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From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net>
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Subject: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes 
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>Number:         77817
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    remko
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Feb 21 01:10:11 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Mon Feb 21 20:49:07 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Mon Feb 21 20:49:07 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386

>Description:

	o Isn't Hiten Pandya's email hmp@FreeBSD.org? Change this.
	o s/4.x/4.X/ and s/5.x/5.X/
	o add white space: devicename -> device name

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- vinum.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.34
diff -u -r1.34 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	11 Jan 2005 12:34:29 -0000	1.34
+++ chapter.sgml	21 Feb 2005 00:42:10 -0000
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 	The Vinum Volume Manager
 	By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com)
 
-	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten@FreeBSD.org>
+	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org>
 	and Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
 
 	For the FreeBSD Documentation Project
@@ -1078,8 +1078,8 @@
 	    start</command> command.</para>
 
 	  <note><para>The following paragraphs are outlining the steps
-	    needed for FreeBSD 5.x and above.  The setup required for
-	    FreeBSD 4.x differs, and is described below in <xref
+	    needed for FreeBSD 5.X and above.  The setup required for
+	    FreeBSD 4.X differs, and is described below in <xref
 	    linkend="vinum-root-4x">.</para></note>
 
 	  <para>By placing the line:</para>
@@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
 	    root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes
 	    this information on to the kernel.	When it comes to mount
 	    the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the
-	    devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this
+	    device name provided which driver to ask to translate this
 	    into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
--- vinum.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Remko Lodder <remko@elvandar.org>
To: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
Date: Mon, 21 Feb 2005 06:21:31 +0100

 Jesus R. Camou wrote:
 >>Number:         77817
 >>Category:       docs
 >>Synopsis:       [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
 >>Confidential:   no
 >>Severity:       non-critical
 >>Priority:       medium
 >>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 >>State:          open
 >>Quarter:        
 >>Keywords:       
 >>Date-Required:
 >>Class:          change-request
 >>Submitter-Id:   current-users
 >>Arrival-Date:   Mon Feb 21 01:10:11 GMT 2005
 >>Closed-Date:
 >>Last-Modified:
 >>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
 >>Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
 >>Organization:
 >>Environment:
 > 
 > System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386
 > 
 > 
 >>Description:
 > 
 > 
 > 	o Isn't Hiten Pandya's email hmp@FreeBSD.org? Change this.
 > 	o s/4.x/4.X/ and s/5.x/5.X/
 > 	o add white space: devicename -> device name
 > 
 > 
 >>How-To-Repeat:
 > 
 > 
 >>Fix:
 > 
 > 
 > --- vinum.diff begins here ---
 > Index: chapter.sgml
 > ===================================================================
 > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v
 > retrieving revision 1.34
 > diff -u -r1.34 chapter.sgml
 > --- chapter.sgml	11 Jan 2005 12:34:29 -0000	1.34
 > +++ chapter.sgml	21 Feb 2005 00:42:10 -0000
 > @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 >  	The Vinum Volume Manager
 >  	By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com)
 >  
 > -	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten@FreeBSD.org>
 > +	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org>
 >  	and Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
 >  
 >  	For the FreeBSD Documentation Project
 > @@ -1078,8 +1078,8 @@
 >  	    start</command> command.</para>
 >  
 >  	  <note><para>The following paragraphs are outlining the steps
 > -	    needed for FreeBSD 5.x and above.  The setup required for
 > -	    FreeBSD 4.x differs, and is described below in <xref
 > +	    needed for FreeBSD 5.X and above.  The setup required for
 > +	    FreeBSD 4.X differs, and is described below in <xref
 >  	    linkend="vinum-root-4x">.</para></note>
 >  
 >  	  <para>By placing the line:</para>
 > @@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
 >  	    root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes
 >  	    this information on to the kernel.	When it comes to mount
 >  	    the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the
 > -	    devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this
 > +	    device name provided which driver to ask to translate this
 >  	    into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para>
 >  	</listitem>
 >        </itemizedlist>
 > --- vinum.diff ends here ---
 > 
 > 
 > 
 >>Release-Note:
 >>Audit-Trail:
 >>Unformatted:
 > 
 
 You are correct about the hmp address. However the .x to .X in the
 version numbering already had been done yesterday.
 
 Could you please send a updated patch without the uppercase X diff?
 
 Thanks!
 
