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From: David Wolfskill <dhw@whistle.com>
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Subject: Missing word(s?) in http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/handbook126.html#178
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>Number:         7290
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Missing word(s?) in http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/handbook126.html#178
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Wed Jul 15 14:00:00 PDT 1998
>Closed-Date:    Wed Jul 15 17:54:16 PDT 1998
>Last-Modified:  Wed Jul 15 17:55:02 PDT 1998
>Originator:     David Wolfskill
>Release:        FreeBSD 2.2.6-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
Whistle Communications
>Environment:

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>Description:

In http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/handbook126.html#178, the 1st line of
3rd paragraph ("Second, determine the boot and fixit floppies (boot.flp
and fixit.flp) have all your devices.") seems to be missing (at least)
one word.

>How-To-Repeat:

Look at the Web page in question.

>Fix:
	
A possible re-wording would be "Second, determine that the boot and fixit
floppies (boot.flp and fixit.flp) have all your devices."

(I inserted the word "that" as the 3rd word of the sentence.)

It's possible, though, that the result doesn't match the original
intent....  :-}
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: jkoshy 
State-Changed-When: Wed Jul 15 17:54:16 PDT 1998 
State-Changed-Why:  
Fixed in rev 1.3 of "backups.sgml", thanks! 
>Unformatted:
