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From: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
Reply-To: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
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Subject: Fix wording about what version of FreeBSD PF can be used in.
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>Number:         76750
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Fix wording about what version of FreeBSD PF can be used in.
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Jan 27 12:00:36 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Thu Jan 27 15:28:43 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Thu Jan 27 15:28:43 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Brad Davis
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD mccaffrey.house.so14k.com 4.10-STABLE FreeBSD 4.10-STABLE #0: Fri May 28 08:02:41 MDT 2004 root@mccaffrey.house.so14k.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/MCCAFFREY i386
>Description:
	Fix wording about what version of FreeBSD PF can be used in.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
--- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml       Thu Jan 27 02:39:18 2005
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml   Thu Jan 27 04:46:22 2005
@@ -206,9 +206,13 @@
       not be made part of this handbook firewall section as that would
       just be duplicated effort.</para>
 
-    <para>For older 5.X version of &os; you can find
-      <acronym>PF</acronym> in the &os; ports collection here:
+    <para>For versions of &os; younger than 5.0 and older than 5.3 you
+      can find <acronym>PF</acronym> in the &os; ports collection here:
       <filename role="package">security/pf</filename>.</para>
+
+    <note>
+      <para><acronym>PF</acronym> is not avaliable for &os; 4.</para>
+    </note>
 
     <para>More info can be found at the PF for &os; web site: <ulink
       url="http://pf4freebsd.love2party.net/"></ulink>.</para>
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Cc:  
Subject: Re: docs/76750: Fix wording about what version of FreeBSD PF can be used in.
Date: Thu, 27 Jan 2005 05:39:16 -0700

 --- doc-ori/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml
 Thu Jan 27 02:39:18 2005
 +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml   Thu Jan
 27 05:35:46 2005
 @@ -206,9 +206,14 @@
        not be made part of this handbook firewall section as that would
        just be duplicated effort.</para>
  
 -    <para>For older 5.X version of &os; you can find
 -      <acronym>PF</acronym> in the &os; ports collection here:
 -      <filename role="package">security/pf</filename>.</para>
 +    <para>For versions of &os; younger than 5.0 and older than 5.3 you
 +      can find <acronym>PF</acronym> in the &os; ports collection here:
 +      <filename role="package">security/pf</filename>. It is strongly
 +      recommended to upgrade to 5.3</para>
 +
 +    <note>
 +      <para><acronym>PF</acronym> is not avaliable for &os; 4.</para>
 +    </note>
  
      <para>More info can be found at the PF for &os; web site: <ulink
        url="http://pf4freebsd.love2party.net/"></ulink>.</para>

From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
To: Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/76750: Fix wording about what version of FreeBSD PF can be used in.
Date: Thu, 27 Jan 2005 14:45:02 +0200

 On 2005-01-27 04:59, Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com> wrote:
 > -    <para>For older 5.X version of &os; you can find
 > -      <acronym>PF</acronym> in the &os; ports collection here:
 > +    <para>For versions of &os; younger than 5.0 and older than 5.3 you
 > +      can find <acronym>PF</acronym> in the &os; ports collection here:
 >        <filename role="package">security/pf</filename>.</para>
 
 pf(9) is, AFAIK, included as part of the base system in releases `older
 than 5.3'.  So the correction is not 100% true.
 
 > +      <para><acronym>PF</acronym> is not avaliable for &os; 4.</para>
 
 Typo: s/avaliable/available/.
 

From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr>
To: Max Laier <max@love2party.net>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/76750: Fix wording about what version of FreeBSD PF can be used in.
Date: Thu, 27 Jan 2005 15:40:48 +0200

 On 2005-01-27 14:15, Max Laier <max@love2party.net> wrote:
 >On Thursday 27 January 2005 13:50, Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
 >>On 2005-01-27 04:59, Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com> wrote:
 >>> -    <para>For older 5.X version of &os; you can find
 >>> -      <acronym>PF</acronym> in the &os; ports collection here:
 >>> +    <para>For versions of &os; younger than 5.0 and older than 5.3 you
 >>> +      can find <acronym>PF</acronym> in the &os; ports collection here:
 >>>        <filename role="package">security/pf</filename>.</para>
 >>
 >> pf(9) is, AFAIK, included as part of the base system in releases
 >> `older than 5.3'.  So the correction is not 100% true.
 >
 > 5.3 was the first *release* with PF included.  5.2.1, 5.1 and 5.0(not
 > sure) can be supported from security/pf.  One should note, that the
 > port is outdated (OpenBSD 3.4) and no longer maintained.  I'll remove
 > the port with the release of 5.4 (and will correct the firewall
 > chapter accordingly).  4.x can get pf from KAME snapshots, btw.
 
 Thanks for the very informative reply Max :-)
 
 What is, in your opinion, the best thing to do?  Currently, the text of
 the Handbook reads:
 
 %    24.4 The Packet Filter (PF) Firewall
 %
 %    As of July 2003 the OpenBSD firewall software application known
 %    as PF was ported to FreeBSD and was made available in the FreeBSD
 %    ports collection; the first release that contained PF as an
 %    integrated part of the base system was FreeBSD 5.3 in November
 %    2004. [...]
 %
 %    For older 5.X version of FreeBSD you can find PF in the FreeBSD
 %    ports collection here: security/pf.
 
 If I am reading your reply correctly, we don't need to change anything;
 the Handbook text describes correctly PF as part of the base system
 after 5.3-RELEASE and points everyone else to the port.  The only thing
 that could probably be added is "4.x can get pf from KAME snapshots".
 
 - Giorgos
 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Thu Jan 27 15:28:04 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Jan 27 15:28:04 GMT 2005 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  

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