 -- 
 Kind regards,
 
       Remko Lodder  ** remko@elvandar.org
       Reporter DSINET  **  remko@DSINet.org
       Founder Tienervaders  ** remko@tienervaders.org
       FreeBSD Documentation Project  ** remko@FreeBSD.org

From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou@cox.net>
To: Remko Lodder <remko@elvandar.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
Date: Mon, 21 Feb 2005 00:20:24 -0700

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 Content-Disposition: inline
 
 On Mon, Feb 21, 2005 at 06:21:31AM +0100, Remko Lodder wrote:
 > Jesus R. Camou wrote:
 > >>Number:         77817
 > >>Category:       docs
 > >>Synopsis:       [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
 > >>Confidential:   no
 > >>Severity:       non-critical
 > >>Priority:       medium
 > >>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 > >>State:          open
 > >>Quarter:        
 > >>Keywords:       
 > >>Date-Required:
 > >>Class:          change-request
 > >>Submitter-Id:   current-users
 > >>Arrival-Date:   Mon Feb 21 01:10:11 GMT 2005
 > >>Closed-Date:
 > >>Last-Modified:
 > >>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
 > >>Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
 > >>Organization:
 > >>Environment:
 > >
 > >System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun 
 > >Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 
 > >jcamou@opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386
 > >
 > >
 > >>Description:
 > >
 > >
 > >	o Isn't Hiten Pandya's email hmp@FreeBSD.org? Change this.
 > >	o s/4.x/4.X/ and s/5.x/5.X/
 > >	o add white space: devicename -> device name
 > >
 > >
 > >>How-To-Repeat:
 > >
 > >
 > >>Fix:
 > >
 > >
 > >--- vinum.diff begins here ---
 > >Index: chapter.sgml
 > >===================================================================
 > >RCS file: 
 > >/home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v
 > >retrieving revision 1.34
 > >diff -u -r1.34 chapter.sgml
 > >--- chapter.sgml	11 Jan 2005 12:34:29 -0000	1.34
 > >+++ chapter.sgml	21 Feb 2005 00:42:10 -0000
 > >@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 > > 	The Vinum Volume Manager
 > > 	By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com)
 > > 
 > >-	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten@FreeBSD.org>
 > >+	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org>
 > > 	and Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
 > > 
 > > 	For the FreeBSD Documentation Project
 > >@@ -1078,8 +1078,8 @@
 > > 	    start</command> command.</para>
 > > 
 > > 	  <note><para>The following paragraphs are outlining the steps
 > >-	    needed for FreeBSD 5.x and above.  The setup required for
 > >-	    FreeBSD 4.x differs, and is described below in <xref
 > >+	    needed for FreeBSD 5.X and above.  The setup required for
 > >+	    FreeBSD 4.X differs, and is described below in <xref
 > > 	    linkend="vinum-root-4x">.</para></note>
 > > 
 > > 	  <para>By placing the line:</para>
 > >@@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
 > > 	    root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes
 > > 	    this information on to the kernel.	When it comes to mount
 > > 	    the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the
 > >-	    devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this
 > >+	    device name provided which driver to ask to translate this
 > > 	    into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para>
 > > 	</listitem>
 > >       </itemizedlist>
 > >--- vinum.diff ends here ---
 > >
 > >
 > >
 > >>Release-Note:
 > >>Audit-Trail:
 > >>Unformatted:
 > >
 > 
 > You are correct about the hmp address. However the .x to .X in the
 > version numbering already had been done yesterday.
 
 You're completely right about that, I don't know why I missed it.
 
 Here's an updated patch, thanks!
 
 -- 
 Jesus R. Camou <jcamou@COX.net>
 jcamou@es.FreeBSD.org
 
 
 
 --EVF5PPMfhYS0aIcm
 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
 Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="vinum2.diff"
 
 Index: chapter.sgml
 ===================================================================
 RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v
 retrieving revision 1.36
 diff -u -r1.36 chapter.sgml
 --- chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 17:33:19 -0000	1.36
 +++ chapter.sgml	21 Feb 2005 07:13:23 -0000
 @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
  	The Vinum Volume Manager
  	By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com)
  
 -	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten@FreeBSD.org>
 +	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp@FreeBSD.org>
  	and Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
  
  	For the FreeBSD Documentation Project
 @@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
  	    root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes
  	    this information on to the kernel.	When it comes to mount
  	    the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the
 -	    devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this
 +	    device name provided which driver to ask to translate this
  	    into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para>
  	</listitem>
        </itemizedlist>
 
 --EVF5PPMfhYS0aIcm--
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->remko 
Responsible-Changed-By: remko 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Feb 21 20:20:29 GMT 2005 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Grab this PR. Passing it through my mentor before i can commit it. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=77817 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: remko 
State-Changed-When: Mon Feb 21 20:48:51 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Patch committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=77817 
>Unformatted:
