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From: Remko Lodder <remko@elvandar.org>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: cleanup of the x11 chapter from the handbook
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>Number:         69240
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       cleanup of the x11 chapter from the handbook
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    keramida
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Jul 18 14:10:11 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Sun Jul 18 14:49:41 GMT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Sun Jul 18 14:50:27 GMT 2004
>Originator:     Remko Lodder
>Release:        5.2.1-p9
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD dartagnan.thethreemusketiers.nl 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 #0: Sun Jul  4 21:00:38 CEST 2004     root@dartagnan.thethreemusketiers.nl:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/DARTAGNAN  i386
>Description:
      While reviewing the FreeBSD Dutch Documentation Project files i came across some 'faults' that i think need to be corrected. I changed some XFree86 references to &xfree86; as used througout the text. I also changed kdm to KDM since that was also used. Besides that i did the same to XDM (xdm to XDM). And there were references to <filename>xdm</filename>. I changed that to <application>XDM</application>. 
>How-To-Repeat:
      Just look at the documentation and/or the patch
>Fix:
      checkout http://www.evilcoder.org/freebsd/patches/x11.diff for a patch that should correct the above problem.
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: keramida 
State-Changed-When: Sun Jul 18 14:49:09 GMT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
Committed, thanks!  The changes should become visible online in a few hours. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->keramida 
Responsible-Changed-By: keramida 
Responsible-Changed-When: Sun Jul 18 14:49:09 GMT 2004 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=69240 

From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
To: Remko Lodder <remko@elvandar.org>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/69240: cleanup of the x11 chapter from the handbook
Date: Sun, 18 Jul 2004 16:48:25 +0200

 On Sun, Jul 18, 2004 at 02:03:27PM +0000, Remko Lodder wrote:
 > >Description:
 >       While reviewing the FreeBSD Dutch Documentation Project files i came across some 'faults' that i think need to be corrected. I changed some XFree86 references to &xfree86; as used througout the text. I also changed kdm to KDM since that was also used. Besides that i did the same to XDM (xdm to XDM). And there were references to <filename>xdm</filename>. I changed that to <application>XDM</application>. 
 
 It's kdm, just have a look to http://docs.kde.org/en/3.2/kdebase/kdm/
 so for this one we're not correct everywhere.
 For xdm, both xdm and XDM are used, if I read the xdm(1) manual page,
 xdm seems to be the most used one.
 
 For &nbsp; inside indexterm tags, I'm not sure we need it, same for
 &xfree86;.
 
 > >How-To-Repeat:
 >       Just look at the documentation and/or the patch
 > >Fix:
 >       checkout http://www.evilcoder.org/freebsd/patches/x11.diff for a patch that should correct the above problem.
 
 Please join your patch with the PR :)
 
 Marc
>Unformatted:
