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Date: Sun, 20 Feb 2005 16:12:44 +0100
From: "Joel Dahl" <joel@automatvapen.se>
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Subject: [patch] Porters Handbook, Remove Contractions
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>Number:         77780
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Porters Handbook, Remove Contractions
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Feb 20 15:20:18 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Tue Feb 22 11:44:21 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Tue Feb 22 11:44:21 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Joel Dahl
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #0: Thu Feb 10 12:46:21 CET 2005 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386

	
>Description:
Remove some contractions, check the attached patch.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
	

--- cont_porters.diff begins here ---
Index: book.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.527
diff -u -r1.527 book.sgml
--- book.sgml	19 Feb 2005 20:39:12 -0000	1.527
+++ book.sgml	20 Feb 2005 14:58:14 -0000
@@ -4162,7 +4162,7 @@
 	project's homepage.</para>
 
       <note>
-	<para>Your port doesn't need to depend on GNOME if it merely installs
+	<para>Your port does not need to depend on GNOME if it merely installs
 	  <application>pkg-config</application> metadata files to
 	  <filename><makevar>PREFIX</makevar>/libdata/pkgconfig</filename>.
 	  As usual, your port should be prepared to clean up after itself
@@ -4847,7 +4847,7 @@
 	  <filename>libfoo.so</filename> to
 	  <filename>libfoo.so.<replaceable>N</replaceable></filename> to make
 	  ELF linkers happy.  Since it should be listed in
-	  <filename>pkg-plist</filename> too, and it won't hurt in the a.out case
+	  <filename>pkg-plist</filename> too, and it will not hurt in the a.out case
 	  (some ports even require the link for dynamic loading), you should
 	  just make this link regardless of the setting of
 	  <makevar>PORTOBJFORMAT</makevar>.</para>
@@ -5846,7 +5846,7 @@
 		a mandatory attribute, <literal>vid</literal>,
 		specifying a universally unique identifier (UUID) for
 		this entry (in quotes).  You should generate a UUID
-		for each new VuXML entry (and don't forget to substitute
+		for each new VuXML entry (and do not forget to substitute
 		it for the template UUID unless you are writing the
 		entry from scratch).  You can use &man.uuidgen.1; in
 		FreeBSD 5.x, or you may install the port <filename
@@ -8609,7 +8609,7 @@
 
 	<para>If you wish to use FreshPorts, all you need is an
 	  account.  If your registered email address is
-	  <literal>@FreeBSD.org</literal>, you'll see the opt-in link on the
+	  <literal>@FreeBSD.org</literal>, you will see the opt-in link on the
 	  right hand side of the webpages.
 	  For those of you who already have a FreshPorts account, but are not
 	  using your <literal>@FreeBSD.org</literal> email address,
--- cont_porters.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: roam 
State-Changed-When: Tue Feb 22 11:44:08 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Patch committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=77780 
>Unformatted:
