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Date: Wed, 15 Dec 2004 22:26:09 +0100
From: "Joel Dahl" <joel@automatvapen.se>
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Subject: [patch] arch-handbook: chapter 16: Minor corrections
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>Number:         75131
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] arch-handbook: chapter 16: Minor corrections
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Dec 15 21:30:20 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Wed Dec 15 21:35:50 GMT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Wed Dec 15 21:35:50 GMT 2004
>Originator:     Joel Dahl
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #1: Sat Nov 13 19:50:36 CET 2004 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WRK i386

	
>Description:
- Correct name (Justin T. Gibbs)
- Correct spelling
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
	

--- archfix.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/scsi/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.14 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	11 Aug 2004 17:25:04 -0000	1.14
+++ chapter.sgml	15 Dec 2004 21:17:09 -0000
@@ -33,10 +33,10 @@
 
      </itemizedlist>
 
-   <para>and from the CAM code itself (by Justing T. Gibbs, see
+   <para>and from the CAM code itself (by Justin T. Gibbs, see
      <filename>/sys/cam/*</filename>).  When some solution looked the
      most logical and was essentially verbatim extracted from the code
-     by Justin Gibbs, I marked it as <quote>recommended</quote>.</para>
+     by Justin T. Gibbs, I marked it as <quote>recommended</quote>.</para>
 
    <para>The document is illustrated with examples in
      pseudo-code. Although sometimes the examples have many details
@@ -587,7 +587,7 @@
 
       <para>Then allocate whatever data structures (such as
         card-dependent hardware control block) we need to process this
-        request. If we ca not then freeze the SIM queue and remember
+        request. If we can not then freeze the SIM queue and remember
         that we have a pending operation, return the CCB back and ask
         CAM to re-queue it. Later when the resources become available
         the SIM queue must be unfrozen by returning a ccb with the
--- archfix.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: ceri 
State-Changed-When: Wed Dec 15 21:35:34 GMT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed in revision 1.15; thanks! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=75131 
>Unformatted:
