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From: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
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Subject: Fix a couple language nits in tuning.7
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>Number:         68799
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Fix a couple language nits in tuning.7
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    hmp
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Jul 08 04:00:46 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Thu Jul 08 11:05:30 GMT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Thu Jul 08 11:05:30 GMT 2004
>Originator:     Chris Pepper
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD guest.reppep.com 5.2.1-RELEASE FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE #1: Thu Jun 17 23:50:42 EDT 2004 root@guest.reppep.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/REPPEP5 i386


	
>Description:
	tuning.7 has some minor problems (effects used where affects should be, and similar).
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	man tuning
	
>Fix:
	Patch like so:
	

--- tuning.7.patch begins here ---
--- /usr/src/share/man/man7/tuning.7	Sun Sep 14 19:44:55 2003
+++ tuning.7	Wed Jul  7 23:53:53 2004
@@ -582,9 +582,9 @@
 interactive connections, especially over slow modems, will also be able
 to operate with lower round trip times.
 However, note that this feature
-only effects data transmission (uploading / server-side).
+only affects data transmission (uploading / server-side).
 It does not
-effect data reception (downloading).
+affect data reception (downloading).
 .Pp
 Adjusting
 .Va net.inet.tcp.inflight_stab
@@ -625,8 +625,8 @@
 This most commonly occurs when you are
 running a heavily loaded web proxy.
 The port range is not an issue
-when running serves which handle mainly incoming connections, such as a
-normal web server, or has a limited number of outgoing connections, such
+when running servers which handle mainly incoming connections, such as a
+normal web server, or have a limited number of outgoing connections, such
 as a mail relay.
 For situations where you may run yourself out of
 ports, we recommend increasing
--- tuning.7.patch ends here ---


>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->hmp 
Responsible-Changed-By: hmp 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Jul 8 11:02:59 GMT 2004 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I will handle this in a moment. 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=68799 
State-Changed-From-To: open->closed 
State-Changed-By: hmp 
State-Changed-When: Thu Jul 8 11:05:21 GMT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
Done.  Thanks! 


http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=68799 
>Unformatted:
