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From: Michel Lavonds <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us>
To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: [patch] RELENG_4 share/man/man4/man4.i386/pnp.4 grammar, sentence breaks
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>Number:         66826
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] RELENG_4 share/man/man4/man4.i386/pnp.4 grammar, sentence breaks
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    roam
>State:          closed
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:  
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue May 18 10:20:13 PDT 2004
>Closed-Date:    Thu Jul 15 13:46:02 GMT 2004
>Last-Modified:  Thu Jul 15 13:46:02 GMT 2004
>Originator:     Michel Lavonds
>Release:        4.8-RELEASE-p13
>Organization:
Ecdysiasts United For Overdressing
>Environment:
>Description:
See patch. (Not a MFC - affected language is no longer in -current)
>How-To-Repeat:
man 4 pnp
>Fix:
--- pnp.4.orig	Sun May  9 10:21:06 2004
+++ pnp.4	Sun May  9 10:57:00 2004
@@ -74,10 +74,12 @@
 Channel=4 means
 the channel is unused.
 .It Dv portN address
-Sets the base address for the N-th port's range (N=0..7). address=0
+Sets the base address for the N-th port's range (N=0..7).
+Address=0
 means that the port is not used.
 .It Dv memN address
-Sets the base address for the N-th memory's range (N=0..3). address=0
+Sets the base address for the N-th memory's range (N=0..3).
+Address=0
 means that the memory range is not used.
 .It Dv bios
 Makes the PnP device use the configuration set by the BIOS.
@@ -129,7 +131,8 @@
 The probe routine must check that the vendor_id passed is a
 recognized one, that any necessary devices on the card are enabled,
 and returns a NULL value in case of failure or a non-NULL value
-(generally a pointer to the device name) unpon success.  In the probe
+(generally a pointer to the device name) unpon success.
+In the probe
 routine, the function
 .Fn read_pnp_parms
 can be used to check that the logical devices are enabled.
@@ -164,7 +167,7 @@
 since this would defeat the override mechanism in userconfig.
 Device
 drivers may disable a logical device, or a port range, etc, but should
-do so only that particular device or parameter is known to cause
+do so only when that particular device or parameter is known to cause
 troubles.
 .It Fn enable_pnp_card void
 This function
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:

From: Josef El-Rayes <josef@FreeBSD.org>
To: Michel Lavondhs <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us>
Cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/66826: [patch] RELENG_4 share/man/man4/man4.i386/pnp.4 grammar, sentence breaks
Date: Tue, 18 May 2004 19:25:03 +0200

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 Michel Lavondhs <fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us> wrote:
 > -Sets the base address for the N-th port's range (N=3D0..7). address=3D0
 > +Sets the base address for the N-th port's range (N=3D0..7).
 > +Address=3D0
 
 hi michel!
 
 please do not mix content with style/whitespace changes, as
 this irritates the translation teams.
 
 thanks for your work.
 
 -josef
 
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State-Changed-From-To: open->analyzed 
State-Changed-By: roam 
State-Changed-When: Thu Jul 15 07:22:59 GMT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
I'll take this one. 


Responsible-Changed-From-To: freebsd-doc->roam 
Responsible-Changed-By: roam 
Responsible-Changed-When: Thu Jul 15 07:22:59 GMT 2004 
Responsible-Changed-Why:  
I'll take this one. 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=66826 
State-Changed-From-To: analyzed->closed 
State-Changed-By: roam 
State-Changed-When: Thu Jul 15 13:45:26 GMT 2004 
State-Changed-Why:  
I've committed several grammatical fixes to the pnp(4) manpage, some 
of which were inspired by your suggestions.  Thanks for noticing 
the problems! 

http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=66826 
>Unformatted:
