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From: "Joel Dahl" <joel@automatvapen.se>
Reply-To: Joel Dahl <joel@automatvapen.se>
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Subject: [patch] update handbook: Add chapter 24 to preface
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>Number:         74978
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] update handbook: Add chapter 24 to preface
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Dec 12 11:10:26 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Mon Dec 13 11:48:11 GMT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Mon Dec 13 11:48:11 GMT 2004
>Originator:     Joel Dahl
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #1: Sat Nov 13 19:50:36 CET 2004 joel@dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WRK i386

	
>Description:
The preface in the handbook does not contain any information
about chapter 24 (the "firewalls" chapter), so let's add some!
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

	
--- fipref.diff begins here ---
Index: preface.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.25
diff -u -r1.25 preface.sgml
--- preface.sgml	25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000	1.25
+++ preface.sgml	12 Dec 2004 10:24:14 -0000
@@ -428,6 +428,15 @@
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>
+      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="firewalls">, Firewalls</emphasis></term>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Explains the philosophy behind software based firewalls and
+          provides detailed information about the configuration of the
+          different firewall software applications available for
+          FreeBSD.</para>
+      </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
+    <varlistentry>
       <term><emphasis><xref linkend="advanced-networking">, Advanced Networking</emphasis></term>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Describes many networking topics, including sharing an
--- fipref.diff ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Mon Dec 13 09:51:11 GMT 2004 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll work with Joel on this. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=74978 

From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
To: Joel Dahl <joel@automatvapen.se>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/74978: [patch] update handbook: Add chapter 24 to preface
Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2004 11:51:56 +0200

 On 2004-12-12 12:05, Joel Dahl <joel@automatvapen.se> wrote:
 > --- fipref.diff begins here ---
 > Index: preface.sgml
 > ===================================================================
 > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v
 > retrieving revision 1.25
 > diff -u -r1.25 preface.sgml
 > --- preface.sgml	25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000	1.25
 > +++ preface.sgml	12 Dec 2004 10:24:14 -0000
 > @@ -428,6 +428,15 @@
 >        </listitem>
 >      </varlistentry>
 >      <varlistentry>
 > +      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="firewalls">, Firewalls</emphasis></term>
 > +      <listitem>
 > +        <para>Explains the philosophy behind software based firewalls and
 > +          provides detailed information about the configuration of the
 > +          different firewall software applications available for
 > +          FreeBSD.</para>
 > +      </listitem>
 > +    </varlistentry>
 > +    <varlistentry>
 >        <term><emphasis><xref linkend="advanced-networking">, Advanced Networking</emphasis></term>
 >        <listitem>
 >  	<para>Describes many networking topics, including sharing an
 > --- fipref.diff ends here ---
 
 The phrase "firewall software applications" strikes me as a bit odd,
 since the firewalls are not "applications" in the usual sense of the
 word (i.e. something you run as a normal user or something).  Does the
 following look ok to you, Joel?
 
 % Index: preface.sgml
 % ===================================================================
 % RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v
 % retrieving revision 1.25
 % diff -u -u -r1.25 preface.sgml
 % --- preface.sgml        25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000      1.25
 % +++ preface.sgml        13 Dec 2004 09:48:59 -0000
 % @@ -428,6 +428,14 @@
 %        </listitem>
 %      </varlistentry>
 %      <varlistentry>
 % +      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="firewalls">, Firewalls</emphasis></term>
 % +      <listitem>
 % +        <para>Explains the philosophy behind software-based firewalls and
 % +          provides detailed information about the configuration of the
 % +          different firewalls available for FreeBSD.</para>
 % +      </listitem>
 % +    </varlistentry>
 % +    <varlistentry>
 %        <term><emphasis><xref linkend="advanced-networking">, Advanced Networking</emphasis></term>
 %        <listitem>
 %         <para>Describes many networking topics, including sharing an

From: Joel Dahl <joel@automatvapen.se>
To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/74978: [patch] update handbook: Add chapter 24 to preface
Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2004 12:28:19 +0100

 On Mon, 2004-12-13 at 11:51 +0200, Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
 > The phrase "firewall software applications" strikes me as a bit odd,
 > since the firewalls are not "applications" in the usual sense of the
 > word (i.e. something you run as a normal user or something).  Does the
 > following look ok to you, Joel?
 > 
 > % Index: preface.sgml
 > % ===================================================================
 > % RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml,v
 > % retrieving revision 1.25
 > % diff -u -u -r1.25 preface.sgml
 > % --- preface.sgml        25 Aug 2004 19:54:41 -0000      1.25
 > % +++ preface.sgml        13 Dec 2004 09:48:59 -0000
 > % @@ -428,6 +428,14 @@
 > %        </listitem>
 > %      </varlistentry>
 > %      <varlistentry>
 > % +      <term><emphasis><xref linkend="firewalls">, Firewalls</emphasis></term>
 > % +      <listitem>
 > % +        <para>Explains the philosophy behind software-based firewalls and
 > % +          provides detailed information about the configuration of the
 > % +          different firewalls available for FreeBSD.</para>
 > % +      </listitem>
 > % +    </varlistentry>
 > % +    <varlistentry>
 > %        <term><emphasis><xref linkend="advanced-networking">, Advanced Networking</emphasis></term>
 > %        <listitem>
 > %         <para>Describes many networking topics, including sharing an
 
 Looks good to me, thanks.  The topic from chapter 24.3 inspired me use
 "firewall software applications", maybe someone should reword that part
 to something better...
 

From: Joel Dahl <joel@automatvapen.se>
To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org
Subject: Re: docs/74978: [patch] update handbook: Add chapter 24 to preface
Date: Mon, 13 Dec 2004 12:35:34 +0100

 On Mon, 2004-12-13 at 12:28 +0100, Joel Dahl wrote:
 > Looks good to me, thanks.  The topic from chapter 24.3 inspired me use
                                                                     ^
                                                                     to
 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Mon Dec 13 11:47:47 GMT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks :) 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=74978 
>Unformatted:
