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From: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
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To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
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Subject: Misc fixes for the DNS chapter and note FreeBSD 5 comes with BIND 9
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>Number:         77063
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Misc fixes for the DNS chapter and note FreeBSD 5 comes with BIND 9
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    trhodes
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Feb 03 12:40:24 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Thu Feb 24 00:24:51 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Thu Feb 24 00:24:51 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Brad Davis
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD mccaffrey.house.so14k.com 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #0: Fri May 28 08:02:41 MDT 2004 root@mccaffrey.house.so14k.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/MCCAFFREY i386
>Description:
	1. Note FreeBSD 5 comes with BIND 9
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml Thu Feb  3 04:20:21 2005
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml     Thu Feb  3 05:37:44 2005
@@ -2975,9 +2975,9 @@
       </para>
 
       <para>
-        This document refers to BIND 8.x, as it is the stable version
-       used in FreeBSD.  BIND 9.x in FreeBSD can be installed through
-       the <filename role="package">net/bind9</filename> port.
+        This document refers to BIND 8.x, which is the version included
+        in &os; 4. BIND 9.x is included in &os; 5 and is avaliable for
+        &os; 4 in the <filename role="package">net/bind9</filename> port.
       </para>
 
       <para>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>
To: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77063: Misc fixes for the DNS chapter and note FreeBSD 5 comes with BIND 9
Date: Thu, 3 Feb 2005 13:47:03 +0000

 On Thu, Feb 03, 2005 at 05:39:35AM -0700, Brad Davis wrote:
 
 > --- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml Thu Feb  3 04:20:21 2005
 > +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml     Thu Feb  3 05:37:44 2005
 > @@ -2975,9 +2975,9 @@
 >        </para>
 >  
 >        <para>
 > -        This document refers to BIND 8.x, as it is the stable version
 > -       used in FreeBSD.  BIND 9.x in FreeBSD can be installed through
 > -       the <filename role="package">net/bind9</filename> port.
 > +        This document refers to BIND 8.x, which is the version included
 > +        in &os; 4. BIND 9.x is included in &os; 5 and is avaliable for
 > +        &os; 4 in the <filename role="package">net/bind9</filename> port.
 >        </para>
 
 Could you ispell this?  "avaliable" is wrong here.
 
 Ceri

From: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
To: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77063: Misc fixes for the DNS chapter and note FreeBSD 5 comes with BIND 9
Date: Thu, 3 Feb 2005 07:43:49 -0700

 Thanks :)
 
 --- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml 
 Thu Feb  3 04:20:21 2005
 +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml     
 Thu Feb  3 05:37:44 2005
 @@ -2975,9 +2975,9 @@
         </para>
 
         <para>
 -        This document refers to BIND 8.x, as it is the stable version
 -       used in FreeBSD.  BIND 9.x in FreeBSD can be installed through
 -       the <filename role="package">net/bind9</filename> port.
 +        This document refers to BIND 8.x, which is the version included
 +        in &os; 4. BIND 9.x is included in &os; 5 and is available for
 +        &os; 4 in the <filename role="package">net/bind9</filename> 
 port.
         </para>
 
         <para>
 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: trhodes 
State-Changed-When: Thu Feb 24 00:23:05 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Patch not committed, yet I added some text to point out the 
different versions of BIND and FreeBSD.  Inspired from your 
patch of course.  Thanks for the submission! 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-By: trhodes 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Feb 24 00:23:05 GMT 2005 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
Over to me. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=77063 
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