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From: Siebrand Mazeland <s.mazeland@xs4all.nl>
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Subject: [PATCH]	More contractions in handbook removed
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>Number:         77775
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH]	More contractions in handbook removed
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          update
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Feb 20 13:40:29 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Sun Feb 20 14:12:05 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Sun Feb 20 14:12:05 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Siebrand Mazeland
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.3-RELEASE-p4 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD nfishbone.nitro.dk 5.3-RELEASE-p4 FreeBSD 5.3-RELEASE-p4 #1: Sun Jan 16 03:35:01 CET 2005 simon@nfishbone.nitro.dk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/FISHBONE i386


	
>Description:
	Joeld inspired me to do some more nitpicking on the Handbook
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
? en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter_white.sgml
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.37
diff -u -r1.37 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml	19 Feb 2005 14:03:54 -0000	1.37
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 13:19:14 -0000
@@ -1451,7 +1451,7 @@
 block in quick on dc0 from 224.0.0.0/3 to any       #Class D & E multicast
 
 ##### Block a bunch of different nasty things. ############
-# That I don't want to see in the log
+# That I do not want to see in the log
 
 # Block frags
 block in quick on dc0 all with frags
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.126
diff -u -r1.126 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml	13 Feb 2005 10:24:09 -0000	1.126
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 13:21:19 -0000
@@ -497,8 +497,8 @@
 	<title>Configuring the <application>sendmail</application>
   	  Access Database</title>
 
-    <programlisting>cyberspammer.com                550 We don't accept mail from spammers
-FREE.STEALTH.MAILER@            550 We don't accept mail from spammers
+    <programlisting>cyberspammer.com                550 We do not accept mail from spammers
+FREE.STEALTH.MAILER@            550 We do not accept mail from spammers
 another.source.of.spam          REJECT
 okay.cyberspammer.com           OK
 128.32                          RELAY</programlisting>
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.263
diff -u -r1.263 chapter.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml	19 Feb 2005 14:03:54 -0000	1.263
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 13:22:02 -0000
@@ -3838,7 +3838,7 @@
  
        <para>That is, the <emphasis>public</emphasis> IP address of the remote end,
          whitespace, and a text string that provides the secret.
-         Obviously, you shouldn't use <quote>secret</quote> as your key -- the normal
+         Obviously, you should not use <quote>secret</quote> as your key -- the normal
          rules for choosing a password apply.</para>
  
        <para>On gateway host #2 the line would look like this</para>

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: simon 
State-Changed-When: Sun Feb 20 14:11:58 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=77775 
>Unformatted:
