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Date: Thu,  6 Jan 2005 22:38:41 +0100
From: "Joel Dahl" <joel@automatvapen.se>
Reply-To: Joel Dahl <joel@automatvapen.se>
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Subject: [patch] Update handbook, section 23.5.4, two small typos
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>Number:         75902
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Update handbook, section 23.5.4, two small typos
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Jan 06 21:40:30 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:    Fri Jan 07 09:07:28 GMT 2005
>Last-Modified:  Fri Jan 07 09:07:28 GMT 2005
>Originator:     Joel Dahl
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #0: Sat Jan 1 14:36:28 CET 2005 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WRK i386

	
>Description:
1.  DHCP configuration is actually the second question (IPv6 is the first).

2.  Sysinstall says "the interface", not "this interface". 
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
	

--- sysdhcp.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.51
diff -u -r1.51 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	1 Jan 2005 20:17:17 -0000	1.51
+++ chapter.sgml	6 Jan 2005 21:27:14 -0000
@@ -2600,9 +2600,9 @@
         <para>DHCP is supported by
           <application>sysinstall</application>.  When configuring a
           network interface within
-          <application>sysinstall</application>, the first question
+          <application>sysinstall</application>, the second question
           asked is: <quote>Do you want to try DHCP configuration of
-          this interface?</quote>. Answering affirmatively will
+          the interface?</quote>. Answering affirmatively will
           execute <command>dhclient</command>, and if successful, will
           fill in the network configuration information
           automatically.</para>
--- sysdhcp.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: roam 
State-Changed-When: Fri Jan 7 09:07:17 GMT 2005 
State-Changed-Why:  
Patch committed, thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=75902 
>Unformatted:
