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From: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
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Subject: Be even more verbose about where ip aliases go
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>Number:         78132
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Be even more verbose about where ip aliases go
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    remko
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Feb 26 22:50:26 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Sun Feb 27 11:28:20 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Sun Feb 27 11:28:20 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Brad Davis
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.4-PRERELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD mccaffrey.house.so14k.com 5.4-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 5.4-PRERELEASE #0: Thu Feb 24 17:03:44 MST 2005 root@mccaffrey.house.so14k.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/SMP i386
>Description:
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:


--- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	Fri Feb 25 13:31:40 2005
+++ doc2/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	Sat Feb 26 15:42:22 2005
@@ -1278,8 +1278,8 @@
       <hostid role="ipaddr">202.0.75.20</hostid>) must be configured with a
       netmask of <hostid role="netmask">255.255.255.255</hostid>.</para>
 
-    <para>The following entries configure the adapter correctly for
-      this arrangement:</para>
+    <para>The following <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> entries
+      configure the adapter correctly for this arrangement:</para>
 
 <programlisting> ifconfig_fxp0="inet 10.1.1.1 netmask 255.255.255.0"
  ifconfig_fxp0_alias0="inet 10.1.1.2 netmask 255.255.255.255"
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->remko 
Responsible-Changed-By: remko 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sat Feb 26 22:57:30 GMT 2005 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Grab this PR 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=78132 

From: "Siebrand Mazeland" <s.mazeland@xs4all.nl>
To: <freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org>
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/78132: Be even more verbose about where ip aliases go
Date: Sun, 27 Feb 2005 00:03:48 +0100

 Nice change. I propose to commit the diff and remove a few excess spaces in
 the
 <programlisting> that is below the changed paragraph in the process.
 
 Cheers! Siebrand
 
 diff -u -r1.205 chapter.sgml
 --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 14:04:13
 -0000	1.205
 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	26 Feb 2005 23:01:30
 -0000
 @@ -1278,18 +1278,18 @@
        <hostid role="ipaddr">202.0.75.20</hostid>) must be configured with a
        netmask of <hostid role="netmask">255.255.255.255</hostid>.</para>
  
 -    <para>The following entries configure the adapter correctly for
 -      this arrangement:</para>
 +    <para>The following <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> entries
 +      configure the adapter correctly for this arrangement:</para>
  
 -<programlisting> ifconfig_fxp0="inet 10.1.1.1 netmask 255.255.255.0"
 - ifconfig_fxp0_alias0="inet 10.1.1.2 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 - ifconfig_fxp0_alias1="inet 10.1.1.3 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 - ifconfig_fxp0_alias2="inet 10.1.1.4 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 - ifconfig_fxp0_alias3="inet 10.1.1.5 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 - ifconfig_fxp0_alias4="inet 202.0.75.17 netmask 255.255.255.240"
 - ifconfig_fxp0_alias5="inet 202.0.75.18 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 - ifconfig_fxp0_alias6="inet 202.0.75.19 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 - ifconfig_fxp0_alias7="inet 202.0.75.20 netmask
 255.255.255.255"</programlisting>
 +<programlisting>ifconfig_fxp0="inet 10.1.1.1 netmask 255.255.255.0"
 +ifconfig_fxp0_alias0="inet 10.1.1.2 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 +ifconfig_fxp0_alias1="inet 10.1.1.3 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 +ifconfig_fxp0_alias2="inet 10.1.1.4 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 +ifconfig_fxp0_alias3="inet 10.1.1.5 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 +ifconfig_fxp0_alias4="inet 202.0.75.17 netmask 255.255.255.240"
 +ifconfig_fxp0_alias5="inet 202.0.75.18 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 +ifconfig_fxp0_alias6="inet 202.0.75.19 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 +ifconfig_fxp0_alias7="inet 202.0.75.20 netmask
 255.255.255.255"</programlisting>
  
    </sect1>
 

From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
To: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/78132: Be even more verbose about where ip aliases go
Date: Sat, 26 Feb 2005 18:11:17 -0500

 On Sat, 26 Feb 2005 15:49:14 -0700 (MST)
 Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com> wrote:
 
 > 
 > >Number:         78132
 > >Category:       docs
 > >Synopsis:       Be even more verbose about where ip aliases go
 > >Confidential:   no
 > >Severity:       non-critical
 > >Priority:       low
 > >Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 > >State:          open
 > >Quarter:        
 > >Keywords:       
 > >Date-Required:
 > >Class:          change-request
 > >Submitter-Id:   current-users
 > >Arrival-Date:   Sat Feb 26 22:50:26 GMT 2005
 > >Closed-Date:
 > >Last-Modified:
 > >Originator:     Brad Davis
 > >Release:        FreeBSD 5.4-PRERELEASE i386
 > >Organization:
 > >Environment:
 > System: FreeBSD mccaffrey.house.so14k.com 5.4-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 5.4-PRERELEASE #0: Thu Feb 24 17:03:44 MST 2005 root@mccaffrey.house.so14k.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/SMP i386
 > >Description:
 > >How-To-Repeat:
 > >Fix:
 > 
 > 
 > --- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	Fri Feb 25 13:31:40 2005
 > +++ doc2/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml	Sat Feb 26 15:42:22 2005
 > @@ -1278,8 +1278,8 @@
 >        <hostid role="ipaddr">202.0.75.20</hostid>) must be configured with a
 >        netmask of <hostid role="netmask">255.255.255.255</hostid>.</para>
 >  
 > -    <para>The following entries configure the adapter correctly for
 > -      this arrangement:</para>
 > +    <para>The following <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> entries
 > +      configure the adapter correctly for this arrangement:</para>
 >  
 >  <programlisting> ifconfig_fxp0="inet 10.1.1.1 netmask 255.255.255.0"
 >   ifconfig_fxp0_alias0="inet 10.1.1.2 netmask 255.255.255.255"
 
 I think this is a good change.
 
 -- 
 Tom Rhodes

From: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
To: s.mazeland@xs4all.nl, freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/78132: Be even more verbose about where ip aliases go
Date: Sat, 26 Feb 2005 16:27:28 -0700

 Hi Siebrand,
 
 
 Please note whitespace changes shouldn't be mixed with content changes..
 
 
 
 Regards,
 Brad Davis
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: remko 
State-Changed-When: Sun Feb 27 11:28:03 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Patch applied. Thanks both for the submission! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=78132 
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