00 PDT 1998
>Last-Modified:  Mon Sep 21 13:46:08 PDT 1998
>Originator:     Stefan Eggers
>Release:        FreeBSD 3.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
none
>Environment:

	-current sources cvsup'ed yesterday.

>Description:

	One of the sentences in the camcontrol(8) man page is not
correct regarding its grammar.  See below for what I think is not
right.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
	
--- camcontrol.8.ORIG	Fri Sep 18 11:51:11 1998
+++ camcontrol.8	Fri Sep 18 11:52:14 1998
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@
 flag) if the command fails.  Since error recovery is turned on, the
 disk will be spun up if it is not currently spinning.
 .Nm camcontrol
-will report whether or the disk is ready.
+will report whether the disk is ready or not.
 .Bd -literal -offset foobar
 camcontrol cmd -n cd -u 1 -v -c "3C 00 00 00 00 00 00 00 0e 00" \e
 	-i 0xe "s1 i3 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1"
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Sean Kelly <kelly@plutotech.com>
To: seggers@semyam.dinoco.de
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/7975: camcontrol(8): Grammar error
Date: Fri, 18 Sep 1998 16:08:41 -0600

 Stefan Eggers wrote:
 > -will report whether or the disk is ready.
 > +will report whether the disk is ready or not.
 
 "whether" implies that there is an "or not" case, so we should simplify
 it to just
 
 	will report whether the disk is ready.
 
 --Sean
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: ken 
State-Changed-When: Mon Sep 21 13:45:00 PDT 1998 
State-Changed-Why:  
I used Sean's suggestion and fixed the man page. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->ken 
Responsible-Changed-By: ken 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Sep 21 13:45:00 PDT 1998 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I wrote the man page. 
>Unformatted:
