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From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net>
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Subject: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list	
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>Number:         77926
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    trhodes
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          update
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Feb 22 14:00:22 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Wed Feb 23 07:37:20 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Wed Feb 23 07:37:20 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386

>Description:

	Update the word list in the FDP Primer with the
	capitalization of the Ports Collection.

>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:

--- writingstyle.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.43
diff -u -r1.43 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 16:57:00 -0000	1.43
+++ chapter.sgml	22 Feb 2005 01:29:17 -0000
@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>ports collection</para>
+	<para>Ports Pollection</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
--- writingstyle.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
To: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77926: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list
Date: Tue, 22 Feb 2005 15:15:41 +0100

 On Tue, Feb 22, 2005 at 06:53:18AM -0700, Jesus R. Camou wrote:
 > 
 > >Number:         77926
 > >Category:       docs
 > >Synopsis:       [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list
 > >Confidential:   no
 > >Severity:       non-critical
 > >Priority:       medium
 > >Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 > >State:          open
 > >Quarter:        
 > >Keywords:       
 > >Date-Required:
 > >Class:          update
 > >Submitter-Id:   current-users
 > >Arrival-Date:   Tue Feb 22 14:00:22 GMT 2005
 > >Closed-Date:
 > >Last-Modified:
 > >Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
 > >Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
 > >Organization:
 > >Environment:
 > System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386
 > 
 > >Description:
 > 
 > 	Update the word list in the FDP Primer with the
 > 	capitalization of the Ports Collection.
 > 
 > >How-To-Repeat:
 > >Fix:
 > 
 > --- writingstyle.diff begins here ---
 > Index: chapter.sgml
 > ===================================================================
 > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v
 > retrieving revision 1.43
 > diff -u -r1.43 chapter.sgml
 > --- chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 16:57:00 -0000	1.43
 > +++ chapter.sgml	22 Feb 2005 01:29:17 -0000
 > @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@
 >        </listitem>
 >  
 >        <listitem>
 > -	<para>ports collection</para>
 > +	<para>Ports Pollection</para>
 >        </listitem>
 >
 
 This seems to be redundant with the "FreeBSD Ports Collection" entry,
 ealier in the document.  And I wonder about the revision 1.16 of this
 list where both "FreeBSD Ports Collection" and ""ports collection" have
 been added, maybe Murray and/or Chern may say something on that.
 This is another example of docproj history, I mean, as with CDROM which
 came from Walnut Creeks CDROM boxes (have a look to freebsdmall CD sets
 too), this is not a typo but a choice.
 
 Marc

From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net>
To: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77926: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list
Date: Tue, 22 Feb 2005 07:33:44 -0700

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 On Tue, Feb 22, 2005 at 03:15:41PM +0100, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
 > On Tue, Feb 22, 2005 at 06:53:18AM -0700, Jesus R. Camou wrote:
 > > 
 > > >Number:         77926
 > > >Category:       docs
 > > >Synopsis:       [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list
 > > >Confidential:   no
 > > >Severity:       non-critical
 > > >Priority:       medium
 > > >Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 > > >State:          open
 > > >Quarter:        
 > > >Keywords:       
 > > >Date-Required:
 > > >Class:          update
 > > >Submitter-Id:   current-users
 > > >Arrival-Date:   Tue Feb 22 14:00:22 GMT 2005
 > > >Closed-Date:
 > > >Last-Modified:
 > > >Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
 > > >Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
 > > >Organization:
 > > >Environment:
 > > System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386
 > > 
 > > >Description:
 > > 
 > > 	Update the word list in the FDP Primer with the
 > > 	capitalization of the Ports Collection.
 > > 
 > > >How-To-Repeat:
 > > >Fix:
 > > 
 > > --- writingstyle.diff begins here ---
 > > Index: chapter.sgml
 > > ===================================================================
 > > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v
 > > retrieving revision 1.43
 > > diff -u -r1.43 chapter.sgml
 > > --- chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 16:57:00 -0000	1.43
 > > +++ chapter.sgml	22 Feb 2005 01:29:17 -0000
 > > @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@
 > >        </listitem>
 > >  
 > >        <listitem>
 > > -	<para>ports collection</para>
 > > +	<para>Ports Pollection</para>
 > >        </listitem>
 > >
 > 
 > This seems to be redundant with the "FreeBSD Ports Collection" entry,
 > ealier in the document.  And I wonder about the revision 1.16 of this
 > list where both "FreeBSD Ports Collection" and ""ports collection" have
 > been added, maybe Murray and/or Chern may say something on that.
 > This is another example of docproj history, I mean, as with CDROM which
 > came from Walnut Creeks CDROM boxes (have a look to freebsdmall CD sets
 > too), this is not a typo but a choice.
 
 I requested this change to have an order of how words should be spelled.
 Both ways are used throughout the doc/ tree, it would look better if
 there were only one way of writing it from now on.  Some replacements has
 been made lately for the capitalization way.  Plus, oh my, there's a
 typo on my patch.  I'll attach a corrected patch just in case it is 
 decided to be committed.  
 
 -- 
 Jesus R. Camou <jcamou@COX.net>
 jcamou@es.FreeBSD.org
 
 
 
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 Index: writing-style/chapter.sgml
 ===================================================================
 RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v
 retrieving revision 1.43
 diff -u -r1.43 chapter.sgml
 --- writing-style/chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 16:57:00 -0000	1.43
 +++ writing-style/chapter.sgml	22 Feb 2005 14:29:20 -0000
 @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@
        </listitem>
  
        <listitem>
 -	<para>ports collection</para>
 +	<para>Ports Collection</para>
        </listitem>
  
        <listitem>
 
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State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Wed Feb 23 07:35:32 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
While I've read the follow ups to this PR, there is one fact that has not been brough up. 

Ports Collection is a name, a proper noun, and in both MLA and Chicago writing styles, 
proper nouns are capitalized.  I agree with the submitters change and have adjusted 
the document accordingly.  Thank you for the submission. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-By: trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-When: Wed Feb 23 07:35:32 GMT 2005 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Over to me. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=77926 
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