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From: "Joel Dahl" <joel@automatvapen.se>
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Subject: [patch] Developers-Handbook, Remove contractions
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>Number:         77778
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Developers-Handbook, Remove contractions
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Feb 20 14:50:14 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Sun Feb 20 14:53:45 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Sun Feb 20 14:53:45 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Joel Dahl
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #0: Thu Feb 10 12:46:21 CET 2005 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386

	
>Description:
The attached patch removes a few contractions in the Developers-Handbook.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
	

--- cont_developers.diff begins here ---
Index: kerneldebug/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/kerneldebug/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.55
diff -u -r1.55 chapter.sgml
--- kerneldebug/chapter.sgml	12 Dec 2004 12:29:42 -0000	1.55
+++ kerneldebug/chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 14:39:20 -0000
@@ -131,9 +131,9 @@
 
     <para>This instructs &man.savecore.8; to extract a kernel dump
       from <filename>/dev/ad0s1b</filename> and place the contents in
-      <filename>/var/crash</filename>.  Don't forget to make sure the
+      <filename>/var/crash</filename>.  Do not forget to make sure the
       destination directory <filename>/var/crash</filename> has enough
-      space for the dump.  Also, don't forget to specify the correct path to your swap
+      space for the dump.  Also, do not forget to specify the correct path to your swap
       device as it is likely different than
       <filename>/dev/ad0s1b</filename>!</para></tip>
 
@@ -414,7 +414,7 @@
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>
 
-    <tip><para>If your system is crashing regularly and you're running
+    <tip><para>If your system is crashing regularly and you are running
       out of disk space, deleting old <filename>vmcore</filename>
       files in <filename>/var/crash</filename> could save a
       considerable amount of disk space!</para></tip>
Index: tools/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/tools/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.42
diff -u -r1.42 chapter.sgml
--- tools/chapter.sgml	9 Dec 2004 11:45:37 -0000	1.42
+++ tools/chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 14:40:28 -0000
@@ -794,7 +794,7 @@
 	  <question>
 	    <para>I compiled a file called
 	      <filename>foobar.c</filename> and I cannot find an
-	      executable called <filename>foobar</filename>.  Where's
+	      executable called <filename>foobar</filename>.  Where has
 	      it gone?</para>
 	  </question>
 
--- cont_developers.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: simon 
State-Changed-When: Sun Feb 20 14:53:38 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=77778 
>Unformatted:
